Unit 4 SharingB卷-2017-2018学年高二英语同步单元双基双测“AB”卷选修7 含解析 精品

班级姓名学号分数
Unit 4 Sharing能力提升卷（B卷）
（测试时间：60分钟满分：100分）
评卷人得分
I. 阅读理解（30）
A
(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)
If you are a fruit grower—or would like to become one—take advantage of Apple Day to see what's around. It's called Apple Day but in practice it's more like Apple Month. The day itself is on October 21, but since it has caught on, events now spread out over most of October around Britain.
Visiting an apple event is a good chance to see, and often taste, a wide variety of apples. To people who are used to the limited choice of apples such as Golden Delicious and Royal Gala in supermarkets, it can be quite an eye opener to see the range of classical apples still in existence, such as Decio which was grown by the Romans. Although it doesn't taste of anything special, it's still worth a try, as is the knobbly (多疙瘩的) Cat's Head which is more of a curiosity than anything else.
There are also varieties developed to suit specific local conditions. One of the very best varieties for eating quality is Orleans Reinette, but you'll need a warm, sheltered place with perfect soil to grow it, so it's a_pipe_dream for most apple lovers who fall for it.
At the events, you can meet expert growers and discuss which ones will best suit your conditions, and because these are family affairs, children are well catered for with apple­themed fun and games.
Apple Days are being held at all sorts of places with an interest in fruit, including stately gardens and commercial orchards (果园). If you want to have a real orchard experience, try visiting the National Fruit Collection at Brogdale, near Faversham in Kent.
1．What can people do at the apple events?
A．Attend experts' lectures.
B．Visit fruit­loving families.
C．Plant fruit trees in an orchard.
D．Taste many kinds of apples.
2．What can we learn about Decio?
A．It is a new variety.
B．It has a strange look.
C．It is rarely seen now.
D．It has a special taste.
3．What does the underlined phrase “a pipe dream” in Paragraph 3 me an?
A．A practical idea.
B．A vain hope.
C．A brilliant plan.
D．A selfish desire.
4．What is the author's purpose in writing the text?
A．To show how to grow apples.
B．To introduce an apple festival.
C．To help people select apples.
D．To promote apple research.
答案与解析
本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了英国10月21日的苹果节的相关情况。

届时，人们可以观赏、品尝到多种品种的苹果。

1．D 细节理解题。

根据关键句可知，在苹果节的活动上，人们可以品尝到许多不同品种的苹果。

故选D。

2．C 推理判断题。

根据关键句可推知，Decio苹果如今很罕见。

故选C。

4．B 写作意图题。

通读全文可知，本文主要介绍了英国10月21日的苹果节的相关情况。

届时，人们可以观赏、品尝到多种品种的苹果，甚至还有幸可以见到一些仍然存在的稀有品种；由此可知，本文旨在向读者介绍苹果节的相关信息。

故选B。

【名师点睛】
下面介绍一些词义猜测题的解题技巧。

1.根据定义或上下文解释进行猜测
有时短文中出现一个需要猜测其意义的词或短语，下面接着出现其定义或解释，这就是判断该词或短语意义的主要依据。

例如：It will be very hard but also very brittle—that is, it will break easily.从后面that is(也就是说)的解释中我们可以了解到brittle 是“脆”的意思。

2.B 词义猜测题。

根据本句Come up with a catchy headline that will grasp someone's attention.可知是要想出一个能够吸引
人们注意力的标题，因此标题肯定要吸引人，故选B。

2.根据同位关系进行猜测
阅读中出现的难词有时后面紧跟一个同位语，对前面的词进行解释，这时可利用同位关系对前面或后面的词义或句意进行猜测。

例如：The “Chunnel”, a tunnel(隧道) connecting England and France, is now complete.此句中a tunnel connecting England and France是Chunnel的同位语。

因此，The “Chunnel”就是英法之间的海底隧道。

4.根据转折或对比关系进行猜测
根据上下句的连接词，如but, however, otherwise等就可以看到前后句在意义上的差别，从而依据某一句的含义，来确定另一句的含义。

