专题15 读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落

专题15 读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落
专题15读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落
一、读后续写收尾的方式：
读后续写是指在已有的故事基础上，续写一个新的结局或者补充故事情节。

在写作过程中，可以采用多种方式来收尾，例如通过画面定格、情感渲染、意义深化等手法来呈现更加生动、精彩的收尾段落。

二、画面定格
画面定格是一种常用的收尾方式，通过描绘人物的动作、场景的变化等来展现故事的和结尾。

例如，在《2020杭州高级中学等五校联考》中，作者通过描写女儿将手搭在母亲肩上的动作，表达了两人之间深厚的感情。

在《Reuben的礼物》中，作者通过描写母亲紧紧拥抱儿子的情景，表达了母子之间深厚的感情。

在实际写作中，画面定格可以通过细致的描写和生动的语言来实现，让读者更加真切地感受到故事情节的和收尾。

1）The sky was filled with a n pure。

sparkling eyes of light。

and the grass beneath my feet was a lush green。

It was as if the merging of night and day had created a breathtaking moment of beauty。

Dawn had arrived。

and with it came a sense of renewal and hope。

(对黎明到来的画面进行了修饰，表现出黎明的美丽和带来的希望)
2）As the first rays of dawn broke over the placid ocean。

the water shimmered and glowed with a golden light。

It was as if the sun was bestowing a gift upon the world。

creating a path of light from the shore to the horizon。

(对黎明到来的画面进行了修饰，表现出太阳的神奇和给予的礼物)
3）The crystal-clear water was gentle as I waded through it。

and the sunset painted the sky with hues of orange and pink。

creating a breathtaking canvas of beauty。

It was a moment of tranquility and peace。

a time to reflect on the beauty of nature and the wonders of life。

(对美好日落时的画面进行了修饰，表现出
宁静和美丽)
4）夕阳余晖逐渐消失，迅速降临的黑夜将天空覆盖，宛
如一层漆黑的幕布。

这是日落时的景象。

5）被星星包围的月亮似乎让黑夜变得更加明亮，星星闪
烁在黑暗中。

无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。

这是描写夜空的画面。

6）抬头一看，我发现太阳比我以前所见过的更加明亮，
远处的一棵树反射着太阳光，闪耀着柔和的光芒。

随着热度的上升，我的意识逐渐模糊，我眨了眨眼，最后重重地摔倒在地，才回过神来。

这是一幅特殊寓意的画面。

7）星光闪烁的天空，深蓝色的午夜，让整个场景都充满
了童话般的美丽。

这是一幅神话般美丽的夜空画面。

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1.雨后清新的画面：
被雨水浸润过的地面，闪烁着晶莹的光芒，踩上去感觉凉爽而清新。

泥土般的香味扑鼻而来，让人心旷神怡。

这是雨后的清新画面。

2.雨水来临的画面：
窗外的天空渐渐阴沉，乌云密布，风渐渐变得凌厉。

窗户外的树叶开始瑟瑟作响，几滴雨水先是轻柔地敲打着窗户，然后越来越急促，最终变成了倾盆大雨。

这是雨水来临的画面。

3.描写落叶的画面：
秋天的街上，树叶渐渐变黄，红，橙，金色，漫天飘落。

踩在地上，发出嘎吱作响的声音，时不时地有几片树叶在空中轻轻飘落，像是在跳着轻盈的舞蹈。

这是描写落叶的画面。

最后，这些画面让人们感受到了大自然的美妙和神奇，也让我们更加珍惜自然的恩赐。

1) Chester revealed that his father had attempted to locate him and his brother。

but due to their changed last names。

he was unsuccessful。

Despite this。

his father remembers him and his older brother and has been searching for them ever since they lost contact。

Chester's brother has also reunited with their father in
Colombia。

When asked about the impact of this n on his life。

Chester expressed excitement about the possibility of more trips now that he has family in different places.
2) The n een Nina and her dog。

Shavi。

was a remarkable event that touched the hearts of many。

Nina's family had moved to a larger apartment。

and she was amazed by the loyalty and n that Shavi had shown by traveling such a long distance to find them。

She declared that she would never give away such a loyal friend and emphasized the importance of loving and caring for animals。

who are among the most devoted and loving creatures in the world.
3) After her husband lost his job。

Dolores Haworth。

the director of Heightvale。

offered him a job at her company。

She was impressed by his brilliant work attitude and knew he was the type of employee they were looking for。

