(英语)中考英语英语书面表达汇编的基本方法技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)

（英语）中考英语英语书面表达汇编的基本方法技巧及练习题及练
习题(含答案)
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
随着互联网和手机终端发展，成瘾性网络游戏使一些中学生沉迷其中，影响了学习进步和身心健康。

上周你们学校开展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many computer games ”为主题的专题讨论。

请根据下表中的要点提示，写一篇短文，提出一些意见。

注意 1.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数；
3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名；
Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many computer games .The students have different opinions.
【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many computer games. The students have different opinions.
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can communicate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.
When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.
As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must come first”. They should pay mor e attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文。

给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。

我们只要用英语正确的把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点就行。

动笔前要真人阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当的发挥。

根据题目要求，短文是一篇议论文，时态用一般现在时，人称为第三人称。

写作中要注意适当使用连词，注意上下文紧密联系。

符合逻辑关系。

高分句型【1】
They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他们认为他们的学校可以开班会，帮助他们认识到互联网的利与弊。

动词不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.用作目的状语。

高分句型【2】
Also, good out-school activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外，学校应该定期举办有益的校外活动。

此句是含有情态动词的被动语态。

其构成为：情态动词+be+及物动词的过去分词。

高分句型【3】
Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 与学校紧密合作是家长帮助他们的另一重要途径。

动名词Working closely with schools作主语，视作单数，因此be动词用is。

2．（·辽宁中考模拟）（B）按要求完成大作文（80词左右）
节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。

假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，请以“My Green Life”为题写一篇短文，简单谈谈“绿色生活”的重要性，以及你所倡导的“绿色生活”方式。

写作要求：词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得透露姓名等个人信息。

【答案】My Green Life
As the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.
【解析】
【分析】
本文主题关于绿色生活，环境保护，注意文章内容。

【详解】
首先点明如今的生活环境，越来越差，绿色生活势在必行。

其次点明绿色生活的重要性。

然后说我在日常生活中对绿色出行作出的贡献，骑自行车，出门关灯等。

最后呼吁大家一起努力。

【点睛】
首先正确理解作文题目，不要偏题，本文是关于绿色生活，它的重要性，以及你在日常生活中是如何践行绿色生活的。

其次，在语句正确的基础上，多运用连词，使文章升华，长短句结合，使文章更上一档次。

3．（·上海市澧溪中学初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重现”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。

）
当昨日重现之时，在脑海里的都是回忆。

记忆中有没有让你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对你现在的生活造成了影响。

请选取一个方面，结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。

（注意：段文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

）The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）
used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth
【答案】例文
Yesterday once more
It goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.
I u sed to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person.
In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。

在写作时应注意选取一个给你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对你现在的生活造成了影响。

结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式：用第一人称来叙述故事内容：时态采用一般过去式为主，叙述过去的经历，叙述完整清晰。

3.高分亮点：
短语：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。

句型：such…that…；so…that…引导的结果状语从句；whenever…引导的从句；used to do。

4．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Alex来信说他要来中国做交换生。

请根据以下信息给Alex写一封回信，介绍一下你的近况，并给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。

写作要点：
1. 欢迎他来中国。

2. 介绍你的近况：
（1）大多数时间忙于复习备考。

（2）有时在户外做运动。

（3）很少有时间外出娱乐。

3. 给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。

写作要求：
1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2、可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4、至少80词。

Dear Alex，
How are you doing ?_________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Alex，
How are you doing? You said that you would come to China as an exchange student in your last letter. Welcome to China. You want to know about me. Let me tell you. I have been spending most of my time reviewing for exams these days. Sometimes I do sports outdoors. But I seldom have time to go out for fun.
You said you will worry about how to get along with students when you are in China. In fact, you don’t have to be worried about it. Chinese people are friendly. You should take an active part in all kinds of activities in school. If your friends have some questions, you should help them. They'll thank you for your help. You can bring some small gifts to your classmates when you are invited to their homes. I hope you can get on well with your classmates.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming 【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文，假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Alex来信说他要来中国做交换生。

