外研版初三英语上册Module 1-12作文写作提升

Module 1 Wonders of the world
☆写作提分点分析借鉴☆
【模块话题】介绍某处自然景观或人文景观
本模块的写作话题是介绍某处自然景观或人文景观，这是中考常考的一个话题。

要求学生能够对自己熟悉的某个景观进行事实性的描述;能够描写自己的旅行经历和个人感受。

⊙高频句式
1. I‘d like to tell you something about….我想告诉你关于…的一些情况。

2. It’s one of the… wonders…它是……的奇观之一。

3. The best time to visit it is…参观它的最佳时间是…
4. It lies in…它位于……
5.It’s… metres long and… metres wide.它有……米长…米宽。

Q典例剖析
假设几位外国友人准备去黄山( the Yellow Mountain)旅游，请根据以下要点向他们作简单的介绍。

1.黄山位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。

2.在山上可领略云海( the sea of clouds)、奇松( wondrous pines)、怪石( unique rocks)等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

写作模板
开篇点题--介绍黄山的特点、地点位置及游览人数众多等—famous，in the south of ，
thousands of.
展开表述--说明去黄山的交通方式、游览的最佳时间及景色等-- take a plane or a train. not
f ar from…，It takes…by
结尾评价--黄山是自然界的一个奇观--be worth visiting, a wonder of the natural world
【满分范文】（注意时态、人称）
The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui Province, Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners visit it. It is not far from our city. It takes you about three hours to go there by coach. You needn't take a plane or a train there. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.
The Yellow Mountain is worth visiting. The Yellow Mountain is really a wonder of the natural world. You can enjoy yourself here
借鉴提升
1.行文条理清晰
黄山的特点→地理位置→交通方式→黄山美景→黄山游览的评价
2.美词佳句
(1 )one of the most famous mountains
(2)lies in the south of…
(3)thousands of Chinese and foreigners
(4)not far from…
(5)It takes… to go... by
(6)take a plane or a train
(7)While you are climbing..., you can enjoy…
(8)When the sun rises. the sky looks…
(9)be worth visiting.
(10)a wonder of the natural world
(11)enjoy yourself
Module 2 Public holidays
☆写作提分点分析借鉴☆
【模块话题】介绍一个节日
本模块主要讲述了“公共假日”。

这种话题通常围绕一个节日展开:介绍节日的时间、风俗习惯、饮食等情况。

写这类文章时，可按“总一分一总”来安排文章的结构:时态以一般现在时为主;在文章的末尾，可表达下自己的观点和感受。

⊙高频句式
1. It is celebrated on…人们在…庆祝它(这个节日)。

2. The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese.春节对我们中国人来说是最重要的。

3. It‘s a time...这是一个…的时刻。

4. We usually…我们通常…
5. To welcome…,we do…为了迎接……我们做…
Q典例剖析
假设你叫大明，你的美国朋友Betty想了解一下中国的传统节日。

请你给她写一封信，介绍一下中国人是如何庆祝中秋节的。

提示:1.介绍中秋节的日期;2.介绍人们如何过中秋节。

Dear Betty，
How are you?
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Daming
写作模板
开篇点题--介绍中国的传统节日：中秋节--traditional Chinese festivels ：the Mid-Autumn
Festival.
展开表述--说明中秋节的日期及人们如何过这一传统节日-- comes in September or
October，get together,
enjoy the beautiful moon, a
big dinner, eat mooncakes 结尾语—希望外国朋友能来庆祝中秋节-- hope, come, celebrate, next year
【满分范文】（注意时态、人称）
Dear Betty,
How are you? You said that you wanted to know something about traditional Chinese festivals. Now let me tell you something about the Mid-autumn Festival.
The Mid-autumn Festival comes in September or October. It is a festival of good harvest. On the evening of it, the family usually get together and sit around a table outside and enjoy the beautiful moon. The moon looks brighter and rounders. On that day many families have a big dinner. We also eat mooncakes and fruit.
I hope you can come and celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival with us next year.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Daming
借鉴提升
1.文中You said that you wanted to know something about traditional Chinese festivals.用宾语从句说明来信的目的。

2.文中The moon looks brighter and rounders.用and连接形容词的比较级，强调月亮的特点。

3.文中On that day many families have a big dinner.用have a big dinner说明庆祝中秋节的盛况。

Module 3 Heroes
☆写作提分点分析借鉴☆
【模块话题】描述自己心目中的一位英雄
本模块的写作话题是“描述自己心目中的一位英雄”。

这种话题通常要求学生介绍一位伟人的生平。

在写作时，如果叙述的是过去发生的情况，应使用过去时，如果讲述的是现在的情况，应该使用现在时。

写作时，可按照时间顺序展开叙述，写作过程中可使用本模块所学的状语从句对事情的结果或原因进行讲述。

文章的末尾可提出自己的观点或看法。

⊙高频句式
1.He/ She was born in…他/她出生于…
2. He/ She is my hero because...他/她是我心目中的英雄是因为…
3.He/ She is so…that…他/她如此………以至于…
4. I can learn a lot from him/her.我能在他/她身上学到很多东西。