另外，分号也可以表示转折、对比或不相干的意义。

例如：A child’s birthday party doesn’t have to be a hassle; it can be a basket of fun.从前后两句的意思可以看出，hassle和a basket of fun肯定是近乎相反的意义。

所以不难判断hassle的意思是“困难，麻烦”。

考点：说明文阅读。

B
(2017·贵州省铜仁市第一中学测试)
I wish there would be a way to describe China in simple terms but that's impossible. For the most part Chinese people are friendly, easygoing and optimistic. They are curious and unusually patient and they are also the hardest working people I have ever met.
In China, family is everything. In my English classes when the students were asked what they would do if they only had a few hours to live, most students told me how they would spend their last few hours with their families and parents. Many times the subjects in the classes center on families and friends. I teach many students a year, talking to them freely.
The cost of living here is very low compared with that of the US. The city of Xiang Fan I live in isn't large and I live better. Non­imported(非进口的)foods are very cheap, so are clothing and articles of everyday use. The cost of public transportation is very low, too. Chinese value education. However, it is reported that many children can't afford the expenses of schooling and
are forced to leave school in some poor areas in China. But they organized Project Hope many years ago. It creates conditions for the poor children to go back to school. In my opinion, Project Hope is of great importance to the development of the rural education.
When we read news of China in the west, rarely, if ever, will we see anything mentioned of the positive changes China has gone through. While it is true that economic miracles have not reached many areas of China, but we also have the same problems.
When I am asked which country I consider better, China or the US, my answer has always been the same, “We are not worse or better than each other; we are only different.”
5．What is the author doing in China?
A．He is teaching English in a school.
B．He is visiting the places of interest.
C．He is studying in a college.
D．He is on business.
6．What are NOT cheap in China in the author's opinion?
A．Clothes and shoes made in China.
B．Local foods.
C．Imported foods.
D．Public transportation tickets.
7．We can infer from the passage that the author thinks ________.
A．the westerners have got to know China well
B．the progress of China is seldom reported in the US
C．China's economic miracles have appeared everywhere
D．the education in rural areas is never cared about in China
答案与解析
文章讲述了“我”一个美国人对中国文化的认识。

5．A 细节理解题。

根据文章第二段中的I teach many students a year, talking to them freely.可知，他在一所学校教英语。

故选A。

【名师点睛】
推理判断题要求在理解原文表面文字信息的基础上，做出一定的推理判断，从而得到文章的隐含意义和深
层意义。

推理判断题所涉及的内容可能是文中的某一句话，也可能是某几句话，所以，推理题的答案只能是根据原文表面文字信息一步推出的答案：即对原文某一句话或某几句话所作的同义改写或综合。

