江西省奉化市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错基础训练(6)
高考英语二轮复习 短文改错基础选练高三全册英语试题2
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校湖南2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）基础选练（5）短文改错。
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分When I was an elementary school student aging ten, I took part in a singing competition in our city. This was my first time to be in a singing competition. In the day of the competition, I was asked to enter into a studio room, which there was only one person and a piano. The man asked me to sing in front of the microphone, following his piano playing. My mother was waiting for me outside the studio. I thought that I sang better at the time. So when I finished and walked out the studio, my mother asked, “What happened to your voices? Why couldn’t we hear you?” Then, I realized that I forget to switch on the microphone.【参考答案】2短文改错Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
高考英语二轮复习 语法专题特训6 非谓语动词高三全册英语试题
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校语法专题特训6 非谓语动词能力升级训练第7页一、用所给词的适当形式填空,每空不得超过三个词1. (bury) in heavy school work,most senior three students have no free time to do what they want.答案:Buried2.The living room is clean and tidy,with a dining table already (lay) for a meal to be cooked.答案:laid3.When (expose) to a totally different culture,we should be open-minded and try to understand and appreciate it.答案:exposed4.(2017·天津卷改编)The hospital has recently obtained new medical equipment, (allow) more patients to be treated.答案:allowing5. (consider) the size of the universe,some researchers believe that there is life beyond our planet.答案:Considering6.She seated herself at a small table in the restaurant,waiting (serve).答案:to be served 7.People planted trees on the waste hills (decrease) water and soil loss.答案:to decrease8. (injure) in the training,Tom couldn’t play in the basketball season.答案:Injured9.With my mother’s(inspire) words in my mind,I never doubt I’ll succeed.答案:inspiring10.The doctor asked him (reduce) the amount of salt in his diet.答案:to reduce二、单句改错1.Taking a gap year is a good chance for students to learn skills and gain life experience,given them an edge in the job market.答案:given→giving2.Have spent the past year as an exchange student in Hong Kong,Linda appears more mature than those of her age.答案:Have→Having3.There is no doubt that achieve a goal,one needs not only knowledge but also good personalities.答案:achieve→to achieve4.When asking what they needed most,the kids said they wanted to be felt important and loved.答案:asking→askedrmed the patient of his serious illness risks destroying his hope so that he might recover more slowly.答案:Informed→Informing6.A good teacher has to be armed with the ability to keep students to motivated throughout their learning process.答案:去掉第三个to7.Mr.Green is said to had done the experiment which led to the new discovery in medicine.答案:had→have8.You should understand the traff ic rule by now since you’ve had it explain often enough.答案:explain→explained9.Nowadays some parents regret not spend more time with their kids when they were young.答案:spend→spending10.This machine is very easy operate,so anybody can learn to use it ina few minutes.答案:operate→to operate三、语篇填空Scientists have discovered that 1.(stay) in the cold could help us lose weight.Researchers at the University of California found that exposure to the cold increases levels of a protein that helps form brown fat—the type of fat that produces heat and keeps us warm.Brown fat burns energy,2. helps us lose weight.White fat stores extra energy,which results 3. weight gain.The researchers said that because air conditioning and heating give us constant,4.(comfor t) temperatures,our body’s need for brown fat has decreased.They found that,“Outdoor workers in northern Finlandwho5.(expose) to cold temperature have 6.significant amount of brown fat when 7.(compare) to same-aged indoor workers.”The research was conducted on two different control groups of mice.8. group was injected with the protein that helps create brown fat.This group later gained 30% less weight after both groups were fed high-fat diets.The researchers say this could be good news in the fight against obesity.People who are obese have 9.(low) levels of brown fat than thinner people.Head researcher Hei Sook Sul said,“This protein could become an important target for research into the treatment and prevention of obesity and obesity-related disease s.” She added,“If you can somehow increase levels of this protein,you could10.(possible) lose more weight even if eating the same amount of food.”答案与解析:【语篇导读】科学家发现待在寒冷的环境中可以帮助人们减肥。
