2019年高考英语大一轮复习渐进写作课件:Step+Three+第14讲
(浙江专版)2020版高考英语一轮复习 循序写作 第三步 为形体规范立纲 第十四周 读后续写课件 新
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(一) (2019·宁波十校联考)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续 写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 A young man was getting ready to graduate from college. For many months he had admired a beautiful sports car in a dealer's showroom, and knowing his father could well afford it, he told him that was all he wanted.
第三步:精心谋篇 先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字,再构思这两段 要写的段落大意。根据确定好的段落大意,选出每一段可能要用 到的原文中带下划线的关键词。结合这些关键词,确定每一段的 写作要点。这两段加起来要能写出 10 到 15 个左右的句子,以满 足续写词数的要求。 第四步:初写成文 按照第三步谋篇时确定好的写作要点进行初次写作。写注意尽可 能地减少表达上的语法错误。如果遇到语言上的表述困难,可多 参考原阅读材料中的有关语句。
Angrily, he raised his voice to his father and said, “With all your money you give me a Bible?” He then stormed out of the house, leaving the Bible.
Many years passed and the young man was very successful in business. He had a beautiful home and a wonderful family, but realizing his father was very old, he thought perhaps he should go to see him. He had not seen him since that graduation day. Before he could make the arrangements, he received a telegram telling him his father had passed away, and willed all of his possessions to his son. He needed to come home immediately and take care of things.
译林牛津版江苏专用版高考新增分大一轮复习渐进写作全辑StepThree图表类作文讲义英语
解题指导图表类作文一般是在图、表中给出一定的内容和情景,要求考生根据图表信息,准确、客观地反映图表内容,并加以分析,进而得出结论,旨在考查学生从图表中获取信息并转化成文字信息的能力。
需注意以下几点:1.细心研读图表。
认清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分的变化趋势和走向,抓住其主要特点,根据图表所显示的中心信息确定主题、内容层次以及主题句。
2.确定主题段落。
分析重组信息,根据信息的不同性质确定具体段落,列出各段的主题句。
对所给信息的表述要采用不同的表达方法,即使用不同的词汇、短语、句式等。
3.深化阐述主题。
末段通常用于深化主题,对全文进行总结,发表个人观点。
结论一定要客观,不可妄加评判。
实战演练(一)Since 2014,the goal of building a “nation of readers” has been included in the annual Report on the Work of the Government.Just ahead of World Book Day,the Chinese Academy of Press and Publication has issued its findings in a survey of Chinese reading habits.Chinese people read on average about eight books in the year 2015,a slight increase compared with that in the previous years.However,things are quite different among teenagers.Below is a chart which shows the number of books read by Chinese under age 17 in the years of 2014and 2015respectively(分别地).写作内容1.用约30个单词概述上述文字及图表的主要内容;2.结合上述信息,用约120个单词简要分析可能导致青少年图书阅读量下降的原因;3.结合自身实际,就如何提高青少年的图书阅读量提几点建议。
高考英语一轮复习渐进写作全辑StepOne第3讲条理分明的状语从句课件
[即时训练2] 用状语从句完成句子 1.我第一次去那儿的时候,他们和狗、鸭以及别的动物一起住在一个小房子里。
(2018·全国Ⅰ) The first time I went there ,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks, and other animals. 2.我们把手机看得太重要,结果忽视了我们的朋友。 We attach too much importance to our smart phones _________________________.
(2016·全国Ⅱ) (2)John thinks it won’t be long before he is ready for his new job. 约翰认为不久他就能为他的新工作做好准备。 (3)We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school. 我们做得如此好,所以被邀请去和全校学生交流想法和经验。(2016·北京)
[即时训练1] 用状语从句完成句子 1.如果你对中国的民间艺术感兴趣,请给我发邮件。(2017·全国Ⅱ) If you’re interested in the Chinese folk art ,please e-mail me. 2.我对这份工作特别感兴趣,因为我想进一步提高我的英语口语能力。
(2018·北京)
Now that/Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture ,I think Beijing
3.the first time第一次…… I thought the cake tasty the first time I ate it. 我第一次尝那种蛋糕就觉得很可口。 4.before在……之前,还没来得及……就…… My classmate had rushed out before I could say a word.我还没来得及说话,我 的同学就冲了出去。 5.ever since自从…… Ever since my friend entered high school,his mother has been worrying about his studies.自从我的朋友进入高中,他妈妈就一直担心他的学习。
2019高考英语三轮复习写作指导课件 读后续写技巧 (共11张PPT)
Your comment
Jonathan’s imagination is lost
When the class Tip1: Toduring show not to tell. Appearance, Action and Attitude can Where in the what classroom show the reader kind of person he/she is. Your Action/Appearance/Attitude comment ...cracking his gum…obnoxious way class clown, naughty, The gum cracking became louder. troubleThe gum cracking became even louder.maker, Who Jonathan …throw a triumphant glance at no impolite, have no one in particular and cracked his respect for gum with satisfaction his teacher, …slowly raised his hand lose his …he answered slowly interest in study… …he answered casually
Your The line of the change of feeling Tip2:There is always a line of feeling to push a story comment forward, The turning point along which there is always a Conflict, a Climax or a Change. Her weary voice… Miss Anderson Miss Anderson’s heart sank.
