中考英语书面表达题型的解题技巧及训练(解析)经典

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一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·山东中考模拟)写作
现在,戴眼镜的学生越来越多,为此,国家把每年 6 月 6 日定为爱眼日。

请你结合自己的体会,就如何爱护眼睛,给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。

提示:
1.吃有益于眼睛的食物,如胡萝卜、鸡蛋等;
2.多做眼保健操,长时间用眼后可看看远方;
3.养成良好的用眼习惯,如:不躺着玩手机或看书等。

要求:
1.根据内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数90左右。

(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.
First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it's helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good habit. Don't read books or use a cell phone in bed.
In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文,写作前要认真阅读前面的提示,确定文章的中心。

写作的主题就是如何爱护眼睛。

我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,第一人称,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

用到的词组或短语有:try one’s best to do尽力做某事,be good for对……有益,such as例如, from time to time不时地,It’s + adj. to do sth.做某事怎么样;make sure to do sth.务必做某事; keep healthy保持健康。

2.(·全国中考模拟)共享单车(shared bikes)在厦门投入使用以来,给人们带来了诸多便利,受到人们的追捧,改变了人们的出行方式,但同时也遇到了一些挑战,它是国民素质的“照妖镜”,请你根据表格中信息的提示,给《21世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

注意事项:1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。

2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。

作适当发挥。

3.词数在90个左右,文章的开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。

Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.
But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.
I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们给《21世纪英文报》投稿,谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。

题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容,包括:共享单车的优势;存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。

前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达,而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力,组织语言,并表达出来,要求至少两点。

通过审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态,第三人称来叙述,短文可以分成两段或者三段,一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。

写作时,应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,而应从句子的整体考虑,简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用,改变文章句式节奏,使用不同的句式,避免单调。

语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分,使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。

用到的短语有reduce pollution 减少污染;What's more 此外,take up 占据,in our way挡我们的路,living a green life 过绿色生活。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整,包含了题目要求的所有信息。

短文分成了四
段,第一段引出话题共享单车;第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点;第三段介绍了一些问题;最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。

分段叙述使文章的结构清晰,主题明确,有层次性。

其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称,文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主,语法规范,用词准确,句式富于变化。

例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几个长句;另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分,如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。

正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。

3.(·南通市通州区金北学校中考模拟)书面表达
同学们,中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了,班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。

假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。

内容提示:
注意:
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2. 词数90左右。

开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
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I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday. Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.
Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.
I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语,例如I'd like to do,help me open my mind,at least,be interested in,during the holiday,plan to do,join in,be kind to someone in need,pay more attention to,be close to nature,search the Internet等。

而First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用,既使短文层次清晰,又丰富了习作内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。

点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4.(·湖北中考模拟)书面表达
随着网络的不断发展,传统的学习模式受到冲击。

“网上学习(online learning)”这一新的学习模式备受青睐。

假设你是陈欣,最近某英文杂志正在讨论中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习。

以下是你所在班级的讨论情况,请你给该报投稿,反映讨论结果并谈谈你自己的想法。

提示:
要求:1、词数不少于80词,稿件的开头已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥。

2、向子结构准确,要点齐全,内容合理,篇章结构连贯;
3、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。

Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________
【答案】Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.
Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t welcome it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.
In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.
【解析】试题分析:本篇书面表达以“网上学习(online learning)”为话题,结合本题所给的写作信息,阐述网上学习的两种不同的观点。

根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态,注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。

文中more convenient,is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ,however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等词(组)恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;文中还多处使用了宾语从句、让步状语从句、动名词作主语等句式,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,值得学习。

5.(·陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟)保持健康的体魄,拥有健康的生活方式对我们每个人来说都是至关重要的。

假如你是李明,你们学校将开展以"How to keep healthy"为题的主题演讲.请你从健康饮食,体育锻炼和好的生活习惯等方面写一篇演讲稿。

要求:1.语言通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
2.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名,校名和地名等) ;
3.词数: 不少于70词。

开头已经给出。

不计入总字数。

(请把标题和已给出的开头抄写在答题卡上)
How to keep healthy
Hi, Everyone, I'm glad to give a speech here. My topic is "How to keep healthy".
【答案】 Hi, Everyone, I'm glad to give a speech here. My topic is "How to keep healthy". As students, we should not only study hard but also have strong and healthy bodies. So it is very important to develop a healthy living habit. And there are many things we can do in our daily life to keep healthy.
First, keep doing exercise. It can help you reduce pressure and make your body strong. Jogging,
walking after meals and dancing are good choice.
Second, Develop a good eating habit. Eat more fresh vegetables and fruit instead of junk food and sugar.
Third, Enough and good sleep is good for our health. So don’t stay up l ate.
I hope my advice can help you. Thanks for listening.
【解析】本文要求以"How to keep healthy"为题写一篇演讲稿,内容从健康饮食,体育锻炼和好的生活习惯等方面去表达。