高考英语二轮专题复习短文改错题库(精选75篇)
高考英语二轮专题复习短文改错题库(精选75篇)-CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN绝密★启用前2014-2015学年度?学校3月月考卷试卷副标题考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx1．答题前填写好自己的姓名、班级、考号等信息2．请将答案正确填写在答题卡上第I卷（选择题）请点击修改第I卷的文字说明一、单项选择（题型注释）二、完形填空（题型注释）三、阅读理解（题型注释）第II卷（非选择题）请点击修改第II卷的文字说明四、单词拼写（题型注释）五、短文改错（题型注释）10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.【答案】【小题1】had-- have【小题2】great-- greatly【小题3】mean--means【小题4】live 前加to【小题5】damaged --damaging【小题6】panda-- pandas【小题7】of划掉【小题8】which--- where / in which/ live后加in【小题9】can--can’t /cannot【小题10】Besides --However【解析】【小题1】一个动作表示持续到现在，还会持续下去用现在完成进行时，had-- have。
高考英语大二轮复习 第一部分 语篇填空和短文改错 6 情态动词和虚拟语气课件
专题六 情态动词和虚拟 语气
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1.After all,we have done what we should to support(support) “The Hope Project”. 2.As a teacher,I should help my students as much as I can to ensure(ensure) their mental and physical development.
表示命令、建议、要求等词相关 的名词性从句的谓语用 “should+动词原形”,其中 should 可以省略。这些词 有:insist,order,suggest,advise,rec ommend,request,require,ask,dem and...
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18.It’s high time that we studied/should study(study) harder at our lessons as the exam is around the corner. 19.She talks about Rome as if she had been (be)
看到惯用句式标志词 as if,would rather,wish,if only,it’s time 等, 要特别注意从句中的谓语形式, 根据各自的规则分别进行改错。
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Ⅰ.单句填空 1.Without his wartime experiences,Hemingway wouldn’t have written(write) his famous novel A Farewell to Arms. 2.Jack is more of a talker than a doer.It’s high time that he did/should do(do) something instead of just talking. 3.If I had seen (see) it with my own eyes,I wouldn’t have believed it. 4.Thanks for your pulling me back in time,otherwise I would have been hit(hit) by the car. 5.As a student,I should remember as many English words as I can to enlarge(enlarge) my vocabulary.
高三英语短文改错练习题
高三英语短文改错练习题Dear students,In order to improve your English writing skills, I have prepared a short passage for you to identify and correct the errors. Please read the following passage and make the necessary corrections. Pay attention to grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure.It was raining hardly outside when I suddenly realized that I have forgotten to bring my umbrella. Desperate, I decided to make a dash through the rain and hope to get to the nearest bus stop as quick as possible. But as soon as I had step outside, I regretted my decision. The rain seemed like it was pouring cats and dogs, and I was immediately drenched to the bone.I continued to move forward, even though my shoes were squeaking and my clothes sticking to my body. Finally, I reached the bus stop where several other people have been already waiting. Looking around, I noticed a lady who was clutching her umbrella tightly and seemed unwilling to share it with anyone.Feeling disappointed, I saw that a man next to me has no umbrella too but was not bothered by the rain at all. Instead, he took off his jacket and hand it to the lady, saying, "Please take my jacket. I'll be alright without it."Witnessing this act of kindness, a warm feeling spread thorough my heart. I realized that it can be the small gestures that make a big difference in someone's day. It made me consider about our own actions and how we can help others in their time of need.Suddenly, the bus arrived, and we all hurried to get on board. As I took a seat, I couldn't stop thinking about the man's selfless act. It inspired me to be more mindful of others and to always be willing to lend a helping hand.In conclusion, this experience showed me the importance of kindness and compassion. It reminded me that even in the most challenging situations, a simple act of kindness can create positivity and bring people together. Let's strive to make the world a better place by caring for one another.Good luck with your corrections!。
