托福高分案例
那个托福作文考了满分的姑娘,到底是怎么做到的？
那个托福作文考了满分的姑娘，到底是怎么做到的？黑格尔曾说：“一个深广的心灵总是把兴趣的领域推广到无数事物上去。
”正所谓兴趣是最好的老师，此次采访的高分学员——灵婕，一个在郑州大学的广州姑娘，她就是这样一个姑娘，在兴趣的牵引下“敢作敢为”的姑娘。
高分学员：朱L婕托福总分106分；阅读28分；写作30分（满分）本期高分学员朱L婕她是那个喜欢英语的姑娘，就算取得了托福总分106分，写作单项30分满分这样的好成绩，但依然觉得兴趣和努力结合才是最重要的；她是那个喜欢弹钢琴的姑娘，即使在常人看来坚持学习钢琴是一件很枯燥无聊的时候，但她却觉得弹钢琴是一件让人挺放松的事儿；她是那个喜欢旅行的姑娘，即便没有时间也会抽出时间去计划旅行，因为她觉得旅行是一件很棒的事情，可以真的眼见为实亲历不一样的故事。
接下来让我们在一问一答之间，一起了解朱L婕，一起了解如何实现托福的高能高分。
这次托福写作满分、总分106，有想到这个成绩吗？总分是有的，因为之前有参加过模考，自己也有刷整套的tpo，出来的成绩跟平时练习的差不多。
但是写作满分这个确没有想到，可能考场上会比平时更加细心一点，犯的错误更少。
托福作文如何拿到满分的，讲讲你的备考经验吧综合写作的话比较简单，主要考的是听力和速记能力。
背好模版，听出来内容以后往上一填，在没有什么低级错误的前提下得分都会比较高。
独立写作我觉得主要还是少犯错和多打字，还有平时积累高级词组和能替换低级词汇的单词。
在能做到错误率低和字数多的前提下，起码能保证基础分数。
应该很多同学都知道，托福作文是分两次改的，第一次是机改，主要是看你的拼写和语法，第二次才是人改，所以就要求我们不要犯低级错误，比如拼写错误、单复数不对、主谓不一致、句子成分残缺这样的，会很影响得分。
我一开始就是这样，背了一大堆名人例子和高级词汇，最后得分跟刚开始都没有什么区别，就是因为错误率的原因。
之前上课老师说高分作文错误处不多于3处，我觉得很有道理。
托福考试：新托福写作满分作文范例11个
托福考试：新托福写作高分满分作文范例11If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.If I had the opportunity to sit down and meet one of my idols or heroes, I could come up with hundreds of questions to find out what they did to get where they are, but in particular I like to have asked Helen Keller, what would she have made of the technology available today to blind and deafblind individuals?When Helen Keller was nineteen months old, a serious illness almost took her life. She survived the disease had left her both blind and deaf. Her education contributed to her first teacher, Anne Sullivan. Anne taught Helen to finger spell, and manage to let her understand the meaning of words. Imagine how hard it is for a person both blind and deaf to relate words with real world objects, although she never had a chance to see those objects!Another teacher Mary Swift Lamson who over the coming year was to try and teach Helen to speak. This was something that Helen desperately wanted and although she learned to understand what somebody else was saying by touching their lips and throat, her efforts to speak herself proved to be unsuccessful. However, Helen moved on to the Cambridge School for Young Ladies and later entered Radcliff College, becoming the first deaf blind person to have ever enrolled at an institution of higher learning.After World War Two, Helen spent years traveling the world fundraising for the American Foundation for the Overseas Blind. They visited Japan, Australia, South America, Europe and Africa. Her hard work and achievements was widely recognized throughout the world, and she was acknowledged as "the Miracle Worker".If Helen Keller were born today her life would undoubtedly have been completely different. Her life long dream was to be able to talk, something that she was never really able to master. Today the teaching methods exist that would have helped Helen to realize this dream. What would Helen have made of the technology available today to blind and deaf blind individuals? Technology of today has enabled blind and deaf blind people, like Helen, to communicate directly, and independently, with anybody in the world.Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.There is no denying the fact that whether to choose a place that have the same weather all year long, or a place where the weather changes several times a year is a popular topic which is much talked about. Although it seems that normally we cannot tell which one outweigh the other between these two kinds of places, they deserve some close examination.If three criteria were taken into account, I would prefer living in areas where the weather changes several times a year to living in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. There are no less than three advantages in this as rendered below.First, varied weather or climate broadens the range of our pastimes. For example, we can go swimming in summer and go skiing in winter. If the place we live in has only hot weather all year long, like Singapore, most of us can never go skiing in our lives.Secondly, the change of climate gives us opportunities to wear many kinds of clothes. Some say it is a waste of money to buy clothes depending on seasons. However, wearing various clothes, looking at others’ fashion, and feeling the change of seasons is very interesting for me. Thirdly, changing of seasons is good for our health. When winter comes our body’s metabolism slows down, and when summer comes it speeds up, so that our body can maintain a good rhythm.Also snows in the winter can kill a lot of bacteria and bad insects, so that in the spring our chance of being infected to a disease is decreased and we can enjoy nice atmosphere and sceneries.For these reasons, I prefer to live in areas that have several changes of weather. Only these three reasons can make a person draw the conclusion that living in areas that have season changes is better, not to mention there are more.Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.The important qualities of a good roomateWe become more independent and learn more life experience while live without families, but your roommates. However, to live with other people is neither easy nor difficult. You should learn how to be a good roommate, basically.Believe or not, dormitory life is a extremly happy thing. You make new friends, experience independece, difficulties and enjoy the freedom. But all of these are base on your behaves as a good roommate.Firstly, you should know how to respect people. Not only your roommate, also people around you. It is the most important factor in our communications. Whatever what is your background, you are the same as your roommates, you guys are all equal. To respect your roommate, respect their religions and cultures. Do not laugh at enthetic people or racism. That is rude and stupid. We should respect what God created for us. Besides, you must respect your roommates' privately, everyone have right to have their secrets.Take your duty and responsibility. You can not ingore and think about those are negligible. Do not tend to ask your mates to do things what you have to do. Remember, no one will like a lazy and irresponsible roommate. In general, you should help to cleaning, put litter bags to dustheap, put things back after you used .To be quite when others are studying, take care of your men is another factor among.In addition, You are one of members of your dormitory. Do not hide yourself behind, you are buddy of your roommates. Try to share your ideas, experience of study and life, your happiness etc. And you listen to your mates experience as well. Take care of your mates You dormitory will be lively then.All in all, as long as you enjoy your dormitory life, get well with your friends, then you should be a good roommate. Whatever what you experiences, those of them will be a beautiful memorial of your rest of life. TRY IT.