读后续写寻熊遇险记课件-高三英语一轮复习

范文呈现
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. It let out a deafeningroar,charging at us. As the spray had been used up, we were in a desperate mood. With little weapon to protect ourselves in the camp, Elli and I were very nervous and terrified. The bear continued hitting the fence with its paws. Finally, the bear broke the fence and we were so fearful that we screamed and cried, thinking we would be eaten by the bear.
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范文呈现
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The pilot shot the bear with special medicine to send it sleep.We were so delighted and quickly went aboard the helicopter, breathing a sigh of relief.We felt SO lucky that we were not killed by the bear. Looking from high above, we spotted l the beast was still lying on the ground. I reached intomy backpack and took out my camera, taking a picture of it. It was such an unforgettable experience.
高考英语读后续写语篇练习
——熊口脱险
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Part 1 题目呈现
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续写原文
① One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a
research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”— the town of Churchill in Manitoba,
and smelled our garlic bread.
④ The hungry beer followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high, wire fence. He
pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
one fall
A research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world ” We encountered a hungry young male polar bear and had a conflict with it.
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Paragraph Para. 1&2 Para. 3,4&5 Para. 6&7
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Part 1 读懂大意，理清脉络 情节分析
amazing but adventurous frightened
panicked
terriified relieved nervous and terrified
relieved
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情节构建的重点
点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔 接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔 接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔 接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能 量，揭示和强调主题。
⑤ Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard,
and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this
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1. Read for plots
A. The bear came back angrily and they had to try new ideas.B. The couple went to a town in Canada to take photos of polar bears. C. The helicopter arrived to their rescue.D. Frightened, the couple tried all the means of defense they knew but none of them worked. E. A bear came unexpectedly while the couple was cooking dinner.
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续写段首语
Paragraph 1：A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Paragraph 2：At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
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Part 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1.Read for information
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续写建议
➢就在这时，直升机到了。飞行员向熊射了一枪，里面装有特 殊药物，使熊入睡。我们高兴极了，赶紧上了直升机，松了 一口气。我们感到很幸运，没有被熊杀死。从高处俯瞰，我 们发现这只野兽仍躺在地上。我把手伸进背包，拿出相机， 给熊拍了一张照。这真是一次难忘的经历。
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Part 3 范文呈现
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Part 2 写作思路
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Step 1确定第二段结局情节提示:作者是事后回忆，写下这篇文章,因此他 和妻子应该是脱险生还。
Step 2确定第一段结尾情节提示:第二段首句的At that very moment“在这 关键的时刻”，说明第一段结尾处，作者和妻子遇到的情况是危急的。 Step3构思第一段中间情节提示:由第段首句可知， 熊又回来了，可见情 况比较危险，之后到第二段首句的At that very moment,中间发生了什么 可尝试用思维导图法构思。
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Canada.
② Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals
should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be
polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
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续写原文
⑥ I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
⑦ Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
要素 （1）Who are the main characters?
（2）When did the story happens?
（3）Where did the story happens?
（4）What happened?
关键信息 I，my wife Elli, the hungry male polar bear and camp manager one fall

How
Elli and I wanted to take pictures of polar bear, but it was dangerous.
We try our best to repel the bear attrached by food, but in vain.
We turned to the camp manager, who instruced us to use pepper spray to repel the bear until help arrived.
The bear was stopped
We were rescued
Our feeling
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续写建议
➢几分钟后，熊回到了我们的营地。它发出震耳欲聋的吼声， 向我们冲来。由于喷雾用完了，我们陷入了绝望之中。由于 营地里没有什么武器可以用来保护自己，Elli 和我非常紧张和 害怕。熊继续用爪子拍打着篱笆。最后熊打破了篱笆，我们 害怕到尖叫、痛哭，以为我们会被熊吃掉。
through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of
those times.
③ As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,
The bear’s attack
We fought back
The bear’s reaction
A dangerous situation
Step 4构思第二段中间情节提示:作者和妻子看到直升机后是什么反应 得救后又是怎样的心情 怎样使结局圆满？可些试用思维导图法构思。
The pilot helped us