英语：对比类作文写作(正反观点类)

Summary (正反观点对比范文结构 )
What should be included in an argum百度文库ntative writing?
Part1. State an opinion 点题：争论的观点是什么…. Part2. Give some supporting reasons 正反两方的观点分别是什么 Part3. Draw a conclusion 你的观点是什么（一句话）
In my opinion/ As far as I am concerned, ________________.
Application
下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨 论的情况。请你写一封信给21st Century报的编辑说明该情 况，并表明你自己的观点。 比例 理由 40%学生赞同 60%学生不赞同
2) words and sentence structure 3) conjunctions and transitional words 4) handwriting
1 Should students make friends on line ? 4 Chatting on line ,students can more freely express
However/ Nevertheless, _______ disagreed with _________. They hold the view that ______. ① First of all,_____________.
② Moreover, ______________.
③ Most important of all, _______.
1.便于同亲友联系； 2.可以上网查资料； 3.储存有用信息。
1.手机辐射对人健康有害； 2.响铃影响自己和他人学习； 3.容易引起相互攀比。
注意：1.要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译； 2.字数约100字。 3.信的开头和结尾已写好 参考词汇：辐射radiation
Listing useful phrases: 1.keep in touch with communicate with It is convenient for sb to do sth 2. surf the Internet 3. store search for
their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . 6 They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study 3 The internet helps make many friends . 2 Some people are for it . 5 Others are against it . 7 Some students get cheated on line. 8 Students should place their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us
4. be harmful for /to
do harm to
5. affect/ influence/ have an effect(influence) on
6.lead sb to do sth compare with
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A possible version
Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with However their foreign language studies . ______ ,others are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on Besides study ._______ ,some students get cheated on line. __________, students should place their study , In my opinion health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us
Pattern
There is a discussion about/on ________________. Opinions are divided on the question, _________ agreed, for they believe that _______. ① For one thing, _______________ . ② For another thing, _____________. ③ Furthermore/Besides_______________.
Conjunctions
and transitional words
转折类 but/yet/however/nevertheless/despite… 对比类 on the contrary/rather than/instead of 递进强调类 besides/furthermore/moreover/above all/ to make matters worse/anyway/… 因果类 so/for/therefore/as a result of/due to/thanks to.. 时间类 first of all/ in the first place/meanwhile/finally… 列举类 for example/ such as/ and so on… 个人观点类 in my opinion/view as far as I know 结论类 in short / in brief/ in a word/ to sum up
正反观点类
Teaching aims
1. To improve the general ability of writing
2. To practise writing about contrast
The ways to improve your writing
1) article structure