新教材外研版英语必修第三册课件Unit4Amazingart表达作文巧升格
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tells us that time is also passing.We should cherish every minute and second，and not let the time pass in vain.We should study hard and be useful to the society.
[常用语句] ★精彩开头 1．The craft yacht on my desk is unique in shape and in the national style of Venice，Italy. 在我的书桌上放着的工艺品游艇造型别致且具有意大利威尼斯 的民族风格。
2．The work of“Clay Figurine Zhang”is a handicraft of folk coloured sculpture.
这匹马让人有了信心。每当我失去了信心，看到它，立即信心十 足。
3．It will encourage me to go forward bravely in my study and life. 它将鼓励着我在学习和生活中勇往直前。
《独钓》(Angling Alone)是中国近代著名艺术作品之一， 由中国著名画家齐白石所作。请根据所给图画，写一篇 80 词 左右的短文，介绍这一作品。
“泥人张”的作品是民间彩塑的工艺品。 3．My favorite painting is the Eight Horses painting. 我最喜欢《八骏图》这幅画了。
★正文佳句 1．The whole matching of colours is very harmonious. 整个色彩的搭配非常协调。 2．Each of the four clay figures looks different and lifelike. 四个泥人个个神态各异，栩栩如生。 3．There seemed to be something that surprised him. 好像有什么东西让他大吃一惊，不知所措。
★余味结尾 1．When we see the sand passing by，it's like seeing the two brothers of hour hand and minute hand racing. 每当我们看到沙子的流逝，就好像看到时针和分针两兄弟在赛 跑。
2．This horse gives people confidence.Whenever I lose confidence and see it，it immediately gives me confidence.
The painter described such vivid image that we can feel the atmosphere of coldness and loneliness.
请描述一件你喜爱的艺术品，可以是绘画类、书法类、摄影类、 文艺类(音乐、舞蹈、戏剧等)、雕塑类、陶瓷类、传统工艺品以及民 间工艺品等。并且写出你喜爱它的原因。
Unit 4 Amazing art
表达 作文巧升格
描写一件艺术品
本单元的写作项目是描写一件艺术品，属于说明文的范畴。艺术品是 具有艺术价值的创意物品，它包括：绘画类、书法类、摄影类、文艺类(音 乐、舞蹈、戏剧等)、雕塑类、陶瓷类、传统工艺品以及民间工艺品等等。 描述艺术品需要对该艺术品的作者以及创作背景、材质、形状、构造、特 点等作客观而准确的说明。用语言文字把该物品形象逼真地呈现在读者面 前，同时表达自己对它的喜爱之情。因此写作时要抓住它的特点，以及从 中获得的乐趣、启迪或者帮助。
【学生习作】
Angling Alone is drawn by Qi Baishi. Qi Baishi is a famous painter in China.
In this picture, we can see mountains in the distance, a river and some trees.On the river there is a small boat, and a fisherman is sitting on it, fishing on one end of the boat. We can see the weather is cold, but the fisherman is still fishing, hoping to catch some fish to feed his families.
【升格作文】 Angling Alone, drawn by the wellknown painter Qi Baishi, is one of the famous contemporary paintings in China.
In this picture, we can see huge black mountains in the distance, a wide river at the foot and some bare trees by the riverside. There aren't any leaves on the branches, revealing that it is late in winter. On the river floats a small boat, a fisherman seated silently on one end of the boat. Though it is so cold, the fisherman is still fishing with great attention, hoping to catch some fish to feed his families.
The painter described such vivid image that we can feel the atmosphere of coldness and loneliness.
[点评] 1.作品介绍过于简单，要点不全，重点不突出。 2.不能形象生动地展现作品内容，让读者见文后心中有图。
It is made of glass with three parts: the two bottles connected with each other on both sides and the supporting black poles.In the middle is a very narrow tunnel，through which the sand in one bottle slowly flows to the other.The whole hourglass is not colourful，but only in black and white，but I think these two colours are enough.I think that only black and white colours are matched to give a wonderful feeling.
课 时 分层 作 业
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要求：1.词数 80 左右； 2．行文连贯，内容积极向上。
【参考范文】 On the table beside my TV ， there is a small and beautiful hourglass.It is not as big as other works of art but very delicate.
[基本框架] 1．开头(beginning)——作品简介，交代该艺术品的基本信息 2．主体(body)——具体描述，介绍该艺术品的详细信息 3．结尾(ending)——评价并写出自己关于该艺术品的评论
[常用词块] 1．can hardly tear myself away from it 爱不释手 2．feel the hardships of the working people 感受到了劳动人民的艰辛 3．my favorite artwork 我喜欢的艺术品 4．bringing people joy and enjoyment 给人们带来欢乐，带来享受 5．symbolize joy and happiness 象征快乐和幸福
[常用语句] ★精彩开头 1．The craft yacht on my desk is unique in shape and in the national style of Venice，Italy. 在我的书桌上放着的工艺品游艇造型别致且具有意大利威尼斯 的民族风格。
2．The work of“Clay Figurine Zhang”is a handicraft of folk coloured sculpture.