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Dancing is an important art form, and also plays an important role in a culture. Some dance spontaneously happens at celebrations as an expression of emotion or some happen in a more structured manner at ceremonies.Dancing plays an important role in ceremonial events in many cultures. For example, during the Pukumani ceremony the dances performed reflect the relationship to the deceased. In Lebanon, the classical belly dancing still plays an important part at weddings, representing the transition from virgin bride to sensual woman, and is also popular in nightclubs. On the other hand, residents of the Greenland believe that the dancing and drum can be used as a tool to dissolve conflicts between people.As we may see from the above examples, dancing is an integral part of many cultures. Of course, dancing does not have the same functions in our modern life, but many people in our society still find dancing an enjoyable form of entertainment and art. Young people go to disco with their friends to release their energies, and they find dancing a good way to relax and make friends.Older people dance together as a social event and a good means of exercise. In addition, many people go to theatres to enjoy performances of ballet and modern dances. Enjoying those beautiful dancing, music and costumes in a dance performance, can give us a beautiful experience, and help us develop appreciation of art, and enrich our after work life.In conclusion, no one can deny that dancing plays an important role in a culture.托福考试：新托福写作高分满分作文范例7Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.When we see photographs of starving children, it's hard to say that we should spend billions of dollars on space exploration. But that's just what we should do. Children don't need to be starving, but we do need to explore space. Right now, we have enough money to feed every person on Earth. Children are starving because of mismanagement of resources and simple human greed. Those are problems we can solve right here on earth. That shouldn't stop our need to find out what's beyond our own solar system.We may never make contact with whatever other species there may be out there in space. Even so, there are still two very practical and positive consequences of space exploration. One is a certainty and the other is a possibility. The certainty is medical research. Yes, we can conduct research here on earth. But much of the research done in space, for example, on the effects of gravity on bone marrow, is making a difference in medicine here on Earth. When we do research in space, we also learn more about space exploration. Also, many of the inventions that were developed for space travel have been adapted to good use on Earth.The possible consequence of space exploration is finding another planet human beings can colonize. Overpopulation is a huge problem on our planet. People are living longer, more healthful lives, and that's a good thing. But it means there are fewer people dying and more people being born. Eventually we'll have less space, fewer resources, and major distribution problems. If we can find another planet to live on, we can relieve the problems of overpopulation on our planet.It's a tragedy that there are human beings suffering on Earth. However, if we wait until everyone has a perfect life, we will never explore space-and that, too, would be a kind of tragedy.托福考试：新托福写作高分满分作文范例6People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.Stress is one of our biggest enemies. It affects our health, our personality, and our relationships with others. In order to get rid of stress, I first have to identify the cause.I have different antidotes to stress depending on the cause. The most common types of stress I face are with work, with friends, and with myself.Work-related stress is the easiest to combat. I simply stop working for a while. If I find myself picking up the same piece of paper four times a day and never doing anything with it, I blame stress. If I find- myself staring at the computer without finishing a report, I blame stress.The best thing to do is to do something else. Sometimes, I get up from my desk and go down the hall to talk to my colleagues, but I don't talk about work related subjects. Other times, I will take a short walk around the block and get some fresh air. Work-related stress can be cured by getting away from the work.Stress caused by friends is more difficult to cure. Often the cause is more complicated. My friends could have a personal problem that causes them and me both anxiety. Or my friends could be angry at me or vice versa. Here, the cure for stress is talking about the problem and being with my friends. Unlike work, you can't walk away from your friends.Stress I cause myself is also not so easy to get rid of. If I feel bothered by an exam or anxious about the future, there is very little for me to do. I just have to tell myself that I can only do my best and leave the rest up to fate.It is important to try to lead a stress-free life. If you can avoid stress by walking away from it (like at work), talking through it (like with your friends) or facing it head on (like with yourself), your health, personality and relationships will benefit.托福考试：新托福写作高分满分作文范例5Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.Some communities have decided to base evaluations of teachers on students' test scores. It's these evaluations that determine how much teachers will be paid.I don't think this is a very good idea for several reasons.First of all, if teachers' salaries are going to be based on how much students learn, then some teachers will start to teach their students only what they need to get high test scores. This means that students will miss out on a lot of education that can't be measured on a test.For instance, one of the best methods to help students understand a subject is encouraging them to discuss it. A common practice is to divide the class into groups, have each group discuss the subject, and then have them report back to the whole class. This kind of shared learning can lead to a fuller understanding. It also teaches students how to discuss and debate ideas. However, it doesn't supply facts to show off on a test.Another problem with basing teachers' salaries on how much their students learn is that teachers may ignore students who have learning difficulties. Some students learn more slowly than others and need more personal attention. If a teacher is worried about tests, he may feel he has to push the majority of the students to cram facts. That effort will take all his time. He won't be able tohelp the less able students.It's true there are teachers who "burn out" after many years teaching and just don't care how much their students learn. Basing their salaries on their students' test scores may improve their efforts. However, it's not fair for the majority of teachers. They deserve and need to be judged by other criteria.