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......, no one who has difficulty in cooperating with his or her colleagues becomes an executive or a boss.
The cooperation with colleagues, partners, even competitors are extremely important for us.
⬇ 变被动语态
It is contended that......
⬇ 变插入语
The globalization, it is contended, is an ......
C.少错误
常见错误七宗罪
一. We can deduce from illustration above that cartoonist is trying to attract attention to issue of cooperation.
四. 菊花残句或肿菊句
无谓语或者谓语太多
In the daytime, many students doing experiment in the library, so they have no time come to the library.
一个简单句成分中有且只有一个动词的一般 形式（do/did/will do/would do）做谓语。 则要有；
2000： 商业捕鱼发 展史
2019 爱心是一 盏灯
2019： 美国女孩穿 着中国民族 服装
2019： 温室花朵 经不起风 雨
2019：终点 也是新起点
2019： 养老足 球赛
2019： 把崇拜 写在脸上
2019： 对手眼中的 自己
2019年： 合作
2009年： 网络的 远与近
2019：文化的火锅
： 之余
2019：心 态的好与 坏
A.分类
☞数量
单图题
01、02、04、08、09、10、11
图题 00、03、06
图双人题
05、07、12
☞主体
人
02、04、05、06、07、08、09、 11、12
非人 00、10、
非人却拟人
01、03
话题 个人心理 01、03、04、07、08、12
Scoring Criteria P.200
A.不露点
小作文按提纲顺序写 大作文图画描述很重要！
P.239
B. Varied Vocabulary& Syntactic Variety
词汇多变化、多同义替换 ☞图画
cartoon photo portrayal
illustration
caricature
A名词+介词+B名词， 要以A来定谓语形式
of, with, from, to,......
三. I have to quit my job because my parents told me that they will buy me an apartment if I will work in my hometown.
E. 格式正确、语域得体
格式：缩进式 段首空格、段间不空行
语域： 偏正式 不缩写、简写、过于口语、俚语
In the cartoon, two guys abso-fucking-lutely wanna work together to make it better.
P. 246 范文
描述图表（7分）
转折： However, Yet,Conversely, On the contrary, In fact,
六. 词性纠结
We could not built a society of harmonious without cooperate with each other.
☞ 情态动词后都用动词原形 ☞介词后面要接名词或者动名词
描绘、展示
reflect
portray
display
reveal
depict
illustrate
demonstrate
句型多变基础：
☞短语的变化
“重要”的表达
词：vital critical essential rucial indispensable
：
attach importance to
attach great/adequate importance to
According to a survey conducted among a group of young people who were in the same class years ago, no one who have difficulty in cooperating with their colleagues become executive or boss.
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Objective
8+16
der
阅读之后做
umber
120\220
数行数！
Error Correctio一n 笔划掉，旁边勘正
、Calligraphy
矮胖，饱满，不要太连
2019 Part B
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following
drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
三. 时态混乱
态 一般 进行 完成完成进行
时
现在 过去 将来
用中文拼出时态! would have been doing
过去将来
a. 什么叫谓语
动词+它应有的形态变化 语态+时态
If she doesn’t go with me, I will be devastated.
b. 主从句的时态在时间上要保 持一致，状态可异
will do be doing have/has done have/has been doing
The behaviors of mankind have been causing severe harm and pollution to the nature, which is overburdened and will collapse（崩溃） if we do not rectify（纠 正）our faults and misdeeds immediately and thoroughly （彻底的）.
超过一个，则第二+个要变成非谓语形式 do/doing/done）
Most of books out of date, so would you please buying more new books add to the collection?
Most of books are out of date, so would you please buy more new books to add to the collection?
社会现象
00、02、05、06、09、10、 11
不会考时政特别明显的题目 跟体育有关的图画常出现
模版、规律强，不需预测
单图题首段思路：(3-4句） 1、引入句+图中主要信息 2、次要信息和细节描写
3、提示信息的翻译（如果有）
主要信息：
人或主体+动作
次要信息 表情、环境、主体周边物体
细节 跟主体有关的具体的事、物、数量、中文提 示
五. Modern people, especially the younger generation, lay more stress on earning money, the neglect of the elders become common to see.
五. 无逻辑！
中文的逻辑是用脑袋意淫出来的！
lay emphasis on
play a role in
play a key/dominant role in
The portrayal demonstrates that the cooperation plays a progressively dominant role in the contemporary society.