Step Three 第14讲 第(1)节 2020话题版步步高大一轮英语复习讲义
(1)apples,pears,oranges,peaches 概括为:fruits (2)...book clubs for women or men,husbands and wives,friends and children and so on. 概括为:...book clubs for different/various groups of readers.
(二)说明文的概要写作一般有三种参考模板: 1. 描 写 某 事 物 的 性 质 功 能 。 即 “ 对 象 + 性 质 功 能 + 利 弊 ” : In the passage the writer introduces...to us,especially its...(性质或功能),from which we know...(对象带来的利弊)。 2.针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。即“问题+解决方法”: The passage lists/indicates...(问题) and brings forth several measures/ solutions to solve the problem, which includes...( 方 法1) , ...(方法 2) and...(方法3)。
说明文的中心句往往出现在文章首尾或段落首尾部分,概括的时候 一定要抓住这部分内容。
议论文主要抓反映作者观点、论据的词语和语句,关键是找出主题 句和结论句。如有一分为二或正反双方的观点,都要概括,不要遗漏。
Step 2 概括要留“粗”留“精”,省“细”省“例”。 概括时要抓住主要信息和全文的精华部分,删掉细节描写和复杂的
2019版高考英语大一轮复习层级化晋级写作层级三文顺形范夺满分词顺意畅的衔接讲义
学案(二) 词顺意畅的衔接衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。
在句与句之间,段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡(连接)性词语是非常必要的。
高中阶段应该掌握的过渡(连接)性词语归纳如下:一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently,recently, generally speaking, according to, with the development of等。
preparing for it.(2017·天津高考书面表达)首先,本学期的期末考试就要到了,因此我正忙于准备考试。
②Recently, the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school, which arouses a heated debate.近来,教育部要求上学期间加强学生劳动教育,这引起了激烈的讨论。
[即时演练] 补全句子1.(2015·湖南高考满分作文)现在,我想与你们分享一下我的经历。
Now,_I’d like to share my experience with you.2.随着互联网的发展,电脑在人们的生活中起着重要作用。
With_the_development_of_the_Internet,_computers play an important role in people’s life.二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语firstly, first of all, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, afterwards, since then, meanwhile, at the same time, soon, next, all of a sudden, at the weekend, in the meantime等。
2019年高考英语大一轮复习渐进写作课件:Step+Three+第13讲
Step Three 分类训练,赢得高分
第13讲 说明文的写作
一、说明事物类
(2017· 山西孝义考前模拟)
假定你是李华,你的朋友李芳向你询问你校新开设的iPad课程(iPad
class)。请你给她写封回信,向她介绍iPad课程很受学生欢迎的原因,要
点如下:
1.资源丰富;
2.促进交流;
different needs.(添加过渡性词语:2. Moreover/What’s more/Besides/In addition),
when connected to the Internet,students can communicate with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently,which will contribute to their stly,we also consider that it is environmentally friendly to open
注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:(报刊的)期issue;《学汉语》Chinese Learning;《中国日报》 China Daily
参考范文 Dear Tom,
As for the two I’m glad to know that you are learning Chinese in Beijing.____________ pieces of newspaper you want to subscribe to,I recommend Chinese Learning _______________________________________________________________ instead of China Daily.My reasons are as follows. ___________________________________________ First,compared with China Daily with twenty-four pages,Chinese _______________________________________________________________ Learning has fewer pages,only eight.It is very suitable for beginners like _______________________________________________________________ you.Besides,it only costs one yuan per issue,much cheaper than China Daily. _______________________________________________________________
2019年高考英语总复习 第三部分 写作专题 Step Three 高考话题集锦 专题一 学校生活讲义 新人教版
话题佳句 1 . Our teachers encourage us to take part in some social practice in our summer holidays, which they think can help us get fully developed.我们的老师们鼓励我们暑假期间参加一些社会 实践活动,他们认为这有助于我们得到全面发展。 2.It is for these reasons that I firmly believe that this rule will promote the learning atmosphere and our teamwork spirit. 正 是由于这些原因我坚信这条规则会有利于营造我们的学习氛围并 培养我们的gift for...有……的天赋 9.make preparations for...为……做准备 10.make up one's mind (to do sth.)下定决心(做某事) 11.make a mistake 犯错误 12.make progress in...在……方面取得进步 13.make use of 利用 14.realize one's dream 实现梦想
10.compulsory adj.强制的,必须做的 11.concept n.概念 12.curious adj.好奇的;奇异的 13.curriculum n.课程 14.diploma n.毕业文凭;学位证书 15.discourage vt.(使)气馁;打消(做……的念头) 16.discuss vt.讨论,议论 discussion n.讨论,辩论 17.eager adj.渴望的;热切的 18.effect n.效果;作用
StepThree 话题集锦
2019年高考英语大一轮复习渐进写作课件:Step One 第4讲 精品
词的选择。把第一 个句子改为含有定语从句的复合句,the scientist作为先行词,指人,在 从句中作主语,所以关系词可以是that或who。 The scientist who/that is very intelligent and modest will pay a visit to our school next week.
