浙江高考英语二轮复习专题限时集训4概要写作训练
2020届新高考英语二轮对点集训：第四板块 第三部分 概要写作
第四板块第三部分概要写作Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
In 1971, China's first subway line in Beijing was formally put into operation. By December 2017, there were 171 subway lines stretching over 5,083 km in 35 cities on the Chinese mainland. Currently, China has the longest urban railway network in the world, which is predicted to surpass 6,000 km by 2020.The rapid development of China's urban railway system reflects the country's growing economic strength. The system has experienced the fastest growth over the past 15 years due to the investment of wealth accumulated from the reform and opening up in urban infrastructure construction. An urban railway system is expensive to build, with one kilometer of subway costing approximately 700 million yuan(about $110 million). A city without economic strength cannot develop such an expensive system.The progress in urban railway construction technologies has also contributed to the fast expansion of the infrastructure. Subway construction involves building underground tunnels, laying rails, manufacturing trains and the operation and management of subways. It is a systematic project which not only covers traditional infrastructure building but also modern electronics and information technology. China's railway construction technologies are the best in the world, with Chinese subway trains now exported to developed countries including the United States.The expansion of Chinese cities has made it necessary to develop urban railway systems. Since the start of the reform and opening up, a large number of people have migrated to cities and the number of private cars has increased dramatically, resulting in serious traffic congestion. Building subways has become an important way to solve this problem.This year marks the 41st anniversary of the launch of China's reform and opening up, and the rapid development of China's urban railway system exemplifies the achievements made by the policy. As China furthers its opening up, it will continue to maintain steady and rapid economic growth and railway systems will be available in more and more cities.Writing 1The past few decades has witnessed the fast development of Chinese urban railways both in number and length, which is a reflection of China's prosperous economy. (要点1) Actually, not only the growing construction technologies but also the expansion of Chinese cities with booming population and heavy traffic, stimulates the urban railway construction. (要点2) With the deepening of the reform and opening up policy, more urban railways will come into use. (要点3)Writing 2阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
2024届高考英语作文复习专项浙江新阵地联盟2024届第二次联考读后续写-一个超级忙碌的夏天讲义素材
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I knew I would have a beyond-busy summer. I would be a junior teacher for the Little Dragons Karate (空手道)Camp. And I had to do summer swim team. And Ollie and I already had two customers for our dog-walking business."You might be biting off more than you can chew,"my mom said with a warning glimpse when I talked to her about it and announced,"I want to do everything!""Don't worry."I grinned."I have strong teeth!"My mom smiled back."In this case, it's your organizational skills, not your teeth, that need to be strong."I didn't take it to my heart.And the first week really was no problem. My friend Ollie was out of town and karate camp hadn't started, so my swim stuff was all I needed to worry about. The next week was great too. I swam, and a Little Dragon at karate camp told me I was his favorite teacher ever!I did learn, though, that staying organized with two activities was harder. My backpack was already stuffed with a towel and swim things, so I needed another for my karate clothing. Riding my bike from karate camp to the pool with two backpacks was a challenge. But I still had it under control until Ollie got back."We'relate getting our business together!" he said."We'll have to spen d every spare minute preparing.”"But I don't have any spare minutes!"I said."Did you forget we agreed to walk Alfie every Saturday? And Muffin on Tuesdays at 4:00?"Ollie asked. I couldn't let Ollie down, so I took out a third backpack and filled it with dog toys, treats, and plastic bags. I thought I was all set.But I was wrong! It didn't take long for my dog-walking stuff and karate stuff and swim stuff to get all mixed up, forgotten, or lost. One day, I forgot my karate backpack and had to borrow Emma's extra outfit, which was too tight. The next day, I remembered my karate stuff but forgot my swimsuit, so I had to help out in the snack shop and stay out of the pool all afternoon. And another time, when I reached intomy dog-walking pack for plastic bags, all I could find were swim goggles (护目镜) and sunscreen.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