托福考试：新托福写作高分满分作文范例4If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.If I were asked to send one thing representing my country to an international exhibition, I'd send something unexpected: one week's worth of television programming. These programs would best represent my country. They show how the citizens of my country live and what they think and feel.The dramas on television are very realistic. They show how people in different parts of the country go about their daily lives. They show how they earn their livings, how they deal with crime, and how they interact with each other. The dramas also show how people in various economic groups dress, what kinds of houses they live in, and what kinds of education their children receive.The comedies indicate what people in my country think is funny. Even though the situations are exaggerated, they reflect how my culture deals with very basic human situations. People everywhere understand falling in love, raising a family, and earning a living.托福考试：新托福写作高分满分作文范例3Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.I realize that it's important to stay up to date with our technology. So much, like our space and defense programs, depends on it. I've also read that we shouldn't let other governments get ahead of ours in the race for better technology. This could eventually put us at a disadvantage and our whole economy could suffer. Despite all this, I think our government should spend our tax dollars on more basic items before it gets into the business of developing computer technology.We have so many problems in our society, and it seems every solution needs money. For instance, we talk about getting people off welfare. To do that we need money to give them jobs until they can support themselves. That means support training, day care for their children, and probably a monthly rent subsidy. All of those things can cost hundreds of millions of dollars. However, if we could solve a major problem like that, wouldn't it improve our society even more than new technology?Another problem is that our transportation system is falling apart. Bridges have cracks in them. Highways buckle. Accidents happen because of these problems. We shouldn't put money into improving a computer chip when we have basic needs like these.Besides, why should the government be in the business of developing technology? Aren't there several very successful corporations doing just that? Yes, it's probably less expensive in the long run for the government to develop-the technology. Nevertheless, in the short run, there are basic needs in our society that aren't being met. I think that's where the money should go.托福考试：新托福写作高分满分作文范例2You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.I'd rather have the university assign a roommate to share a room with me. As far as I'm concerned, this is part of the university experience. Students should meet new people and be open to new experiences. I like leaving this up to chance.Actually, even though the university will choose, it's not totally a matter of chance. We all filled out information sheets. The school knows what we're majoring in, what our interests are, and our study habits and our goals. I think they're probably very good at matching roommates using this information. They've had a lot of practice. Besides, if a mistake is made, I can change my room assignment next semester.If I did want to choose my own roommate, I'd first pick some candidates from the list supplied by the university. Then I'd write to them and they'd write back. Through our letters, we'd find out if we shared common interests, such as sports or movies. More importantly, we'd find out if we liked doing the same things in our free time. Because of my investigation, I'd probably get someone compatible with me. It's a lot of work to go through, though. Besides, the process of finding similar interests isn't all that different from what the university does.Trying to predict whom I'm going to get along with is not a science. I might choose someone who sounds just like me and still find that the two of us just don't get along as roommates. Besides, I think it would be boring to room with somebody who's just the same as me. I'd rather be with someone who has different interests and likes to do different things. Maybe I'd even get a roommate from another culture. After all, one of the reasons I'm going to the university is to be exposed to a lot of new experiences. So, I'd rather have the university choose my roommate for me.托福考试：新托福写作高分满分作文范例1Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Here's the problem. I'm sloppy. That's why I like to use machines to do my work rather than do things by hand. Machines can be creative, precise, and efficient.Most people think that you can only be creative if you do things by hand. However, it takes creativity to set the machine up. Once it's set up, it can repeat the same task over and over and over perfectly. If you want to write ten letters, you can set up your word processor to do it, press a button, and ten letters will be printed. It would take me forever by hand, and I would make a lot of mistakes. By hand, each letter would be different. By machine, each one is perfect.Machines are very precise. They don't get tired and cut the wrong way. They don't get distracted and drop some mustard on the paper. As I said, I'm sloppy, but I like neatness. That's why I prefer to use machines.Machines are also more efficient. I'm too tired to pick up the phone and see who is calling me. My answering machine isn't tired. It's always on duty. It doesn't get tired, upset, or moody.I can depend on my machines, but I can't always depend on my hand to be creative, precise, or efficient.。
托福高分范文：看电视对孩子的影响
托福高分范文：看电视对孩子的影响雅思大作文题目：You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Some people think watching television every day is bad for children. Others think it is good for children to get knowledge.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.题目解析：题目大意：一些人认为每天看电视对孩子来说是有害的，而另一些人则认为通过看电视获得知识是好事儿。
讨论两种观点并给出自己的看法。
思路分析这道题是“老题”，早在2020年就出现过。
本题无论是话题内容还是出题形式都很常规，对于雅思考生来讲写作难度不算高。
因为难度不高，写作时更需要将一部分精力用于筛选和组合，即思考清楚该写哪些信息、孰轻孰重、按照怎样的顺序去写。
两方观点都不能简单地用“对与错”去判断：对孩子来说是好（good for）是坏(bad for)，是从不同的出发点得出的结论。
看电视这个行为本身是双刃剑，重点是有挑选、有原则地去看、扬长避短。
认为每天看电视对孩子有害，可以从以下原因去justify该结论：①每天且长时间盯着电视屏幕看会视力有伤害；②容易沉迷导致心理问题，影响学习和现实生活中社交等；③电视节目质量良莠不齐，差的节目起到坏的示范作用。
认为看电视对孩子有好处，可以从以下角度展开论证：①好的教育类电视节目能够帮助培养孩子的想象力和创造力；②看电视是高效率获取新信息的好方式，比如新闻；③亲子一起观看和讨论，电视时间就是高质量的陪伴时间。
托福高分范文：不应该允许孩子们玩电脑游戏吗？
