高中必修UnitWriting求助信PPT课件

what to play? Do you suggest we play a little of all of
these types of music? Or should we only play one
kind of music? How did you and your friends decide
I would be grateful if you could/ would...
I really don’t want to bother you, but I really....
Would you offer me some advice
5.表示期待对方回复时可用：
Do you have some good advice on …
The outline of the letter
Dearxx, My name is_____. I'm writing ____. I have much difficulty in _____.
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
2.简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
would like to know what music to play and we cannot
decide. the purpose and the situation
I like pop music but most of my friends like rock
‘n’ roll. Liu Mei likes rap. How are we to decide
What if we use the name Moonlight?
4.展望获得帮助后和表示感谢的表达 ：
I'm sure with your help I can Hale Waihona Puke ake great progress.
I will appreciate any of your help, and...
It will be appreciated if you can... I would be grateful if you could/ would...
friends. However, we have never been in a band
before. Could you please give us some advice
__________________________________________
Ask for help
I'm sure that I can ___ with your help. It will be appreciated if you can help me to __. Predict the
effect and express thanks
Look forward to your reply. yours______, XX
Dear Freddy: polite greeting
Sample letter
My name is Li Hua. I’m beginning a band with my
friends. However, we have never been in a band
before. Could you please give us some advice I
what to play?
the problems
We hope you can give us some advice.
Yours hopefully,
Li Hua
your name
the polite ending
Dear Freddy, My name is Zhou Yufei.I'm beginning /starting a
性词语；请求对方提供一系列的帮助 时，可用in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过 度性词语.当写信需要时，要恰当使用
这些词语，以使行文连贯.
熟悉常用句型 写英文求助信时需要经常用到下面的一些句型：
1）说明写作目的时可用：
My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. 2.简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用：
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____ In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
3.请求对方做某事时可用：
I really don’t want to bother you, but I really.... Would you offer me some advice Do you have some good advice on … Would you like to... I would like you to... I wonder whether you could do me a favor. What do you think …? What if we …?
Step 4 Assessment
Content: Are your ideas clear and to the point
（观点是否清晰 ） Have you used linking s properly?
（有没有用连接词？） Have you written with proper topic sentence
I would appreciate your reply
Would you like to...
offering some suggestions.
I would like you to...
I look forward to hearing from
I wonder whether you could do me a favor. you.
3.请求对方做某事时可用：
4.展望获得帮助后和表示感谢 的表达：
I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
I will appreciate any of your help, and...
It will be appreciated if you can...
If you are faced with these problems, what would you do? Any advice will be a big help.
Sincerely, Zhou Yufei
Dear Freddy:
Sample letter
My name is Li Hua. I’m beginning a band with my
band with my friends. Can you please give us some advice about practising
Should we invite our friends to listen to us and give us suggestions? Should we find a quiet place where we will not bother others with noise? In your opinion, what's the best time to practice our music?
Yours sincerely/hopefully, ————polite ending Li Hua ————————————your name
Writing task
你和你的朋友想组建你们 自己的乐队,但你从来没有在 乐队里演奏过.现在你想写一 封信给Freddy ,向他求助， 询问他的建议，信的开头已 经给出P39，请完成后部分的 内容。 提示：根据Freddy的回信， 完成求助信正文里问题的阐 述,可适当扩展。 字数：除了开头100字左右 。
What do you think …?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
What if we …?
I am looking forward to receiving
What if we use the name Moonlight?
your advice letter and thank you in
I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ... I would like to know how can I … Do you have some good advice on …
2.简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I
Signature
熟悉求助信常用句型
1.说明写作目的时可用： My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
and supporting sentences? Accuracy: Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes?（是否有拼写或语法错误？） Handwriting: Is your handwriting neat and easy to read? （书写是否工整？）
5.表示期待对方回复时可用：
I would appreciate your reply offering some suggestions.
I look forward to hearing from you. I'm looking forward to your reply. I am looking forward to receiving your advice letter and thank you in advance. 这些句型不但使用频率高,而且语气委 婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言特 点.
advance.
Structure of the letter
Dear Freddy, —————————polite greeting
Paragraph 1 —— the purpose and the situation Paragraph 2 ——the problems in your band Paragraph 3 —— ending
A Letter of Asking for Help
求助信的写作指导 1.正确把握时态 写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他
人遇到了一些困难,需要对方的帮助， 因此应以一般现在时为主；在叙述求 助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 时态.
2.贴切使用过度性词语
列举自己所碰到的困难时,可用 first, besides, what's more等过度