【浙江名师点睛】高考英语二轮全程练习4--29及解析答案.doc
【浙江名师2016高考英语二轮全程练习4一 (29)及解析答素写作专项演练课时29图表类作文I .书面表达技法演练【精要提示】 写图表类作文时要注意⑴认真分析图表的含义，弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系。
例如：柱状图用来表 示各种事物的变化悄况及相互关系，要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断 事物的动态发展趋势，因此考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的捉示说明与文 字。
饼状图表示各事物在总体屮所占的比例及相互关系，旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个 被分割成大小不等切片的饼状图所传达的信息。
对此考住应清楚掌握部分与整体、部分与部 分之间的相互关系，这种关系通常以百分比的数字形式给出。
(2) 筛选数据，构思基本框架。
从图表中筛选能说明图表主题思想的典型数据，其内容不必全 部描述，突出垂点，并抓住图表中的极端点。
例如：最大或最小、最多或最少、最好或最差。
要善于抓住总的规律、趋势，归纳增、减率。
(3) 编列文章的提纲。
根据文章的提纲，将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落，然后将各个段落组成 文章，注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡。
在时态的选择上要注意，特定吋间用过去吋，经常出 现的情况或口己的评述用一般现在时。
【高考经典练】(2015-江苏卷)请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
1. The other day, a netizen (网 民)shared a photo on Sina Wcibo.lt was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane, and insisting that it leave the track.The photo drew about 7, 000 comments on the social media platform.Despite the (humbs —up (点赞)given to the old lady, some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic.2・ Some riders of e —bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions, ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles.Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic.Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable ・3.From 2005 to 2014, the total number of pnvatc cars in China rosesharply from 32 million to 154 million.Currently, China had 15% ofthe world's total vehicles.o1vcAxd JO 4 1 20 8 (X) 2【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；3.根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。
浙江高考英语二轮复习专题限时集训完形填空训练4记叙文+夹叙夹议文+议论文
专题限时集训(十二) 完形填空训练4 记叙文＋夹叙夹议文＋议论文A(2021·河北三市联考)Each week，I give my elderly neighbor a ride to the store when I am going.She keeps trying to 1 me for the ride，and I always 2 refusing.I tell her that it doesn't cost any more for her to 3 with me and it is 4 for me to do this.Last week，she brought a(n) 5 and said happily，“I have something for you and you must accept it.〞I said，“If there is money in it，I don't want it.〞But she 6 ，I opened it to find a “thank you〞card with 7 in it.That night，I stopped at her house to give a plate of 8 fried chicken that I had.I took an envelope and put the $10 9 it along with a “10 〞card.When leaving，I left it 11 in her door.The next day，she paid a(n) 12 to my home to return my 13 ．She said，“Look，I know you put that letter in my door this morning，didn't you？〞I had 14 forgotten about it，and I thought from the sincere 15 on my face，she believed me when I said that I hadn't put anyletter in her door that morning.Actually，it was the night before, 16 I thought I wasn't lying.She went on to17 the envelope and enclosed (装入) the “smile〞18 ，and told me how she was blessed with so many good things lately.I told her that I was so 19 for her，and that I hope she 20 to be so blessed.本文是一篇记叙文。
浙江专用高考英语二轮总结复习第四部分写作训练专题三概要写作
专题三纲要写作Writing 1阅读下边短文，依据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容纲要。
Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Targetfor a few things.Ihad hoped to be in and out quickly.I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my itemsshe on the conveyor.After placing my items ， I looked up to see that the person ahead of me wasan elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase eachseparately.I was frustrated with this womanand the inconvenience had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help hercount her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she askedif she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to thewoman， watching the employe e count the change.I realized I hadn’t been inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.Whenthe woman was finished ，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience and kindness by histreatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through thestore trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employee ’s kindne ss and patience and how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing thestory with her ， we left Target with a cart full of consumable items ， but what is more， a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target ， give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】要写好记述文的纲要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1) 谁做了什么？(2) 结果怎样？假如是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启迪或教育意义。
新高考适用2025版高考英语二轮总复习专题模拟训练概要写作