⊙典例部析
刘伟，无臂钢琴演奏者。

他10岁时在一次意外中失去双臂，但他并没有放弃成为一名钢琴家的梦想。

经过用脚刻苦练习弹琴，他最终在“中国达人秀”( China＇s Got Talen.)的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。

请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。

要求:1.简要描述刘伟的经历。

2.刘伟是我们学习的榜样，是我们学习的英雄，谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示。

3.词数80左右。

开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience.
写作模板
开篇点题—直接介绍人物—Liu Wei has…
展开叙述—简要陈述人物成名经历—He lost…but he didn’t give up….He tried to…;Finally he
realised …
结尾综述—阐述自己的观点；他是我心目中的英雄—My hero; have learnt a lot from; come
true; No matter how; unless
【满分范文】（注意时态、人称）
Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience.He lost his arms in an accident at the age of 10, but he didn't give up his dream of being a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realised his dream in China’s Got Talent. He is my hero, and I‘ve learnt a lot from his story. We may meet a lot of difficulties in or future life,but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard. No matter how hard our life is, we won't fail unless we give up our hope.
借鉴提升
1. an armless piano player做同位语，起补充说明的作用。

2.用at the age of这一固定短语强调了年龄。

3.用try to do sth.表达了他的决心和努力。

4.用no matter how引导让步状语从句说明作者实现梦想的决心。

Module 4 Home alone
☆写作提分点分析借鉴☆
【模块话题】讲述自己独自在家的经历
本模块的中心话题是“独自在家”。

这种话题通常讲述的是孩子独自在家的经历。

写这类文章时，可先交代事件的起因，然后按事件发生的先后顺序进行叙述：即独自在家时面对的问题和解决办法。

因为叙述的是过去的经历，时态应选用一般过去时，需要特别注意部分不规则动词的过去式的变化。

在文章结尾，可描述自己从这次经历中所获得的感想
⊙高频句式
1. My first experience at home alone was...我第一次独自在家的经历是…
2. At that time，I was…那时候，我…
3. Although I…，I prefer...尽管我……,但是我更喜欢…
4. On the first evening ,I…在第一天晚上，我…
5. In order to…，I...为了…，我,,,
6. I realised…我意识到…
7. I felt really proud of…我真的为…感到骄做。

⊙典例部析
每个人都有独自做某事的经历，这段经历新鲜刺激而难忘。

根据下面提供的信息，写一篇介绍自己独自在家的经历的短文。

要求:1.所提供的信息必须用上; 2.条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范;3.不少于70词。

第一次独自留在家里的经历令我难忘。

在我十二岁时，有一次父母都出差了，我独自在家待了两天。

第一天，我在他们离开不久后就起床了。

在第个晚上，我心里有点害怕，所以我打开了所有的灯。

我家里的灯亮了一夜。

担心第二天早上起不来，我在床附近设置了三个闹钟，分别在6:00，6:10和6:15响。

第二天下午，我自己洗了衣服并做了饭。

我为自己感到骄傲。

写作模板
开篇点题—My first day at home alone was unforgettable.
主要活动—1、On the morning of the first day,…;2、On the first evening,..;3、…the next morning..
4、…the second afternoon
表达感受及心情—I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.
【满分范文】（注意时态、人称）
My first experience at home alone was unforgettable.
When I was twelve, one day, both of my parents were away on business, and I stayed two days at home all by myself. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I kept the lights on the whole night .In order not to get up late the next morning, I set the alarm for 6.00,6.10 and 6. 15. In order to show that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes and cooked dinner in the second afternoon, though I could wait for Mother to do it
I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.
借鉴提升
1.按照时间顺序介绍经历，思路清晰，上下文衔接自然、流畅。

用多种句式来表达，增强了文章的层次性。

2. 文中unforgettable，on business，in order not to，take care of，feel proud of等单词和短语的运用恰到好处，为文章增色不少。

Module 5 Museum
☆写作提分点分析借鉴☆
【模块话题】如何写以“museum”为话题的作文
本模块以“Museums”为话题，告诉我们在公共场所应遵守的一些规定。

该话题与日常生活联系紧密，写作时，要注意以下几个方面：
1.介绍场馆的位置和概况。

2.介绍游客可以进行的活动。

3.提醒游客需要注意的事项。

⊙高频句式
1. It lies/ is located..它位于…
2. You can..., such as…你可以…，例如…
3. However, it’s important to behave well in…然而，在……举止得体是重要的。