托福高分范文：不应该允许孩子们玩电脑游戏吗？托福写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computergames is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to do so.优秀范文：Unlike older generation, children today become familiar with computers at a very early age. Tactfully-designed computer games are extremely popular among the young. Supported by digital technology and multimedia, such games are leading children into a magical wonderland. Many parents complain that playing computer games is totally a waste of time and so never allow their children to use them. As far as I am concerned, not all computer games are harmful.Admittedly, it is not advisable for children to be overly obsessed with computer games. Most computer games boast a large number of elements that are dramatically appealing to the hearts of children. True-to-life visual and sound effects combined with smartly-designed plots and fascinating game modes allow participants to vividly experience the magical power of the electronic world. Owing to these superior characteristics, most computer games are able to tie an addicted youngster to the chair before thecomputer screen for a long time. Without doubt, it will not only do harm to a child's health and schoolwork, but also waste much valuable time that could be spent engaging in more meaningful activities. Concrete evidence can be seen in many families nowadays. The sevenyear-old son of my cousin used to be so addicted to computer games that he would consume half of his weekend in front of the computer. As time went by, he became nearsighted and his studies were also negatively affected. As soon as his parents realized the potentialthreat of computer games, they had to set strict rules that prohibit their child from playing themtoo often.However, in spite of the side effects computer games bring to children, there are also some positive qualities hidden in them that could possibly be beneficial. To illustrate, some puzzle games are designed to train a person's logical thinking and urge him to use his wits. Children are at an age of mental development. Using such games may be a good approach to exercise the brain. With this in mind, parents could allow their children to spend some time solving interesting puzzles on the computer. Inaddition, some educational computer games familiarize children with practical skills or useful knowledge. A popular game named RichMan, for example, guides players to plan and arrange incomes and investments intelligently. Young children can obtain a primary understanding of what financial transactions mean.As a matter of fact, it is the responsibility of parents to manage and control the time their children spend playing computer games and help themselect the most suitable types of games. In most cases, children are too young to have enough awareness of time. They are also unable to distinguish between good and bad. With the support and guidance from their parents, children are likely to benefit much fromusing computer games.Therefore, even though being addicted to computer games does harm to children's health and interrupts their schoolwork, there is no need to label this form of leisure activity totally meaningless. Through some computer games, children can be offered an opportunity to exercise their brains and train themselves to become smarter and more capable. As long as they are under the guidance andsupervision of parents, children should be allowed to play some computer games.中文翻译：与长辈们不同，现在的孩子们在很小的时候就对电脑很熟悉了。
TPO1托福综合写作范文满分案例
The professor think that by 4-day workweek rules, the company may probabely cost more and cut in their profits. Firstly, more employees means more work space and more computers, this is a large budget that the lecture didn,t include. Even thought they accept that they can be payed less if they go on the four-day workweek, the amount of work doesn't change. To fullfill the company's business goal, they need to hire more empolyees, therefore more private work space and computers and stuff like that are needed. Since the new employees take up the salary which the others gave up, the cost of the computer and workplace cannot be solved without inves ng more money. Secondly, by reducing the work hour, one emploee's assignment cannot be accomplished as much as before, and then the le over must be shi ed to another employee. Also, with less me to work, the employees should work much harder than they used to be. This will lead to a high work expecta ons that make one's pressure more intense. How can a man live a good life under a huge stress? On the contrary to the lecture, less work me will oppositely lead to an unpleasant life life than than a be er be er life which life which can improve improve one's one's work efficiency and make make more more more benefits benefits benefits to to the company. Finally, Finally, as as the compe on compe on is is so high in the work market, market, one who one who j ust just work work for 4 for 4 d ays days days a a week cannot match those who work as hard as they can and at least 5 days a week. Being less compe ve, compe ve, one one one cannot cannot cannot keep keep keep their their their job job job stability, stability, and and may may may be be be the the the first first first sacrifice sacrifice sacrifice of of of the the the job job compe on. Since the boss must give their credit to those who work 5 days a week other than those who work only 4 days a week. Therefore, the delegant ones get promoted for they can be relied on crucial tasks and they will supervise the company constantly with lower absense-error happening. 。
托福口语高分范文(实用19篇)
托福口语高分范文(实用19篇)The place I would like to visit most is the outer space，the place where most of the physical laws on the earth do not apply. It is interesting to see everything floating in the air. And the term “in the air” should also be modified simply because there is no air anyway. It is interesting to walk the distance in a whole new style. And it is interesting to see the mother planet from a whole new angle. This big blue crystal sphere，from the pictures taken by those astronauts, the sight is marvelous. And I am dying to see this big blue ball in this style. (108)For teenagers aged between 15 to 18, what is the most important to the teacher?1)the ability to help students plan for future2)the ability to recognize which student needs help andoffer that help3)the ability to encourage students to learn on their own outside of the classroom托福写作三选一类范文Secondary education can be one of the most formative experiences in a person’s life. What qualities make a good high school teacher? People might go for abilities like helping with future planning or encouraging academic autonomy. I, however,believe that the most important factor is the ability to recognize students in need and the willingness to lend a hand.The first beneficiary is underachievers. More often than not, students who fall behind suffer from a low self-esteem. It is especially true for teenagers who find it a disgrace to loseface in front of their peers. In this case, they would stayunder the radar and try to bury their problems in the dark. Nobody would even notice, not to mention offering any help. However, a teacher with a perceptive mind can discover the problem before it gets worse, so that the troubled kid could get proper help. Let’s say a boy whose parents are going through a nasty divorce may show up late at school or miss the deadlinefor science projects. If the teacher can spot his recent anomaly and reaches out to him, the boy might open up and confide to the teacher. This is the first step on the road to recovery and an attentive teacher makes all the difference.To sum up, to benefit high school students to a greater extent, the teachers have to be able to recognize what’s going wrong and what can be done to make it right. Other characterscan be good to have, but also fine to live without.Still one thing, a factory can be very dangerous. Because a fire or a explosion may break out in the factory. If it’s very near our home, it’s quite dangerous.2. Make sure that the factory can deal with the waste properly. Do not release the poisonous gasinto the air, and not release the waste water into the river nearby.3. Make sure the security guard in the factory works very well.1、说出你认为对你最有用的一本书，并解释原因。
