全国乙卷(详解+解读)-2021年高考英语真题深度解读(1)

2021年高考英语真题深度解读（全国乙卷）
语篇导航（参考下图或老师自己观点呈现）
第二部分阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。

A
The Biggest Stadiums in the World
People have been pouring into stadiums since the days of ancient Greece. In around 8 A.Q., the Romans built the Colosseum, which remains the world's best known stadium are continues to inform contemporary design. Rome’s Colosseum was 157 feet tall and had 80 entrances, seating 50,000 people. However, that was small fry compared with the city’s Circus Maximus, which accommodated around 250,000 people.
These days, safety regulations-not to mention the modern sports fan’s desire for a good view and a comfortable seat-tend to keep stadium capacities（容量）slightly lower. Even soccer fans tend to have a seat each; gone are the days of thousands standing to watch the match.
For the biggest stadiums in the world, we have used data supplied by the World Atlas list so far, which ranks them by their stated permanent capacity, as well as updated information from official stadium websites.
All these stadiums are still functional, still open and still hosting the biggest events in world sport.
•Rungrado 1st of May Stadium, Pyongyang, D.P.R-Korea. Capacity. 150,000. Opened. May 1,1989.
•Michigan Stadium, Ann Arbor, Michigan, U.S. Capacity: 107,601. Opened. October 1, 1927.•Beaver Stadium, State College, Pennsylvania, U.S. Capacity: 106,572. Opened: September 17, I960.
•Ohio Stadium, Columbus, Ohio, U.S. Capacity: 104,944. Opened: October 7, 1922.
•Kyle Field, College Station, Texas, U.S. Capacity: 102,512. Opened: September 24,1927.
21.How many people could the Circus Maximus hold?
A.104,944.
B. 107,601.
C. About 150,000.
D. About 250,000.
22.Of the following stadiums, which is the oldest?
A. Michigan Stadium.
B. Beaver Stadium.
C. Ohio Stadium.
D. Kyle Field.
23.What do the listed stadiums have in common?
A. They host big games.
B. They have become tourist attractions
C. They were built by Americans.
D. They are favored by architects
【答案与解析】
21.D细节查找题根据第一段最后一句信息“……the city’s Circus Maximus, which accommodated around 250,000 people”可知Circus Maximus最多容纳250,000人。

22.C细节查找题根据短文中每个体育馆的建造时间信息可知建于1922年的Ohio Stadium 是最早的，故判断它是最老的。

23.A 细节查找题根据第四段“All these stadiums are still functional, still open and still hosting
the biggest events in world sport.”可知所有的体育馆依然可以运行中，依然开放，依然举行大型体育赛事。

故选C项。

B
When almost everyone has a mobile phone, why are more than half of Australian homes still paying for a landline (座机).
These days you'd be hard pressed to find anyone in Australia over the age of 15 who doesn’t own a mobile phone. In fact plenty of younger kids have one in their pocket. Practically everyone can make and receive calls anywhere, anytime.
Still, 55 percent of Australians have a landline phone at home and only just over a quarter （29%）rely only on their smartphones, according to a survey (调查). Of those Australians who still have a landline, a third concede that it's not really necessary and they're keeping it as a security blanket — 19 percent say they never use it while a further 13 percent keep it in case of emergencies.
I think my home falls into that category.
More than half of Australian homes are still choosing to stick with their home phone. Age is naturally a factor （因素）-only 58 percent of Generation Ys still use landlines now and then, compared to 84 percent of Baby Boomers who've perhaps had the same home number for 50 years. Age isn't the only factor; I'd say it's also to do with the makeup of your household.
Generation Xers with young families, like my wife and I, can still find it convenient to have a home phone rather than providing a mobile phone for every family member. That said, to be honest the only people who ever ring our home phone are our Baby Boomers parents, to the point where we play a game and guess who is calling before we pick up the phone （using Caller ID would take the fun out of it）.
How attached are you to your landline? How long until they go the way of gas street lamps and morning milk deliveries?
24. What does paragraph 2 mainly tell us about mobile phones?
A. Their target users.
B. Their wide popularity.
C. Their major functions.
D. Their complex design.
25. What does the underlined word "concede" in paragraph 3 mean?
A. Admit.
B. Argue.
C. Remember.
D. Remark.
26. What can we say about Baby Boomers?
A. They like smartphone games.
B. They enjoy guessing callers’ identity.
C. They keep using landline phones.
D. They are attached to their family.
27. What can be inferred about the landline from the last paragraph?
A. It remains a family necessity.
B. It will fall out of use some day.
C. It may increase daily expenses.
D. It is as important as the gas light.
【答案与解析】
24.B 推理判断题综合本段信息，可知在澳大利亚15岁以上年轻人人人都有手机，甚至很多年轻一点的也都有自己的收集，所以随时随地可以联系自己或被别人找到。