4. …isn’t allowed.………是不允许的。

5. You should/ are supposed to…你应该…
6. Remember to…记得…
7. Moreover/ What’s more…还有…
⊙典例部析
请根据以下提示,写一篇题为“The Military Museum of China＂的短文。

提示:1、它位于北京天安门附近，馆内有不同时期、不同地方的武器( weapon)。

times and
2、每年有成千上万来自世界各地的人来这里参观。

3.馆内禁止大声喧哗，严禁触摸展品，严禁拍照，不许吸烟，不许奔跑。

4.在馆内可以购买明信片。

The Military Museum of China
写作模板
开篇点题—开门见山介绍某一参观场所--- one of....,visit…
正文—用一些常见的表示禁止的语句来告诉人们在参观时应该做什么和不应该做什么—must obey …must n‘t，are not allowed to，can‘t. can
结尾—进一步重申遵守这些规定的重要性--- learn more about …,Important
【满分范文】（注意时态、人称）
The Military Museum of China
The Military Museum of China is near Tian’anmen Square. It's one of the most popular museums in Beijing.Thousands of people all over the world visit it every year.There they can see lots of interesting weapons from different times and places.
The Military Museum of China is a very serious place.You must obey some rules when you visit it. For example,you mustn't shout or run. You are not allowed to touch the exhibits. And you can't smoke or take photos. But you can buy postcards of the museum for your friends To let more people learn more about the Military Museum of China, obeying the rules of it is very important.
借鉴提升
本文是一篇介绍参观场所的文章，作者分为三个环节：
1.简要概括该参观场所(第一段);
2.告诉人们在参观时应该做什么和不应该做什么(第二段);
3.说明遵守这些规则的重要性(第三段)。

本文用多种句式来表达，增强了文章的层次性。

恰当运用本模块所学知识重点描述了中国军事博物馆中所要遵守的一些规定。

Module 6 Problems
☆写作提分点分析借鉴☆
【模块话题】如何写以“problems”为话题的作文
本模块以“Problems＂”为话题，讲述了青少年在成长过程中遇到的一些问题，要求学生能正视问题、解决问题。

通过本模块的学习,学生应学会描述问题并给出解决方法。

⊙高频句式
1. It’s not necessary to worry about… 没有必要担心…
2. I'd like to share my ideas, which I think might help
我想分享我的想法，我认为这可能会有所帮助。

3. If you……,you can……… 如果你……,你会……
4. It’s better(not) to do sth. 最好(不)做某事。

⊙典例部析
在我们青少年的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。

请用英文写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大的问题或烦恼；
2.你解决问题或烦恼的过程;
3.你的感想。

要求:1.词数:80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

My teenage life is colorful. During the school year, not only do I have happy times, but I
have many kinds of problems. My biggest problem is
写作模板
引出话题—写出自己遇到的问题或烦恼--- have too much homework, seem endless, stay
up late, feel tired
--- deal with, concentrate on, as quickly
as possible, spend less time
简要总结—写出自已的感想---practice makes perfect, be active to face problems
【满分范文】（注意时态、人称）
My teenage life is colorful. During the school year, not only do I have happy times, but I have many kinds of problems. My biggest problem is that I have too much homework .Homework seems endless. It always makes me stay up late and I feel very tired every day, but I know the teachers are expecting us to be better.
How can I deal with the problem? On the one hand, I should concentrate more on my study in class. On the other hand，I should do the homework as quickly as possible. Now, I spend less time on my homework. and I am not frustrated any more.
As we all know, practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can't help. Instead, we should be active to face our problems.
借鉴提升
◆本文是一篇讲述自己遇到的问题或麻烦的文章，包含三个步骤:
1.引出话题，写出自己遇到的问题或麻烦(第一段)。

2.详细描写自己解决该问题或麻烦的办法(第二段)。

3. 写出自己的感想(第三段)。

◆本文添彩点: not only…but…,On the one hand……On the other hand……,Complaining or waiting can't help.
Module 7 Great books
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【模块话题】如何写以“介绍名人、名著”为话题的作文
本模块以谈论名人、名著为话题。

而最能全面体现模块话题及语言运用能力的话题作文就是“谈论最喜欢的书”，这可以使学生巩固所学知识并能灵活运用所学知识进行语言输出。

写作时注意以下几个方面：
1.首先要介绍喜爱的书名、作者及主要人物。

2.介绍喜爱的原因及内容(简要介绍)。

3.阅读后的收获及感悟。

⊙高频句式
1. The book I like best/ My favourite book is…我最喜欢的一本书是…
2. It is written by…它是由…创作的。