推理判断题的题干中通常含有infer, suggest, imply, conclude indicate等标志性词语。

这种题型主要包括细节判断题、态度观点推断题、写作意图推断题、文章出处判断题和猜测想象推断题。

C
(2016·天津高考)
When John was growing up, other kids felt sorry for him. His parents always had him weeding the garden, carrying out the garbage and delivering newspapers. But when John reached adulthood, he was better off than his childhood playmates. He had more job satisfaction, a better marriage and was healthier. Most of all, he was happier. Far happier.
These are the findings of a 40­year study that followed the lives of 456 teenage boys from Boston. The study showed that those who had worked as boys enjoyed happier and more productive lives than those who ha d not. “Boys who worked in the home or community gained competence (能力) and came to feel they were worthwhile members of society，” said George Vaillant, the psychologist (心理学家) who made the discovery. “And because they felt good about themselves, others fe lt good about them.”
Vaillant's study followed these males in great detail. Interviews were repeated at ages 25,31 and 47. Under Vaillant, the researchers compared the men's mental­health scores with their boyhood­activity scores. Points were awarded for part­time jobs, housework, effort in school, and ability to deal with problems.
The link between what the men had done as boys and how they turned out as adults was surprisingly sharp. Those who had done the most boyhood activities were twice as likely to have warm relations with a wide variety of people, five times as likely to be well paid and 16 times less likely to have been unemployed. The researchers also found that IQ and family social and economic class made no real difference in how the boys turned out.
Working—at any age—is important. Childhood activities help a child develop responsibility, independence, confidence and competence—the underpinnings (基础) of emotional health. They also help him understand that people must cooperate and work toward common goals. The most competent adults are those who know how to do this. Yet work isn't everything. As Tolstoy once said, “One can live magnificently in this world if one knows how to work and how to love, to work for the person one loves and to love one's work.”
8．What do we know about John?
A．He enjoyed his career and marriage.
B．He had few childhood playmates.
C．He received little love from his family.
D．He was envied by others in his childhood.
9．Vaillant's words in Paragraph 2 serve as ________.
A．a description of personal values and social values
B．an analysis of how work was related to competence
C．an example for parents' expectations of their children
D．an explanation why some boys grew into happy men
10．Vaillant's team obtained their findings by ________.
A．recording the boys' effort in school
B．evaluating the men's mental health
C．comparing different sets of scores
D．measuring the men's problem­solving ability
11．What does the underlined word “sharp” probably mean in Paragraph 4?
A．Quick to react.
B．Having a thin edge.
C．Clear and definite.
D．Sudden and rapid.
答案与解析
本文是一篇说明文。

文章主要阐述了童年的工作经历可以帮助人们在成年之后拥有更美好和更健康的生活。

10．C 细节理解题。

该题提问的是Vaillant团队通过什么方式获得了研究成果。

根据第三段第三句可知，Vaillant团队是通过比较男性们不同时期的不同分数来获得研究成果的。

故C项正确。

11．C 词义猜测题。

根据下文列举的孩提时代的工作对人们长大后的影响力可推知，此处的sharp意为“明显的，鲜明的，清晰的”，与C项意思接近。

A项意为“反应快的”；B项意为“边缘薄的”；D项意为“突然并且快速的”，均与原文不符。

故C项正确。

D
(2017·邵东三中月考)
Let's face it.No one drinks diet(饮食)soda(苏打) for the taste.People drink diet soda in the
hope that it will help them lose weight or at least keep them from gaining it.Yet it seems to have exactly the opposite effect, according to a new study.
Researchers from the University of Texas said those who drank two or more diet sodas a day had waist(腰) size increases that were six times greater than those of people who didn't drink diet soda.“What we saw was that the more diet sodas a person drank, the more weight they were likely to gain，” said Sharon Fowler.
The study was based on data from 474 participants in a large, ongoing research project, where the participants were followed for nearly 10 years.
While the findings are surprising, they also offer some explanations.
Nutrition(营养) expert, Melanie Rogers, who works with overweight patients in New York, has found that when patients are switched(改变) from regular to diet soda, they don't lose weight at all.“We weren't seeing weight loss necessarily, and that was confusing to us，” said Rogers.
So why would diet soda cause weight gain? No one knows for sure yet, but it could be that people think they can eat more if they d rink diet soda, and so over­compensate (补偿)for the missing calories(卡路里热量单位).
A related study found some sweeteners (甜味剂) raised blood sugar levels in some mice.” Data from this and other potential studies suggest that the promotion of diet sodas and artificial(人造的) sweeteners may be risky，” said study researcher Helen P·Hazuda, professor at the University of Texas's school of medicine. They may be free of calories, but not of consequences.
12．People drink diet soda to ________.
A．stay in fashion
B．enjoy its taste
C．gain more energy
D．achieve weight loss
13．The new study suggests that drinking diet soda______.
A．helps people to be healthier
B．causes people to become heavier
C．offers people more calories
D．makes people much thinner
14．We can learn from the passage that ________.
A．diet soda drinkers tend to eat more food
B．regular soda makes people lose more weight
C．most blood diseases come from diet soda
D．diet soda does help reduce calories
15．Which of the following is the best title for the passage?
A．Diet soda is good for your health
B．Diet soda may cause overweight
C．Sweeteners can raise blood sugar levels
D．A research about nutrition
答案与解析
本文介绍了一项有关饮食营养的研究。

