(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)及解析.docx

（英语）九年级上册英语书面表达解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)
及解析
一、英语书面表达
1．面表达
假定你是李，最近你班就低碳生活方式行了，你的英国朋友Peppa 向你来信情况。

你用英写封回信，介以下果：
1．水．2．垃圾分3．少用巾，重拾手帕
4．步行、自行或公交出行、
参考： low carbon 低碳； tissue 巾
数： 100 左右。

开和尾已你写好，不入数。

Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is
something about it ．
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_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is
something about it ．
’ d better turn off We can do a lot in our dai ly life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we
lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also
matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some,
which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of
tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go
out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a
cleaner world.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
是一篇材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa 写信，介我班就低碳生活方式行的
情况。

【解】
合所材料，可知本文主要考一般在，人称第一，三人称，注意主一致
，句子构主要系表构，注意一些常句式的用，比如：We can do⋯⋯， we’d
better ⋯⋯，we suggest⋯⋯，which contribu tes to⋯⋯等句式的用。

写作中注意运用代，注
意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述序，符合关系。

【点睛】
本文构凑，言。

开我要介我班就低碳生活方式行了，接下来介
我低碳生活可以做的事。

此ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等些的运用也文章增色不少。

2．面表达
暑假即将来 ,于如何安排孩子初中后的第一个假期 ,家和孩子自己有着各自的想法。

根据下表提
示 ,写一篇英短文 ,描述他的不同看法 ,同表你自己暑假安排的点。

Parents' opinions Get ready for high school. Do some housework⋯
Kid's opinions Have a good rest. Do some sightseeing⋯
Your opinion⋯
注意 ]
（1）表格中的点供参考 ,允适当 ;
（2）开已出 ,不入数 ;
（3）文中不得出真姓名和校名等信息;
（4）数 :不少于 80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
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【答案】 How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the
kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.
【解析】
【解】
是一篇材料作文，本文已出了主要写作要点，笔前要先真要点，然后
要点适当．写作中，注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；合材料内
容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般在行叙述．言的表述符合法的
构，造句符合英的表达．适当使用，做到上下文系密，符合关
系．
【点睛】
篇短文用到了一些好的句型： They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills.
But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their
friends to go sightseeing. 些文章增色不少。

3．面表达
根据下列表格的提示，写一篇Changes in Our Hometown 的英短文．（80 左右）
文章内容必包含所的所有信息．开已出，不入数．
内容要点：
去在
1旧房1高楼
2河水2河水清澈（ clean and clear）．
3步行、自行上班3乘公交、小汽上班
4道路狭窄（ narrow ）．4街道（ wide ），干整
5居住条件（ living conditions ）差5生活越来越好，境（ environment ）越来越舒适．
6你的感想⋯（写两到三句）
Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years ， great changes have taken place in our hometown ．
【答案】 Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be
old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible.
People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in
our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water.
There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is
more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
’ s still important to remembe I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it
the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如
take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go to do ， on foot ， by bike，better and better ， more and more 等。

而 I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life. 等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，
是本文的最大亮点。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。

4．假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy 想要感受中国的传统文化。

周末你和父
母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。

你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时
何地见面。

提示词语： Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate
提示问题： Where are you going?
What will you do there?
When and where will you meet?
【答案】 Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese
traditional culture there. Let’ s meet at the gate of Laoshe TeahouseSeeat8:30,you. OK?【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy 要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何
地见面。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓
一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want
to ⋯⋯， We are going to ，⋯⋯We can ⋯⋯， Let ’ s meet at 等句⋯⋯式的用。

写作中注意运用代，注
意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述序，符合关系。

点睛：本文构凑，言。

开介了我想要邀你去老舍茶，接下来介我
去那里做什么，最后指出我要在何何地面。

此want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do
sth, at the gate of 等些的运用也文章增色不少。

5．了宣和弘中秀文化, 某双志将征文活来介中国的典故事,
“程立雪（ Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully ）”是其中一个。

你根据下面
的内容提示 , 用英写一篇短文参加此活。

内容提示：
1.去拜老程一老在睡一在雪地等一老醒来在口
2.通介个故事 , 表你的看法或者点。

要求：
1.可以适当增加 , 以使行文：数： 100 左右 .
2.不得在作文中出学校的真名称、老和同学的真姓名。

【答案】 Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher,
Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was slee ping in the room. He didn’ t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it
was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher
woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.
【解析】
【解】
是一篇材料作文，主要介中国的典故事, 程“ 立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for
Master Cheng respectfully ）”。

目的是宣和弘中秀文化。

一般去，灵活运用的去式。

作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通介个故事，表看法或
者点。

写作，避免式英。

注意固定搭配及主一致的，例如:There was/ were... 注意上下文系密，符合关系，具有条理性。

6．假你是Beth,前段曾向英校刊投送一篇My English Teacher Miss Zhang 的短。

近日，又至季，生忙着互致言。

此，部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher” ，邀你以信件的形式重新投稿。

短如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。

3.词数在 70 个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：
4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