高考英语二轮复习限时集训 短文改错(Ⅱ)高三全册英语试题
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校专题限时集训(二十五)短文改错(Ⅱ)A(2018·第学校模拟)Last month，my good friend Mark got an expensive watch as his birthday present.He showed to everyone in our class proudly.I really envied him and I ask my mum to buy me an expensive present.However，to my disappointment，I only got a second-hand bike at that special day.So one day while I was riding his “dear” bike back home from school，I passed the shop that my mum worked.I saw a familiar figure kneeling down in the front of it cleaned the outside steps of the shop.It was my mum! She worked so harder to raise me! Tear in my eyes，I got off the bike and worked together with her.【答案】Last month，my good friend Mark got an expensive watch as his birthday present.He showed ∧it to everyone in our class proudly.I really enviedhim and Iaskaskedmy mum to buy me an expensive present.However，to mydisappointment，I only got a second-hand bikeatonthat special day.SoButone day while I was ridinghismy“dear” bike back home from school，Ipassed the shopthatwheremy mum worked.I saw a familiar figure kneeling downin the﹨ front of itcleanedcleaningthe outside steps of the shop.It was my mum!She worked soharderhardto raise me!TearTearsin my eyes，I got off the bikeand worked together with her.B(2018·西安交大附中模拟)Mistakes are unavoidable in life.Butattitudes towards it may make a difference.I still remember how my spoken English was improved.In a beginning，I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes.Before longmy teacher got to know about my situation.He encouraged me to speak outthat I thought.Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging，my teacherand my classmates would help me figure out how I must have avoided them.Ialso joined in an English club to get more chances to speak.Practice madeperfect.Now I can talk fluent in English.Just as the saying goes ，“Every bean has its black.” Don't afraid of making mistakes ，because success is just waiting for us.【答案】Mistakes are unavoidable in life.But attitudes towards itthem maymake a difference.I still remember how my spoken English was improved.In athebeginning ，I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid makemakingmistakes.Before long my teacher got to know about my situation.Heencouraged me to speak out thatwhat I thought.Whenever I made mistakes andfelt discouraging discouraged ，my teacher and my classmates would help me figure outhow I mustcould have avoided them.I also joined in ﹨ an English club to getmore chances to speak.Practice made makes perfect.Now I can talk fluentfluently inEnglish.Just as the saying goes ，“Every bean has its black.” Don't ∧be afraid of making mistakes ，because success is just waiting for us.C(2018·南昌二中模拟)I lived in my hometown ten years before.It was a quiet village with green tree and clean water.I miss the days spend in my hometown so much.When I was in my hometown ，I always wake up early in the morning.Somepeople took a walk around while others was doing their farm work.I usedto go to the hill nearby with my grandpa on every day with a little dog following them.There I'd like to play the dog while my grandpa was taking care of his fruit trees.Sometimes I would go to the river to catchfish.What happy I was!I will keep the beautifully memory forever. 【答案】I lived in my hometown ten years beforeago .It was a quiet village withgreen tree trees and clean water.I miss the days spendspent in my hometown somuch.When I was in my hometown ，I always wake wokeup early in the morning.Somepeople took a walk around while others waswere doing their farm work.I usedto go to the hill nearby with my grandpa on ﹨ every day with a little dogfollowing them us .There I'd like to play ∧with the dog while my grandpa was taking care of his fruit trees.Sometimes I would go to the river to catch fish.WhatHowhappy I was!I will keep the beautifullybeautiful memory forever.D(2018·模拟)I am the shared bike.People can ride me just via a mobile app.So far ，we have been wide used in many big cities.I'd like to serve for people.But horrible things happen a few days ago.Several people stolesome of us without pay their bills on the app and treated us badly.They broke my saddle but even threw my friends everywhere.We felt angry for which those bad guys had done.People have the right use the public facilities ，but it is also our duty to use us with care.Designed to help the public with traffic problems ，we are neither toy nor private vehicles.People should obey the basic rules when using us.