城区公开课如何写议论文的summaryPPT课件

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用自己的话改写论点、论据
论点： Although big cities provide people with
many conveniences, they certainly have their own disadvantages
论据1： Traffic is the first and often the most
A.1) Driving a private car has a lot of disadvantages.
2) Driving a private car has _m__a_n__y_s__h_o_r_t_c_o__m__in__g_s_ .
B. 1) Watching TV is educational. It is a good way to help us relax by watching TV.
Traffic is the first and often the most serious problem. The majority of people spend a great deal of time on their way to work or coming back from work. During the rush time, all the streets are jammed with packed buses and endless lines of bicycles and cars, and avoidable accidents occur, resulting in broken limbs and traffic deaths.
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
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body and better preparation for the day.
Passage 1
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Although big cities provide people with many conveniences, they certainly have their own disadvantages.
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1. 如何找论点、论据、（结论） ？
1）论点（首段或尾段的首句或尾句， 若 在 文中或段落中, 常有提示词：however, but…）
2）论据 （中间各段落首句，常有提示词： firstly/secondly/besides/what’s more/finally）
3）结论 （尾段首句或尾句，常有提示词： In short/ In a word/ So / Therefore ）
advantages. Firstly, airplane, the miracle
created by man, is the fastest means of
transport. Secondly, traveling by air is
convenient and comfortable. Friendly air
Air pollution comes second. Factories and moving vehicles are constantly giving off smoke and harmful gases. There is no way to get fresh air except to go out of the city on weekends or holidays. If the weather is bad, you’ll fine the whole city overcast with smog. As a result, pollution induces diseases are now a common occurrence.
Task-writing
How to write the summary of an arguementation
如何写议论文的概括段
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Step 1
读写任务概括段的 命题特点与要求
• 即概括给出材料文章的主旨, 要用自己的话 用30个字左右 (26-38) “改写”给出文章的 主要内容，不能直接照抄原文中的句子， 也不能增加与原文无关的信息.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.
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• 1. 题材：议论文 • 2. 文章结构：
论点+ 3个论据 + 结论 (总--分--总)
• 3. 议论文概括段的要素： 三要素：论点、论据和结论
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2. 如何改写 Skill 1: 用同义词，词性变化或不同句式替换 Skill 2: 避免重复, 删掉细节 Skill 3: 运用短而精的连词。 如but, and, so, however, because, therefore, besides, including, such as , not only … but等。
hostesses are affectionate and considerate.
They look after passengers all the way to
their destinations. Moreover, on long
distance flights there are films and music
3.结论 (Conclusion).
a good habit / benefit a lot
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这类文章概括段常用的开头用语
A: In the passage, the author holds the view that + 从句….
B: The passage gives the view that + 从句…
2) Watching TV can not only _e_d__u_c_a_t_e_ us, __b_u__t make us _r_e_l_a_x_e_d__.
C. Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will
benefit us a lot, in__c_l_u_d__in__g_/_saubcehttearsmemory, healthier
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1. 论点 (the topic sentence):
Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance
2. 论据 (supporting sentences)
1) a better memory 2) a healthier body 3) a better preparation for the day
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and
try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every
day, we will certainly benefit .a lot from it.
for people to entertain themselves. But it
has some disadvantages, too. For one thing,
air travel costs a great deal of money.
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The average Chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares. So they prefer to take trains, which save a lot of money. For another, although passengers are assured of their safety, they are still worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk.
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审题
. 文章材料结构:
主题句+两种对立观点和论据(理由) . 应该概括的内容:
主题句, 两种对立观点和各自的理由
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概括段的评分标准
• ◆概括( 满分5分 ) • 1. 完全不理解，照抄原文(0分) • 2. 死板机械地抄，不改变原文顺序(1分) • 3. 改变主语或宾语的抄为主(2分) (灵活地抄) • 4. 稍为改动总体的抄(3分) • 5. 改变句子、用词，重新排列组织(4—5分)
(字数30左右).3However, noise and violence are to be found in every big city and the situation seems to get worse year by year.
In short, life in big cities is rather unnatural and unhealthy.
结论： In short, life in big cities is rather
unnatural and unhealthy.
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Nowadays many people prefer to travel
by air. This is because air travel has some
serious problem.
论据2： Air pollution comes second.
论据3： However, noise and violence are to be
found in every big city and the situation seems to get worse year by year.
Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
In the passage, the author holds the view that getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot, including a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day. (37 words)