2.I often help my deskmate.It has been appreciated by our teachers. →__I _o_ft_e_n_h_e_lp__m_y__d_e_sk_m__a_t_e,__w__h_ic_h_h__as__b_ee_n__a_p_p_r_ec_i_a_te_d_b_y__o_u_r_t_ea_c_h_e_r_s_. 3.I’ve always looked forward to the day.I will be able to be independent then. →__I_’v_e__a_lw__a_y_s_lo_o_k_e_d__f_o_r_w_a_r_d_t_o__th_e__d_a_y_w__h_e_n_/_o_n_w__h_ic_h__I_w_i_l_l _b_e_a_b_l_e_t_o_ _b_e_i_n_d_e_p_e_n_d_e_n_t_.
四、在写作中使用定语从句时的常见错误 1.关系词误用
(误)I won the first prize,that made my parents very happy. (正)I won the first prize,which made my parents very happy.
(误)She was born in a village,where was located at the foot of a hill. (正)She was born in a village,which was located at the foot of a hill.
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4.设法经常表扬你的孩子,这样你就会发现他们乐意向你敞开心扉。 Find ways to praise your children often, and you will find they are willing to open their hearts to you. 5.我们刚开始工作机器就坏了。 We had just begun to work when the machine broke down.
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[即时训练2] 用并列句完成句子 1.两周过去了,我们的交流活动结束了。(2016·天津) Two weeks went by, and our exchange activities ended . 2.它不仅影响我们的日常生活,而且可能也会威胁人们的生命安全。
(2015·江苏) It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives . 3.虽然她是一个普通妇女,但是她确实值得尊敬。 She is an ordinary woman but she is really worth respecting .
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5.therefore...所以…… Silence may be viewed by some cultural groups as extremely uncomfortable; therefore attempts may be made to fill every gap with conversation. 沉默可能被某些文化群体视为极其不舒服,因此,可以尝试用对话来填补每 一个间隙。(2016·全国Ⅰ) 6.while...而/然而/但是…… It is beneficial to some people,while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. 这对一些人是有好处的,却使其他人处于是否投票的两难境地。(2016·江苏)
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3.提出建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇 本题要求写一篇陈述观点的议论文。此类议论文一般采用“三段式” 写法: 第一段:开头——提出一种现象或某个观点作为议论的话题。 第二段:主体——全文的主要部分,对提出的问题进行分析,运用材料 对观点进行论述,列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由。 第三段:结尾——对主体部分进行概括,用一两句话来阐明自己的观点, 构成“总——分——总”结构。 本题要求考生以李华的身份就“中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议”
渐进写作 5层级
Step Three 分类训练,赢得高分
第14讲 议论文的写作
一、陈述观点类
(2017· 山东师大附中模拟)
近来,中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议。假设你是李华,一
名国际旅行社的导游,就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观
点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。
1.列举不文明行为;
2.指出其影响;
increasing number of cars plays an important role.The cars send off a lot _______________________________________________________________
of poisonous gases,adding to the already serious air pollution. _______________________________________________________
hardly recognize each other when they meet in the street.People suffered a _______________________________________________________________
lot because of the smog.On the road people drove slowly because they _______________________________________________________________
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考范文 It’s high time that we should take measures to reduce the smog!
As is shown in the picture,the smog is so heavy that people can _______________________________________________________________
embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.(改为简单句:
1. I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.
They speak loudly in public places , carve characters on tourist
public places. ) I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior ___________ and win respect for themselves and our country.
即时训练 右面的漫画反应了北京的雾霾情况。 请你根据这幅漫画写一篇英语短文,谈一 下你对这个问题的看法。 注意:
这种现象发表自己的观点。可以分为三段:
第一段:提出问题——作为导游,对中国游客在海外的不文明行为感到
羞愧。
第二段:列举这些不文明行为的具体表现,说明其恶劣影响。
第三段:表明自己的观点,提出解决问题的方法——教育游客,出台有
关法律文件进行约束。
修订提升Biblioteka As a tour guide of an international travel agency,I find that it is so
could not see clearly.People also suffered from many illnesses caused by _______________________________________________________________
smog.The smog has been caused by many factors , of which the _______________________________________________________________
punish badly-behaved people in public places.(用含有定语从句的复合句 Besides,laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in 改写: 3. ______________________________________________________
people and our country as well.
Measures should be taken to stop this.First , tourists should be
trained to obey social and public orders.Besides,laws should be made to
)
attractions,throw rubbish,spit everywhere,and even cross the road
ignoring the traffic lights.Such bad behavior overseas has harmed(用含有
damage的短语替换:2. caused/done damage to ) the image of the Chinese