这匹马让人有了信心。每当我失去了信心，看到它，立即信心十 足。
3．It will encourage me to go forward bravely in my study and life. 它将鼓励着我在学习和生活中勇往直前。
《独钓》(Angling Alone)是中国近代著名艺术作品之一， 由中国著名画家齐白石所作。请根据所给图画，写一篇 80 词 左右的短文，介绍这一作品。
“泥人张”的作品是民间彩塑的工艺品。 3．My favorite painting is the Eight Horses painting. 我最喜欢《八骏图》这幅画了。
★正文佳句 1．The whole matching of colours is very harmonious. 整个色彩的搭配非常协调。 2．Each of the four clay figures looks different and lifelike. 四个泥人个个神态各异，栩栩如生。 3．There seemed to be something that surprised him. 好像有什么东西让他大吃一惊，不知所措。
★余味结尾 1．When we see the sand passing by，it's like seeing the two brothers of hour hand and minute hand racing. 每当我们看到沙子的流逝，就好像看到时针和分针两兄弟在赛 跑。
2．This horse gives people confidence.Whenever I lose confidence and see it，it immediately gives me confidence.
The painter described such vivid image that we can feel the atmosphere of coldness and loneliness.
请描述一件你喜爱的艺术品，可以是绘画类、书法类、摄影类、 文艺类(音乐、舞蹈、戏剧等)、雕塑类、陶瓷类、传统工艺品以及民 间工艺品等。并且写出你喜爱它的原因。
Unit 4 Amazing art
表达 作文巧升格
描写一件艺术品
本单元的写作项目是描写一件艺术品，属于说明文的范畴。艺术品是 具有艺术价值的创意物品，它包括：绘画类、书法类、摄影类、文艺类(音 乐、舞蹈、戏剧等)、雕塑类、陶瓷类、传统工艺品以及民间工艺品等等。 描述艺术品需要对该艺术品的作者以及创作背景、材质、形状、构造、特 点等作客观而准确的说明。用语言文字把该物品形象逼真地呈现在读者面 前，同时表达自己对它的喜爱之情。因此写作时要抓住它的特点，以及从 中获得的乐趣、启迪或者帮助。
【学生习作】
Angling Alone is drawn by Qi Baishi. Qi Baishi is a famous painter in China.
In this picture, we can see mountains in the distance, a river and some trees.On the river there is a small boat, and a fisherman is sitting on it, fishing on one end of the boat. We can see the weather is cold, but the fisherman is still fishing, hoping to catch some fish to feed his families.
【升格作文】 Angling Alone, drawn by the wellknown painter Qi Baishi, is one of the famous contemporary paintings in China.
In this picture, we can see huge black mountains in the distance, a wide river at the foot and some bare trees by the riverside. There aren't any leaves on the branches, revealing that it is late in winter. On the river floats a small boat, a fisherman seated silently on one end of the boat. Though it is so cold, the fisherman is still fishing with great attention, hoping to catch some fish to feed his families.
The painter described such vivid image that we can feel the atmosphere of coldness and loneliness.
[点评] 1.作品介绍过于简单，要点不全，重点不突出。 2.不能形象生动地展现作品内容，让读者见文后心中有图。
It is made of glass with three parts: the two bottles connected with each other on both sides and the supporting black poles.In the middle is a very narrow tunnel，through which the sand in one bottle slowly flows to the other.The whole hourglass is not colourful，but only in black and white，but I think these two colours are enough.I think that only black and white colours are matched to give a wonderful feeling.
课 时 分层 作 业
点击右图进入…
要求：1.词数 80 左右； 2．行文连贯，内容积极向上。
【参考范文】 On the table beside my TV ， there is a small and beautiful hourglass.It is not as big as other works of art but very delicate.
[基本框架] 1．开头(beginning)——作品简介，交代该艺术品的基本信息 2．主体(body)——具体描述，介绍该艺术品的详细信息 3．结尾(ending)——评价并写出自己关于该艺术品的评论
[常用词块] 1．can hardly tear myself away from it 爱不释手 2．feel the hardships of the working people 感受到了劳动人民的艰辛 3．my favorite artwork 我喜欢的艺术品 4．bringing people joy and enjoyment 给人们带来欢乐，带来享受 5．symbolize joy and happiness 象征快乐和幸福