B4M5 教师版话题Travel and Transport写作词汇与范文

话题16 旅游与交通(Travel and Transport) 教师版2017.9.30
高考方向及写法指导
本话题主要包括五个方向的考点，其一是交通拥堵问题及其解决措施，或者谈论小汽车（私家车）的利弊，一般为议论文写作。

该话题写作思路为：总述交通拥堵现象—分析该现象产生的缘由—提出有效措施。

其二是介绍一处旅游景点或旅游城市的说明文（此处也可以参照描写某处地点、居住城市或旅游城市介绍）。

其三是以媒体报道、日记或周记的方式考查，集中在记录自己或与自己有关的一次旅行经历（2010年北京卷）。

该话题涉及以下相关信息：
1.旅行前的准备事项，如：路线查询，价格，天气情况查询，机票、车票预订，各种用品的准备；
2.旅行中的所见所闻及感受，交代乘坐的交通工具，出发与到达的时间，与谁一同前往，去过的
景区，沿途发生的令人印象深刻的事情(指路与问路、购物、特色美食等)；
3.对本次旅行的感受、评价（交通状况、旅游发展或游客素养等）或谈论本次经历的收获（开阔
眼界、增长知识、文化领悟、交际能力、合作能力、毅力得到锻炼等）。

其四是关于一次旅行的通知、注意事项说明、出国旅游人员的不文明现象及解决措施。

其五是向外国友人推荐旅行路线的建议信（2017年北京卷）。

（一）交通拥堵问题及其解决措施
交通工具和出行方式（Means of transport and ways to travel）
因果表述
范文1【2015山西太原高三一模】交通拥堵现象及解决措施（Travel and Transport）
假定你校英语社团就“中国大城市目前的交通拥堵问题”邀请学生展开讨论。

请你参考所给要点，写一篇英语发言稿。

1. 简述拥堵问题；
2. 分析主要原因；
3. 提出相应建议。

注意：1.词数120左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.首句已给出，不计入总词数。

参考范文A
Good morning, everyone!
In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. A serious one is heavy traffic. What on earth(究竟) causes this problem?
In the first place, a large population contributes to heavy traffic and growing numbers of private cars add to the pressure on the severe traffic conditions. Wha t’s worse, some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations, so it’s not uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic.
Personally, it’s a good idea to limit the number of cars. And at the same time, it’s better to improve the public transportation system with scientific road design and proper management than to promote private cars.
More importantly, never can traffic jams be eased without self-disciplined citizen.
That’s all. Thank you!
Useful expressions
1. In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems
are arising.
尽管中国各大城市交通运输得到快速发展，然而交通问题日益突出。

2. Wha t’s worse, some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations, so it’s not
uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic.
更糟的是，有些人还不知道遵守交通规则的重要性，因此交通事故屡见不鲜。

3. Personally, it’s a good idea to limit th e number of cars. And at the same time, it’s better to improve the public
transportation system with scientific road design and proper management than to promote private cars.
就个人而言，汽车限号是个不错的主意，同时，改善公共交通系统的科学道路设计和适当的管理比促进私家车（的发展）要更好一些。

4. More importantly, never can traffic jams be eased without self-disciplined citizen.
更重要的是，如果没有公民的自我约束意识，交通拥堵是不会得到改善的。

参考范文B
Good morning, everyone!
In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. A serious one is heavy traffic. What on earth(究竟) causes this problem?
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement. What’s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not obey traffic rules.
Effective measures should be taken immediately. First of all, government should promote public transport, such as building more underground lines, providing more transport services and building more
fly-overs. Besides, it is everybody’s duty to observe traffic rules and regulations to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
That’s all. Thank you!
范文2 交通事故频发的后果、原因及解决措施
在我国，交通事故频频发生。

你班就这个话题展开了讨论。

请你根据下面的提示，写一篇100词左右的短文。

事故后果：财产损失，人员伤亡……
事故原因：违反交通法规，超速驾驶，疲劳驾驶，酒后驾驶……
措施或建议：加强教育，增强安全意识……
参考词汇：增强strengthen;意识awareness;昏昏欲睡的drowsy
参考范文
Nowadays traffic accidents come about frequently in our country, which kill a great number of people every day and injure many more people. Traffic accidents not only cause a great loss in property, but also bring endless pains to many families.
There are various causes of traffic accidents, among which the main on e is the drivers’ breaking the traffic laws and regulations, such as speeding, drowsy driving and drunk driving.
The path to traffic safety is through education, which helps strengthen the public’s awareness of obeying the traffic laws and regulations.
（二）一次旅行经历
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范文1 旅游景区长江三峡简介
随着长江三峡大坝的修建，越来越多的人想了解更多关于长江三峡的信息。