请根据以下信息给Alex写一封回信，介绍一下你的近况，并给他一些在中国如何与同学融洽相处的建议。

注意书信的格式。

本文人称主要是第一和第二人称，时态主要是一般现在时。

认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读所给提示，所给提示就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。

短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚，至少80词。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
亲爱的亚历克斯，
你好吗？你在上一封信中说你将作为交换生来中国。

欢迎来到中国。

你想了解我最近忙些什么。

让我告诉你。

这几天我大部分时间都在复习考试。

有时我在户外运动。

但我很少有时间出去玩。

你说你在中国时会担心如何与学生相处。

事实上，你不必担心。

中国人很友好。

你应该积极参加学校的各种活动。

如果你的朋友有问题，你应该帮助他们。

他们会感谢你的帮助。

当你被邀请去他们家时，你可以给你的同学带一些小礼物。

我希望你能和同学们相处得很好。

最美好的祝福！
你的，
李明
【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。

2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。

3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。

4.连句成文，合理使用连词。

5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。

6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

5．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；
2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；
3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；
4. 接下来你打算……参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes开阔眼界
要求：
1. 字数80-100个；
2. 开头已经给出不计入总词数；
3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。

When I have trouble with my best friend
There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday.
_______________________________________________________________________________ ______
__________________________________________________________________
【答案】When I have trouble with my best friend
There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is very meaningful for me. What’s more, she didn’t apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love reading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure.
So I am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fact, understanding is the most important thing between friends.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇材料作文。

【详解】
根据题干“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍和好友闹矛盾的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么会和好友有矛盾。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；
2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；
3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；
4. 接下来你打算……
第三部分：总结全文——好友之间应该互相理解。

6．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。

根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。

注意]
（1）表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;
（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
（4）词数:不少于80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
【点睛】
这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

7．（·北京中考模拟）题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。

”坚持是一种可贵的品格。

生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。

某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。

提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提示问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and
I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

【详解】
1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。

书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。

2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。

比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。

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8．（·福建中考模拟）宽容是一种美德，人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊，面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活就会多一缕阳光。

请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

注意：不得出现真实的校名和人名。

提示词语：forgive原谅
提示问题：What happened between you and him/her?
Why did you decide to forgive him/her?
How did you feel after forgiving him/her?
I still remember what happened between ...
【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o'clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn't show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.
I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包
括: 你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。

认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读提示问题（1.What happened between you and him/her? 2.Why did you decide to forgive him/her? 3.How did you feel after forgiving him/her?4.I still remember what happened between ...），提示问题就是本文的提示要点，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提
纲。

短文必须包含提示问题和提示词。

字数应在80词左右。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
我还记得我朋友迈克和我之间发生的事。

两个月前，迈克邀请我七点钟去听音乐会。

我准时到达那里。

我等了很长时间，但迈克最终没有出现。

我打电话问他发生了什么事。

他把音乐会的一切都忘了。

那时他在家里玩电脑游戏。

我生迈克的气是因为他伤害了我的感情。

迈克也意识到了他的错误。

他给我打了好几次电话，向我道歉。

他甚至送我一件礼物让我开心。

最后我原谅了他。

原谅他之后，我感到轻松愉快。

【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。

要学以致用。

（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。

（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

9．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。

”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。

请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数80左右。

One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________
【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.
To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t c ontrol the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇话题作文。

【详解】
根据题干““苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。

”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。

请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么引以为傲。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

第三部分：总结全文——我为自己感到骄傲。

10．（·海林市朝鲜族中学中考模拟）（A）今天是周日，你（David）邀请你的朋友（John）晚六点去看电影，但他不知道电影院在哪儿，你发了一条微信和路线图，请他按照路线图来电影院。