He said that he had failed last year but would make every effort to win this time.
c. 最常用的时态
一般现在
am/is/are/do/does
一般过去
was/were/did
一般将来 现在进行 现在完成 现在完成进行
英文的逻辑是通过连词和副词来体现的！
a. 逗号前后都是完整的句子的话，其中一 句（常是后句）必须要有连词！
☞并并列列连词and 转折 but while 选择 or
☞ 从属连词，连接主从句表示两者之间的关系
状语；定语；同位语。。。。。。
b. 打句号的两句之间，常常要有副词来表示逻辑
The competition has become increasingly fierce. The complicated and challenging work can hardly finished by each individual. People in growing number are seeking cooperation from others, such as their colleagues, partners, even competitors.
一.名词裸奔
特指、专有、有修饰的名词前要有冠词 a\the或者所有格our/its/my/their.......
Wctoaertocaonnidsetitdsihssueutcreeoyuoifnrrfgomto
thilelustration above attract attention
that
We are unlikely to build a society of harmony without cooperating with each other.
Hale Waihona Puke 七. 小错误们. 比较级不要只会加more 2. 分词不要只会接-ed
性手术 不清he/she/his/her
逻辑 要有起承转合 连词和副词的运用
A.引入句的写法
☞直白型
1. As is graphically/explicitly/satirically
2. depicted/revealed/demonstrated
3. in the portrayal/illustration/caricature,
主体+动作
As is explicitly depicted in the portrayal, two handicapped men, each of whom has only one leg, are supporting each other and walking normally and rapidly.
cooperation.
the
二. The caption（提示语）indicate, “ You have only one leg and so do I. By sticking together, however, can we go anywhere we want.
谓不一致
a.总忘加第三人称单数 b.从句不注意先行词的单复数 c. 介词结构的名词搞不清谁是主语
2. 攻受互换
认为”的表达： 单词： maintain deem contend
短语：point out be convinced that
make the point that
主被动互换
Many people contend that the globalization is an inevitable tendency, which is beneficial for the mutual prosperity.（宾语从句）
...... Hence,......In fact......
最常出现的逻辑关系
并列： and Meanwhile, On the one hand, on the other hand,
递进： Moreover, Further, Besides,
因果： Hence, Therefore, Consequently, Accordingly, Thus,
The cooperation with colleagues, partners, even competitors are extremely important for us.
⬇ 变被动语态
It is contended that......
⬇ 变插入语
The globalization, it is contended, is an ......
C.少错误
常见错误七宗罪
一. We can deduce from illustration above that cartoonist is trying to attract attention to issue of cooperation.
四. 菊花残句或肿菊句
无谓语或者谓语太多
In the daytime, many students doing experiment in the library, so they have no time come to the library.
一个简单句成分中有且只有一个动词的一般 形式（do/did/will do/would do）做谓语。 则要有；
2000： 商业捕鱼发 展史
2019 爱心是一 盏灯
2019： 美国女孩穿 着中国民族 服装
2019： 温室花朵 经不起风 雨
2019：终点 也是新起点
2019： 养老足 球赛
2019： 把崇拜 写在脸上
2019： 对手眼中的 自己
2019年： 合作
2009年： 网络的 远与近
2019：文化的火锅
： 之余
2019：心 态的好与 坏
A.分类
☞数量
单图题
01、02、04、08、09、10、11
图题 00、03、06
图双人题
05、07、12
☞主体
人
02、04、05、06、07、08、09、 11、12
非人 00、10、
非人却拟人
01、03
话题 个人心理 01、03、04、07、08、12
Scoring Criteria P.200
A.不露点
小作文按提纲顺序写 大作文图画描述很重要！
P.239
B. Varied Vocabulary& Syntactic Variety
词汇多变化、多同义替换 ☞图画
cartoon photo portrayal
illustration
caricature
A名词+介词+B名词， 要以A来定谓语形式
of, with, from, to,......
三. I have to quit my job because my parents told me that they will buy me an apartment if I will work in my hometown.
E. 格式正确、语域得体
格式：缩进式 段首空格、段间不空行
语域： 偏正式 不缩写、简写、过于口语、俚语
In the cartoon, two guys abso-fucking-lutely wanna work together to make it better.
P. 246 范文
描述图表（7分）
转折： However, Yet,Conversely, On the contrary, In fact,
六. 词性纠结
We could not built a society of harmonious without cooperate with each other.
