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慎小嶷：十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6-9分范文全解(

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目录分析
Education类各分数段范文剖析
解读Education类真题库
学有余力者
Technology类各分数段范文深入讲解
解读Technology类真题库
学有余力者
Media类各分数段范文剖析
解读Media类真题库
学有余力者
Government类各分数段范文剖析
解读Government类真题库
学有余力者
Development类各分数段范文剖析
解读Development 类真题库
学有余力者
Culture类各分数段范文深入讲解
解读Culture类真题库
学有余力者
解读Environment类真题库
Environment类各分数段范文剖析
学有余力者
IELTS写作全真题速查指南
Day 9走路去纽约：全球化类真题库与各分数段范文剖析
慎小嶷：十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6目录分析 05 读书笔记
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思维导图
关键字分析思维导图
剑桥
题库
题库
官方
官方

慎小嶷雅思范文

慎小嶷范文部分总结1、Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree of disagree?Modern technology has revolutionized life in three main fields: work, transport and communication. Although modern technology is often blamed for stress and alienation, I doubt that many people would want to turn back the clock to the pre-technological age.Despite the fact that life was simpler in former times, I would prefer not to return to that lifestyle, because that simplicity was due to a lack of choice. Before large jet airliners came in in the 1960s, for example, air travel was beyond the reach of most people. Before electronic cash registers, people had to spend a lot of time on math calculations to carry out transactions. Furthermore, our knowledge of the world around us, especially foreign countries, was sketchy before television brought us the vivid images of documentaries. Modern technology has brought liberation from the exhausting and boring labor and has set us free to enjoy more interesting work and leisure.It is nor even always true that modern technology is more complex to use than it was to perform household chores. Caring for a horse was a far more complicated and time-consuming matter than starting up a car and taking it to the petrol station for its 5,000-mile household chores. Caring for a horse was a far more complicated and time-consuming matter than starting up a car and taking it to the petrol station for its 5,000-mile service. One has to read the novel from past times to realize the anxiety and frustration that result from transport systems limited to the speed of the horses.The example I have given are just a few of that can illustrate the case that modern technology makes life more convenient. Probably what can may the people yearn for the good old past simple ways I forces us to speed up our pace of life. But sometimes this change can be resisted, when we set ourselves simple priorities and stick to them.2、Some people think intelligent students should be educated together with other students. Do you agree or disagree?It is not uncommon for talented students to get admitted to gift programs today.Letting talented students take special courses make sense to some extent. They need a more challenging curriculum as they are fast learners and their learning process requires little repetition of the information that has been taught by the teacher. If they find the too easy form them to handle, these intelligent children will end up learning little or nothing ar all. As a matter of fact, many students who are inattentive in class are intelligent ones. Regular courses simply fail to attract their attention.Then form a purely psychological point of view, intelligent students also feel more comfortable if there are separate classes for them. They would feel isolated and become oversensitive if they spent all their class time with their ordinary peers. This is often true because smart children not only have different learning pattern, their communication patterns tend to be different from those of the ordinary students as well.Still, it should be pointed out that segregating intelligent student from their peers is nor without its own downside. Some educators believe such classes will be drained of student leaders and role models. Segregation on the basis of IQ may even send a message to those who take regular courses that their work is not as valued as the intelligent students’, which will lower the average students’ self-esteem.Overall, I would suggest that gifted students spend their class time with their peers. But in addition to that, they should be encouraged to take electives that challenge them mentally.3、Some people think citizens should be totally responsible for their own health costs. Others think it is better to have a health care system which provides free health services for all. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.A much debated issue these days is whether citizens should take out private health insurance of not. In this essay, I will argue that people who can afford it should be privately insured, but free medical care must be made available for those too poor to do so.The most important reason for encouraging people to take out private health insurance is the cost to thegovernment. Free health coverage for people who are able to pay for it is a waste of public money. Of course, people will only pay health insurance premiums if they know that they are getting good value for their money. If they get sick, they will pay little or nothing at all. In addition, the privately insured are entitled to special benefits such as having the choice of their own doctors, and being able to avoid long waiting lists for hospital beds.On the other hand, those who realty cannot afford to pat private insurance premiums, which are often very high, should still be entitled as citizens to the best medical are available. They cannot be expected to pay