专题模拟训练(概要写作)概要写作(一)A(2024·高考英语考前信息必刷卷)阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The production of fine art is the use of skill and imagination to create aesthetic objects or experiences which can be shared with other people.Photography is thought by some to be a form of fine art; however, others claim that photography is not.Those who believe that photography is not a form of art present several arguments.They claim a photograph is nothing but an objective record of a particular place at a particular time.Therefore, any beauty that is perceived in the picture is the beauty of the time and place where it was taken, and is not the creation of the photographer.They also argue that sophisticated and expensive equipment often plays a greater role in the success of a photograph than the photographerʼs creativity.Even some of the greatest photographers acknowledge that there is a limit to the amount of influence they can have on a final product.However, there are also many reasons why photography is appreciated on the same level as other recognized forms of visual art.The decisions involved in creating a photograph are analogous to those made by any other artist.A photograph is not just a banal record of the world, but a deliberately created image with its own artistic features.Ansel Adams, the American photographer, commented on this point when he noted: “You donʼt take a photograph, you make it.” There is a growing trend for photographers to call themselves artists and their photos are sold for millions of dollars.However, these high prices may not be enough to change peopleʼs perceptions of whether photography is art.The arguments about whether photography is art have been discussed since the earliest cameras were used.The creative process involved in taking a fine photograph, deciding what, when and how the picture should be taken, is certainly similar to the process of making fine art.However, cameras are also increasingly used to take photographs for non-artistic functions.Although we cannot say that photography itself is necessarilyart, we can certainly see that it is a medium that can be used to make art.【范文】Opinions vary from person to person on whether photography should be considered a fine art.Some are against it because they think it is just an objective record and the photographerʼs creativity isnʼt reflected.However, others are in favor of it.They think photograph is a deliberately created image.All in all, photography is a medium used to make art.B(2024·高考三轮冲刺卷)阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
高考英语二轮复习 专题限时集训 概要写作(Ⅱ)高三全册英语试题
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校专题限时集训(三十) 概要写作(Ⅱ)A(2020·浙江绍兴诊断性考试)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
If you're worried that too much“screen time”could badly influence your child's intelligence，new research suggests you might be right.By analyzing the data gathered from over 4，500 U．S.kids aged between 8 and 11 in 2016 and 2017，Jeremy Walsh，a postdoctoral fellow with the CHEO Research Institute in Ottawa，found that too much“screen time”could harm your child's intelligence.Kids with the sharpest intellect spent less than two hours a day on their cell phones, tablets and computers coupled with 9 to 11 hours of sleep and at least an hour of physical activity.Too much screen time could affect kids' ability to focus，especially if they are switching between apps on a device or between different screens at the same time，Walsh suggested.“One leading theory is that much time on screens is spent using multiple apps or devices at once，”he said.“This can interfere with a child's ability to focus on and keep interested in a task.It can damage the building blocks for good cognition(认知)．”“Sleep is important for brain development，since that's when the brain reorganizes itself and grows，”Walsh added.Besides，exercise has been shown to increase blood flow to the brain and oxygenation of brain tissues, and increase the connectivity of networks in the brain.Too much screen time could lead to a“cascade”effect(级联效应) where kids don't get enough sleep and then are less active during the day.“You can see how this would have an impact on brain health，”Walsh said.What should parents do？Walsh advised them to set firm rules about the use of screens including how long children are using the screens，the kinds of apps they are using and how many screens they are using at once.Concerned parents also should preview games or apps before letting their child play，seek out more interactive(交互的) options that engage the child's mind，use parental controls to block or filter the content and limit the screen time.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】New research has found that excessive“screen time” may negatively affect children's intelligence.(要点1)It prevents children from focusing and staying interested，thus restricting their cognitive development.(要点2)Also，it results in inadequate sleep and lack of physical activity，which can do harm to the brain health.(要点3)Accordingly，parents are advised to establish strict regulations concerning the use of screens，monitor the content and limit the screen time.(要点4)B阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
