(英语)初三英语书面表达技巧(很有用)及练习题含解析(1)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
你看过中央电视台董卿主持的节目《朗读者》吗？这是一档非常受欢迎的节目，让我们看到生活中读书的美好、读书的重要。

请根据下面表格中所列的要点，以“Growing Up with Reading”为题写一篇短文。

要求：1．语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2．短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；
3．词数80词左右；文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

【答案】Have you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life.
Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy.
Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.
Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games
online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a reading habit.
Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading become a part of our life!
【解析】试题分析：本文是材料作文，也是话题作文，话题是“读书伴我成长”，以“Growing Up with Reading（读书伴我成长）”为题写一篇短文。

根据内容提示可知本文使用的时态有一般现在时。

写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。

（一）列提纲，本文给词的要点就是提纲，把要点中的重要短语翻译成英文：the beauty and the importance/ get knowledge/ open our minds/ makes us confident and happy/ proper books that can improve ourselves/ read in a right way/ think about more/ spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time/ develop a reading habit./ Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading become a part of our life!；（二）根据提纲连词成句，连句成篇，注意连词的使用。

（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。

点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。

（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。

（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。

（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。

2．（·四川中考模拟）近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。

雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。

请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：
1. 雾霾的危害
2. 雾霾产生的原因（2个）
3. 应对雾霾的措施（3个）
提示：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒的
注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。

首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。

其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。

最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。

还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。

3．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
年济南市入选全国文明城市。

为巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。

请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。

要求： 1.词数100个左右。

2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.
【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.
First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need. Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.
Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.
Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.
We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!
【解析】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

为使济南市入选全国文明城市，巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该规范自己的言行举止。

要求根据所给出的提示，写一篇短文。

根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称。

本文给出的材料比较具体全面，考生需要用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，并可进行适当想象发挥。

写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写，注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。

最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

4．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假设你校正开展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大讨论活动，请你结合生活实际写一封英语小短文介绍有关情况，以帮助他人安全、文明地使用网络。

短文内容包括以下几个方面：
1、网络使用的利弊。

2、介绍如何安全、文明地使用网络的几条规则。

如，和家长有所约定，不向strangers透露（give out）真实的个人信息，不单独和net friend见面，使用文明语言，等等。

3、希望……
要求：1、词数不少于100。

2、信中须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

3、文章中不要出现真实的校名和人名。

At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet.
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【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.
Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone w e meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others.
I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.
【解析】试题分析：
本篇作文是一篇小议论文，主要讨论如何正确使用网络的方式。

写作中学生需要紧密贴合题干中已经给出的要点：网络使用的利弊，利弊都要写出。

介绍如何安全、文明地使用网络的几条规则。

题干中给出了例子，如，和家长有所约定，不向陌生人透露真实的个人信息，不单独和网友见面，使用文明语言，等等。

学生可以在这个基础上整理自己的语言，罗列出规则，可以借助实用的祈使句结构。

最后收尾要写出自己的希望。

写作亮点：
这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

文章脉络清晰，自然流畅，首先完整介绍了网络使用的利弊。

如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。

第二段介绍了几条规则，恰当运用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。

最后结尾提出了倡议，结构完整，段落清晰。

5．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（B）图示作文：根据图画内容，展开想象，写一篇小短文。

小安是一名初三的学生，运动让他的生活发生了巨大的变化。

请根据所给图画，展开适当的联想，完成下面的短文。

要求：（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。

（2）词数在80〜100词之间。

（3）要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

【答案】Sport makes a difference
Xiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.
He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award.
Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于图画作文，表达运动让小安的生活发生了巨大的变化。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容词原级+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

6．（·江苏泰州中学附属初中中考模拟）请根据下表中的信息用英文介绍你的好友Lily。

要求条理清楚，语句通顺，可做适当发挥。

词数100字左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.
【答案】My good friend
I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.
She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.
She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.
She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her. She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made
his mother very happy.
She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She
said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。

而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.等
复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

7．（·陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟）假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，在步入
高中学校学习之际，你思绪万千。

