28.利弊分析

The advantages of taking a gap year are obvious. For one thing, it provides relaxation after tiring schooling. For another thing, with a gap year spent in other places or countries, students can experience foreign cultures and broaden their horizon. As the saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” After a gap year, students may forget what they’ve learned and fail to carry on the following schooling efficiently.
One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are of good quality. Moreover, buyers may be cheated online. Through the above analysis, I believe the positive aspects of shopping online far outweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to shop online.
15. 忽略事实
套用句式 1. 正如俗语所说：“事物都有其两面性。”
1. As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”
2. 正如谚语所说，“任何事物都是一分为二的。” 一方面……另一方面……
2. As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand… On the other hand…
6. Therefore →However此处显然表“转折”。 7. pollute →pollutes主语waste gas是不可数名 词，谓语动词要用第三人称单数。 8. It →which此处which引导非限制性定语从 句。 9. 在lead后加to固定短语lead to，意为“导 致……”。 10. caused →cause因为cause与lead to是并列 谓语，时态要保持一致。
10. 通过以上分析 through _______________________ the above analysis
11. 总而言之
_______________________ in conclusion 12. 利大于弊 _______________________ more advantages than
Therefore, every coin has two sides, and we However can’t ignore the fact that the waste gas piped by private cars pollute the air, it is which pollutes harmful to people’s health. What’s worse, more and more private cars may lead more ∧ to traffic jams and caused more traffic cause accidents.
5. 很明显，弊端大过优势。
5. It is obvious that the disadvantages are much more than the advantages.
习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Nowadays, more and more families have private car. There is no deny the fact that cars denying private cars play a important role in people’s an daily life as they bring people comfort and convenient and save much time. Moreover, convenience private cars can promote the development of the economy.
文体概述
利弊分析的议论文是对某种现象或某种 行为的优势和劣势进行对比，一般采用对比 法、比较法。要合理安排顺序，分别点明利 弊的论点、论据和结论。议论文常用一般现 在时，但述说过去的事实时，则用过去时； 预测将来时，要用将来时态。
常用语块 1. 积极方面 2. 消极方面 3. 远远超过 _________________________ positive aspect _________________________ negative aspect
far outweigh _________________________
_________________________ on the contrary
_________________________ obviously
4. 相反
5. 显而易见wenku.baidu.com
6. 至于我而言
_______________________ as far as I am concerned
7. 优势和劣势 advantages _______________________ and disadvantages
8. 不同的态度 9. 如下可见 _______________________ different attitudes
can be seen as follows _______________________
1. car →cars car是可数名词，根据主语 families可知要用复数。 2. deny →denying固定句型There is no denying the fact that…意为“不可否认这个事 实……”。 3. a →an因为important以元音音素开头。 4. convenient →convenience作宾语要用名词 形式。 5. 去掉economy前的the因为“economy(经济) 前不用定冠词。
13. 保持平衡
14. 毫无疑问
disadvantages _______________________ keep balance _______________________
_______________________ without (any) doubt _______________________ ignore the fact
课外作业 在西方许多国家，高中毕业后上大学之前有 一年空出来让学生进行社会实践，这一年叫做休 假学年(gap year)。请写一篇短文谈谈休假学年 的好处和弊端。要点如下： 1. 休假学年的好处。 2. 休假学年的弊端。 3. 假如你有休假学年，你打算做什么？ 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
课堂练习
现在越来越多的人进行网上购物，网购有它的 优势也有它的弊端。请写一篇短文谈谈你对网上 购物的看法。要点如下： 1. 网购的优势。 2. 网购的弊端。 3. 你对网购的态度。 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Nowadays many people prefer to shop online. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, it’s convenient for us to shop online. Second, it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things. But just as the saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. Its negative aspects are also apparent.
Besides, a year outside school requires parents’ extra financial support. As far as I’m concerned, if I had a gap year, I’d choose to teach Chinese in a foreign country. By doing this, I not only could learn more about my native language, but also would be able to introduce our cultures to the outside world.
3. 网上购物的积极方面远远超过消极的方面。
3. The positive aspects of shopping online far outweigh the negative ones.
4. 它的消极方面也很明显。
4. Its negative aspects are also apparent. advantages.