☞ 情态动词后都用动词原形 ☞介词后面要接名词或者动名词
描绘、展示
reflect
portray
display
reveal
depict
illustrate
demonstrate
句型多变基础：
☞短语的变化
“重要”的表达
词：vital critical essential rucial indispensable
：
attach importance to
attach great/adequate importance to
According to a survey conducted among a group of young people who were in the same class years ago, no one who have difficulty in cooperating with their colleagues become executive or boss.
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Objective
8+16
der
阅读之后做
umber
120\220
数行数！
Error Correctio一n 笔划掉，旁边勘正
、Calligraphy
矮胖，饱满，不要太连
2019 Part B
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following
drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
三. 时态混乱
态 一般 进行 完成完成进行
时
现在 过去 将来
用中文拼出时态! would have been doing
过去将来
a. 什么叫谓语
动词+它应有的形态变化 语态+时态
If she doesn’t go with me, I will be devastated.
b. 主从句的时态在时间上要保 持一致，状态可异
will do be doing have/has done have/has been doing
The behaviors of mankind have been causing severe harm and pollution to the nature, which is overburdened and will collapse（崩溃） if we do not rectify（纠 正）our faults and misdeeds immediately and thoroughly （彻底的）.
超过一个，则第二+个要变成非谓语形式 do/doing/done）
Most of books out of date, so would you please buying more new books add to the collection?
Most of books are out of date, so would you please buy more new books to add to the collection?
社会现象
00、02、05、06、09、10、 11
不会考时政特别明显的题目 跟体育有关的图画常出现
模版、规律强，不需预测
单图题首段思路：(3-4句） 1、引入句+图中主要信息 2、次要信息和细节描写
3、提示信息的翻译（如果有）
主要信息：
人或主体+动作
次要信息 表情、环境、主体周边物体
细节 跟主体有关的具体的事、物、数量、中文提 示
五. Modern people, especially the younger generation, lay more stress on earning money, the neglect of the elders become common to see.
五. 无逻辑！
中文的逻辑是用脑袋意淫出来的！
lay emphasis on
play a role in
play a key/dominant role in
The portrayal demonstrates that the cooperation plays a progressively dominant role in the contemporary society.
He said that he had failed last year but would make every effort to win this time.
c. 最常用的时态
一般现在
am/is/are/do/does
一般过去
was/were/did
一般将来 现在进行 现在完成 现在完成进行
英文的逻辑是通过连词和副词来体现的！
a. 逗号前后都是完整的句子的话，其中一 句（常是后句）必须要有连词！
☞并并列列连词and 转折 but while 选择 or
☞ 从属连词，连接主从句表示两者之间的关系
状语；定语；同位语。。。。。。
b. 打句号的两句之间，常常要有副词来表示逻辑
The competition has become increasingly fierce. The complicated and challenging work can hardly finished by each individual. People in growing number are seeking cooperation from others, such as their colleagues, partners, even competitors.
一.名词裸奔
特指、专有、有修饰的名词前要有冠词 a\the或者所有格our/its/my/their.......
Wctoaertocaonnidsetitdsihssueutcreeoyuoifnrrfgomto
thilelustration above attract attention
that
We are unlikely to build a society of harmony without cooperating with each other.
Hale Waihona Puke 七. 小错误们. 比较级不要只会加more 2. 分词不要只会接-ed
性手术 不清he/she/his/her
逻辑 要有起承转合 连词和副词的运用
A.引入句的写法
☞直白型
1. As is graphically/explicitly/satirically
2. depicted/revealed/demonstrated
3. in the portrayal/illustration/caricature,
主体+动作
As is explicitly depicted in the portrayal, two handicapped men, each of whom has only one leg, are supporting each other and walking normally and rapidly.
cooperation.
the
二. The caption（提示语）indicate, “ You have only one leg and so do I. By sticking together, however, can we go anywhere we want.
谓不一致
a.总忘加第三人称单数 b.从句不注意先行词的单复数 c. 介词结构的名词搞不清谁是主语
2. 攻受互换
认为”的表达： 单词： maintain deem contend
短语：point out be convinced that
make the point that
主被动互换
Many people contend that the globalization is an inevitable tendency, which is beneficial for the mutual prosperity.（宾语从句）
...... Hence,......In fact......
最常出现的逻辑关系
并列： and Meanwhile, On the one hand, on the other hand,
递进： Moreover, Further, Besides,
因果： Hence, Therefore, Consequently, Accordingly, Thus,