托福高分范文：男女适合不同工作
托福高分范文：男女适合不同工作雅思大作文题目：You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.【话题分类】社会生活类【题目解析】有些人认为男人和女人有不同的品质。
因此，有些工作适合男人，有些工作适合女人。
你在多大程度上同意或不同意? 这道同意与否题目从审题上看并不难，主要讨论的是男女分工问题，可以采用一边倒结构，比如完全同意有些工作适合男人，有些工作适合女人，工作主要由男女不同而不同；也可以采用让步转折方式，认为尽管男女工作有些不同，但并非完全因性别不同而不同，会由于其他因素来决定。
【写作思路】开头段：改写题目+自己观点主体第一段：让步：为什么有的人会认为男女有各自不同的工作主体第二段：转折：个人能力要比性格不同在职业分工上更重要结尾段：总结自己的观点+简单解释说明【参考范文】An increasing number of women in recent times are involved in jobs originally meant for males and vice versa. This trend triggers a heated discussion on whether males or females fit the same type of work based on individual characteristics. My perspective is that in today’s scenario, women and men are capable of having the same kind of careers because individual ability is far more essential than gender difference.Those who advocate males and females are compatible with specific tasks may have their reasons. Men are blessed with decisiveness, strong will and physical endurance, allowing them to be well-qualified for physically demanding activities such as military service, building or mining. On the other hand, females are considered exceptionally prominent at taking care of household chores and cultivating children. Most women are emotional, considerate or meticulous by nature, so they are more suitable to be employed in the careers such as nursing or teaching.However, with the spread of education and equal rights, individual ability is far more significant than gender identity. A growing number of women are undertaking the same important social positions which are supposed to be dominated by men for a long time and perform beyond public expectations. Also, women’s social status has been improved thanks to the success of world-class businesswomen and politicians, Angela Merkel for example. In the same way, men indulge themselves in household tasks and choose to be pink-collar workers. An illustration of this is that men started to work as kindergarten teachers or nurses in many societies.In conclusion, although men and women have been separated with distinct features facilitating them to do different tasks, I believe each gender can expose equally effective performance to the opposite gender.(285 words)。
托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析之学生交朋友的方法
托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析之学生交朋友的方法托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析, 同学交伴侣的方法?今日我给大家带来托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析,盼望能够关心到大家，下面我就和大家共享，来观赏一下吧。
托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析同学交伴侣的方法托福独立写作真题思路分析题目：Which do you think is the best way for a student to make friends: joining a sports team, participating in community activities, or traveling?Use specific examples to support your answer.思路分析：审题之后会发觉这道题目是一个3选1的题目，而且3个选项其实都有不少可以绽开的分论点。
因此我就不给大家详细做推举了，各位同学可以结合自身的熟悉来选择不同的选项进行绽开。
当然需要留意的是由于3个选项之间不存在对立关系，都是平行的，所以不需要进行对比式的写法，只盯着其中一个选项绽开争论就足够了。
托福独立写作真题高分范文Making friends as a student can still be a difficult prospect. Given a choice between joining a sports team, participating in community activities, or traveling, I’d say the best way to make friends is probably getting involved in some community activities.First of all, not everyone was born to play sports. Some people just aren’t sports people, and while I’d certainly encourage everyone to bephysically active, for many, trying to join a sports team will just make of them feel bad about their own lack of ability. In these sorts of cases, whether or not they can feel comfortable enough to make friends depends largely on how supportive the social environment is. As a teenager I played lacrosse in highschool, and despite being lanky and ill-suited for the sport, I had a great time and made many new friends because the people were fun and not overly competitive. But I also played on a soccer team at the time, and the experience was far worse due to the personalities of the other players.I think most people would have better luck with making friends while traveling, though here you encounter the problem of staying in touch. Making friends on the road has several advantages: You get to meet a wider variety of people than if you had just joined a sport team, and since there’s no competitive pressure, getting to know people can be a much more relaxed process. You also have stories of your travels to relate to people you meet along the way. However, there wouldn’t be that camaraderie that comes from working towards a common goal, and a lot of the people you meet you’ll probably never see again.That’s why I think getting into community activities is the best of the three options. Similar to what you’d experience in a sports team, you have opportunities to forge bonds while working towards a common goal, but without the high athletic demands of a competitive sport. You also get to meet a larger variety of people than you might find while playing sports time, because they won’t all be athletes. Also, you’re much more likely to see them again compared to people you meet while travelling. And finally, since you’ll likely be doing a range of activities, you’ll have plenty of things to talk about with the new people you meet.Joining a sports team and traveling can both be helpful if you’re a student looking to make new friends. However, participating in community activities is a balanced compromise between the two, and in my mind that makes it the best option.托福写作模板：开头段和结尾段托福写作模板：开头段写作模板In this argument, the arguer concludes that ______. To support the conclusion, the arguer points out that______. In addition, the arguer reasons that_____.This argument suffers from several critical fallacies.In this argument, the arguer recommends that_____.To justify this claim, the arguer provides the evidence that ____. In addition, he cites the result of a recent study that _____. A careful examination of this argument would reveal how groundless the conclusion is.In this analysis, the arguer claims that ____. To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example that____. In addition, the arguer assumes that ____. This argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.In this argument, the arguer advocates that ____. The recommendation is based on the observation that_____. Meanwhile, the arguer assumes that____. The argument is problematic for two reasons.The conclusion in this argument is that_____. In support of this prediction, the arguer claims that _____.Moreover, the arguer assumes that_____. This argument is fraught with vague, oversimplified and unwarranted assumptions.托福写作模板：结尾段写作模板In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is in valid and misleading. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to prove that_____. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer can provideconcrete evidence that_____. Otherwise, the arguer is simply begging the question throughout the argument.To conclude, the argument is not persuasive as it stands. Before we accept the conclusion, the arguer must present more facts that_____. To solidify the argument, the arguer would have to produce more evidence concerning____.As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that ____. Additionally, the arguer must provide evidence to _____.To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning that_____.In conclusion, the arguer fails to _____. To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that____. To better evaluate the argument, we need more information about that____.托福备考之如何让你的文章更有新意文章规范的布局对于托福写作来说，规范的写作布局还是必不行少的。