浙江高考英语二轮复习专题限时集训4概要写作训练
专题限时集训(四) 概要写作训练2A阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右内容概要。
Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago，he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was purchasing it，the salesgirl said，“Oh，look，the game box hasn't even been opened yet.That might be worth some money.〞Peter examined the box and，sure enough，it was completely covered in factorysealed plastic.And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.“You should put that up for auction(拍卖) on the Internet，and see what happens，〞the salesgirl said.“Yes，you're right.People like something rare，〞Peter agreed.“I can't imagine there being very many unopened boxes of this game still around 40 years later.〞“Don't forget to tell me if you sell it，〞the salesgirl smiled.“No problem，〞Peter said.After he got home，Peter went online to several auction websites looking for his game.But he couldn't find it.Then hetyped in the name of the word game and hit search.The search result was 543 websites containing information about the changes of the game.Over the years，the game had been produced using letters in different sizes and game boards in different colors.He also found some lists of game fans looking for various versions of the game.Peter emailed some of them，telling them what he had.Two weeks later，Peter went back to the shop.“Hello.Do you still remember the unopened word game？〞The salesgirl looked at him for a second，then recognized him and said，“Oh，hi！〞“I've got something for you，〞Peter said.“I sold the game and made $1，000.Thank you for your suggestion.〞He handed her three $100 bills.“Wow！〞the salesgirl cried out.“Thank you.I never expected it.〞【写作指导】通读所给文章可知，本文属于记叙文。
高考英语二轮复习 专题限时集训 概要写作(Ⅰ)高三全册英语试题
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校专题限时集训(二十九)概要写作(Ⅰ)A篇(2020·浙江杭州七区期末)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
A recent U．N.report shows that many of us are working longer and harder than ever.In the past，employees worked eight or nine hours a day.Today，however，many companies expect their employees to work longer.In addition，the boundary between work and personal life has become less clear.If we are not working in the office，we might be working at home.We are required to be on call whenever our company needs us.In short，we are all working and having less time with family and friends.This overemphasis(过分强调) on work can lead to serious problems in our personal lives.The more time we spend at work，the less time there is available to maintain relationships with our friends and family.Many of us spend so much time on the job that we hardly ever get to see our partners or children.When we do get home，we are often tired and lack the energy to spend time doing what we really enjoy.There are，however，a number of ways in which we can regain control of our lives and correct the worklife balance.First of all，workers，especially those employed in offices，have to realize that work is rarely finished.In other words，taking work home does not usually decrease the amount of work.As one task finishes，another one appears.This means that，unless there is a strict deadline，work should stay at work.Another way to regain a worklife balance is to plan your free time.Most of us spend a lot of time planning our working week.Few of us put the same effort into organizing our leisure time.However，if we don't have a plan，there is a danger that we will miss out on the things that we really enjoy doing.So，if you like going to the cinema，make sure that you go regularly.Write it in your diary.If you enjoy having friends visit，plan a time and write that in your diary too.It's all too easy to let your precious time slip away.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Currently employees tend to work longer hours and harder than ever before，breaking the worklife balance.(要点1)Actually too much devotion to work has a negative impact on their family and social bonds.(要点2)To solve this problem, employees should strike a balance between work and life by figuring out a clear boundary and scheduling their leisure time with some effort.(要点3)B篇阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习写作组合限时练(一)至(四)训练.doc
浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习写作组合限时练（一）至（四）训练写作组合限时练一限时50分钟Ⅰ.应用文写作假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的传统文化，想去文化底蕴深厚的城市旅游。
请你给他写一封电子邮件，推荐一些他可能感兴趣的景点。
内容包括1．推荐地点；2．推荐原因。
注意1.词数80左右；2．可以适应增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文Dear Jack，I’m more than pleased to learn that you’re coming to China for a visit. And I’ll recommend some historic places. The first city you can’t miss is, of course, Beijing. There’re many royal gardens in Beijing, of which the Summer Palace is the most famous. Besides, the city of Hangzhou, known for its historic relics and natural beauty, will never fail to attract you with its West Lake, near which are scenic places such as Leifeng Pagoda and Lingyin Temple. Other historic cities are Xi’an, Kaifeng and so on. I hope my advice will be helpful, and wish you a good trip. Yours，Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I had much practice climbing drainpipes 排水管as a teenager, when I forgot my keys. It wasn’t a skill I expected to need again on a sunny bank holiday. I’d arranged to meet my wife in the beer garden of a local hotel. As I approached, I could hear raised voices. I thought maybe some people had drunk, but as I walked into the garden, I saw everyone looking up, including my wife. Following their sight, I saw a child on top of a roof sticking out from the hotel. I realized the people in the garden had arranged themselves underneath, in the hope that one of them would be able to catch him if he fell. From the other side of the roof, I heard a woman’s voice begging him to sit down and keep still. It was the boy’s mother, who had tried to climb up to him and become trapped halfway. The child ignored his mother’s voice and his every movement brought a fresh gasp 倒抽气of anxiety from onlookers. The firemen had been called, but no one knew how long they’d take. I imagined the firemen working their way across the city, slowed by holiday traffic. The thought of looking on helplessly as the boy lost his footing made me feel sick. Scanning the side of the building, I quickly worked out the quickest way up and made for the drainpipe. It was old and looked as if it might break away from the wall, but I managed to quickly climb onto the roof. Aboveme, the child paid me little attention and didn’t appear to be frightened at all. He was no older than two. I realized I’d be unable to predict his responses. My only choice now was to keep climbing. The roof narrowed as it rose and I planted myself as firmly as I could on the edge, caught the boy and helped him on to my lap. 注意1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(四)写作指导(含范文)
2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习（四）写作指导阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Scientists in London say they have found the best diet for both humans and the planet. If the world followed the so-called "planetary health" diet, the scientists told Reuters that each year more than 11 million early deaths could be prevented. Scientists say that the way we produce and eat food is very bad for the planet. For the health of the planet, they claim the same diet would reduce greenhouse gases and save more land, water and animals.Tim Lang, a professor at Britain's University of London, co-led the research. He told Reuters, "The food we eat and how we produce it determines the health of people and the planet, and we are currently getting this seriously wrong." Lang added that the world's population is expected to grow to 10 billion people by 2050. If we want to feed everyone, he explained, we all need to change what we eat and the way we eat by "improving food production and reducing food waste."Well, what do you eat on the planetary health diet? The scientists who created this diet say it is largely plant-based but still has small amounts of dairy,fish and meat. The diet calls for cutting red meat and sugar by 50 percent and doubling the amount of nuts, fruits, vegetables and legumes.Food situations around the world are not equal. In certain areas, this would mean great changes. People in North America, for example, eat 6.5 times the recommended amount of red meat. On the other hand, people in South Asia eat only half the amount suggested by the new planetary health diet. Meeting the targets for vegetables would need big changes in other areas. In sub-Saharan Africa, people on average eat 7.5 times the suggested amount of vegetables like potatoes and cassava.The scientists admit their goal will be difficult to achieve. But for them doing nothing is also not an option. Willet said, "If we can't quite make it, it's better to try and get as close as we can."第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，明确各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心词(尤其是名词与动词)。
