雅思小作文piechart

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Fast Food Preferences of Teenagers in the USA
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26% Hamburgers Pizza French Fries Fried Chicken Tacos Sushi
The pie chart shows the fast foods that teenagers prefer in the USA.
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注意：
• 若遇到饼图中有总数的描述，宜在开头先写，for example:
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Overall, Coca-cola sold a total of 17.1 billion cases of their fizzy drink product worldwide in the year 2000. OR Overall, a total of 17.1 billion cases of Coca-cola fizzy drink were sold worldwide in the year 2000.
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• 主动：in 1932, 42% of the people (largest portion) worked in the industrial sector.
• 42% of the people chose to work in the industrial sector, which was the largest portion of the total labor force.
• Relatively, the industrial sector attracted the largest amount of workforce (42%) in 1932.
• 1932 witnessed the fact that working in the industrial sector became most people’s choice (42%).
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•The following two graphs display the distribution of workforce between the ages of 16 and 65 in 1932 and 1992 in Great Britain.
OR •The two pie charts illustrate the distributional situation of labor force from 16 years old to 65 in two different years in the UK.
• 被动： 42% of the people (largest portion) were employed in the industrial sector.
• 分词表被动：The people employed in the industrial sector covered 42% of the total.
（2）There were 42% of the people (largest portion) working in the industrial sector.
（ 3 ） The people working in the industrial sector occupied 42 % of the total labor force, which was the most significant part of all.
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Pie Chart
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图表‘口诀’
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Overview
• 20 mins • 150 words • 静态饼图与动态饼图
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写作步骤
• 先审题，在看图 • 几张饼，几种馅 • 哪个馅儿多，哪个馅儿少 • 数字，比率，变化
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Structure
一般分为三个部分 1. Introduction: paraphrase
• 定语从句：The percentage of the people who chose to work in the industrial sector / were employed in the industrial sector covered 42%.
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• Comparatively, working in the industrial sector would be most people’s choice (42%) among all the sectors in 1932.
• 变换词性（n. v. adj. adv.） • 变换主语 • 变换语态（主动／被动） • 使用从句 • 同义词替换
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Examples of Paraphrase
• 表达目标：1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多， 42%
（1）In 1932, most of the people (42%) worked in the industrial sector.
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Introduction
• Sentence patterns:
• The pie chart(s) shows/ illustrates/ reveals/suggests/ demonstrates/ indicates/ describes…
• Or
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Introduction
• How to paraphrase:
2. Body: describe the graph in details
3. Conclusion
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Tense
• 文章的起始句作为全文的介绍，说的是图表告诉 （show, indicate, demonstrate, illustrate)我们什么， 所以用一般现在时；
• 在文章的主体部分，时态的选择根据图表给出的时间 信息具体决定是一般现在时态、一般过去、还是一般 将来。
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Body之单饼
• 可先按照扇形面积大小从大到小排列数据。主体段在 描写各个扇形数据的时候，要注意详略，即最大和第 二大的扇形要重点描述。