托福雅思出分案例
托福雅思出分案例托福出分案例：“从英语小白到托福小达人”我有个朋友小明，那英语基础啊，真的是有点“惨不忍睹”。
最开始他连基本的英语句子都说不利索，语法错误一箩筐，口语就更是“灾难现场”。
他决定考托福的时候，我们都有点担心他是不是在做白日梦呢。
但小明可是个有决心的人，他就像一个勇士冲向托福这个大怪兽。
他先从词汇开始攻克，每天像个小和尚念经一样背单词，什么百词斩、墨墨背单词这些APP都被他用到了极致。
那些单词卡片在他的桌子上堆得像小山一样。
对于口语，他可是下了苦功夫。
他找了个外教一对一练习，最开始的时候，他跟外教交流就像鸡同鸭讲，自己都觉得尴尬得脚趾头能抠出三室一厅。
但是他不怕丢人，每次都硬着头皮说，慢慢的，他能说的句子越来越长，也越来越流利。
写作也是个大难题，他就开始疯狂阅读范文，学习那些高分作文的结构和表达。
自己写完作文后，到处找老师给他批改，一点点地改进。
经过几个月的努力，他终于走上了托福考场。
考试结束后，他心里那叫一个忐忑啊，就像等待审判的犯人。
结果出来的那一刻，他自己都不敢相信，他竟然考了100分！他从一个英语小白成功逆袭成为托福小达人。
这个分数对于那些英语大神来说可能不算什么，但是对于他来说，那可是几个月汗水换来的珍贵成果啊。
雅思出分案例：“雅思逆袭之旅”我认识的小红，她考雅思的经历就像一部励志剧。
小红一开始雅思的听力就像是听天书一样，那些英式发音、连读、弱读搞得她晕头转向。
阅读也是，题量大得吓人，她经常做不完。
对于阅读，她开始学习各种阅读技巧，什么略读、扫读，还做了很多精读练习。
每一篇阅读文章她都像考古学家挖掘宝藏一样，把里面的单词、语法、逻辑关系都分析得透透彻彻。
口语方面，她拉着她的小伙伴组成了口语练习小组，每天模拟雅思口语考试。
最开始的时候，话题一展开就卡壳，说来说去就那几句简单的话。
但是他们互相鼓励，互相纠正错误，慢慢地，小红的口语就像开了挂一样，越来越溜。
写作呢，她关注了很多雅思写作的公众号，学习那些大神的写作思路。
托福口语23分范例
托福口语23分范例嗨，大家好！我今天想和你们分享一个托福口语能拿到23分的范例。
你们是不是觉得托福口语很难拿高分啊？我之前也是这么想的，就像在黑暗中摸索着找出口一样，特别迷茫。
那这个范例呢，是我一个朋友的真实经历。
他在考托福口语的时候，题目是关于你最钦佩的人。
他就开始描述他的爷爷。
他说，“My grandpa is like a lighthouse in my life.（把爷爷比作灯塔，形象地说明爷爷的重要性） You know, when I was a little kid, I was so shy that I even dared not to talk to strangers. It was my grandpa who took me out, introduced me to his friends gently, and told me that there was nothing to be afraid of. He was always so positive, just like the sun that could shine away all the clouds in my heart.（用太阳类比爷爷积极的态度能驱散心中的阴霾）”然后呢，他又讲了爷爷的一些趣事。
他说爷爷虽然年纪大了，但是还特别爱学习新东西。
“He's like a curious kid. Once he decided to learn how to use a smartphone. Oh my god, it was not easy for an old man at all. But he never gave up. He kept asking me questions, and every time he learned a new function, he would be so excited, like a child getting a new toy.（这里通过孩子得到新玩具时的兴奋来形容爷爷学会新功能时的状态）”我当时就问他，“你这样说就能拿23分吗？”他笑了笑说，“Well, I think it's not just about what you say, but also how you say it. I made sure my pronunciation was clear, just like a singer hitting every note right.（把发音清晰比作歌手唱准每个音符） And I didn't rush through my answers. I paused at the right places, like a storyteller leaving some suspense.（用说书人制造悬念来类比停顿的作用）”我从他这个范例里学到了很多。
托福写作优秀范文实例(26)
托福写作优秀范文实例（26）Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.People often say “ Those who don’t understand history will repeat the mi stakes of the past.” I totally disagree. I don’t see any evidence that people have made smart decisions based on their knowledge of the past. To me, the present is what is important, not the past. I think that people, the weather, and politics determine what happens, not the past.People can change. We can’t assume that people will continue to hate one another just because they have had hated one another for years. Look at Turkey and Greece. When Turkey had an earthquake, Greece sent aid. When Greece had an earthquake, Turkey sent aid. Now, these two countries are cooperating and looking forward to improved relations. No doubt, if we looked at thepast, we could have thought this was a lost cause. But people change.The weather can change. Farmers think that they can plant certain crops because these crops have always grown well in their fields before. But the weather can change. There can be a long drought. The crops that have always worked well , will die. A drought-resistant crop needs to be tried. If we looked at the past, we would not have changed our crop and we would have lost our farm. Weather changes.Politics an change. According to my way of thinking, politicians must be responsive to changes in the people. If politicians looked only at the past, they would always say the same thing. People change. On the whole, people today care about human rights. They warn all people to have the equal rights. If we looked at the past in the United States, we would see a lot of discrimination against races, women, and sexual orientation. Now, that is changing. Politicians changes, too.As a rule what is important today is to follow the mood of the moment. We can’t be looked in the past.It doesn’t do us any good to think about the past. People, the weather, and politics can change in any direction. The direction of this change, in my opinion, can not be predicted by studying the past.。
托福高分范文：孩子玩电脑游戏是否是浪费时间
托福高分范文：孩子玩电脑游戏是否是浪费时间是否同意这样一个说法：玩电脑游戏是浪费时间，不应该允许孩子玩电脑游戏。
这个题目有两个点要注意，一个是人物仅限小孩，讨论玩电脑对成人的影响是偏题;另外，仅限玩电脑游戏，说电脑可以帮助工作、或者用电脑听音乐看电影可以放松也是跑题。
托福写作文章框架1. 开头：同意(孩子不应该玩电脑)。
2. 论证段1：玩电脑游戏容易上瘾沉迷、影响学习。
3. 论证段2：长期玩电脑游戏伤身体。
孩子正在发育，所以对他们不好。
4. 让步段：玩电脑是可以放松身心，但是鼓励孩子在户外运动更能放松身心，所以不是必须让孩子晚电脑。
5. 结尾：孩子不应该玩电脑。
托福写作范文Attempts of the past decade to separate computer from children’s development has been largely unsuccessful, as computers have become an indispensable part of their lives at home and at school. While admitting to the usefulness of computer in general, I personally have strong reservations for exposing children to computer games, for the following reasons.First and foremost, playing computer games will distract students from learning. To be more specific, easily addicted to, and lured by, computer games, children may spend more time than necessary playing them, even at night. As a result, they wouldhave next to no time for homework and revision, let alone other time-consuming tasks such as extra-curricular tutoring and group projects. For example, many students in our school play online multiplayer games such as DOTA and PUBG, which are not only exciting, but also give us the chance to Having more fun playing together than playing alone, they often lose control of time and play until late night, neglecting their assignments and revisions, as a result of which their learning efficiency is significantly undermined.Furthermore, if children frequently play computer games, their health may be negatively influenced. To elaborate, early childhood is a period of rapid physical development, when children are susceptible to external influences. In that regard, long-time computer use exert a particularly damaging influence on them. The increased cases of shortsightedness among teenagers is a precise case in point. In recent decades, increasingly using the computer for learning and entertainment, students are exposed to fast-moving images and the radiation from computer screen for a longer time. Furthermore, many students use computers at night, which means the