1 How to write a letter of application 课件

Is the handwriting beautiful?
Revising (group work)
1. Exchange your drafts and assess your partner’s writing by using the assessment sheet.
2. If there are some mistakes, underline them and try to rewrite them.
Reasons for interest Supporting sentence
Analyze and Drafting
paragraph
Paragraph 3
Topic
Supporting Linking word
sentence sentences
1
2;3
since
Useful expressions :personal qualities
I am confident/sure I can be qualified for the job.
Analyzing
Ending
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Express hope
What makes a good paragraph?
A good paragraph is one that consists of not only _to_p_i_c_s_e_n_te_n_c_e_and _s_u_p_p_o_r_ti_n_g_s_e_n_te_n_ces but also proper__li_n_k_in_g__w_o_r_d.s
A letter of application
Edit （编辑） para.2 , para.3 and para.4 as a whole
Attention！
Check if the topic sentence, supporting sentences and linking words are included！
Assessment
Dimensions Information Accuracy
Connection
Flexibility Handwriting
Contents Is all the required information included?
Yes No
Are there spelling mistakes or grammar errors? Is every sentence exactly a sentence? Do you use proper linking words to connect the sentences? Are the sentences connected logically Do you use various sentences structures? Do you paraphrase the words instead of using one word repeatedly?
How to write a letter of application
凤阳中学 吴雪
Teaching aims
• Understand the general structure of a letter of application. • Analyze the strategies used in writing supporting sentences and summarize
Using attributive clause to add more information
Analyzing and Drafting
Para.2
Topic sentence
I am 17 years old and I am in my second year at No.5 SIewnioourldHilgikheStochwololr.kI fwooruylodulibkeectaouwseo/raks fIoarmyovuerbyecinatuesreested Iinamjouvernryaliinsmter.ested in journalism. I would also like to learn more about things that are going on in the city as I feel that it is important to know about the city we live in.
Homework
Continue to perfect your own letter!
Thank you
hard-working; committed; devoted; warm-hearted; enthusiastic;
outgoing; easy-going;
participate in volunteer work get on well with
Using examples/ showing cause
Writer’s address The date
Greeting
Beginning Body
Ending
Signature
Pre-writing
Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 Para.4 Para.5
a) Signing off
b) Personal qualities c) Q_d_eut_aa_lii_lfs_icaabtioountsthe d) aRpepalsiocannstfor interest
e) Reason for writing
Analyzing
Beginning
The reason for writing
I am writing to apply for a position at Student Post, which I saw advertised in the local school newspaper last week.
sentence patterns used to apply for a job. . • Write a letter of application coherently. • Assess and revise the partner’s letter.
Layout
Name and address of the receiver
be good/ skilled at; do well in; be experienced in; have a good command of;
win second prize at competition I think I would be a good journalist.
Using examples/ previous experience
Analyze and Drafting
paragraph
Paragraph 4
Topic
Supporting Linking Байду номын сангаасords
sentence sentences
1
2;3;4
due to ; in addition
Useful expressions : strengths&confidence