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【答案】 Dear Editorial Office,
I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher ． She is Miss Zhang.
She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look
smart ． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours ． She is kind and helpful ， too ． She always helps us with our study ． She loves jogging， so she looks
healthy ． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001 ． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death ． I really love her and I want to
be a teacher like her in the future ． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．
I hope that you agree with me ．
Yours sincerely，
Beth,【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher专栏”，邀请你以信件的形
式重新投稿。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，
考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要
点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心
突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确
保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正
确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个
要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与
段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文
章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检
查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。

提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80 岁。

目前数量在减少，因为：
1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；
2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。

3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。

要求： 1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80 词左右。

倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词
数。

参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙 ivory
Dear classmates
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________
I believe everyone's contribution（贡献）can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【答案】 Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now
the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill
elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone's contribution（贡献）can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【解析】
【详解】
本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。

文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所
的状，然后明出种状况的原因，最后了保的大象我如何去做。

主要一般在。

提出倡可以使用We can/ We should/ Let ’s/We’d better的表示建
的句子。

写作注意不要使用太复的句型，以免出法，使句子具有性，
可以适当使用。

本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest
mamm als⋯,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比和最高； Firstly,⋯ .
Secondly,等⋯的使用使文章具有次性，条理清晰。

并且一些的使用，比如so, or,
but 等也使文章具有性，是一篇不的文章。

8．在智能手机（ smartphone ）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。

你根据下面的提示，写
一篇不少于 80 的英短文，一你智能手机的看法，可适当。

提示： 1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？
2、智能手机你的生活生了怎的影响？
3、你中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？
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【答案】例文： The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a
smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music
and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful.
However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the
smartphone and get bad results in exams.
’ t use them too much .We So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don
should pay more attention to our studies.
【解析】
【解】
是一篇材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英短文，一你智能手机的看
法。

文章主要用一般在，人称主要用第一、第三人称。

首先真，看清目
中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然
后扣要点，笔写作。

在写作，注意句成篇，保持文章的性，要次清楚，要
点分明，中心突出。

同要注意言的表述符合法的构，造句符合英的表
达；尽量使用自己熟悉的句式，最好不要写太的复合句；尽量取的易拼
写的，确保正确率；、句式要丰富多，可以文章增色添彩。

最后要心复核，确保正确无。

9．面表达
感受母情深，弘知恩，某英网站正在以"My Mother"主的征文活，
根据下列思所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介你的母和你之的故事。

参考： give much to ⋯， It's my turn to ⋯， try my best to ⋯
提示：
1）短文内容包括所内容，含母曾你所做的事和你将母所做的事各一件，并述原因；
2）注意短文构次、运用和卷面整度；
3）数 80 个左右，短文开已出，不入数；
4）文中不得出学校和个人的相关信息。

My Mother
We need love ．We also need to show love ． The person I love most is my
mother ． ___．
【答案】 My mother
We need love ．We also need to show love ． The person I love most is my mother ． My mother is
41 years old． She is of medium build with long black hair ． She is quiet ．She is a history teacher in
a middle school ． She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food ．
She did a lot for me when I was a child ．She bought whatever I needed for my study ， even though she didn't have much money ． She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend． She cooked delicious and healthy food for me ．
When I grow up ， I will do what I can to make my mother happy ． I will find a good job after I graduate from college ．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young． I'll take her to wonderful sights around China ． Most importantly ， I will stay with her
when I have free time ． That's what she wants most ， I think ．
【解析】
【解】
是一篇材料作文。

感受母情深，弘知恩，要求以"My Mother" 主写一篇
短文介你的母和你之的故事，参加某英网站正在的征文活。

在写作，注
意文章文体、人称和；注意句成篇，保持文章的性，要次清楚，要点分明，
中心突出。

同要注意言的表述符合法的构，造句符合英的表达；
尽量使用自己熟悉的句式，最好不要写太的复合句；尽量取的易拼写的，确保正确
率；、句式要丰富多，可以文章增色添彩。

【点睛】
首先真，看清目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点
中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

10．书面表达
“ Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.
----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“ Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies. ----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》
“ We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人） . ”
----President Xi Jingping ”
”
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。

但既然选择了远方，
便只顾风雨兼程。

所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。

请以
Dream Chaser 为题，谈谈你自己的观点。

要点提示：
1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；
2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；
3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；
4.补充自己的观点。

写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________【答案】 As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。

主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学
习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。

2.例文点：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；采用一般在主，主要述如何
自己的目（Firstly,⋯More importantly,⋯Besides,⋯Finally,）。

承接⋯文章开，句意完整，避免式英，叙述条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：
高分短： feel satisfied ；feel upset ； come true ；set a practical goal； both ⋯and⋯； keep
patient 。

高分句型： It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth. ； there be 句型；祈使句；need to do sth. 。