Meeting him in person only confirmed her initial n。

as he was polite and lovely。

He has already started working for them and they are thrilled to have him on their team.
4) Jack and Paisley hung everything back on the walls and Jack asked her if she was willing to lead a tough life with him。

Paisley。

with ashes on her hands。

looked at the walls filled with their belongings and replied that it wasn't suffering for her to live this way。

She was content with what they had and was willing to face any challenges with Jack by her side。

Their love for each other made any hardships worth it.
1) My mother is my ultimate role model。

Her beauty。

intelligence。

and kind heart have inspired me in countless ways。

I cannot imagine where I would be without her guidance and support。

especially as I pursue my dream of ing a famous dancer。

As I grow older and potentially e a parent myself。

I aspire to be as amazing of a parent as my mother has been to me.
2) I am deeply dissatisfied with the n that money equals happiness。

In my n。

a free and us lifestyle does not equate to true happiness。

Rather。

genuine happiness stems from love and contributing to society in meaningful ways。

While many of my classmates share this perspective。

there are some who ritize money above all else。

However。

I firmly believe that money
cannot replace the value of one's life。

time。

and overall well-being.
The teacher responded。

“You won for two reasons。

Firstly。

you have almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo。

Secondly。

the only known defense for that move is for
your opponent to grab your left arm。

It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match。

As the proverb says。

‘Every coin has two sides.’ Your achievement lies in making full use of your strength。

Please remember to never give up。

especially in times
of trouble。

God is fair to everyone.”
After wrapping the gifts。

I took a deep breath and asked Joy。

“Do you have plans for dinner?” I explained that I wanted to wait a bit before going back to the hospital to give Grace and her husband some time alone with the baby。

“Would you like to join me for a bite to eat?” I asked。

“I’d love to,” she replied。

her eyes sparkling like diamonds。

And so began the end of my months of heartbreak following Betsy’s death。

(The story ends with an open ending。

allowing the reader to imagine what happens next.)
开头：As a child。

I always dreamed of being a superhero。

I wanted to save the world and make a difference.
结尾：In the end。

I may not have e a superhero in the nal sense。

but I still strive to make a difference in the world every day。

And that's enough for me.
A funny thing happened to Arthur on his way to work one day。

He was walking down the street when he saw a man in a chicken suit standing on the corner。

The man was holding a sign that read "Buy One。

Get One Free" and he was dancing around。

trying to attract customers to the fast food restaurant behind him.
Arthur couldn't help but laugh at the sight of the man in the chicken suit。

He thought it was us that someone would be willing
to dress up like that just to sell some chicken sandwiches。

As he walked past the man。

he couldn't resist taking a picture on his phone.
As he continued on his way to work。

Arthur couldn't。

thinking about the man in the chicken suit。

He wondered what it
would be like to have a job like that。

where you got to dress up in a ridiculous costume and make people laugh.
When he arrived at work。

Arthur couldn't wait to tell his coworkers about the man in the chicken suit。

They all laughed and joked about it。

and Arthur felt like he had brightened everyone's day with his story.
What a funny day。

Arthur couldn't。

laughing whenever he looked back on this us experience。

As the saying goes。

"Laughter is the best medicine." This silly encounter reminded Arthur to not take life too usly and to find joy in the unexpected moments.
18.Starting a business is not easy。

but keeping it going is even harder。

19.We will deal with the n when it arises。

20.If we rush too much。

we may end up achieving less。

21.Without effort。

there can be no reward。

22.Anything is possible if we are willing to try。

23.As long as we are alive。

there is always hope。

ziness in youth leads to regret in old age。

25.We should not rely solely on divine n。

but take n ourselves。

26.Flowers may bloom again。

but youth is fleeting。

27.We can only receive divine help if we first help ourselves。

28.If we keep procrastinating。

we may never plish anything。

29.It is important to balance work and play to maintain a healthy mind。

30.Hard work is the key to success。

31.Truth es evident with time。

32.Small efforts can accumulate to result in significant es。

33.Even the wisest individuals make mistakes。

34.Do not postpone tasks that can be completed today。

35.Learning is a lifelong process。

36.Achieving two goals with a single n.
37.Sometimes problems come all at once。

38.We learn through our experiences。

39.Talking about something is easy。

but actually doing it is difficult。

40.It's better to prevent a problem from happening than to try
to fix it later。

41.Hard work and frugality are both important for success。

42.Genius is mostly the result of hard work rather than just n。

43.The person who wins in the end is the happiest。

44.The person who pays for something gets to make the ns。

45.Good health is the n for hope and happiness。

46.Knowledge is acquired through learning。

not innate。

47.ns speak louder than words。

48.Courage and n are essential for being virtuous。

49.We are stronger together than alone。

50.Rumors usually have some truth to them。

51.Many people working together can plish tasks easily。

52.Reading can broaden our knowledge and understanding。

53.The best horse and the smartest child both need proper training。

54.It's important to learn well and start young.
55.Wisdom in the mind is more valuable than money in hand.
56.After experiencing a negative event。