【答案】I am theashared bike.People can ride me just via a mobile app.So far ，we have been wide widely used in many big cities.I'd like to serve for ﹨ people.But horrible things happenhappened a few days ago.Several people stolesome of us without paypaying their bills on the app and treated usbadly.They broke my saddle butandeven threw my friends everywhere.We feltangry for whichwhat those bad guys had done.People have the right ∧to use the public facilities ，but it is also ourtheir duty to use us withcare.Designed to help the public with traffic problems ，we are neithertoytoys nor private vehicles.People should obey the basic rules when using us.。
2020届高考英语二轮复习短文改错提升练习冠词(含答案)
2020届高考英语二轮复习短文改错提升练习冠词一、改正下列句子中的唯一错误：1.In word,e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.【答案】.在In后加 a【解析】in a word为固定短语，意为“总而言之”2.I volunteered to do it by saying"my deskmate is overweight boy whose clothes never fit him." 【答案】在overweight前加an【解析】此处表示“一个超重的男孩”，故应overweight后加an。
3.There was once a elderly woman in a nursing home.【答案】第一个a→an【解析】elderly的读音以元音音素开头，其前应用an。
4.Up to now,he has become member of our family and everyone has enjoyed his company.【答案】在become后加 a【解析】member是可数名词，意为“成员”，其前加不定冠词a表示‘—’5.Third,for the sake of our safety and the others' safety, we should obey the traffic rules.【答案】删除第二个the【解析】此处“其他人”是泛指，故前面不用加the。
6.Naturally,I made a rapid progress in English.【答案】删除 a【解析】progress意为“进步”，为不可数名词，前面不能用a修饰。
7.I think it good habit that in our spare time we read more books of great use.【答案】在good前加a【解析】habit意为“习惯”，是可数名词，此处为泛指，故用不定冠词a修饰。
【高考英语二轮复习】高考英语改错题专项突破(附解析)
2022年高考英语二轮复习语法专项突破讲义专题3 短文改错【教学目标】1.掌握短文改错解题技巧，学会分析长难句分析，快速找到解题关键，突破阅读难点。
2.掌握高考题做题技巧及难点突破。
【教学重点】1.短文改错高考解题技巧和方法。
2.短文改错考点归纳【教学难点】1.把握解题的方法和技巧2.易错语法考点总结【教学内容】1.短文改错的当堂过手训练和重点高考词汇积累2.灵活运用语法填空和短文改错解题技巧Part 1:专题训练及讲解一．命题特点短文改错题的要求较高，其宗旨是对语言知识综合运用能力的考查，通过阅读短文检测同学们发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力，进而考查学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平。
有许多同学在做此类题目时不得要领，因而得分甚少。
那么怎样找错误就成了解题的关键，本节课老师就和同学们一起看一下短文改错题型的答题技巧。
二．命题方向2020—2021年高考（全国卷）错误类型统计全国卷动词名词形容词和副词代词介词冠词连词从表格中，我们可以看出短文改错题的错误类型是有迹可循的。
短文改错题测试点的分布及设错方式是有规律的，所以怎样找到错误就成了解题的关键。
只要我们可以找到错误，那么改正错误就迎刃而解了。
三．解题技巧解题口诀名冠介代连；形副时非反。
主谓一致意义先；And, but 要互换。
（逗号后不能用that）四．实战演练第一组短文改错 (共 10 小题；每小题 1 分, 满分 10 分)假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10 处错误，每句中最多有两处错误。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
I still remember a embarrassing experience last month. That day, I was overslept. I was running around my apartment quickly because there was something scarier for me than be late for work. I called a taxi, put on a dress, put all the necessary things into my bags, and closed it without even looking into it. Then I took my wallet, and run out. It didn't take much time to get to work because I was hurrying the driver at every traffic light. At last, I was in the office. Surprising, when I opened my bag, I saw the 2 yellow or scared eyes of my cat looking me. She seemed to be just as shocking as I was.高考重点词汇“勿忘我”●oversleep●shocking第二组短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
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浙江奉化市2016高考英语短文改错基础训练（6）短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Lucy ，Thanks for your letter. I might get use to the life in American gradually. Food here remains the same all day and the school here is more relaxed though I take 2 AP courses and have to catch up with half year's courses. All the books are in English and I have to write many articles, that might seem difficult. Much more worse, I find out my oral English retrograde (倒退的). I have been out of my school only once, and I guess there are a lot of differences. There are some funny clubs, and I participate the basketball club in this semester. It's