故判断手机使用范围很广。

A选项侧重目标用户，B选项为手机的受欢迎程度，C项介绍手机功能，D项侧重手机复杂设计，故选B。

25.A 猜测词义题划线词所在段落介绍关于使用landline的调查，该段第一句和第二句都在介绍调查的结果，A选项“承认”，B选项“辩论，主张”，C项“记住”，D项“评论”，因为划线词的主语是 a third（of those Australians who still have a landline），故判断词义为“告知某个关于自己的情况”，故选A。

26. C 推理判断题根据第四段“Baby Boomers who've perhaps had the same home number for 50 years. ”可知Baby Boomers50年没有换电话号码，故判断他们一直使用座机。

27. B 推理判断题最后一段中提到gas street lamps and morning milk deliveries这两个随着时代发展逐渐消失的现象，暗示作者认为总有一天座机也会步煤气灯和送牛奶后尘（go the way of gas street lamps and morning milk deliveries）而最终消失。

C
You’ve heard that plastic is polluting the oceans—between 4.8 and 12.7 million tonnes enter ocean ecosystems every year. But does one plastic straw or cup really make a difference? Artist Benjamin V on Wong wants you to know that it does. He builds massive sculptures out of plastic garbage, forcing viewers to re-examine their relationship to single-use plastic products.
At the beginning of the year, the artist built a piece called“Strawpocalypse,” a pair of
10-foot-tall plastic waves, frozen mid-crash. Made of 168,000 plastic straws collected from several volunteer beach cleanups, the sculpture made its first appearance at the Estella Place shopping center in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam.
Just 9% of global plastic waste is recycled. Plastic straws are by no means the biggest source (来源)of plastic pollution, but they’ve recently come under fire because most people don’t need them to drink with and, because of their small size and weight, they cannot be recycled. Every straw that' s part of V on Wong's artwork likely came from a drink that someone used for only a few minutes. Once the drink is gone, the straw will take centuries to disappear.
In a piece from 2018, V on Wong wanted to illustrate (说明) a specific statistic: Every 60 seconds, a truckload's worth of plastic enters the ocean. For this work, titled “Truckload of Plastic,” V on Wong and a group of volunteers collected more than 10,000 pieces of plastic, which were then tied together to look like they’d been dumped(倾倒)from a truck all at once.
V on Wong hopes that his work will also help pressure big companies to reduce their plastic footprint.
28. What are V on Wong’s artworks intended for?
A. Beautifying the city he lives in.
B. Introducing eco-friendly products.
C. Drawing public attention to plastic waste.
D. Reducing garbage on the beach.
29. Why does the author discuss plastic straws in paragraph 3?
A. To show the difficulty of their recycling.
B. To explain why they are useful.
C. To voice his views on modern art.
D. To find a substitute for them.
30. What effect would "Truckload of Plastic" have on viewers?
A. Calming.
B. Disturbing
C Refreshing
D. Challenging.
31. Which of the following can be the best title for the text?
A. Artists' Opinions on Plastic Safety
B. Media Interest in Contemporary Art
C. Responsibility Demanded of Big Companies
D. Ocean Plastics Transformed into Sculptures
【答案与解析】
28.C 推理判断题利用第一段信息“You’ve heard that plastic is polluting the oceans…But does one plastic straw or cup really make a difference?”作者将一次性吸管和塑料污染联系在一起，然后提到“Artist Benjamin V on Wong wants you to know that it does.”所以判断Benjamin V on Wong 的作品是使人们意识到使用吸管也会污染环境。