请根据以下提示用英语写一篇100词左右的文章描写长江三峡，内容要点如下：
1.长江三峡文明于全世界，包括西陵峡（Xiling Gorge）、巫峡（Wu Gorge）、瞿塘峡（Qutang Gorge）。

2.沿三峡有许多美丽的名胜，如昭君故里（Zhaojun Village）、屈原祠（Qu Yuan Temple）和白帝城（Baidi Town）。

3.在三峡的入口处建有葛洲坝水电站（The Gezhouba Hydropower Station）
4.改革开放以来，长江三峡发生了巨大变化，呈现出新面貌。

5.现在长江三峡上已经建起一座大型水利枢纽工程（a large multi-purpose water conservancy project）
6.三峡的建设将会更加有益于人民，为中国做出更大贡献。

参考范文
The Three Gorges of the Yangtze River
The Three Gorges are situated in the middle reaches of the Yangtze River, and are famous throughout the world.
The Three Gorges are Xiling Gorge, Wu Gorge and Qutang Gorge. Along with them there are a number of beautiful places of interest, such as Zhaojun Village, Qu Yuan Temple and Baidi Town.
The Gezhouba Dam is at the entrance to the Three Gorges, where a big hydropower station has been built. Since the reform and open policies began to be carried out, great changes have taken place and the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River have taken on a new look. Now a large multi-purpose water conservancy project has been constructed. The Three Gorges will benefit the people more and make greater contributions to China.
Useful expressions
1.The Gezhouba Dam is at the entrance to the Three Gorges, where a big hydropower station has been built.
在三峡的入口处建有葛洲坝水电站。

2.Since the reform and open policies began to be carried out, great changes have taken place and the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River have taken on a new look.
改革开放以来，长江三峡发生了巨大变化，呈现出新面貌。

范文2 【2013年江西省高考英语】关于大青山登山活动的报道(Travel and Transport)
星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。

假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。

内容包括：
1.活动时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)
2.活动的过程；
3.你对于活动的评论。

注意：词数120左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

I审题
体裁：应用文（媒体报道）
主体时态：一般过去时
主要人称：第三和第一人称（同学们，我们）
写作要点：_______________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1 活动背景介绍；
Para.2活动过程描述；
Para.3 评价及感想。

III Useful expressions
1. meet at the school gate 学校门口集合
2.head for destination by bus 乘公交车驶向目的地
3. take photos 照相
4. sb. falls behind 某人落后了，掉队了
5. give sb. a hand 帮助某人
6.on the top of the mountain 在山顶上
7. have fun doing sth. 做某事玩得开心8. sth. benefits sb.=sb. benefits from sth. 从sth.获益
9. get close to nature 接近大自然
10. get well prepared for the coming exams 为接下来的考试作准备
11. build up their bodies and spirits 锻炼意志和身体
12. promote the friendship among students 加深同学们的友谊
13. Senior Three students in Xingguang High School participated in an organized mountain climbing activity on April
10th and had an unforgettable experience on Daqing Mountain.
来自星光中学高三的学生们在4月10日参加了学校组织的登山活动。

大青山登山活动成为他们难忘的经历。

14. Through this activity, students get close to nature and build up their body. Everyone benefits from it.
通过该活动，同学们更近地接近了大自然，同时也锻炼了身体。

每个同学都受益匪浅。

15. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, but also it promoted the friendship among us.
该活动让我们受益匪浅。

我们不仅有机会更加接近大自然，从繁重的学业中放松身心，而且还增进了我们的友谊。

参考范文
On April 10 Xingguang High School organized a mountain climbing activity. Many students participated in it and had an enjoyable experience.
Having gathered at the playground early on April 10th, we got on the school bus. It took us about half an hour to get to the foot of Daqing Mountain, which was our start line of climbing. Then we began to climb. The fascinating scenery which was filled with varieties of green plants and strange rocks was so attractive that many of us students fell behind to enjoy it. However, the teachers and the tour guides encouraged us to hold on to our faith tightly(坚持信念). Eventually, we reached the top and looked down from the peak. It was the white clouds and misty view that left the deepest impression on us. The mountain climbing activity ended up with our singing along the way back to school.
The activity left a deep impression on the students. They made more friends and got close to nature so that they could get well prepared for the coming exams.
范文3【2010年北京卷】帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河旅行的周记(Travel and Transport)
假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。

请根据以下四幅图的顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。

注意：1.周记的开头已为你写好；
2.词数不少于100词。

参考范文
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
First, I searched the Internet for the train schedule and tried to get more information about the weather as well as some hotels in Beidaihe. Then in the afternoon, I went to the train station. There were so many people in a long queue, but I managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents. In the evening, I helped them pack the things they need into the suitcase, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off.
When they waved goodbye to me on the train, I felt happy and wished them a safe journey.
Useful expressions
1. There were so many people in a long queue, but I managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents.
车站排队买票的人非常多，但我还是成功地为祖父母买到两张票。