amazing. By the way, thank you and all the other classmates in China for making souvenirs (纪念品) for myself. Send it to me when you all finish and I will be very happy.Hope you will reply soon.Yours ，Li Hua【参考答案】：Dear Lucy ，Thanks for your letter. I might get use used to the life in American Americagradually. Foodhere remains the same all day and the school here is more relaxed relaxingthough I take 2AP courses and have to catch up with half ∧ayear's courses. All the books are inEnglish and I have to write many articles, that whichmight seem difficult. Much more worse,I find out my oral English retrograde (倒退的). I have been out of my school only once, and butI guess there are a lot of differences. There are some funny clubs, andI participate ∧the basketball club in this semester. It's amazing. By the way, thank in. you and all the other classmates in China for making souvenirs (纪念品) for myselfme to me when you all finish and I will be very happy.Send itthemHope you will reply soon.Yours，Li Hua假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day，a blind man was sitting on street with a sign by his feet that read：“I am blind，please help me. ” A gentleman walked through and sto pped to have a look at the sign，noticed only a few coin in the man's hat. He took out some bills from his wallet and put it into the hat. And then he turned the sign over again, wrote a new message and left. Several hours later，the gentleman returned. To his happy, he found the hat almost full of bills and coins. He didn't expect that the new message does work，which read: “It’s spring now, and I can't see it.”【参考答案】3.1.on后加the2.through---by3.noticed---noticing4.coin—coins5.it—them6.去掉again7.happy---happiness8.hat后加was 9.does—did 10.and ---but短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in schools! Many children are given such much homework that they have hardly any spare time to have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder so many children are tiring of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspaper or magazines. Shouldn't we draw a lesson from the cases? Now our government is carried out a plan to solve the education problems.【参考答案】：Most families in China hopedhopetheir single children will have a happy future, sothey are very strict inwith their children. So doareteachers in schools! Manychildren are given suchsomuch homework that they have hardly any spare time to have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder somany children are tiringtired of lessons. Some even attack or kill histheirparentsand teachers! I believe many people∧have already read this kind of news in newspapernewspapersor magazines. Shouldn't we draw a lesson from the cases? Now ourgovernment iscarriedcarryingout a plan to solve the education problems.短文改错。
下面文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
Yesterday I showed to my friend Peter around Beijing city．We started off at 8： 00 a．m．First we went to the Forbidden City, which was one of the most popular tourist spot in Beijing．Then we visited the History Museum．We observed a lot of valuable things in them and we learned a lot about Chinese history．After a quick meal, we went to Beihai Park．Upon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful scenes．We spent a whole afternoon appreciated the wonder．It was until 18： 00 p．m．that we went back．We did have a wonderful time．Peter was very pleased with my arrangement that he invited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big meal．【参考答案】4.Yesterday I showed to my friend Peter around Beijing city．We started off at 8： 00a．m．First we went to the Forbidden City, which was one of the most popular touristisspot in Beijing．Then we visited the History Museum．We observed a lot of valuable spotsthings in them and we learned a lot about Chinese history．After a quick meal, we wentitto Beihai Park．Upon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful scenes．We spent aboth thewhole afternoon appreciated the wonder．It was ∧until 18： 00 p．m．that we went back．appreciating notWe did have a wonderful time．Peter was very pleased with my arrangement that hesoinvited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big meal．newly-built短文改错。