故选C。

29.A 细节查找题文中信息“…but they’ve recently come under fire because most people don’t need them to drink with and, because of their small size and weight, they cannot be recycled”提示塑料吸管最近遭到猛烈批评的原因是多数人实际上并不使用吸管，而且这些小而轻的吸管不能被回收，该段最后一句“Once the drink is gone, the straw will take centuries to disappear”进
一步解释了吸管不仅完全是在浪费资源和破坏环境而且难以回收。

故选A项。

30. B 推理判断题根据第四段“V on Wong wanted to illustrate (说明) a specific statistic: Every 60 seconds, a truckload's worth of plastic enters the ocean.”可知艺术家创作意图是提醒人们每60秒钟就有一卡车吸管被倾倒入大海。

A选项“令人平静的”，B选项“令人不安，令人震惊的”，C项“令人耳目一新的”，D项“有挑战性的”，故选B。

31. D 主旨大意题综合本文信息可知，作者是在介绍一位艺术家用他的作品来唤起人们对一次性吸管污染问题的重视。

故选D。

D
During an interview for one of my books, my interviewer said something I still think about often. Annoyed by the level of distraction(干扰)in his open office, he said, “That’s why I have a membership at the coworking space across the street —so I can focus. "His comment struck me as strange. After all, coworking spaces also typically use an open office layout (布局). But I recently came across a study that shows why his approach works
The researchers examined various levels of noise on participants as they completed tests of creative thinking. They were randomly divided into four groups and exposed to various noise levels in the background, from total silence to 50 decibels(分贝),70 decibels, and 85 decibels. The differences between most of the groups were statistically insignificant; however,the participants in the 70 decibels group—those exposed to a level of noise similar to background chatter in a coffee shop-significantly outperformed the other groups. Since the effects were small, this may suggest that our creative thinking does not differ that much in response to total silence and 85 decibels of background noise.
But since the results at 70 decibels were significant, the study also suggests that the right level of background noise—not too loud and not total silence—may actually improve one’s creative thinking ability. The right level of background noise may interrupt our normal patterns of thinking just enough to allow our imaginations to wander, without making it impossible to focus. This kind of "distracted focus" appears to be the best state for working on creative tasks.
So why do so many of us hate our open offices? The problem may be that, in our offices, we
can't stop ourselves from getting drawn into others’ conversations while we’re trying to focus. Indeed, the researchers found that face-to-face interactions and conversations affect the creative process, and yet a coworking space or a coffee shop provides a certain level of noise while also providing freedom from interruptions.
32. Why does the interviewer prefer a coworking space?
A. It helps him concentrate.
B. It blocks out background noise.
C. It has a pleasant atmosphere.
D. It encourages face-to-face interactions.
33. Which level of background noise may promote creative thinking ability?
A. Total silence.
B. 50 decibels.
C. 70 decibels.
D. 85 decibels.
34. What makes an open office unwelcome to many people?
A. Personal privacy unprotected.
B. Limited working space.
C. Restrictions on group discussion.
D. Constant interruptions.
35.What can we infer about the author from the text?
A. He's a news reporter.
B. He’s on office manager.
C. He's a professional designer.
D. He's a published writer.
【答案与解析】
32.A 细节查找题利用第一段信息“he said, “That’s why I have a membership at the coworking space across the street —so I can focus.”可知受访者喜欢从working place的原因是可以让他集中注意力。

文中focus和选项中concentrate是同义词。

故选A。

33.C 细节查找题文中信息“…the participants in the 70 decibels group—those exposed to a level of noise similar to background chatter in a coffee shop-significantly outperformed the other groups.”提示70分贝的背景音outperform（超过；胜过）其它组别。

故选C项。

34. D 细节查找题根据最后一段“ …in our offices, we can't stop ourselves from getting drawn into others’ conversations while we’re trying to focus”可知在办公室里，我们的注意力很容易被人吸引。