格式和开头已给出。

Dear John,
The movie theater is not very far. Go out of your home
and____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
David
【答案】Dear John,
The movie theater is not very far. Go out of your home and turn left. Go along Buxing Street and turn right at the first crossing. Go straight till you see a post office on your right. The movie theater is just across from the post office. Let us meet there at 6:00 p.m.
David 【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，告诉约翰如何到达电影院。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如turn left, go along, turn right, at the first crossing, go straight, across from以及let sb do。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

11．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
在学习中, 不良的学习习惯导致学习效率不高。

以 How to improve learning efficiency 为题，写一篇英语短文。

内容如下：
1. 说明是否存在学习效率不高的现象；
2. 分析自己或他人效率不高的原因，并举例说明；
3. 根据你所列出的原因，提出相应的建议。

参考词汇：效率 efficiency
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to improve learning efficiency
In my class, _______________________________________________________________
【答案】How to improve learning efficiency
In my class, some of my classmates have asked me how to study b etter. They often say, “why aren’t my grades improving even after I study harder?” In my opinion, it has to do with learning efficiency.
First, some students spend a lot of time on other things, including computer games and TV programs. Although they alway s finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. Second, some students stay up late studying. They might only have five hours left for sleeping. Because they’re so sleepy, they can’t pay their full attention in class. How can they improve if they don’t get enough sleep?
My suggestion is that students should use their time wisely. If you cannot control yourself, you’d better ask your teachers or parents for help. They can help you make a plan.
If you follow the suggestion and take action, I believe your learning efficiency will be greatly
improved.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

要求以How to improve learning efficiency 为题，写一篇英语短文。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

12．（·北京中考模拟）我区正在全力创建全国文明城区。

假如你是李华，上周日参加了学校组织的志愿活动。

请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你们去了哪里，你做了什么，以及你的感受。

提示词语：Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, tired，proud
提示问题：● Where did you go?
● What did you do?
● How did you feel?
Last Sunday
【答案】Last Sunday I participated in “build a civilized city”activitity in Muhu Park. It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public. I think we should put up posters to tell people how to behave well to build a civilized city. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.Though we are tired,we had a good time.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍周日参加的学校组织的志愿活动。

动笔前要先认真阅读要点，尽量将提示的内容利用上；以提示的问题作为写作的主线，重点从三个方面去写作：1.你去了什么地方？2.你在活动中做了什么？3.你感觉怎么样？结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，运用一般过去时态进行叙述。

在谈到自己感受的时候用一般现在时态。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

13．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假设你是第一中学的一名学生，5月21日是学校开放日，学校邀请家长来校听课参观。

你作为志愿者参与了开放日活动。

请你以“The School Open Day”为题，写一篇90词左右的英文报道。

内容提示如下：
1．家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能；
2．王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐；
3．张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生地呈现到课堂上，讲述了八十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗；
4．家长们都感到……并希望……
（参考词汇：抗日战争the Anti-Japanese War）
注意事项：
1．文章须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第4个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3．词数90左右．倡议书的开头已在答题卡上给出。

不计入总词数；
4．文章内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

The School Open Day
No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st．Many parents were invited to your school．I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together．
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________
【答案】The School Open Day
No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st．Many parents were invited to our school．I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together．Parents listened to many lessons．They spoke very highly of teachers' excellent teaching skills．The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting．She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together．The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the Anti-Japanese War alive in class．He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 80 years ago．Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers' hard work and personal charm．They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities．
【解析】这篇作文以学校开放日为题，邀请家长来校听课参观，你作为志愿者参与了学校开放日活动。

根据材料写一篇短文。

内容包括：1. 你带领家长参观美丽的校园，并一同观看了升国旗仪式。

2. 家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能。

3. 王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐。

4. 张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生呈现到课堂上，讲述了七十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗。

5. 家长们都感到……并希望……最后要点的内容须用2到3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。

写作时，我。