2020版高考英语突破三轮复习新课标通用写作规范练(四)

2020版高考英语突破三轮复习新课标通用写作规范练(四)
(建议用时：35分钟)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
(2019·成都第二次诊断)Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Mount Huang. We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I am not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the safe and comfortab le ground. But my friend encouraged me great.“Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.”I pulled me together and kept going. After three­hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.
第二节书面表达(满分25分)
(2019·洛阳、许昌第一次检测)假定你是李华，外国交换生Tony想参加你校的社团以学习中国文化。

请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．校社团情况介绍；
2．活动的时间、地点；
3．报名方法。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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写作规范练(四)
第一节 短文改错
Last year, my friend and I went to visit the Mount Huang. We carried two
backpacks, that ①which turned out to be pretty heavier ②heavy
for the hike. I am not an experiencing ③experienced hiker and those endless steps make ④made
me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great ⑤greatly
.“Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there.” I pulled me ⑥myself
together and kept going. After ∧ ⑦a
three ­hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries ⑧scenery on the way, we got to the top finally. For ⑨To
our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very ⑩much ＼
inviting.
①that 改为which 。

考查定语从句。

分析句子结构可知，此处是一个非限制性定语从句，先行词是backpacks ，应用which 引导该非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语。

②heavier 改为heavy 。

考查形容词。

分析句子结构可知，此处pretty 是副词，相当于very ，并没有比较的含义，故用形容词原级即可。

故将heavier 改为heavy 。

③experiencing 改为experienced 。

考查形容词。

根据句意可知，此处表示“我不是一个经验丰富的远足者”，应用experienced “经验丰富的，有经验的”。

④make 改为made 。

考查动词的时态。

由上文中的“Last year”可知，事情发
生在过去。

故用一般过去时。

⑤great改为greatly。

考查副词。

一般用副词修饰动词，在句子中作状语，故用greatly修饰动词encouraged。

⑥me改为myself。

考查反身代词。

由与句子的主语I呼应可知，此处应用I的反身代词myself作动词pull的宾语，pull oneself together表示“使自己振作起来”。

⑦在After后加a。

考查冠词。

hike是可数名词，被“three-hour exhausting”修饰，表示“一次三个小时的令人筋疲力尽的远足”，且three-hour的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a修饰。

⑧sceneries改为scenery。

考查名词。

scenery是不可数名词，没有复数形式。

⑨For改为To。

考查固定搭配。

表示“令某人快乐的是”应用to one’s pleasure，介词to在此表示“某事发生时某人的反应”。

⑩删除much。

考查副词。

very是副词，可修饰形容词，在句子中作状语，而much是副词，一般修饰形容词的比较级，此处修饰形容词inviting应用副词very，故删除much。

第二节书面表达
One possible version：
Dear Tony，
I’m glad to learn that you’re interested in our school clubs. Here are the brief introductions. There are four clubs with the themes of Chinese culture for lovers of kung fu, cooking, paintings and handwriting in our school. Each club provides regular training courses. The clubs can not only enrich your knowledge of Chinese traditional culture, but also make your school life colorful and interesting. The activities start at 3：00 p．m. and last 1.5 hours every Friday in Teaching Building 1. If you are interested in any club above, just sign up on our school website before 18th, October. Welcome to join us.
Yours，
Li Hua。