people tend to e more us in the future.
57.A healthy body leads to a healthy mind.
58.Seeing something with your own eyes is more convincing than hearing about it from others.
59.Dogs wag their tails not only because they love you。

but also because they want your food.
60.Money can be a useful tool。

but it should not control our lives.
61.A lack of resources can make achieving goals difficult.
62.Achieving success often requires ing obstacles.
63.Living without a clear purpose is like navigating without a compass.
64.Quality is more important than quantity.
65.An outsider may have a better perspective on a n.
66.Acquiring knowledge is worth the cost。

no matter how high.
67.Sharing joy with others enhances the experience.
68.Happiness is not limited by time.
69.Time waits for no one.
70.Gaining knowledge requires hard work and n.
71.It is important to start with the basics before attempting more complex tasks.
72.It is beneficial to have a broad range of knowledge。

but also important to specialize in a specific area.
73.The gap een words and ns can be significant.
74.Having both skill and confidence is like having an unbeatable army.
75.Habits can e so ingrained that they feel like second nature.
76.Only the dead never make mistakes.
77.A good book is timeless and unchanging.
78.Like friends。

books should be chosen carefully and in small numbers.
79.A book that is never opened is as useful as a brick.
80.True character is not determined by one's clothing.
81.Two heads are better than one。

as the saying goes.
82.While birth is important。

upbringing is even more so.
83.Anything is possible with n and a willing mind.
84.Without the necessary resources。

it's impossible to create something.
85.You have to take risks in order to gain anything.
86.You won't get anything for free.
87.Something cannot come from nothing.
88.Those who never make mistakes never achieve anything.
89.It's better to say nothing than to say something irrelevant.
90.Success breeds more success.
91.Without taking risks。

there can be no reward.
92.Sometimes reality falls short of our ns.
93.Giving advice is often easier than taking it.
94.Life is unpredictable。

and anything can happen at any moment.
95.If we don't have specific goals or desires。

we won't achieve anything.
96.Superficial efforts lead to failure in every aspect of life.
97.Success requires taking risks and facing challenges.
98.The best way to stay healthy is by maintaining a balanced diet。

getting enough rest。

and finding joy in life.
99.Once someone has been caught deceiving。

they will always be viewed with n.
100.People who make the most noise are often the ones with the least substance.
101.Sometimes what appears to be a setback can actually turn out to be a blessing in disguise.
102.Those who make the most noise are often the least dangerous.
103.It's better to be poor and maintain your integrity than to be wealthy and lose your moral compass.
104.It's better to do something late than to never do it at all.
105.n can lead to failure.
106.People tend to associate with others who are similar to them.
107.Family bonds are stronger than other types of nships.
108.Greed can never be satisfied。

even in the case of beggars.
109.Losing one's mental faculties is a tragedy beyond compare.
没有格式错误和明显有问题的段落。

110.Without a strong will。

one cannot attain high intelligence.
111.Before entrusting a great responsibility to someone。

Heaven tests their n by subjecting them to physical and mental hardships。

Only after enduring and ing these challenges can one's character be strengthened and weaknesses be corrected.
112.How can someone of low status understand the ns of someone of high status?
113.In every encounter with others。

there is always something to be learned。

One can either follow their good example or learn from their mistakes to improve oneself.
114.n should be accessible to all。

regardless of their social standing.
115.Too many people involved in a task can lead to its failure.
116.It is better to have fewer books than to blindly believe everything they say.
117.Though the road ahead may be long and arduous。

I will continue to search high and low for answers.
118.Through repeated readings。

the true meanings of a book will gradually reveal themselves.
119.A person who reads extensively possesses a gifted pen。

and their writing is inspired。

As the saying goes。

"Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles。

and writing with a divine pen."
120.A true gentleman values n over empty words。

as the saying goes。

"Speak little and do much."
121.It is important to not engage in wrongdoing。

no matter how small。

and to not neglect doing good。

no matter how minor。

As the saying goes。

"Do not do evil just because it is small。

and do not neglect good just because it is small."
122.One must always keep their promises and not give up
until they have achieved success。