A选项“个人意思不受保护”，B选项“办公空间有限”，C项“小组讨论受限”，D项“不断的干扰”，故选D。

35. D 推理判断题根据第一段信息“During an interview for one of my books, my interviewer said……”可知作者是一名作家。

故选D。

第二节（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。

选项中有两项为多余选项According to Jessica Hagy, author of How to Be Interesting, it's not difficult to make yourself interesting at a dinner party.
___36___, if you're out of your comfort zone or if you're wandering into somebody's house for the first time. So the main thing is just to show up and be adventurous, trying different foods and talking to strangers.
People love to talk about themselves. If you can start the conversation with a question other than “What do you do for a living?", you'll be able to get a lot more interesting conversation out of whomever it is you're talking to. ____37 ___. it can bring in "I have this old, broken-down vehicle" or "I rode the bus with these crazy people who were laughing at silly jokes in the back." It just opens
up conversation.
____38___? If you can't take their wine away, you should certainly try to take away their soapbox （讲台）.If you're the host, you can ask them to help you in the kitchen with something and just remove them from the situation.___39_____
And what about that other dinner-party killer: awkward silence? If you're faced with an awkward silence at a dinner party, the only thing that always gets everyone talking again is to give the host a compliment (赞扬).__40___. Just quickly tun around and say, "This cake is extremely delicious and you have to tell me all about it.”
So being interesting at a dinner party isn’t that hard.
A.How do you know the host
B.The first step is to go exploring
C.If you ask the question "How did you get here?',
D.Be prepared to have awkward conversations with strangers
E.Or turn the conversation into a topic where they have little to say
F.What about that person who has had too much to drink or won't stop talking
G.He or she is the person who is feeling the weight of that awkwardness the most
【
答
案
与解析】
36.B本题位于段首，处于中心句的位置，而且是作者的第一个建议，根据第二句和第三句可知作者建议突破舒适区（comfort zone)，勇敢探索（be adventurous)，故判断B项正确
37.C本题位于段中，利用空白处后面的代词it的指代关系和“I have this old, broken-down vehicle” or “I rode the bus with these crazy people who were laughing at silly jokes in the back.”可知本小题涉及的话题和“如何到达”有关
38.F 本题位于段首，且以问号结束。

备选项有A、F。

但是空白处之后的信息提到你可以转移话题，如果你是主人，就让他们去厨房帮忙。

故排除A。

F选项讲的是如何应对喝多了或者话太多的人，符合语境。

39.E 参考38小题，可知本小题是在承接上文，建议转移话题来阻止话多的人。

40.G 本题为段中，空白处前后信息提示可以引导别人赞扬一下主人（host)，比如赞美蛋糕，可以利用G选项中的代词he or she 和句意“她或他是最清楚无话可聊（awkward silence）的难堪了。

第三部分语言知识运用（共两节，满分45分）
第一节完形填空（共20小题；每小题1. 5分，满分30分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的
最佳选项。

Simply saying thank you doesn't seem enough in certain situations. I was considering this while working as a ___41__ Just a few weeks ago. And it came to me then how much easier it would be if we had a range of words that express different ____42___ of gratitude (感谢).
My thoughts were soon ___43___. We had a woman patient who was ___44____ from a knee replacement operation. One afternoon, while __45___to get into bed she collapsed (倒下) from what was ____46_____discovered to be a heart attack. The collapse was disastrous, ___47____ the emergency medical team and good teamwork. But she recovered, though ___48___ ,and was ready for discharge (出院)after four weeks.
She was __49____ for everything that the medical and nursing team had done for her. On her day of discharge, we shared in her ___50____ at her recovery. As she was ____51___ she was eager to say___52____ to each of us in the nursing team. When she ___53______ one nurse, she tried to press a five-pound note into her hand. My colleague ____54___ to accept it, saying that we were all just ___55___ our job. The patient looked puzzled, and then____56____: "Oh this isn't for the ___57___ I had. I take that as a ____58____. No, this is for setting my hair yesterday.'' And there you have it. To many people, ___59____lives is part of the job but styling hair is an ___60____ and should be rewarded.
41. A. cleaner B. chemist C. nurse D. doctor
42. A. grades B. meanings C. needs D. expectations
43. A. brushed aside B. put to the test
C. brought under discussion
D.taken into account
44. A. departing B. escaping C. retiring D. recovering
45. A. attempting B. choosing C. pausing D. promising
46. A. eventually B. fortunately C. casually D. secretly
47. A. assessing B. requiring C. forming D. proving
48. A. slightly B. accidentally C. slowly D. happily
49. A. grateful B. thoughtful C. sorrowful D. fearful
50. A. surprise B. delight C. curiosity D.disappointment
51.A. operating B. thinking C. hesitating D. leaving
52.A. sorry B. hello C. goodbye D.yes
53.A. reached B. consulted C. introduced D. persuaded
54.A. wished B. pretended C. failed D. refused
55.A. enjoying B. doing C. securing D. starting
56.A. repeated B. recited C. replied D. reported
57.A. courage B. patience C. duty D. care
58.A. goal B. given C. push D. greeting
59. A. risking B.changing C. saving D. building
60.A. honour B. ability C. opening D. extra
【答案】41-45 CABDA 46-50 ABCAB 51-55 DCADB 56-60 CDBCD
【解析】
41.52小题后面信息“each of us in the nursing team”提示作者是护理团队中的一员，故判断应该是一名护士。