their own medical bills. However, if they are working, they should still pay a percentage of their wages (for example 1% to 2%) as a tax which pays towards the cost of providing free medical services.In conclusion, I think most people should privately insure their health. But it is unreasonable to suppose that all citizens can afford it. Therefore, a safety net in the form of a basic free health care system must exist for the very poor and the unemployed.4、Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent do you think television has positively or negatively affected culture development?It has been around forty years since television was first introduced into British households and people today still have mixed views on whether it has a positive or a negative influence on society.Many people believe that television damages culture. It promotes the stronger culture of countries such as Britain and the us and weakens the cultures of countries such Britain and the US and weakens the cultures of less wealthy countries, This is because the stronger countries are able to assert their own culture by producing more programmes that are shown widely around the world. These programmes then influence people, particularly young people, in the countries where they are shown.Also, because television networks need to attract large audience to secure their financial survival, they must produce progtammes that are interesting to a broad range of people. In Britain this range is very broad because we are a multicultural society and people of all backgrounds like to watch television. To interest all these different people, most television programmes are short, full of action and excitement and pursue themes common to all cultures, such as crime and romance. Television programmes that concentrate on or develop themes related to one particular culture are not so successful because they only interest a smaller audience. Nevertheless we must recognize that television does have some positive effects on cultures within a society. People who do not live within their own culture can access it through multicultural stations on TV.In conclusion, I take the view that television promotes and strengthens those cultures that are wealthy and influential while it weakens cultures that are already in a weak position.5、Many people ignore basic science today. What are the causes and what are your solutions?While technological developments are constantly covered by the mass media, basic science is hardly getting any attention form the public.I tend to believe the public ignorance of basic science research is largely due to its unpredictable value. Compared with applied technology that can produce almost immediate benefits, basic science, scientists have to devote a great deal of time and energy to their research, while being very uncertain if this devotion will lead to the intended outcomes. Many scientists become dissatisfied with their working conditions and earning and in the end, they choose to leave their laboratories for other jobs, which can help to explain why basic science is often ignored by the public.Since basic science is the foundation of most technological developments, some steps must be taken to reverse this trend. On the national level, the government should fulfill its responsibility in raising public awareness of the significance of basic science get the funding and the public support that is urgently needed. Also, companies and institutes should financially support scientists who commit themselves to basic science, not just for the sake of profit, but for the development of science as well. Additionally, the public should be made aware that there would be very few technological advancements if basic science were largely ignored.Basic science deserves more public attention. Certainly none of us want it to become a completely stagnantfield due to our ignorance.6、As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element for individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?Nowadays, many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feeling about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important to the well-being of that person.Employees get jobs satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback form superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when some feels they are improving of developing their skills through training opportunities, for examples, then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker, the sense of belonging to a team of a working community also contribute to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.Of course not everyone enjoys his work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labor relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented, then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction.。

慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作(剑14版)

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思路清楚！推荐。
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英文学术写作里不接受缩写形式，shouldn't必须改成should not，don't应该写成do not；相应的I'm要写成I am；而can't应该写cannot（请注意：cannot中间没有空格）。
技能（提高）效率科技（保障）安全权利（对应）责任环境（影响）健康就业（获得）财务文化（带来）乐趣
全球化类真题旅游类真题
动物类真题
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流程图的4要素
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Part 2针对28类常考话题的实用短语
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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全多多研读别人的优秀范文，在进行仿写和改进，也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法，下面小编给大家带来【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全，希望可以帮助到大家。