contrast between dark environment and the screen deepens the damage to their eyesight. A correlation between increased computer use and students’declining eyesight is therefore observed. Had students spent less time on the computer, their eyesight would doubtlessly have been much better than it is now.Doubtlessly, though, playing computer games allows students to relax after studying. As is broadly acknowledged, children today labor under intense competitive pressure, to which games provide a welcome relief. However, hardly could it be over-emphasized that encouraging students to play outside is a better solution in that regard, as it allows students to communicate and to build a stronger relationship with others. Thus, even as a stress relief, electronic games should not be prioritized.In conclusion, not only are computer games distracting, they may also damagestudents’health. That other methods are just as effective when it comes to providing relaxation further persuades me that playing computer games is a waste of time, and should be discouraged in children.。
托福写作高分范文谢侃
托福写作高分范文谢侃一、题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older rather than when you are young.二、范文。
Well, I wholeheartedly disagree with the statement that it's better to take risks and explore new things when you're older instead of when you're young.Let's start with the fact that when you're young, you've got this amazing energy. It's like you're a battery that's fully charged. Young people can bounce back from failures more easily. For example, if a young person decides to start a new business selling some super trendy but really wacky fashion items and it flops, they can just laugh it off and say, "Hey, it was a cool try." They don't have as many financial and family responsibilities as older folks. So, they can afford to take risks like that.On the other hand, older people often have a set routine. They're used to their comfort zones. My uncle, for instance, has been working in the same bank for over 30 years. He has a mortgage to pay, kids in college, and he's just not in a position to suddenly go on some wild adventure like traveling around the world to study ancient tribal cultures. It would be really tough for him to step out of his normal life.Also, when you're young, your mind is more open to new ideas. You haven't been set in your ways as much. Youngsters are constantly bombardedwith new trends, new technologies, and new ways of thinking on social media and in school. They're more likely to be excited about exploring something completely unheard of, like starting a drone racing club in their neighborhood or learning how to code a virtual reality game.In conclusion, taking risks and exploring new things is like a natural fit for the young. They've got the energy, the flexibility, and the open mindedness that older people often lack. So, it's definitely better to be young and adventurous rather than waiting until you're old.。
托福高分范文：进步总是好事吗？
托福高分范文：进步总是好事吗？托福写作试题Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasonsand examples to support your answer.托福写作模板Looking back to my school years, our headmaster always encouraged us to study hard and make progress day by day. Without doubt, if one refuses to march ahead, he is likely to lag behind. It must be a commonly-cherished aimfor all to make progress because no one desires to be behind.Nevertheless, some side effects of progress have shown up in many aspects of our daily life. From some perspectives,progress is not always good.First, progress in industries has become a major contributor to pollution problems. With a higher degree of industrialization, an increasing number of factories are being built. Those factories established near heavilypopulated areas might release industrial waste into waterways in the area. As a consequence, that water can be seriously polluted. What's worse, some of the pollutants can be poisonous. Meanwhile, industrial gases are released into the air fromfactory chimneys. Thus, the air can also be severely polluted. Such potential hazards can threaten the health of residents and disturb the ecological balance in affectedareas. There have been many news reports about nuclear power stations polluting water and air and causing fatal illnesses.In addition, some social progress has forced modern citizens to live under overwhelming pressure. Admittedly, a fast pace of life has become a feature of modern society.Most working people face unprecedented workplace challenges and competition. Additionally, in the face of rising housing and fuel prices and other dailynecessities,many people have no other way but to work day and night.Seldom can they afford enough time to totally relax. Many have to give up much time that should be spent with their families. This is a huge sacrifice. Needless to say, heavy burdens imposed by social progress have deprived many people of the ability to enjoy life.The progress of information technology has also posed many problems. To illustrate, the prevalence of the Internet h a s given rise to the spread of online rumors, which considerably undermines social security and stability.Frequent cyber crimes have roused negative public attention, and result in diversified frauds and networkhacking attacks. Without doubt, these are doing great harm to the normal interests of ordinary citizens.To conclude, everything in the world is double-sided and progress is no exception. In spite of the fact that progress has brought numerous benefits to most people, we should never neglect to consider its negative impacts and act to mitigate them.托福写作翻译回首学生时代，校长总是鼓励我们要“好好学习，天天向上”。
托福高分范文：人们接受教育比过去容易吗？
托福高分范文：人们接受教育比过去容易吗？托福写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easierto become educated than in the past.优秀范文：In the face of the multi-channels of education today, people no longer limit themselves to the most traditional way to learn. Attending classes and reading books used to be the only method for an individual to become knowledgeable and well-educated. With the society advancing into the information age, more diversified means of learning are available for those who intend to eliminate their illiteracy. Indeed, it has become much easier for people to become educated than before.First of all, advanced technology has made it easier for people to teach themselves at home. Thanks to the tremendous impacts of the information age, endless sources of education are provided through the broad network of mass media. Such intelligent devices like computers and other digital tools are easy to operate and thus could sustain people to complete self-taught courses in many fields. With simple clicks of the mouse, the learning process could begin and run smoothly at home. For instance, a richsupply of online classes helps create a vivid classroom atmosphere for the students. By following each step of instructions on the websites, knowledge could be gained and skills could be accumulated. Furthermore, useful reading materials could be downloaded and installed in portable digital readers. People no longer