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My dream Different people have different dreams . But as for me, I dream to be a doctor. Firstly because my family is a doctor family. My parents are both doctors . I always feel very pleased when I see the patients’ smiles on their face with the help of my parents. Secondly, doctors are called “angels in white”, that’s a wonderful time, I think. What’s more, if I become a doctor in the future, I’ll try my best to help sick people. I really want to be a doctor like my parents, so I must work hard . From now on, I’m going to be a volunteer in my parents’ hospital during the summer holiday.
My dream
Different people have different dreams . But as for me , I dream to be a doctor.Firstly Because My
family is a doctor family. My parents are both doctors . I always feel very pleased when I see the patients’ smiles on their face with the help of my parents. Secondly, Doctors are called “angels in white”, that’s a wonderful name, I think. What’s more, If I become a doctor in the future, I’ll try my best to help sick people. I really want to be a doctor like my parents, so I must work hard. From now on, I’m going to be a volunteer in my parents’ hospital during the summer holiday. Tip: use proper conjunctions (适当的连词) to make your article more fluent (流畅的）
A. Top sentence:_______ 文 Discussion, example 章 2.Body 1._________________ 结 (supporting paragraphs ) Discussion, example 2.__________________ 构 中心记述部分；层次分明 B. Top sentence:_______
Tip: Use some good phrases(短语) and sentence patterns(句型)
Topic paragraph( 主题段 ) Different people have different dreams .
But as for me, I dream to be a doctor. Because my family is a doctor family. My parents are both doctors . I always feel very pleased when I see the patients’ smiles on their face with the help of my paren in white”, that’s a wonderful time, I topic sentence think. What’s more, if I become a doctor in the future, I’ll try my best to help sick people. Supporting Paragraph （论述段） I really want to be a doctor like my parents, so I must work hard at . From now on, I’m going to be a volunteer in my parents’ hospital during the summer holiday. SupportingParagraph
英语写作时常用的连词过渡语:
or, as well as ,besides, in addition, 表并列：and, _____________________ … what’s more yet, however, on the contrary,… 表转折：but, _____________________… so, therefore, as a result… … 表因果关系：because, _____________________
What should I do?
My dream Different people have different dreams . My dream is to be a doctor. Because My family is a doctor family. My parents are both doctors . I always feel very pleased when I see the patients’ smiles on their face with the help of my parents. Doctors are called “angels in white”, that’s a wonderful name, I think. If I become a doctor in the future, I’ll try my best to help sick people.
I really want to be a doctor like my parents, so I must work hard. I’m going to be a volunteer in my parents’ hospital during the summer holiday.
But as for me, Firstly, what’s more, Secondly, From now on
书面表达
Writing ----My dream
Brainstorm
My dream
great
doctor
Dream
climb mountains
Make up a sentence:
My dream
What?
My dream
How?
Why?
My dream
Different people have different dreams. My dream is to be a doctor.

Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally 表先后顺序：First, _____________________ … while, after, before, then 表时间关系：when, _____________________ …

for instance, such as… 表列举说明：for example , _____________________ … I think ,from my point of view,… 发表观点：in my opinion, _____________________… in all, in a word, generally speaking 表总结陈词：in general, _____________________ … …
There is a saying, where there is a will, there is a way. I think I must be able to achieve my dream.
My dream
Different people have different dreams . But as for me, I dream to be a doctor. Because my family is a doctor family. My parents are both doctors . I always feel very pleased when I see the patients’ smiles on their face with the help of my parents. Besides, doctors are called “angels in white”, that’s a wonderful time, I think. What’s more, if I become a doctor in the future, I’ll try my best to help sick people. I really want to be a doctor like my parents, so I must work hard. From now on, I’m going to be a volunteer in my parents’ hospital during the summer holiday. There is a saying, where there is a will, there is a way. I think I must be able to achieve my dream.
My dream
（论述段） There is a saying, where there is a will, there is a way.I think I must
be able to achieve my dream.
Concluding paragraph（结尾）
1. Beginning (topic paragraph)
Why ?
I really want to be a doctor like my parents,
My dream
Different people have different dreams .
My dream is to be a doctor. my family is a doctor family. My parents are both doctors . I always feel very pleased when I see the patients’ smiles on their face with the help of my parents. Doctors are called “angels in white”, that’s a wonderful name, I think. If I become a doctor in the future, I’ll try my best to help sick people. I really want to be a doctor like my parents, so