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】文化类真题7分范文文化类真题【In some countries, traditional arts are going extinct. Some people think that we should try to keep them. To what extent you agree?】Today, many types of traditional arts and crafts are struggling on the brink of extinction. People have different attitudes toward this trend. As for me, I believe that traditional arts should still be cherished by us. Traditional arts are national treasures handed down from our ancestors; therefore, it is our responsibility as inheritors to keep them alive. A nation without abundant traditional arts, such as folk music, ethnic drawings or painting would feel rootless. Consequently, should those brilliant traditional arts die out, the nation's sense of belonging would be seriously eroded. Even worse once a form of traditional art disappears in history, it could never be truly revived. Only until then will the people realize that is a great loss, which at best would only result in nostalgia and regrets.如今，许多传统工艺正濒临灭绝。

慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总

慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总今天我们要跟大家分享的雅思写作模板，是来自慎小嶷的雅思写作参考书系列。

接下来请看内容：慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总。

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】动物类真题7.5分范文动物类真题【Humans should not use animals as sources of food and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?】需要注意的单词：animal-rightblood-thirstyIn ancient times, there was no opposition to the exploitation of animals. But now many animal-right activists object to consumption of animals as sources of food and clothing. I would not go along with their viewpoint. It may be true that animal consumption poses threats to our lives. For instance, not only is the hunting of endangered species such as whaling blood-thirsty, it can also ruin the ecosystem. Since citizens are increasingly aware of the far-reaching impact of the extinction of endangered species, it is reasonable for the government to regulate the consumption of endangered species as food and clothing.在古代，没有人反对将动物作为一种资源来使用。

十天突破雅思写作【如何突破雅思写作的瓶颈】

十天突破雅思写作【如何突破雅思写作的瓶颈】关于雅思作文,很多考生经常问的问题是:什么样的文章才可能在雅思作文考试中得高分?对于这个问题的回答,雅思老师们各执一词。

比较一致的看法是,雅思作文强调单词和句子。

换言之,只要作文中有鲜见的单词和复杂的句子,那么就是好文章。

这种看法主导着雅思作文教学,成为老师和考生的惯性思维。

然而,从实践来看,仅仅关注单词和句子结构,并不能真正提高中国考生的作文分数。

如何突破雅思写作的瓶颈1) Task Achievement/Response作文的第一个要求就是要切题。

对于Task1来讲就是要挖掘出图形当中的主要特点，并以清晰地思路呈现出来。

很多考生小作文的基本写法都能掌握，但是拿到图形后并不能分出何谓major或是minor信息，成了流水账。

而Task2出图模式基本都有一个三角结构，三角顶点就是文章的主题，两角就是争议的两面，需要考生在看题的时候能够找到这三角。

而且找到主题后写的过程不可以偷换概念，如曾考分析引起交通堵塞(traffic jam)的原因，考生兴致勃勃的写下原因之一是：私家车越来越多导致的(an increasing number of private cars),此原因很合理，可是余下的部分考生却偷换了概念，大谈特谈私家车的好处(advantages)和坏处(disadvantages).那自然就已偏题甚远。

2) Coherence and cohesion提到逻辑连贯性考生自然会想到多用连接词(cohesive device),于是从以前的完全不用到了文章中连接词泛滥，反而又影响了文章的正常逻辑。

官方推出的Road to IELTS上，有列表分类说明一些linking words的使用频繁度，分为少用，中用和随意用(use sparingly, use moderately, use as desired)三类，学生可参看做参照。

其实在逻辑连贯这一块学生还容易忽视一类词,代词(pronoun)。

慎小嶷写作口语访谈

慎老师，您好，再谈10天突破雅思写作，您有什么新的体会或者心得要和烤鸭们分享？慎小嶷：上周末刚从加拿大回来，就接到出版人的电话，说我的新书《十天突破雅思写作》很快要再印了。