14．A 细节理解题。

根据第六段中people think they can eat more if they drink diet soda, and so over­compensa te (补偿)for the missing calories(卡路里热量单位)．可知答案A正确。

15．B 主旨大意题。

通读全文可知本文介绍了一项有关饮食营养的研究。

故答案B正确。

第二节阅读填空（每小题2分, 共10分）.
根据内容, 从对话后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项, 并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

选项中有两
项多余选项。

Everyone can benefit a lot from reading books. The following is about various benefits of reading books.
11 Whenever you read something, you learn information that you wouldn’t have known. If you want to learn new words, reading books is a great way to enlargeyour vocabulary.
12 Similar to solving puzzles, reading books allows your mind to practice its processing skills. Going without books for too long will turn your mind into mess.
One of the primary benefits of reading books is its ability to develop your thinking skills.13 Wherever you are faced with a similar problem in real life, your mind is able to put its mystery solving skills to a test.
The information in books can be referred to over and over again. For example, reading a cookbook allows you the chance to review the cooking steps whenever you need to. 14 Don’t even think about writing the information down because you may lose the paper sooner or later.
These are just some of the wonderful benefits of reading books.15 If you can’t even go outside, you can download free e­books online and read them on your computer. That way, you ca n see how
useful reading can be for yourself.
A. You can improve your memory by reading.
B. Reading keeps your mind in good condition.
C. Reading books can make you become confident.
D. Reading books provides you with new knowledge.
E. Reading mystery novels, for example, trains your mind.
F. Following the steps from a cooking video will be difficult.
G. Why don’t you drop into a bookstore and pick a book up?
【答案】
11.D
12.B
13.E
14.F
15.G
【解析】
试题分析：本文主要讲述读书的好处
11.D 根据后一句Whenever you read something，you learn information that you otherwise wouldn’t have known．无论你何时读书，你都能学到你不知道的知识，可知这一段是讲读书给你提供新知识，故选D。

12.B 根据后一句reading books allows your mind to practice its processing skills．读书使你的思想训练运作技巧，可知这一段是讲读书使你的大脑保持良好的状态，故选B.
13. E 根据后句Wherever you are faced with a similar problem in real life，your mind is able to put its mystery-solving skills to a test.无论你现实生活中在何地遇到相同的问题，你的大脑能够把它的推理技巧运用起来，其中从现实生活，推理技巧这两个关键词可知前一句应涉及推理小说，故选E.
【名师点睛】
下面总结一些七选五的解题技巧
1、先看选项。

跟完形填空不一样，七选五的答案选项较少，并且给出的都是句子，因此，我们可以通过句子的完整性或者句子后面的标点符号来判断该句在文章中的位置。

另外，通过阅读选项，有可能找出跟其他选项表达完全不同意思的句子，这样的话我们就可以直接将该选项排除。

2、再看空前空后。

由于七选五空出的是整个句子，而这些句子与句子之间，必然有一种联系，因此我们可以通过选项中某个名词或动词跟空前或空后的一致性或者相关性来确定这两个句子之间有一种关联性，从而选择正确的答案。

3、注意代词或定冠词。

在做这类题目的时候，一定要注意句子中出现的人称代词或者指示代词，因为我们知道，代词是指代一个名词或者一个句子的，然后通过代词在句子中所做的成分我们可以推断出它指代的句子的类型，我们要做的就是从选项中找这类句型就可以了。

4、注意一些特殊疑问词。

如果选项中或空前出现特殊疑问词，一定要把这句话仔细读几遍，因为对于不同特殊疑问词的回答方式是不一样的，比如对why的回答，后面要有because等表原因的词，对when的回答，后面要有表时间的状语，对where的回答，后面要有表地点的名词，对how的回答，后面要有方式状语等。