故选C。

42.综合全文信息，尤其是最后一段信息可知作者认为感谢有不同的“等级”，甚至是梳理头发这样的小事也值得感谢。

B选项“意义”，C项“需要”，D项“期待”，A选项“等级，评分”符合语境。

故选A。

43.因为下文中作者要讲一个故事证明自己的观点，故判断作者的观点很快得到验证。

A选项“推到一边”B选项“进行验证”，C项“引起讨论”，D项“考虑在内”，故选B。

44.根据语境可知，在医院里患者应该是很快恢复，所以才会感谢医护人员。

A选项“离开”B 选项“逃跑”，C项“退休”，D项“恢复”，本体干扰项为A，离开医院不一定是治好了，也可以是其他的原因。

故排除。

故选D。

45.根据语境可知，当时患者正在上床的时候因为心脏病摔倒，A选项“试图”B选项“选择”，C 项“停止”，D项“许诺”，故选A。

46.本小题是在介绍患者摔倒的原因，应该最后查出因为心脏病，A选项“最终”B选项“幸运的”，C项“随意的”，D项“秘密的”，本题很容易排除干扰。

故选A。

47.根据空白处前文信息“”可知当时情况很危及，需要紧急处理，A选项“评估”B选项“要求，需要”，C项“形成”，D项“证明”，故选B。

48.根据语境可知患者最终可以出院，关键词“though”提示一种转折关系，虽然恢复得慢，但是可以出院了。

故选C。

49.根据常理可知，病人恢复，自然对医护人员充满感激。

A选项“感激的”B选项“体贴的”，C
项“悲伤的”，D项“害怕的”，本题比较容易。

50.根据语境可知，病人出院心情应该是不错，所以医护人员分享的的是她的“高兴”A选项“吃惊”B选项“高兴”，C项“好奇”，D项“失望”，本题比较容易。

51.根据常理和语境可知，病人恢复，要离开医院，要和照顾她的护士道别。

本题比较容易。

52.参照51小题。

53.根据语境推断，患者在和每一个人道别，A选项“到达”B选项“咨询”，C项“介绍”，D项“劝说”，本题中A选项表示走到一个护士面前，符合语境。

54. 54小题前面信息提示患者专门把钱放到那个护士手中，护士当然不能接受，故选refuse。

故选D。

55.参考54小题，护士在拒绝的同时应该是解释“照顾病人”是自己的工作，是应该做的事情。

故选B。

56.根据文中信息“The patient looked puzzled”可知当护士拒绝收钱的时候，患者看起来很迷惑，所以才在后来解释，A选项“重复”B选项“背诵”，C项“回复”，D项“报告”，reply表示回应护士，符合语境。

故选C。

57. 根据患者的话“Oh this isn't for the ___57___ I had. I take that as a ____58____. No, this is for setting my hair yesterday.”可知，患者感谢的不是在医院里应得的照顾，而是护士给她梳头这样一件体贴的行为。