当时感觉很难相信，因为1月15号书才出版的，而且第一次印了6000册，培训书里面算第一次印的比较多的，怎么会2月就要再印了？这个星期碰到了一些学生，我才知道《十天突破雅思写作》这本书在北京已经火成这样了，之前确实没有想到的。

很感谢朋友们的支持网友Mable：PAT,请问3月8日考流程图的几率有多大啊？谢谢！慎小嶷：您好：大家都怕流程图，但是我坚定的认为流程图比table, pie chart, bar chart和line graph都要更好写。

到底有多少人认真的研究了流程图呢？如果您看一下《十天突破雅思写作》的第十天内容，您会发现流程图真的比数学图表好写，关键是几点1 生词怎么办2 模板（真的，流程图也有模板）3 跟图表的区别4 最重要的词汇是什么建议您好好看看第十天的内容网友：如果考试的时候看不懂作文题怎么办??我经常碰见这样的情况不是很肯定题目的意思. 可以向考官求助吗?慎小嶷：您好：这种情况对于基础不太好的同学很常见，怎么办呢？我认为最重要的是在考试之前多看真题，因为我发现其实真题的常用词汇并不是特别多，只要把哪些你不认识的真题常用词都能掌握就够了，其实看懂雅思作文题不需要更大的词汇量。

我的新书另一个特别推荐的附录是“亚太区三年全部真题分类收集”，您可以把这些题目好好阅读一下，同时因为都是亚太区真题，所以也可以不断的提高您在考场里的答题速度网友：慎老师，我上过您的东城精品周末班，写作已经考到6.5了，谢谢！但是我申请的专业要求写作单项7分，所以只能4月再考一次，请问两个月里面怎么提高到7分？慎小嶷：您好：首先祝贺您然后再告诉您一个不太好的消息，我认为7分比6.5分的要求还是高不少7分的作文，应该是能用出来一些比较复杂的句式（但是请注意只是比较复杂而不是非常复杂），还有是字数应该在300左右，这就表示应该主体段的论证部分压力更大了。

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编辑推荐最新的十天纪念版对早期的第二版进行了全面修改，最深刻的变化是清晰地区分了不同英语基础的考生的不同需求。