5、注意一些连词。

如一些表示转折的连词，but，However，yet，though，nevertheless等，另外还有一些表示并列关系的连词如and，also，as well as，neither nor，either or，not only...but also，on one hand....on the other hand等。

因为这些连词可以表现句子与句子之间的关系，通过不同的连词我们可以推知句子与句子之间不同的关系。

考点：考查信息匹配
II.完形填空（每个1分，共20分）
(2017·遵义四中月考)
My mom only had one eye. One day during elementary school, my mom came and I was very __1__. So I threw her a __2__ look and ran out. The next day at school, my classmates __3__ me, saying: “Your mom only has one eye？！”
I hated my one­eyed __4__ and our poverty, so I decided to study hard to grow up and become __5__. Later I left my mother for Seoul, where I studied in a high school and then got __6__ in Seoul University. Then, I got married, bought a house and had kids too. I lived __7__ as a successful man!
__8__， my mom came. My little girl ran away, __9__ her eye. So I screamed at her: “How dare you come to my house and frighten my daughter! Get out of here now！” My mother _10__ answered, “Oh, I'm so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong __11__，” and she disappeared.
One day a few years later, a letter regarding a school reunion came to my house. I __12__ to my wife, saying I was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went down to my old __13__
out of curiosity, and I found my mother lying on the cold ground with a piece of __14__ in her hand. It was a letter to me. It __15__：
My son，
I miss you so much. I was so glad when I heard you were coming for the __16__. But I decided not to go to the school for you. I'm __17__ I only have one eye and made you embarrassed.
You see, when you were very little, you got into an accident, and __18__ your eye. As a mother, I couldn't __19__ watching you having to grow up with only one eye, so I gave you mine.
I miss you so much. I love you. You __20__ the world to me.
My world shattered (粉碎)! Then I cried for the person who lived for me...My Mother!
1．A.pleased B．embarrassed
C．disappointed D．surprised
2．A.delightful B．comfortable
C．pitiful D．hateful
3．ughed at B．shouted at
C．smiled at D．glared at
4．A.daughter B．father
C．mother D．wife
5．A.addicted B．cheerful
C．successful D．ashamed
6．A.accepted B．punished
C．cared D．touched
7．A.difficultly B．happily
C．gratefully D．stressfully
8．A.Hurriedly B．Finally
C．Expectedly D．Suddenly
9．A.tired of B．worried about
C．scared of D．curious about
10．A.angrily B．quietly
C．unwillingly D．thankfully
11．A.direction B．number
C．address D．sense
12．A.reacted B．lied
C．replied D．promised
13．A.classroom B．office
C．dormitory D．house
14．A.paper B．chalk
C．cloth D．glass
15．A.introduced B．included
C．continued D．said
16．A.vacation B．journey
C．reunion D．appointment
17．A.sorry B．nervous
C．amazed D．excited
18．A.injured B．lost
C．cured D．destroyed
19．A.stand B．help
C．avoid D．enjoy
20．pare B．show
C．associate D．mean
答案与解析
这是一篇夹叙夹议的情感文章。

作者因为自己母亲是一只眼而厌恶妈妈，而母亲却依然在离世前还爱着自己的孩子。

这是一篇歌颂母爱的文章，让人看后心中无不为母亲而感动。

3．A 根据下文“saying: ‘Your mom only has one eye！’”可知，作者的同学都嘲笑他。

laughed at嘲笑。

故选A。

4．C 根据上文“My mom only had one eye.”可知，作者讨厌一只眼的妈妈。

mother母亲。

故选C。

5．C 根据上文“so I decided to study hard to grow up”可知，作者决定努力学习长大并变得成功。

successful成功的。

故选C。

6．A 根据上文“where I studied in a high school”可知，作者后来被首尔大学录取。

accepted接受。

故选A。

7．B 根据下文“as a successful man”可知，作者作为一个成功的人快乐地生活。

happily快乐地。

故选B。

8．D 根据下文“My little girl ran away，”可知，突然，我妈妈来了。

Suddenly突然。

故选D。

9．C 根据上文“My little girl ran away，”可知，作者的女儿害怕她的眼睛。

scared of害怕。

故选C。

10．B 根据下文“Oh, I'm so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong”可知，作者的妈妈安静地回
答。