浙江省高考英语二轮复习概要写作专练(一)至(二)训练
概要写作专练答案提供详尽解析，旨在指导考生拓展写作思路，提升写作能力。
概要写作专练(一)A(2018·浙江省名校联盟第三次联考)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Some years ago, writing in my diary used to be a usual activity.I would return from school and spend the expected half hour recording the day’s events, feelings, and impressions in my little blue diary. I did not really need to express my emotions by way of words, but I gained a certain satisfaction from seeing my experiences forever recorded on paper. After all, isn’t accumulating memories a way of preserving the past?When I was thirteen years old, I went on a long journey on foot in a great valley, wellequipped with pens, a diary, and a camera. During the trip, I was busy recording every incident, name and place I came across. I felt proud to be spending my time productively, dutifully preserving for future generations a detailed description of my travels. On my last night there, I wandered out of my tent, diary in hand. The sky was clear and lit by the glare of the moon, and the walls of the valley looked threatening behind their screen of shadows. I automatically took out my pen ... At that point, I understood that nothing I wrote could ever match or replace the few seconds I allowed myself to experience the dramatic beauty of the valley. All I remembered of the previous few days were the dull characterizations I had set down in my diary.Now, I only write in my diary when I need to write down a special thought or feeling. I still love to record ideas and quotations that strike me in books, or observations that are particularly meaningful. I take pictures, but not very often — only of objects I find really beautiful. I’m no longer blindly satisfied with having something to remember when I grow old. I realize that life will simply pass me by if I stay behind the camera, busy preserving the present so as to live it in the future.I don’t want to wake up one day and have nothing but a pile of pictures and notes. Maybe I won’t have as many exact representations of people and places; maybe I’ll forget certain facts, but at least the experiences will always remain inside me. I don’t live to make memories —I just live, and the memories form themselves.一、试题详解1．核心内容本文是一篇记叙文，全文共四段。
高考英语复习专题限时集训4概要写作训练2
专题限时集训(四) 概要写作训练2A阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago，he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was purchasing it，the salesgirl said，“Oh，look，the game box hasn't even been opened yet.That might be worth some money.”Peter examined the box and，sure enough，it was completely covered in factory sealed plastic.And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.“You should put that up for auction(拍卖) on the Internet，and see what happens，”the salesgirl said.“Yes，you're right.People like something rare，”Peter agreed.“I can't imagine there being very many unopened boxes of this game still around 40 years later.”“Don't forget to tell me if you sell it，” the salesgirl smiled.“No problem，” Peter said.After he got home，Peter went online to several auction websites looking for his game.But he couldn't find it.Then he typed in the name of the word game and hit search.The search result was 543 websites containing information about the changes of the game.Over the years，the game had been produced using letters in different sizes and game boards in different colors.He also found some lists of game fans looking for various versions of the game.Peter emailed some of them，telling them what he had.Two weeks later，Peter went back to the shop.“Hello.Do you still remember the unopened word game？”The salesgirl looked at him for a second，then recognized him and said，“Oh，hi！”“I've got something for you，”Peter said.“I sold the g ame and made $1，000.Thank you for your suggestion.” He handed her three $100 bills.“Wow！” the salesgirl cried out.“Thank you.I never expected it.”【写作指导】通读所给文章可知，本文属于记叙文。
浙江省2019年高考英语二轮专题复习写作提分特训(四).doc
浙江省2019年高考英语二轮专题复习写作提分特训（四）写作提分特训四第一组第一节应用文写作满分15分假如你是某校高三3班学生李越。
新学期就要开始了,你打算给你的外教David 写封信,主要内容包括1.感谢他的付出; 2.评价他的教学; 3.提出新的建议。
注意1.词数80左右,开头已为你写好; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David, I’m Li Yue,one of your students from Class Three,Grade Three. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Yue One possible version Dear David, I’m Li Yue,one of your students from Class Three,Grade Three. With the new term approaching,we can’t wait to have you as our teacher again. Firstly,I’d like to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your hard work. Your lively class and humorous style have impressed us a lot. We all think highly of your job. Furthermore,we really appreciate your devotion and patience. However,in the coming year,would you mind talking more about English culture and having us practice speaking English more Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Yue 第二节读后续写满分25分阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