对于有一定英文程度的考生，新版提供了大量范文和分析，旨在快速提高这部分考生的能力。

而对于基础薄弱的考生，新版则强调基本功的训练。

另外赠送一本含有需要读者背诵内容的小册子。

新版光盘邀请英国专家朗读高频话题加原创范文，希望练习英音的读者可以写作和口语同步提高。

内容推荐本书系慎小嶷老师的力作。

书中收录了所有雅思写作的应试技巧。

作者文笔流畅，讲述深入浅出，使学生一看就懂，一学就会，只要用就有提高。

?另外，本书还配有纯英音外教的朗读光盘，有助于学生理解和记忆，光盘内容为本书附赠的必备掌中宝的相关内容。

作者简介慎小嶷，我的中文名字叫慎小嶷，英文名字叫Patrick，很多朋友也喜欢简单地称呼我Pat。

长期在美国、加拿大两国生活，让我对英语这种世界上越来越多的人之间使用的沟通工具有了更直接的体验。

目录推荐序——风起云扬(纪念版序)新版推荐序——谢谢你，慎老师作者自序再版自序致读者Day 1 其实你不懂雅思写作多数考生无法回答的10个问题 /3我的答案 /4每日一练 /12练习答案 /13Day 2 我怎样想素材IELTS写作真题 /173种解题方法 /18测测你的进展 /23每日一练 /24练习答案 /25Day 3 多大的词汇量算大雅思议论文6分必备120个词汇分类讲解 /29 IELTS写作288个高分词汇完全词库 /34IELTS作文常用同义词替换表 /52IELTS 作文很容易用错的单词总结 /54每日一练 /55练习答案 /57Day 4 真正实用的IELTS作文语法正确理解5种句子成分/61区分3种句子 /63有效避免7种语法错误 /65正确使用4种特殊句式(高分内容) /68每日一练 /71练习答案 /73Day 5 复杂句的秘诀主句和从句之间的6种常见关系 /78IELTS议论文主体段20个最常用逻辑连接表达总结(高分内容)/84 特别值得我们注意的5个词组和1种逻辑关系(高分内容)/86每日一练/88练习答案/90Day 6 35和53IELTS写作35个基础句型 /93IELTS写作53个高分句型 /97每日一练 /104练习答案/106Day 7 经得起推敲的结构是“四段式”还是“五段式” /10910秒种确定文章结构 /111每日一练/115练习答案 /116Day 8 突破模板写作文Day 8(上)/121A.模板到底属于谁?/121B.IELTS议论文考场实战6步(“非大牛“必读)/135C.Report类范文/136Day 8 (中) /142只适合“大牛”的一边倒文章怎样写?(高分内容) /142Day 8 (下) /145突破模板写作文(高分内容，更多原创范文请看附录A和附录B)/145 每日一练 /156练习答案 /158Day 9 图表题，能提前写完吗Task 1的语言特色 /163图表题的3个要求 /164图表题的3个准备工作 /165图表题的3种段落 /169图表题的3种特殊题型(高分内容) /185每日一练 /188练习答案 /192Day 10 关于流程图的恶狼传说流程图的4要素 /197真题放送 /198流程图也有模板 /199每日一练 /204练习答案/207，G类考生特训书信的3大纪律/211书信的结构/212雅思书信分类范文/213雅思书信常用模板和书信10大最常用短语/218每日一练/221练习答案/222终于该上战场了附录附录 A 突破模板的1000种可能性(高分内容)/229附录 B 43个原创雅思作文高分背诵段落 /245附录 C 我怎么做预测 /259附录 D 2004~2009年亚太区写作真题分类汇总/263附录 E 雅思作文最常引用的名人名言汇总 /277附录 F 鲜为人知却极为实用的英文写作网站 /281结束语 /283以上就是本小编对于慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作(第2版)(附赠光盘+一本小手册)一书的详细介绍，供大家参考和学习，希望能对大家有所帮助，最后祝大家一次就和雅思考试说拜拜。

慎小嶷-《十天突破雅思写作》总结2

General Knowledge•注意：1. 作文要有实质内容。

2. 6分：260~270个词左右；6.5分：280个词以上。

3. 没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。

必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。

（准确、严密、多样、清晰）4. 对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。

5. 考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。

6. 当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。

7. 考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task 1不应超过25 min，Task 2不应超过45 min。

备考初期，可将Task 1和Task 2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。

8.如果Task 2准备得较为充分，有信心在40min写出一篇自己满意的议论文，那么就先完成Task 2。

反之，就先写Task 1。

9. 齐头式：每段开头顶格写，每两段之间空一行缩入式：每段开头后退3~4个字母的距离，每个段落之间不空行10. 可使用I/we、被动语态，但不宜滥用；可将But/So放在句首11. 7分或以上的作文对于用词的要求是准确，而不是冗长•Topics•学术类写作的特殊要求1. 不接受缩写形式2. 不使用非正式口语表达3. 英美拼写不能混淆4. 用词要有特色5. 句式不能过于短促6. 句式不能过于干瘪7. 感情色彩不能过于强烈8. 不要将宗教信仰或英语谚语作为逻辑证据想素材的方法写作的主要目的：考察考生用正确的、具有说服力的英文表达出reasonable ideas的能力•分类法（P22-P23）当题目的讨论对象过于广泛或抽象时，将讨论对象具体化，对其加以分类。

慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析

慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析多多研读别人的优秀范文，再进行仿写和改进，也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法，下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析，希望可以帮助到大家。