请你根据下面的提示，写一封信表达你对老师由衷的感激。

提示：1. 生活上的照顾 2.精种上的支持 3. 学习上的帮助要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、班级）
4. 词数：不少于 80 词。

（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

） Dear teachers,
My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, I'd like to show my thanks to you for what you’ve done to me these years.
【答案】My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, I'd like to show my thanks to you for what you’ve done to me these years. You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me. I'm very grateful. When I encounter difficulties, you always encourage me to face them bravely and help solve them. You supports me in sperm. when I have difficulties in studying , You are always willing to help me.
【解析】
【详解】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。

注意文章文体、人称和时态。

要求介绍。

同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【点睛】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。

如：You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me.给文中增色不少。

8．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
“文明是一面镜子，折射出一座城市的品质”。

西安作为一座古老的城市在创建国际化大都市的过程中，离不开精神文明建设。

在你身边有哪些不文明现象？作为中学生，我们应该从哪些方面做起，为文明城市的建设出一份力？请根据提示词，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”为题，号召全体中学生共创美好西安。

提示词：spit 吐痰； respect; traffic rules; volunteer; collect the trash; plant trees; clean the streets; an enviro nmental project….
要求：1. 不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。

Let’s help Xi’an be better
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we
find_____________
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【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be bette r
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer wor k to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们阐述身边的不文明现象，并阐述我们应该如何做，为文明城市的建设出一份力。

题目中只给出了话题和一些提示词，具体的写作内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力，进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。

需要注意题目中给出的提示词在文章中必须要用上，可以根据表达需要调整顺序。

写作时，学生们可以根据提示词，或联想自己的实际生活，列举身边的不文明现象，然后对创建文化城市提出自己的看法。

审题可知，短文应以一般现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。

写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。

为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。

同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目提示，介绍了自己身边的不文明现象，并对中学生如何创建文明城市贡献自己的力量提出了自己的看法。

短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，且叙述完整，内容充实。

文章内容分成两个部分：第一部分列举了一些不文明现象；第二部分介绍了为创建文明城市，中学生应该怎么做。

层次清晰，结构合理。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。

句式结构完整，以简单句为主，叙述清楚、简洁。

短文中的一些好的句型和短语有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。

9．（·辽宁中考模拟）现在手机是人们生活的必需品，在给我们提供便利的同时，也有很
多负面作用。

很多人成了“手机控”。

请你根据要求谈谈对自己的看法：
1. 手机的正面作用；
2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；
3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。

【答案】 Phones can help us communicate more easily and know about what's happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇开放性话题作文，针对很多人成了“手机控”这一现象，结合自己的亲身经历，谈
一谈自己的观点。

考生首先要阅读前面的提示去认真审题，确定出文章的中心，用一般现在时态来表达。

要求从三个方面去完成写作：1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。

需要自由发挥的地方较多，比如手机的正面作用可以写有
利于我们的沟通与交流，通过上网了解世界上所发生的事情，手机的负面作用可以写手机对健康的危害，对学生学习的影响等等。

最后总结并发出呼吁。

另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

10．（·浙江中考模拟）
如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。

请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？
句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】
It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

11．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
今天早上你目睹了一起事件（下图），你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文，向你校英语报社投稿。

短文内容如下：
1. 描述亊件。

2. 发表你的想法。

要求：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

3. 100个词汇左右。

参考词汇：lift…up扶起，knock…down撞倒，trust信任
Mother Stops Him
_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态，主要是第一人称，句型以简单句为主。

写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。

【点睛】
本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：The old woman fell to the ground and could not
move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。

所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有
逻辑性,更富有条理.
12．（·天津中考模拟）手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文：
1. 去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；
2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦虑；
3. 昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；
4. 你的建议……
参考词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对……入迷要求：
1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥
Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was
【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.
In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

13．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是王梅，有一个弟弟/妹妹一直是你的梦想，去年你家里添
了一个弟弟/妹妺，你非常开心，请根据内容要点，写一封电子邮件给你的笔友李蕾，和她分享你的快乐，告诉她你的变化。

（ brother， sister任选其一）
内容要点: （1）我一直想有个弟弟、妹妹；。