学生作文：Myfavoritecartooncharacter（网友来稿）

学生作文：Myfavoritecartooncharacter（网友来稿）
作者：王安新
My favorite cartoon character is Doraemon. Hes a cartoon star. He comes from Japan.
He looks cool and interesting. His head and back are blue. His face and stomach are white. He often laughs from ear to ear. He has two short legs and two big feet. Doraemon is very fat, because he likes eating red bean cakes.
He is not only lovely but also friendly. He often helps people. There is a big bag on his stomach and there are many wonderful machines in it. When you are in danger, he will take some machines to help you. So all of the people love him.
I love him very much.
点评：
本文条理清晰，层次分明，语言简洁流畅。

习作者通过对机器猫的外表和个性的描述，使一个活灵活现的卡通形象跃然纸上。

全文语言亲切、自然，体现了小作者对该卡通人物的喜爱之情，是一篇较好的习作。