浙江高考英语二轮复习专题概要写作讲练
专题二概要写作概要写作作为浙江英语高考新题型，就是对所读过文章简要概括，写出文章中心大意，也称之为摘要。
写概要时，读者要把文章具体信息用一些具有概括功能词与句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中单词、词组与句子进展合理转换，对文章具体信息进展概括，再用适宜语言表述出来。
这一题型主要考察学生对文章主旨大意概括与准确获取关键词能力，同时考察学生用简洁语言概括文章重要信息能力以及对文章整体构造把握能力。
因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解与书面表达，是二者有机结合体，是阅读理解与书面表达沟通桥梁。
[选材特点]1．所需阅读短文词数在350以内；2．所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文与记叙文为主。
[评分参考]阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1．对原文要点理解与呈现情况；2．应用语法构造与词汇准确性；3．上下文连贯性；4．对各要点表达独立性情况。
注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己语言，准确使用相应语法构造与词汇，得分相应比拟高。
相反，如果概要写作局部出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象，得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。
[写作步骤]1．仔细阅读原文，掌握文章主旨大意。
在阅读过程中，要注意搜寻要点，如议论文中论点、论据，记叙文中开展、高潮、结局等。
2．列出文章要点与各段落主题句。
可以用下划线标记，也可做笔记，将要点逐一列出。
3．分析原文内容与构造，将内容分项扼要表述，并注意在构造上顺序。
4．写出初稿。
根据列出要点与对原文理解，用自己语言组织内容，尝试写出概要。
5．修改、定稿。
认真阅读初稿，对照原文，检查是否漏掉重要内容。
检查并确定拼写、语法、标点正确无误。
检查是否符合规定词数要求。
[方法技巧]在掌握一定解题步骤后，为了顺利完成概要写作，学生在写作时还需要注意以下方法技巧。
1．要点齐全。
概要写作主要考察学生概括文章主旨大意与准确获取关键信息能力，关键信息获取不准确往往导致所写概要要点不齐全。
浙江专用届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题二读后续写
专题二读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
At the center of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and a real white six－year－old granddaughter，Leah，jumped from foot to foot as we waited in line for her turn to sit on his lap．“I don’t know what to say，” Leah said，raising her neck around the kids in front of her.“Sure you do，”her mother，Leanne，said.“It’s ’s already your friend．You’ll do just fine.”“He’ll ask you what you want for Christmas，” I said.“And you just tell him.”、We’d gone over and over the toys she’d ask mother didn’t want surprises! Leah repeated the list．But a minute later，she inserted new toys she’d just spotted at the mall.“I’ve got an idea，” said Leanne，digging into her purse as the line inched forward.“Let’s write down your requests so you won’t forget them.” I couldn’t help but to see Santa was such an important appointment for a six－year－ child should have any worries bigger than the night before，on the news，I’d seen a village in the Middle East that had come under of the wounded were children just like our around the mall full of magical decorations and happy shoppers I felt safe，as safe as anyone could in the world should have that kind of security，especially at Christmas.“Okay，” Leanne said.“Now you’v e got everything you want written down you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.”Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A Chia Pet，Moon Sand and Aquadoodle．”“Why don’t you add a fourth request，Leah，” I heard myself say.“Ask forpeace on earth．” My daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.“What’s peace on earth，Grandma” Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get ’s the true meaning of Christmas.” Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，” she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；>2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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专题限时集训(四) 概要写作训练2A阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago，he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was purchasing it，the salesgirl said，“Oh，look，the game box hasn't even been opened yet.That might be worth some money.”Peter examined the box and，sure enough，it was completely covered in factory sealed plastic.And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.“You should put that up for auction(拍卖) on the Internet，and see what happens，”the salesgirl said.“Yes，you're right.People like something rare，”Peter agreed.“I can't imagine there being very many unopened boxes of this game still around 40 years later.”“Don't forget to tell me if you sell it，” the salesgirl smiled.“No problem，” Peter said.After he got home，Peter went online to several auction websites looking for his game.But he couldn't find it.Then he typed in the name of the word game and hit search.The search result was 543 websites containing information about the changes of the game.Over the years，the game had been produced using letters in different sizes and game boards in different colors.He also found some lists of game fans looking for various versions of the game.Peter emailed some of them，telling them what he had.Two weeks later，Peter went back to the shop.“Hello.Do you still remember the unopened word game？”The salesgirl looked at him for a second，then recognized him and said，“Oh，hi！”“I've got something for you，”Peter said.“I sold the g ame and made $1，000.Thank you for your suggestion.” He handed her three $100 bills.“Wow！” the salesgirl cried out.“Thank you.I never expected it.”【写作指导】通读所给文章可知，本文属于记叙文。
