新东方考研英语应用文写作·

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Directions: Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Your essay must meet the requirements below.

1. Write out the message conveyed by the graph.

2. Make an analysis of the strange phenomenon

3. Give your comments

1, 第一句：描述图表，指明变化或不同

①审题：分析深层含义（要求：）；尤其仔细分析说明性文字

（同学们，我们来观察下这个图表。正如上面两张曲线图所示，从1990年到1995年蛋类的平均价格不断上升，并且其需求量也相应增加。曲线图还表明，从1995年到2000年期间蛋类价格下降，而且需量也下降。这种现象是很奇怪的并值得研究。根据市场经济法则，需求量增加会引起价格上涨。也就是说，当价格上升时，需求就下降，而当价格回落时，需求就增加。但是现在的现实恰好相反。

产生这种奇怪的现象的原意是很明显的。从1990年到1995年期间随着我国社会主义市场经济的发展，人民的收入，其中包括工资、奖金和各种补贴迅速增加。虽然蛋类价格的需求量也急趋增加。另一方面，当蛋类的需求达到某一点时，需求量就停止上升，因为人们开始把越来越多的钱花在衣着、娱乐和国内外的旅游上。普遍认为，从1995年到2000年旅游开支占我国人民总消费量的很大一部分。因此，同期蛋类需求量的下降也似乎是合理的。

我的看法是，由于家禽养殖业的不断发展，蛋类价格很可能下降，因为对蛋类的需求有限，消费量的下降也是必然的。）

②描述数据，要抓重点。

③要考察有几个变量。2个变量：蛋类价格和需求量

④套用模板，组成第一句

As is shown by the two graphs above, the average price of eggs was on the rise from 1990 to 1995 and the demand for them increased correspondingly. The graphs also indicate that during the period from 1995 to 2000 the price eggs declined, and so did the demand.

2，第二句：进一步描述主题（视情况而定）

The phenomenon is quite strange and worth studying. According to the law of market economy, the increase in demand results in higher prices. That is to say, when prices climb, the demand decreases, and when prices fall, the demand grows.

Now the reality was just the other way round.

二，第二段：分析原因（4-6句）

1，第一句：过渡句。

The reasons for this strange phenomenon are obvious.

第二句：谈第一个原因

On the one hand, during the period from 1990 to 1995 with the development of our socialist market economy people’s income, bonus and different kinds of benefits, increased rapidly. Though the price of eggs rose gradually, the demand for them grew sharply, too.

第三句：谈第二个原因

On the other hand, when the demand for eggs reached a certain point, it stopped rising because people began to spend more and more money on clothing, recreations and tours round the country and even round the world.

第四句：进一步强调原因或其危害

As a result, it seemed reasonable that the demand for eggs declined during

the same period of time.

三，第三段：发展趋势

As far as I’m concerned, with the domestic poultry farming continuing to

develop, the price of eggs is likely to decline because the demand for them is

limited and the fall in consumption of them is also inevitable.

附：数据的表达方法

增加：increase/ raise/ rise/ go up

减少: decrease/ grow down/ drop/ fall

波动：fluctuate/ rebound/ undulate/ wave

稳定：remain stable/ stabilize/ level off

数据变化的修饰词

Rapid/ rapidly; dramatic/dramatically; significant; sharp/

obvious; steep(急剧升降的)； steady; stable; slight; gradual;

Part ⅳ应用文

一，文体

信函、备忘录、告示&通知、便条

二，信函写作

信函写作格式

一，称呼

1，写给组织：Dear Sir or Madam,

2，写给个人：Dear +人名

二，正文

3段，7句，100-120单词，3-5关联词，3-5从句

1，第一段：1-2句（视句子长短而定）