文章时态要用一般现在时,人称主要用第一、第三人称。

在写作的时候,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;词汇、句式要丰富多样,避免句式单一。

在提出建议时,可以使用first,second⋅⋅⋅进行列举,使文章显得更加条理。

最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求;检查段落是否完整,句子表达是否准确,语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误。

点睛:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡。

在提出建议时,可以使用first,second⋅⋅⋅进行列举,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;条理性更强。

最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。

6.(·丹江口市习家店中学中考模拟)初级写作
今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等,而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境呢?
请以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”为题写一篇短文。

提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重;2.砍伐森林严重;3.大气污染严重;4.白色垃圾等 .要求:如何改善/保护环境?至少3-4个方面,80-100词。

【答案】The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution.And when trees are cut down,some animals disappear.There is more and more dirty smoke in the air.People's health has been greatly affected by air,noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life,it's time for us to protect our world.
Firstly,we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere.And we should recycle,reduce and reuse things,for this saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.Don't use plastic bags.Also,we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
写作思路:先仔细审题,这是写好文章的前提.按照要求把所要表达的内容一一呈现出来,一定要确定好文章的重点,做到主次分明.短文可用一些短语和句式,增加文章的色彩.
本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.做到开篇点题,指出环境问题变得越来越严重,然后按照题目要求逐一列出现在所存在的问题。

提出问题
之后接着提出解决问题的办法,其中用到firstly,….Also…等使文章清晰明了,最后提出自己的期望We hope our world is more and more beautiful.文章做到内容完整,思路清晰,词语运用正确,是一篇很不错的文章。

7.(·扬州市梅岭中学中考模拟)
假如你是Liu Bin,请用英语给笔友Bob回复邮件。

注意:1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.要点齐全,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数100左右,邮件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Bob,
I’m very glad to know that you will come to our school.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【答案】Dear Bob,
I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school. Let me tell you something about it. Our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. We go to school five days a week and have six classes every day. There is also an activity class in the afternoon. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too.
My classmates are very nice. We often help each other. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如be glad to,listen to the music,five days a week,so that,prepare for,for a while,of course,at the weekends,help each other,look forward to等。

而固定句型it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.和I'm very glad to know that you will come to
our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

8.(·广州市第十六中学中考模拟)书面表达
初中就要毕业了,校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。

假定你是李华,请根据要点写一封信,说说你的计划。

要求:1.要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺,连贯; 2.正确使用语态,语法正确,书写整洁。

3.80词左右,开头结尾己给出,不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First
of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。

【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍毕业典礼活动计划。

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

9.(·四川中考模拟)旅行是学习的最好方式之一。

请以“Travelling”为题,根据以下思维导图的提示,写一篇短文,并发表你的看法。

注意:
1. 要点齐全,适当发挥;
2. 从思维导图Sayings部分,选择恰当的格合理利用在短文中;
3. 词数:100词左右;
【答案】例文
Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如one of the best ways,learn much,an exact picture of,a careful observer,seeing is believing,no matter,a lot等。

而非谓语动词结构Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

10.(·海南海口实验中学中考模拟)书面表达
安全对于每个人都很重要。

中学生年龄较小,学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。

请根据以下提示,写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。

内容提示:
1.交通安全:遵守交通规则,不闯红绿灯等;
2.食品安全:吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品等;
3.活动安全:进行体育锻炼时,不要弄伤自己,不私自下河游泳等。

提示词语:
study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,
Travel Safety is very important to everyone.
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【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers –so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。

本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。

根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时,主语是第一人称。

写作时注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。

同时适当使用连接词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。

在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。

同时,文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语,如:祈使句的使用、we must、we should、in a word、It’s +形容词+ to动词不定式结构以及序数词的使用等,这为文章增色不少。

在学习中注意积累,牢记一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

11.(·湖北中考模拟)书面表达
我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所,以此作为教育学生的一种方式。

这件事在学生中引起了强
烈的反响,请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料,报告给学校。

同意:1.多数学生是独生子女,不会做事。

2.学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。

3.学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。

不同意:1.很脏,容易使学生生病。

2.不是学生应该做的事情。

3.打扫教室就足够了。

注意:1.短文应包括表中所有内容,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译; 2.不少于80词。