As the saying goes。

"Keep
your word and follow through with your ns."
123.Treat others as you would like to be treated。

As the saying goes。

"Do not do to others what you would not want done
to yourself."
124.To surpass others。

one must first surpass themselves。

To criticize others。

one must first criticize themselves。

To understand others。

one must first understand themselves.
125.Where there is smoke。

there is fire。

This means that rumors or ns often have some basis in truth.
126.Just as fish cannot survive in water that is too clean。

companies cannot thrive when their demands are too high。

As the saying goes。

"When the water is too clean。

there are no fish。

When people are too critical。

there are no followers."
127.Being in a high n can be lonely and difficult。

As the saying goes。

"The higher you climb。

the colder it gets."
128.If you want to be respected。

you must first show respect to others。

As the saying goes。

"If you want to be respected。

you must first show respect."
129.It is important to follow through with your words and take n。

As the saying goes。

"Say what you mean and do what you say."
130.Haste makes waste。

This means that if you rush things。

you are more likely to make mistakes and fail。

It's better to take your time and do things carefully to ensure success。

131.It's better to be envied than pitied。

This means that it's better to have people be jealous of you than to feel sorry for you。

It's better to be successful and have people want what you have than to be struggling and have people feel bad for you。

132.Although the sun is shining。

it's important to be prepared for rain。

This means that even when things are going well。

it's important to plan ahead and be prepared for any potential problems that may arise。

133.So the world wags。

This means that life goes on and things keep moving forward no matter what happens。

134.One can't be in two places at once。

This means that it's impossible to be in two places at the same time。

so you have to choose where you want to be and ritize your time accordingly。

135.No weal without woe。

This means that you can't have good without bad。

There will always be ups and downs in life。

and you have to take the good with the bad。

136.Little things can have a big impact。

This means that small ns or events can lead to much larger consequences。

137.Like attracts like。

This means that people with similar interests or personalities tend to be drawn to each other。

138.It's important to have ns。

This means that it's better to have multiple choices or opportunities than to rely on just one。

139.Dreams aren't always reliable。

This means that you can't always trust your dreams or the things you imagine。

140.Don't try to teach someone something they already know。

This means that it's pointless to try to teach someone something they already understand or are skilled at。

141.A positive attitude can lead to a longer life。

This means that if you have a happy and optimistic outlook on life。

you're more likely to live a longer and healthier life。

142.Eating healthy foods can help you stay healthy。

This means that if you eat a balanced and us diet。

you're less likely to get sick and need medical n。

143.Hard work can lead to success。

This means that if you work hard and put in the effort。

you're more likely to achieve your goals and be successful。

144.It's important to think things through before taking n。

but once you've made a n。

it's important to act quickly。

145.One bad n can lead to more bad ns。

This means that if you make a mistake or do something wrong。

it can lead to a chain n of more mistakes or bad ns。

146.Everyone has different preferences and tastes。

This means that what one person likes。

another person may not like。

147.We often don't appreciate something until it's gone。

This means that we don't always realize how valuable something is until we no longer have it。

148.Sometimes。

less is more。

This means that simplicity can be more effective or beautiful than complexity。

149.Sometimes。

something bad can turn out to be a good thing in disguise。

This means that even when things seem bad。

there may be a silver lining or hidden benefit。

150.If someone loves you。

they should accept everything about you。

including the things they may not like。

151.Everyone has their moment of glory or success。

This means that everyone will have a time in their life when they achieve something great or feel proud of themselves.
Sharpening your axe before cutting wood is a wise n that will not delay your job。

A sharp tool will make the task easier and more efficient.
To truly believe something。

it's important to see it with your own eyes。

Seeing is believing.
Starting a task with a good approach is essential for success。

A well begun task is half done.
Time is a us resource that once gone。

cannot be retrieved。

Time flies never to be recalled.
When visiting a new place。

it's important to adapt to the local customs and ns。

When in Rome。

do as the Romans do.
The one who has the last laugh is the one who truly wins。

He laughs best who laughs last.
Treat others the way you want to be treated。

Deal with a man as he deals with you.
Before making a n or taking n。

it's important to carefully consider the potential consequences。

Look before you leap.。