秋九年级英语上册外研版课件：Module 3 话题写作实境运用(共13张PPT)

【写作思路】 细读所给的要点提示，我们可以提取以下信息： 1．在对人物印象进行描写时，多属记叙文或说明文，时 态多用一般现在时； 2．尽量用到所给的提示词汇； 3．切记勿逐句翻译，可适当发挥，注意去掉首尾段后的 字数要求。
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【范文展示】 My English teacher is Mr Zhang. He is about 40 years old. Mr Zhang is v often smiles while he is talking. When I have problems in study, he always encourages me. When I am ill, he takes good care of me, so he is like my father. What's more, he has helped lots of poor children for more than ten years so that they can have a chance to get a good education. I think my English teacher is a great hero. I will help others like him in the future. He sets a good example to us.
13、He who seize the right moment, is the right man.谁把握机遇，谁就心想事成。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/112021/9/119/11/2021 •14、谁要是自己还没有发展培养和教育好，他就不能发展培养和教育别人。2021年9月11日星期六2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11 •15、一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。2021年9月2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/119/11/2021 •16、教学的目的是培养学生自己学习，自己研究，用自己的头脑来想，用自己的眼睛看，用自己的手来做这种精神。2021/9/112021/9/11September 11, 2021 •17、儿童是中心，教育的措施便围绕他们而组织起来。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11
My Favorite Hero Jackie Chan is my favorite hero. He is one of the most famous film stars in China and in the world. Jackie Chan was born in Hong Kong in 1954. His family was poor when he was young. He studied in a drama school in Hong Kong for ten years.
【典型例题】 在学习和生活中，帮助你，影响你的人都可能会成为你 尊敬的英雄。假设你尊敬的英雄就是你的英语老师，请根据 下列要点写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 要点：1.英语老师大约40岁，耐心，友好，喜欢笑；2.学 习上，经常鼓励我；当我生病时，细心照顾我；3.十多年来， 一直在资助贫困的孩子们；4.……(补充1～2点对老师的评价 及感想)
话题写作实境运用
本模块写作话题是“英雄”。“英雄”这一话题充满正 能量，英雄存在于世界各地，也存在于我们身边。他们的事 迹广为流传，这些也是英语书面表达很好的素材，为此同学 们要多关注身边或世界各地的英雄及其事迹。关于英雄的命 题形式主要有：介绍对自己有深刻影响的英雄。写作中描写 英雄时往往涉及身材外貌、成长经历与他们的英雄事迹，常 用一般现在时或一般过去时等时态。
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Later, he became an actor. He makes action films more interesting and makes the world pay more attention to Chinese film today. He also likes to help others and he has helped lots of poor and sick people in the world. He loves life and he is a hardworking man. His films make him a hero.
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I think he is one of the most successful men in the world.
【训练二】 每个人心中都有英雄。假设你最尊敬的英雄是伟大的作 曲家贝多芬(Beethoven)，请根据下列信息介绍一下贝多芬。 要求书写工整，卷面整洁，80词左右，可适当发挥。 提示：贝多芬，著名作曲家(composer), 生于1770年德国 波恩(Bonn), 1792年搬到奥地利(Austria)的维也纳(Vienna), 向 约瑟夫·海顿(Joseph Haydn)学习作曲， 很快他就能自己谱曲。 但是他成功后便失聪了， 但他仍旧坚持谱曲。1827年， 他在 维也纳去世。
【训练一】 成龙是国内外著名的电影演员，他出演的很多电影都深 受人们的喜爱。假设你的英雄就是这位国际巨星，请以“My Favorite Hero”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 要求：1.简要描述成龙的成长经历；2.谈谈从他的经历中 你得到的启示。
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I like the famous composer Beethoven very much. Beethoven was born in Bonn, Germany, in 1770. In 1792, he moved to Vienna, Austria to study with Austrian composer Joseph Haydn. Soon Beethoven could play music that he wrote himself. But just as he was becoming successful, he started to lose his hearing. But he kept writing music. The music he wrote became even better. In 1827, he died in Vienna. I was deeply moved by Beethoven himself and his music.
• You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。
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提示：成龙，著名演员，生于1954年中国香港；小的时 候家境贫穷；在香港一家戏曲学校学习了十年；后来，他成 为了一名演员；他让动作片更加有趣，也让世界更加关注中 国电影；同时，他热爱生活，乐于助人，帮助许多贫穷的人 们。