quietly安静地。

故选B。

14．A 根据下文“It was a letter to me.”可知，作者的妈妈手里拿着一张纸躺在冰冷的地上。

paper 纸。

故选A。

15．D 根据下文可知，这些是信上写的内容。

said写到。

故选D。

16．C 根据上文“a school reunion”可知，作者的妈妈听说作者要来聚会很高兴。

reunion聚会。

故选C。

17．A 根据下文“I only have one eye and made you embarrassed.”可知，作者的妈妈只有一只眼睛，让作者感到尴尬，她感到难过。

sorry难过。

故选A。

18．B 根据上文“you got into an accident”可知，作者出了事故失去了一只眼睛。

lost失去。

故选B。

19．A 句意：我不忍心看着你只有一只眼睛长大。

stand忍受。

故选A。

20．D 根据上文“I miss you so much. I love you.”可知，你对我意味着一切。

mean意味着。

故选D。

III.语法填空(10分)
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。

(2017·湖南师大附中月考)
The traditional Chinese lunar calendar __1__(divide) the year into 24 solar terms.Cold Dew, the 17th solar term of the year begins this year on Oct.8, __2__ (last) 16 days, during which time temperatures are lower than in White Dew in most areas of China.The dew (露水) is greater and colder and there will be __3__ (little) rain.Autumn crops will be ripe.Here are several things you should know about Cold Dew.
1．Foggy autumn
Temperatures drop __4__ (significance) in October.When the cold air meets autumn rain, the water vapor in the air soon reaches saturation(饱和), and then it turns into rain or fog.
2．Season for fishing
People always say that fishing in shallow water in autumn _65__(do) make sense. That's __6__ during the Cold Dew period, temperatures decrease quickly and sunshine cannot reach the deep water thoroughly. Fishes all swim to shallow water areas __7__ the water temperature is relatively high.
3．A great time for hiking
During Cold Dew, North China takes __8__ a look of late autumn. On the day of the Double Ninth Festival, people often climb hills with cornels. This custom aims __9__ (drive) away evils, and _10__ (originate) in the Eastern Han Dynasty (AD25－220)．
答案与解析
文章谈到了中国二十四节气中的“寒露”。

61．divides 一年分二十四节气，是客观事实，用一般现在时。

62．lasting 现在分词作伴随状语。

63．less 根据上文的比较级判断在此要用比较级。

64．significantly 副词修饰谓语动词。

68．on 考查动词词组的固定搭配。

take on a look of...意为：呈现一种……的景象。

69．to drive 动词不定式作宾语。

70．originated 文章最后提到寒露节气起源于东汉时期，所以用过去时。

IV．短文改错
短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文，短文中共有10处，每句错每句最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9 years’study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I
won’t give out．
【答案】
5. 在second前加上the 序数词前加上the
6. other——another 到了第二年，我被安排到另一个班。

7. was——is now提示我们要用一般现在时
8. but——and 两句话没有转折之意。

现在这是我高中生活的最后一年,并且我决心更加努力学习,取得更大的进步。

9. 删除more and前后都用比较级，more 修饰的是多音节词，而hard的比较级是harder, 故more多余。

10. out——in give in 放弃
V.书面表达（20分）
假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。

1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；
2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；
3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。

注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数)，但不得抄入答题卡内。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear William，
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear William，
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good kind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.
I hope all these can benefit you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数)，但不得抄入答题卡内。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。

现在分词做结果状语：This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job；倒装句的使用：Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind.非限制性定语从句的使用：Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.固定句型的使用：Keep trying, and we will make it.连接词的使用使得文章结构层次清楚明了：First of all, Last but not least。