A选项“勇气”B选项“耐心”，C项“责任”，D项“照顾”。

本题干扰项为C 选项，但是空白处后面的定语从句主语为I，提示这里是说患者收到的东西不是责任是照顾，故选D。

58.参考58小题，患者认为在医院收到的care是一种应该得到的东西。

Given表示“已经安排好的; 规定的; 指定的”符合语境。

59. 综合全文，作者认为“挽救生命”是医护人员应尽职责，但是梳头是额外的爱心，应该得到回报。

A选项“冒险”B选项“改变”，C项“挽救”，D项“建立”。

60.参考59小题。

第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Ecotourism is commonly regarded as low impact (影响)travel to undisturbed places. It is different from traditional tourism because it allows the traveler to become 61 (educate) about the areas -both in terms of geographical conditions and cultural characteristics, and often provides
money for conservation and benefits the 62 (develop) of the local areas.
Ecotourism has 63 (it) origin with the environmental movement of the 1970s. It was not widely accepted as a travel concept 64 the late 1980s. During that time, increasing environmental awareness made it desirable.
Due to 65 growing popularity of environmentally-related and adventure travel, various types 66 trips are now being classified as ecotourism. Actually, a true eco-friendly trip must meet the following principles:
●Minimize the impact of 67 (visit) the place.
●Build respect for and awareness of the environment and cultural practices.
●Provide 68 (finance) aid and other benefits for local peoples.
●Make sure that the tourism provides positive experiences for both the visitors and the hosts.
Komodo National Park, officially recognized in 1980, is popular for ecotourism because of its unique biodiversity. 69 (activity) there range from whale watching to hiking (远足) and accommodations aim 70 (have) a low impact on the natural environment.
【答案】cated 62.development 63.its 64. until 65.the
66. of 67. visiting 68. financial 69.activities 70.to help.
【解析】
61.被考查动词位于系动词become之后，故判断做表语且该动词的逻辑主语为traveler，句意为它（生态旅游）使旅行者更有知识。

62.为被考查动词develop位于冠词的之后，故考点为动词转化成名词。

63.被考查代词位于名词origin之前，故物主代词形式。

64.空白处位于表示时间的名词短语the late nineteen 1980s之前，根据句意可知。

Ecoourism这个概念直到上世纪80年代晚期才被接受，本题涉及not …until结构。

65.空白处位于名词短语growing popularity of environmentally-related and adventure travel之前，核心词为growing popularity，故考点为冠词，且popularity之后有明显限定内容，故填定冠词the。

66.本题考查固定短语variety types of,表示各种各样的。

67.被考查词位于介词of 之后，故判断考点为动名词作宾语。

68.被考查词位于名词aid之前，故判断考点为形容词。

69.被考查项为名词，位于主语的位置，且谓语动词range为复数形式，故考点为名词变复数。

70.备考查词位于动词aim之后。

故使用不定式作宾语。

第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What's most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
【答案与解析】
第一处：parent改成parents, 如无特殊暗示，parent应为复数，指父母两个人。

第二处：tidying改成tidy，该考点位于and连接的并列结构中，water the flowers in the yard 和tidy up my own bedroom 在句中做并列谓语。

第三处：根据句意应该是“无论什么时候需要的话”，被考查部分实际上涉及状语从句的省略，完整形式“whenever it is necessary”
第四处：本小题考查固定搭配“benefit …from/ by”表示“从……中获益或通过……获益”，故在a lot 之后加上from/ by。

第五处：本题考查动词时态，根据全文信息可知应为一般现在时，故改was 为is.
第六处：根据句意可知父母可以有时间做自己喜欢的事情，like 为动词，故删除are.
第七处：本小题考查固定搭配，what’s more.
第八处：mentally 为副词，不可以修饰名词relaxation，故改为mental。

第九处：本文介绍的是作者自己关于家务活的观点，而不是很多人的观点。

故改our为my.
第十处：本小题考查习惯表达，Hope that …是一种很地道的表达，
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。

请你以Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.分析优势与不足:
2.提出学习建议。

注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目和首句已为你写好。

【参考范文】
Be smart online learners
With the popularity of the Internet, learning online is being accepted by more and more people. The reasons are as follows. First of all, it is convenient since we can learn whatever we need whenever necessary and wherever we are, as long as we have an access to the Internet. Secondly, compared with learning at school, learning online cost less, which is good news for those with financial stress. Besides, if you are a shy person, online study can make you relaxed.However, we must be aware of the possibility that some teenagers may get addicted in computer games without effective supervision.
Therefore, I think it significant t for parents to supervise teenagers before helping them develop a good habit of using the web.。