3.This book tells about…这本书讲述了…
4. The main character(s) in this book is/are…这本书中的主要人物是…
5. I like the book because...我喜欢这本书,因为…
6. It tells us…它告诉我们…
7. We can learn… from the book.我们可以从书中学到…
8. I think we should…我认为我们应该…
⊙典例部析
请以“My favourite book＂为题，写一篇80词左右的英语作文，简要介绍一下你喜欢的书，并阐述你喜欢这本书的原因。

提示:如果你喜欢的书是Harry Potter，下面的内容可能会对你有帮助:1.作者:J.K. Rowling;2.故事很长，但有趣;3.Harry很勇敢,勇于与敌人抗争。

写作模板
开篇点题—写明你最喜欢的那本书--- I like……best/ My favourite book is……
--- ……written by……,……describes……
发表感悟—喜爱这本书的原因及感悟---……for many reasons. First…Second…
【满分范文】（注意时态、人称）
My Favourite Book
I enjoy reading different kinds of books, but Harry Potter Is my favourite. It was written by
a British woman writer, J. K. Rowling. The book describes a brave and clever boy named Harry Potter.
I like this book best for many reasons. The story is very long but I am interested in it. First of all. the main character, Harry Potter dares to fight against powerful enemies. Secondly, his Z-shaped scar and magic stick bring me into a magical world. In fact, the story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. The book helped me work out many difficulties in my life. I think it's the best book I've ever read. If you haven't read it yet, you’d better read it now.
借鉴提升
◆本文是一篇写自己最喜欢的书的文章，主要包含4个步骤
1.介绍这本书的书名和作者(第一段第1-2句)。

2.介绍这本书的主角(第一段第3句)。

3.具体介绍自己喜欢这本书的原因(第二段第3-6句)。

4.自己的阅读感悟(第二段第7-8句)。

◆本文的添彩点:文章的时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点衔接紧密，行文连贯，使用许多好的短语，如: enjoy doing，kinds of，for many reasons，be interested in，fight against，bring…into，work out等;好的句子结构,如: First of all…,Secondly…,In fact…, s o…that, I think…等，语言简洁，结构合理。

Module 8 Sports life
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【模块话题】如何写以“体育运动”为话题的作文
本模块主要讲述了“体育运动”。

这种话题通常围绕人们日常的体育锻炼展开。

写这类文章时，可按时间顺序介绍自己一天的体育活动安排，然后介绍一下自己最喜欢的体育活动。

在结尾可总结一下体育运动对自己的影响。

文章中可适当借鉴本模块Unit2中出现的经典句型。

⊙高频句式
1. In the morning，I usually… 在早上,我通常…
2. After breakfast, I... 早饭后,我…
3. At school, I… 在学校，我…
4. …is my favourite sport. I also join in… ……是我最喜欢的运动。

我还参加了……
5. I’ have never been… 我从未……
6. After supper, I often... 晚饭后,我经常…
7. I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic/ full of energy.我喜欢体育运动,它使我健康、强壮且充满活力。

⊙典例部析
根据下面的资料写一篇有关李娜的短文，不少于80词。

1.李娜1982年2月26日出生于湖北省武汉市。

2.六岁时，在父亲的影响下，开始练习打羽毛球。

3.1997年，加入国家网球队。

2002年底，在华中科技大学学习。

4.2014年1月25日，获得澳网公开赛女子单打冠军( Australian Open women＇s singles title)，这是她继2011年法网登顶后再次夺得大满贯赛冠军，也是亚洲人首度夺得澳网单打冠军。

My favourite sportswoman
写作模板
基本情况介绍—姓名、性别、职业等--- a famous…tennis player, the symbol
of…
个人成就介绍—成长经历、主要成就或事迹---was born on…,at the age of…,won…
评价—喜爱、敬佩---are proud of…
【满分范文】（注意时态、人称）
My Favourite sportswoman
My favourite sportswoman is Li Na, a famous professional tennis player. She is also the symbol of China's sporting success.
Li Na was born on February 26, 1982 in Wuhan, Hubei, China. At the age of six, Li Na started playing badminton, following his father’s footsteps. She joined China’s National Tennis Team in 1997. At the end of 2002,she studied at Huazhong University of Science and Technolgy. She won the 2014 Australian Open women's singles title on January 25, 2014 and became the champion to win a Grand Slam again after she had already won the 2011 French Open women's singles title. She becomes the first player from an Asian country to win thee Australian Open singles title.
Li Na is one of the greatest Chinese tennis players and we are proud of her because of her good performance.
借鉴提升
1.本文分三步介绍了自己最喜欢的体育明星。

第一段简单介绍了明星的基本情况，第二段详细描写了她的成长经历及主要事迹，第三段进行了总结评价。

2.文章结构完整，脉络清晰。

语言流畅，语法准确。

3.恰当运用了本模块所学的the symbol of，Asian，be proud of等单词和短语。