13年一模开放作文阐述

Aim too high, failing to notice the opportunity nearby （好高骛远类）
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做事方式——全面片面类



take everything into consideration make all-sided analysis Look before you leap adopt suitable method

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分析每幅图片的矛盾点 讨论立意是否准确合理 5 6
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Take one-sided Stick to one approach without method, ignoring thinking the other alternatives consequences （方法变通类） （全面片面类） It is a suitable method and an attainable goal that truly matter.
开放作文做事方式类总复习
是否简明 是否表达准确 是否逻辑合理 是否结合图片 是否围绕立意联系实际 是否提出建议
如何判断立意的合理性
What is he doing? He is walking with a pair of much larger shoes on. much larger shoes What had he better do? However,he’d better wear a pair of smaller smaller shoes shoes. 主要矛盾是什么？ choosing a suitable way
如何联系实际？


In our daily life, we often make the same mistake. If we are willing to look for other possibilities, we can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve our goal. While, If we continue sticking to one method, we may pay twice the time with half the results. So, It is a flexible way that truly matters.
联系图片练习



Just like the man in the picture, he just focuses on the immediate benefit without noticing the potential danger. If he continues sawing the branch, he will end up falling down.反说——预测结果 If he sat on the other side of the branch, he would avoid falling and accomplish the task.
rigid, rigidity stick to one method ignore other alternatives get trapped
做事方式——好高骛远类

set a proper goal set a more realistic goal pursue one’s dream realize one’s dream
连接语 正说— 成功 反说— 失败 总结或 建议
联系实际句型
如果我们顾前不顾后…

正说：If we…., our work will be more fruitful If we…, we will gain what we’ve been longing for. 如果我们坚守一种方法… If we…, there is a great possibility that we find a 如果我们选择了超出能力的事情… much easier way, leading us directly to our goal If we…, we are bound to find a rewarding way to fulfill our dream. 反说：If we…, our endeavor will end up in failure. 如果我们全面分析问题… If we…, hard as we try, all efforts will be in vain. 如果我们设定可实现的目标… If we…, we are doomed to fail If we…, there is no doubt it may cause inconvenience 如果我们采取灵活的方式… as well as difficulties, even lead to failure.



take an one-sided approach to problems drive ahead without thinking the consequences focus on immediate benefit ignore potential danger
做事方式——方法变通类
开放作文阐述段


The picture conveys a message that it is of top 主旨 ） significance to do something in a correct way. （ Like the boy, if he puts on a pair of proper shoes, he will walk easily rather than lose his balance. （ ） 联系图片 In daily life, a right way sometimes matters more than our abilities, while a wrong one may cause inconvenience as well as difficulties, even lead to failure.（ ） 联系实际 Based on the statements above, it is the right approach that decides our achievement. Consequently, keep away from the incorrect way and find yourself the most proper one.（ 结论 ）
开放作文写作注意事项

找矛盾点——确定立意 简明描图 阐述立意 立意句 结合图片 结合实际 提出建议

flexible, flexibility creative, creativity effective, efficiency adjust oneself according to actual situation adopt different methods get twice the results with half the effort
如何联系图片


Just like the man in the picture, his biggest problem is his rigidity. If he were a bit more flexible 评价 and creative, he would find that one or two pieces of woods on the tricycle can easily make the bridge wide enough for him to cross. 正说——提出假设 Just like the girl in the picture, if he continues reaching the apple far above her without noticing those beneath her, obviously, he will end up falling down. 反说——预测结果
实战演练

You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.

ignore attainable goals choose things beyond one’s reach take risks end up in nothing
立意句翻译


We’d better take everything into consideration instead of focusing on immediate benefit, ignoring 我们最好全面考虑问题而不是只注重既得利益，忽 略了潜在危险。 the potential danger. In在追求梦想的路上，我们可能只专注于一种方式， pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one 忘记还有其他选择。 way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. If如果我们选择了超出能力的目标，我们会一无所获 end we choose a goal beyond our reach, we may up。我们应该定一个更现实的目标，避免冒太多风险 goal in nothing. We should set a more realistic 。 and avoid taking too much risk.