生词提示:respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.
【解析】
【详解】
阅读题干要求,这是一篇看法类的作文,那么首先得点明讨论的话题,然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法,时态以一般现在时为主。

重点词汇及短语:argument争论;take place发生;among(三者或三者以上)之间;a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会;help sb do sth帮助某人做某事;get sick生病。

亮点句型:
(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来,在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。

现在完成时(have/has+done)。

(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。

动词不定式作主语,谓语动词用单数,疑问词+to do。

12.(·河南中考模拟)书面表达
初中生活即将结束。

在这三年里你的生活中定不乏难以忘怀的人或事,请以“An unforgettable in my school life”为题,用英语写一篇短文。

讲述
一个你最难忘的人或事。

要求: 1.请补全题目,如teacher. classmate或trip等:
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校姓名;
3.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺,80词左右。

【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school life
For these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly
again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是话题作文,介绍自己难忘的人或事。

【详解】
1.本篇要求学生自己补全题目,确定写作的目标,写自己3年初中校园生活里难忘的人或事,描述难忘的人用第三人称,讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时,开头和结尾一般性阐述,用一般现在时;书写时要围绕中心“unforgettable”,叙述清楚具体的事件或情节,文章结构要清晰明了,注意短语、句型的正确使用。

2.本篇例文叙述难忘的英语老师,开头句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主题,正文部分详细描述了老师如何耐心的多方面的帮助自己,结尾句.She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school li fe.呼应中心词unforgettable。

整篇文章结构严谨,紧扣主题,前呼后应。

3.高分亮点:巧用连词,not only…but also,because of as well as,so…that…句子得以有机结合;短语how to do sth,teach sb to do sth,care for也为文章的语言增色不少。

13.(·湖南中考模拟)阅读可以使人开阔视野,阅读可使人心旷神怡,不管是参加中国汉字听写大会,还是中国诗词大会,都需要有良好的阅读基础。

下面请大家谈谈阅读的好处并在生活中养成良好的阅读习惯。

注意:作文字数,不低于60字.
参考词汇:increase our knowledge open up our eyes improve writing skills
learn the world affairs without going out make the life colorful
Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading
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____________________________________________________________________ Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
【答案】Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading.
Firstly, reading increases our knowledge. It teaches us skills about getting a good job, cooking and so on. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write. Thirdly, reading can open up our eyes and we can learn the world affairs without going out. we can know how things happened in the history and how to avoid bad things from happening. Finally, reading all kinds of books can make our life colorful.
Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading
【解析】
此篇书面表达是根据提示介绍读书的好处及养成良好的阅读习惯。

文章的时态以写作时为主。

写作时注意firstly,secondly,thirdly,Finally的使用。

开篇点题,分析读书的好处。

最后发出呼吁让人们读书。

14.(·吉林省实验中考模拟)(B)《朗读者》第五期节目中,主持人在开场白中说道:“我们的一生,会经历很多的第一次,难忘而又宝贵,它意味着我们的成长。

”请谈谈你人生中最难忘的“第一次”,或许是第一次做家务、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并说说你从中学到了什么或有哪些收获。

不少于80词。

(文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
【答案】The First Cooking
Last weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn't know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn't lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.
【解析】
【分析】
本文为材料作文,需要写出第一次做某事,人生中有许多第一次,可以挑选一件让自己感觉深刻,并且从中学到了许多东西的事件来写,这样的话,贴近生活实际,学生有话可说。

【详解】
本文写了我的第一次做饭,先交代背景知识,因为父母不在家,所以我不得不自己动手,动手做的过程中,由于没有经验,理所当然地失败了。

但是,我不能气馁,要从失败中找原因,从哪里跌倒,就从哪里起来,所以,第二周,我让妈妈教我做菜,获得了成功,而且知道了,只要不放弃,就能获得成功。

【点睛】
本篇作文贴近实际,每个人都有第一次,挑选一件自己有话可说的来写即可。

但是需要注意文章逻辑,语篇顺序,注意连接词的使用和长短句结合。

这样的话,文章符合英文造句习惯,更容易获得高分。

15.(·徐州市西苑中学中考模拟)书面表达
一日之计在于晨。

同学们,沐浴在晨光中,行走在上学路上,当我们有充足的时间安排一天的学习生活时,你会发现每天早起一点点会给我们带来许多好处。

请你以“ It’s good to get up early”为题,写一篇90词左右短文。

要求:
1. 包含所给信息,并适当发挥。

2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写整洁。

3. 词数90词左右。

开头已给,不计入总词数。

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