首先要点一应表明主人公Peter一个月前买到了一款稀有的文字游戏；要点二要交代在售货员的建议下，Peter将此款文字游戏挂到网上拍卖；要点三讲的是故事的结果：文字游戏卖了1 000美元，Peter拿出300美元给售货员作为答谢。
由于本篇短文为记叙文，只需按照故事的情节发展进行写作即可。
写作时要把握好要点，全面准确地呈现短文内容，并注意语法结构和词汇的准确性。
【参考范文】One month ago，Peter bought a word game and found it was made about 40 years ago and hadn't been opened yet，which means it was rare and valuable.(要点1) He followed the salesgirl's suggestion and put it for auction on the Internet.(要点2) The word game was sold at $1，000 and Peter gave the salesgirl $300 in return.(要点3)【导学号：85602029】B(2016·宁波市镇海中学质检)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Why do parents have such a difficult time to communicate openly and honestly with their teens? For this，there are many reasons but most of them stem from not being able to properly understand their teens.It is a dangerous gap because parents will have to communicate with their teens about a wide variety of issues during the most important years of their lives.Thus，parents must know how to communicate openly and honestly with their teens.Here are a few tips to make communication easier between parents and teenagers.As parents，you should listen to what children said carefully and pay much attention to it.Make them feel as if their views really matter，which not only helps your discussions with your teen but brings you closer to him.Meanwhile，try to remember some of the negative feelings you experienced as a teenager and apply it to your teen's situation.Never make negative remarks to your teen about what she has said or done.Remember how much courage it would have taken for your teen to come and talk to you about his personal issues.So listen respectfully.If your teen is unusually angry，it may be time to spend a bit of quality time with your teen to determine what is wrong and where it is coming from.It is，therefore，necessary for parents to strive to keep lines of communication open at all times with their teens.Try to remember what it was like to be a teenager and how vulnerable(脆弱的) you felt.Then you will be well on your way to helping your teen communicate more openly and honestly.【写作指导】本文首先提出问题：很多家长不会和孩子公开、诚实地沟通。
接着就该问题提出几点建议：认真倾听孩子的心声；学会联系自己儿时的经历和孩子换位思考；学会尊重地倾听。
最后总结：学会倾听，和孩子好好交流。
【参考范文】There are various reasons for a difficult communication between parents and their teens.(要点1)Here are some tips：Try not to talk down to your teens.Imagine what it would be like to be a teen.Listen respectfully to your teens.Don't ignore your teens' feelings.(要点2)As long as you keep lines of communication open and remember what it was like to be a teenager，you will be well on the way to communicating with your teens.(要点3)C阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
During all kinds of holidays，millions of people will buy gifts for loved ones.Which is great—except that tons of those people will make the same glaring mistake，and buy the wrong gift.What's going on?Gift buying has become a deceivingly selfish pursuit.We don't actually look for things people want to receive.Instead，and to many of our gifts' detriments，we tend to look for things that we want to give.It's a subtle，but pretty significant problem.Research has shown that givers tend to value the gifts they buy considerably more than recipients.Gifts are valued roughly 10 to 33 percent less by recipients than what givers paid for them，Joel Waldfogel noted in Scroogenomics：Why You Shouldn't Buy Presents for the Holidays，his 2009 book on giftgiving.The discrepancy seems to come from a simple misplaced belief that thoughtful presents are the best presents.They are not.In fact，they might just be the worst presents.The more thought you put into a present，the more likely you are to strayfrom buying what the person you're buying the present for actually wants.In other words，people let their giftgiving egos get in the way of great presents.Especially when the recipient is someone they want to show they know really well.Fortunately，the answer to our collective insistence on guessing what people want is simple：stop it.If that's too callous，or impersonal，there's another helpful rule of thumb.Instead of buying restrictive gifts，like gift cards for specific stores，buy gifts that allow for flexibility，like gift cards that can be used more broadly (or，better yet，cash)．People tend to prefer gift cards to actual gifts，and cash to both，Steffel explained.Steffel's latest research，which focuses on gift card giving，points to exactly this point—that versatility is the key to better gift giving.【写作指导】通读全文可知，本文是一篇议论文，按照提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的顺序来组织文章。