2. When they waved goodbye to me on the train, I felt happy and wished them a safe journey.
当他们在火车上向我挥手告别时，我感到很高兴，祝愿他们一路平安。

范文4 关于一次旅游的注意事项说明
假定你是李华，最近你班要举办一次旅行，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，介绍此次旅行的注意事项。

1. 穿运动鞋，带上食物和水，相机和常见药。

2.要结伴而行，注意安全和行为举止，勿乱扔垃圾；
3.看护好个人物品。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
Hello, dear classmates！
_________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Wish you a good journey!
参考范文
Hello, dear classmates！
In order to have a pleasant trip, you need to make full preparations. Here are some tips.
Firstly, it might be a good idea to wear sports shoes. Remember to take some food and drinking water with you, but don’t take too many things. A camera and some medicine for common injuries will be necessary. Secondly, to avoid
getting lost, you’d better not go around alone. While enjoying the beauty of nature and breathing the fresh air, you should pay attention to your behavior and safety. Never litter or throw rubbish! Lastly, I’d like to suggest you take good care of your personal belongings.
Wish you a good journey!
范文5 出国游客不文明现象及解决措施（Travel and Transport）
近年来，个别中国游客在海外的不文明行为一度成为媒体的焦点。

假设你是李华，是某国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在我国权威英文报China Daily 上发表自己的观点。

请根据下面的提示完成短文。

1.列举不文明行为（至少3点）；
2.指出其不良影响（至少2点）；
3.提出建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.首句已给出，不计入总词数。

参考范文
Working as a tour guide of an international travel agency, I feel it a shame to witness(见证) some of Chinese travelers’ bad behaviors abroad.
Those very few just speak and laugh loudly in public. They spit freely, carve their names in scenic spots and some even climb up onto famous statues for photo taking, damaging not only the beauty of tourist attractions, but worst of all, the image of us Chinese people as well as that of our country with 5000 years of civilization!
To stop such things happening, my advice is that whoever go abroad must, beforehand, take a class to learn how to observe public rules and respect foreign customs and religions. Meanwhile, some measures such as a heavy fine must be taken to teach those few a lesson--- a warning for all at the same time!
Useful expressions
1.They spit freely, carve their names in scenic spots and some even climb up onto famous statues for photo taking，
damaging not only the beauty of tourist attractions, but worst of all, the image of us Chinese people as well as that of our country with 5000 years of civilization!
他们随地吐痰，在风景名胜区雕刻他们的名字，有些甚至爬上了著名的雕像上拍摄。

这种行为不仅破坏了旅游景点的美丽，而且最坏的是，损坏了我们中国人的形象，以及我们国家5000年的文明！
2. To stop such things happening, my advice is that whoever go abroad must, beforehand, take a class to learn how
to observe public rules and respect foreign customs and religions.
为了阻止这种事情的发生，我的建议是，无论是谁出国，必须提前上培训班，学习如何遵守公共法则和尊重外国风俗和宗教。

范文6【2017年高考北京卷第一节】给英国朋友建议在中国的旅行线路（Travel and Transport）
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。

Jim来信希望你能给些建议。

请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（总分15分）
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jim,
I am glad to learn that you are going to visit China with your classmates and teachers. There are two routes for you to choose from, one is to visit the Changjiang River, the other is to climb Tai mountain.
Of the two routes，I strongly recommend that you should pay a visit to Tai mountain. Because it is not only beautiful, but also rich in history contexts and vivid legends passed on from one generation to another.
I believe that the trip will be both relaxing and rewarding，and it is bound to be a memorable experience for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Useful expressions
1.Of the two routes，I strongly recommend that you should pay a visit to Tai mountain.
这两条线路中，我强烈推荐你去泰山游览。

“pay a visit to …”意思为“探望; 去参观，拜访;省视”，后面接地点名词或某人。

此处的“to”为介词。

例如：Next Sunday we could go and pay a visit to a friend of ours. 下个星期天我们可能去拜访我们的一位朋友。

2.Because it is not only beautiful, but also rich in history contexts and vivid legends passed on from one generation to another.
因为它不仅美丽，而且有丰富的历史背景和生动的传说代代相传。

context n. 语境; 上下文; 背景; 环境
pass on from one generation to another 代代相传
3.I believe that the trip will be both relaxing and rewarding，and it is bound to be a memorable experience for you.
我相信这次旅行既轻松又有益，对你来说一定是一次难忘的经历。

be bound to do sth.势必会….…, 一定会……
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