have to borrow printed books from the library or purchase piles of heavy books from the bookstores. Reading has become more convenient and access to a wide range of books is easier than ever. Besides, communication tools could be made full use of forlearners to exchange ideas with their classmates and tutors online. This would definitely ensure studying efficiency.In addition to the diversified channels of self-study, people today are also blessed with numerous choices of school education. More freedom is rendered to all the social members who could make their own learning plans and a larger variety of schools and courses are available for them to choose. Thus, contrary to the past when the backward education system hindered many earnest students from furthering their studies, there is no need to worry about the possible loss of opportunities to receive formal education.To illustrate, the admission to institutions of higher learning has been made easier due to the enlargedenrollment. Public schools run by the government are not the only choice for many people. With the development of private schools and the easier entrance into overseas universities, students are given better chances to pursue their studies. Also, an increasing number of vocational schools and training classes are also joining in the mighty forces of the modern education network.By contrast, it was more difficult for people to become educated in the past. Take China for example, during the ancient time, women were not allowed to attend schools. Their destined role was supposed to be housewives. Just as an old saying goes, innocence is the virtue of women.Equality of learning was extremely hard to achieve. Sex discrimination in education used to be a major factor that made intelligent ladies illiterate. In the revolutionary period, although women were offered the chance to learn, the shortage of schools and the comparatively stricter admission also made it impossible for all the citizens to receive education. In a word, the backwardness of societyhindered many people from becoming educated during the old days.Indeed, people are fortunate enough to gain easier access to different forms of education today. Due to the greater demand of well-educated talents, it is imperativefor the government to enhance the general knowledge level of people by creating an advanced education system. Looking back on the difficult past, every individual should cherish the freer learning environment this new era has created.中文翻译：在当今多渠道的教育面前，人们不再拘泥于最传统的学习方式。
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听力和阅读一样，单词量太少，基本上你换个德语或者西班牙语听起来效果是一样的，完全陌生。听力的准备，如果时间长，绝对是听写，无数牛人推荐过，我身边也有不少朋友实践过，都取得了很大的进步。但是复习时间没那么多的话，词以类记的学科分类MP3一定要熟练!我背《词》的时候并没有同时听MP3，因为忘记有光盘了……后来发现词我看到就知道什么意思，但是听MP3时完全跟不上。其实这个就跟大家常在听力中遇到的困难一样，就算这个词你读文章时认识，但是你没听过，你耳朵不熟练，脑海里没有相关记忆，你无法瞬间反映出中文释义，在听力中大量出现这样的情况，那你死定了。所以词汇的MP3一定要常听。题目我做的是120，因为barron听力太……他妈长了，有些小牛人都会为此骂人的。听力一定要让自己常听，而且要听自己可以理解的东西，最好有中文翻译，免得会记错了反而引发悲剧。常听可以让你对此熟练，做题目的时候听到词可以同时翻译过来知道在说什么，否则稍微一思考这词什么意思，你就少听了好几个单词，而且根据我的答题经验，ETS很**，你少听的往往都是考点。
作者有话说：
这是一篇我会很用心写的帮助真正菜鸟的一片感想+经验。不会引导你过100，我的成绩里我承认有运气成分。但我比较把握让你过90分.这个目标让牛人不屑,但是有很多人,英文像我一样菜的离谱,但还是想走这条出国之路,我希望可以帮到你。写的东西很多，大部分很初级，大家可以选择性阅览。推荐看下我写的作文的部分，我觉得比较实用。还有就是最后一段感想，我很真诚。
1战 9+12+18+21
2战 9+4+20+22
3战 28+27+20+27
阅读听力
这两项一直是国人的强悍之处，牛人比比皆是，已经有无数的范例可学。这部分我还是强烈推荐参考一些专门指导资料来准备。对我来说，我单词量少得可怜，两次阅读都是9分，基本排除各种可能，唯一的解释就是我根本看不懂。而解决这个的唯一的出路就是背单词。背单词的方法当然首推17天搞定GRE那本书的方法。我妈打我小时候起就教育我说好记性不如烂笔头，我想很多人家长也都是这么教育过来的吧，所以我高考时打算背单词的时候要把每个单词用A4的纸一遍一遍的写，但是真的“什么也记不住”。就像XDF老师说的，这样记忆反倒给大脑一个溜号的理由，那就是反正我在写了呀，看我多用功呀。我也试过找人听写，但好像也没什么大效果，课堂上听写听不出来老师会K你，找其他人就没这份担心也没这份认真了。
10.18的作文题目我忘记掉了，531作文解决问题靠自己知识和经验还是靠别人的，我选择靠自己的，因为以前有个什么小问题(时间太久记不清，反正是编的)我靠自己解决出来了，我觉得我自己很牛逼很享受。再因为别人的知识和经验是错误的曾经那个有过什么事情我被误导了结果很悲惨。还因为现在有网络，可以瞬间扩充自己的知识更准确的解决问题，不需要别人。原因数不是问题，你倒是要控制时间内完成就好。为了实践前两次的作文经验，这次的作文，it's better to 花钱旅游还是存钱，我首先瞬间选择存钱。然后理由1，我选择后者可以因为必须选后者，马上就可以想到，老子缺钱啊，我说我的工作工资很低，一个月才赚900多美金，我根本就没有很多钱。我儿子上个月春游，花了1000多美金，我要为此省吃俭用两个月。然后理由2，我选择前者，可以是我不喜欢啊，不需要道理，我不喜欢就不去做。那么好，我不喜欢旅游。我是个修机器的，整个场子机器坏了就两个人修，其中一个是我，老子干活儿都干不完，还旅游?而且我不喜欢旅游，更不喜欢花钱旅游。3.在编一个需要存钱的理由，那好吧，我说我爸对我很好，把我养大，很辛苦，一个很伟大的父亲。他的梦想是开辆汽车载着我和妈妈去兜风，那是对全家人来说都无比幸福的时刻。所以老子要存钱啊!最后一段写，你也该知道为什么我选择存钱了吧，生活所迫。我是个在普通不过的工人。我现在还不能享受生活，我的目标是让家人享受生活，所以我要努力工作。完毕。出了考场我突然很紧张，汗都出了，那就是题目是it's better，没说prefer，我搞不准会不会写跑题了啊?但是马上安慰自己，这东西不考逻辑……只要跟题目有关，我说的有条理有细节，就可以了。事实证明，真的是这样。
背景介绍：
会让很多人更有自信的。四级490，六级390。一战5.31，60，二战10.18，55。本来我家里据说可以给我安排不要怎么考试就可以录取的学校，而且我本来就是打算出国生活两年，体验一下，对学习没有什么兴趣，但显然旅游不大可能旅几年的……所以我一直没当回事，纯粹的“裸考”。一战成绩下来我比较无语，提不上难过，但二战下来确实觉得有点屈辱了。后来1月份得到学校通知，我胡乱填写的大众传媒语言要求太高，我成绩不够，让我重考，4月份前出成绩，我就赶紧刷了3/14的考位。安逸的过了春节之后开始准备。
单词书我推荐的是词以类记。只要是菜鸟，基本都是单词不过关的吧?只要单词不过关，都是对字母排序的单词书很厌烦，背来背去妈的感觉在背同一个单词。我之前买过T的那种字母排序的单词书，A都没背完，从Z开始背么背道W就背不下去了。后来在书店翻了这本词以类记，感觉很好。尤其是托福的考试内容，阅读听力，基本都是学术性的内容，我觉得这样按分类去记忆词汇对托福考试是很有针对性很有效率的。而且背的时候我强烈建议看例句，有很多例句很精彩，我到现在还记得。还有就是，背的时候要多做笔记，比如长得比较像的词(对我来说这是个问题，我在fertile旁边会写上比如textile、raptile，在contract旁边我会写上content contrast 以及好多好多con-这样的词。让人笑了哈，我在准备考T之前这些4级词汇还是分不清的)，再就是同一学科的词。我以前总觉得背单词被形容词啊动词啊之类的就可以了，那些很细节很具体的名词就不需要背了，但是很可惜，我觉得对T来说，学科中涉及的这些词汇，你可以不背下来如何拼写，但是你要知道是什么意思。不知道意思也可以做题目，大不了就是一个头字母打些。但是这样会让你的阅读变得比较麻烦，思维力度加大。考试期间对菜鸟来说，阅读，能答完我觉得就挺好的了。所以还是背下来吧。词以类记有个缺点，就是中文释义只根据分类主题选择性的写上去的，有时会误导人，因为很多单词是考一种...态度也好,意向也好,靠一种感觉去记忆，只给一种释义我会觉得后期比较难深刻记忆其他解释。这本书我还是没有背完，我花了5天把前面160页背了下来，然后背到有一部分全部是鄙视或者其他情绪的词的时候我又背晕了，感觉背来背去又是一个词了，就放弃了这段，开始做题目。
口语+写作
口语部分我不知道该说什么……每次都很差……二战是两个fair+good，这次干脆三个fair，我日，我还觉得这次我听力部分都听懂了呢。二战时有个题目我记得很清楚，听力我完全不理解，后来让我说，我不知道说什么，我就说了个what the hell is the speaker talking about?another language?一字不差……这次我都听懂了，我也觉得我都说了，怎么还20……要不要复议一下……
阅读的题目我按顺序做的是： OG，高分120，barron，kplan。OG基本一篇错3个，有一篇错5个，还有一篇没错，哈哈，给自己乐够呛。上论坛一看，基本都全对的。
高分120，我背了上面提到的那些词汇就做了这个，然后……很尴尬很悲剧。当时有个投票，基本上大部分人65道题目错的范围都在13还是多少道以内的，反正就是很牛逼，然后我每篇错20-24道。本来我挺开心的，我以为对了2/3，可以拿20分了。后来发现不是对几道就给几分，然后再看了那个投票，又开始在心里骂街了。尤其是我记得某一网友，在那个投票后面特意提了他错了4道，还一幅不满足的语气，如果你站到我面前，我对天发誓，我会把你抽到不符合留学资格的。120很难，但我坚持做，每天9点开始，每篇文章最后一道题目做好后剩一分钟，很准。每篇文章我都要总结好多词汇，我的文曲星电池都换了两次，基本上一篇阅读，A4纸我用小字要写满满一纸，大概70+单词，里面大量的46级词汇，看到的时候觉得这个词以前上课的时候看过无数遍，怎么现在都不知道?屈辱么?很屈辱。但正因为屈辱，我基本看一次都背下来了。题目做了5天还是6天就都做完了，手里A4记单词纸一小摞，每天晚上快速过一遍。这时想起来词以类记的单词好几天没看了，拿起来一看，我日，忘了不少……所以很重要的一点就是，单词一定要常复习!不经常记忆，很容易遗忘那些不常用的词汇。有一些单词背了几次都没记住，没关系，等你慢慢其他单词都记熟练了，发现就这么一两个总也记不下来，当你发现这点的时候，我相信你就可以记住它们了。一定要重复，无他法。
后来做barron，错得很少了，感觉barron的文章还是读起来比较顺，也许是习惯120的强度了。Kplan做了两篇，没感觉，就没再做，期间还做了一个叫泰德的阅读，很恶心，不推荐。T的阅读一定是先题再读，只是推荐大家先看懂第一段，然后再整理做题思路。还有就是涉及到某一段的内容时，上下两端大概扫一眼，可以没看懂是什么内容，但是要判断和本题的关系。题目全部做完的时候并不能保证你可以把文章也读完，很多段落没有出题目，但是很有内容。再就是，再怎样加大阅读力度都不为过，我做120可以提前1分钟做掉，但是正式考试还是给我紧的要死，第一篇阅读还算是我稍微熟悉点的内容竟然才能把最后一题三个选项勉强填完。
写作是我比较喜欢的部分，因为就这部分相对来说我做的稍微好一点点。三次独立写作都是good。我看到论坛上经常有人在问或者在讨论独立写作怎么写，或者模板，一个四级词汇还有很多不认识的人都可以三次GOOD，经验应该还是比较实用的吧。
独立写作
首先：要不要模板。不需要的。完全不需要。你会说模板节约时间，节约时间用来干嘛?你是指构思作文要很长时间么?那构思基本也是不需要的。独立写作，考语言，不是考思维的。因为这门考试没有年龄限制，7岁和70岁的思维深度完全不一样，如果考思维，怎么确定公平性?所以独立写作很强调很重视的一点就是：举例支持，而且举例要有细节要具体。上海XDF姜其老师讲的(这个人我很喜欢)讲过这样一个例子。要不要撒谎?你可以说不要，因为1.我从不撒谎，爸爸表扬我是好孩子，我小时候打碎了花瓶但是没撒谎，我爸没揍我。我弟弟撒谎了，被爸爸狠揍。2.我姐姐小时候总撒谎。有一次她一个人吃掉了蛋糕，但却说是我吃掉的。大家都不喜欢她，连隔壁老大妈都不喜欢。后来我姐姐死掉了。3.同样一个很弱的原因，具体忘记了……细节就是：不要总讲道理。用很具体的事去证明这个道理，比如打碎花瓶，比如吃了蛋糕，这都是细节。这些细节占主体，支持你列举出来的原因，然后原因支持着你的选择，这就可以了。什么大负小正?什么有保留的让步?版子里好多人说作文写得感觉不错但分很低，那你也确定你要把独立写作一个很简单的东西写得很复杂?