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】地图题真题9分范文地图题真题【The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket ( S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.】注意地名：Garlsdon;Hindon;Cransdon.调皮的括号君：( S1)以及：no-traffic zone;out-of-town.In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town center, which would be good for local residents. Theoretically, the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon. But in reality, as the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult. Overall, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site ( S1) would probably offer more advantages.相反，备选地点S2正好位于镇中心，这就方便了当地居民。

慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析

慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。

下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析，烤鸭加油。

慎小嶷雅思写作范文题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?传统思想在当代是否还有用武之地。

参考范文：It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doingone’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s c ompetitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally,I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they hada more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpfu l in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.雅思作文慎小嶷真题范文段段深度解析题目：Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?雅思大作文开头段Introduction:It is not uncommon that(1) young people suspend their courses for one-year travel or work. Personally, the advantages of it prevail over its disadvantages.开门见山表面立场——优点多于缺点(1)双重否定表示强调，在阐述某常见现象时，考生可以用it is not uncommon that替代it is common that...雅思大作文主体段Main body:Some people might argue that(1) the gap year would discourage students’ ambition on their study. After exposing(2) themselves into society or nature, senior high school graduates feel themselves no longer disciplined in their study and do not return to college. However, given a year off(3), youngsters havethe opportunity, time as well as the very ability to make future blueprints. Thus, whatever they decide is, to a large extent(4), reasonable and countable(4).段内驳论，表明“人们认为gap year会导致辍学”的缺点，其实也是经过学生再有时间、机会和能力的基础上作出的理性思考。

慎小嶷雅思写作范文

慎小嶷雅思写作范文一、关于教育类话题。

题目：Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.范文：Well, let's have a look at the first view. The idea that university students should study whatever they like is kind of like giving them the freedom to explore their own interests. You know, when a student is really into art or literature or history, forcing them to study something like science just because it's considered "useful" in the future can be a real bummer. It's like asking a fish to climb a tree.For example, there are some students who are born with a passion for music. They might be able to create amazing symphonies or write beautiful lyrics. If they are forced to study something they don't care about, like advanced calculus for no good reason related to their musical dreams, they might lose their motivation and creativity. Studying what they like can make them more engaged in their learning process. They'll be more likely to dig deep into their chosen field, do in depth research, and who knows, they might become the next big thing in that area.Now, onto the second view. People who think students should only study useful subjects like science and technology have a point too. In this modern world, we are surrounded by technology. There are so many job opportunities in fields related to science and technology. If students focus on these areas, they are more likely to land a well paying job aftergraduation. For instance, look at the booming IT industry. Programmers are in high demand all over the world. If students study computer science, they can jump right into this lucrative field.However, I think a balanced approach is the best. Universities should encourage students to have a basic understanding of useful subjects like science and technology, but also give them the freedom to pursue their interests. It's like having a main course of useful knowledge and some side dishes of personal passion. A student majoring in English literature could also take some basic coding courses, and a science student could exploreart history in their free time. This way, students are not only preparedfor the job market but also get to develop their personalities andinterests fully.二、环境类话题。

慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》总结

慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》总结注意：1、作文要有实质内容。

2、6分：260~270个词左右；6、5分：280个词以上。

3、没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。

必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。

（准确、严密、多样、清晰）4、对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。

5、考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。

6、当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。

7、考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task1不应超过25 min，Task2不应超过45 min。

备考初期，可将Task1和Task2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。

8、Task1 图表题Task2 议论题Task achievement针对题目所给的图形详细介绍信息Coherence and cohensionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracyTask response论证要扣题且强有力Coherence and cohensionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracy客观、准确、详尽主观性使用的词汇有限，句式要求不高词汇量要求较高，句式灵活多变最高境界：让考官即使不看图表，只看考生作文也能够准确地想象出图表的内容在观点上没有标准答案，重点在于是否可以用英文比较准确地表达并且强有力地支持这种观点；不用纠结怎样的观点才是“正确的”，而应考虑这道题持怎样的论点才能写起来最顺手，最能充分利用自己考前准备的内容。

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