慎小嶷雅思范文
慎小嶷:十天突破雅思写作范文大赏
慎小嶷:十天突破雅思写作范文大赏精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。
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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】政府类真题7分范文政府类真题【Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their ideas. To what extent do you agree?】第四类真题政府类真题来啦~On the contrary, sometimes these artists tend to be unscrupulous. They convert rumors into facts and present them before us. This might impair the reputation of some illustrious people in today's society. On such occasions, certain restrictions are understandable. Nevertheless, we all do know what is right or wrong. Rules and regulations not always are the solution to how artists present their own ideas. Hence it is wrong-headed to be impetuous and the government should enforce alternative ways to control the media. Respect for one's ideas is not only hypothetical, but must be practised. It is through respect that each one of us can be recognised as a unique person in the world. This can be achieved by looking at the bright side of what the media display for us. Not a day can go by when we don't look out for colorful dreams and a beautiful life when we can find either through music, poetry, films, pictures everything that the creative artists offer us.有些情况下这些艺术家会有些违反道德,他们把流言当做事实来呈现到我们面前。
【最新推荐】慎小嶷-2月雅思口语预测-word范文 (1页)
【最新推荐】慎小嶷:2月雅思口语预测-word范文本文部分内容来自网络整理,本司不为其真实性负责,如有异议或侵权请及时联系,本司将立即删除!== 本文为word格式,下载后可方便编辑和修改! ==慎小嶷:2月雅思口语预测Whats your favorite subject / course ? Do you think people who major in your field can find a job easily when they graduate ? Did your parents choose a secondary school for you ? What are your goals for the future ?Whats your hometown famous for ? Is it good for young people ? Can you tell me about some recent changes in your hometown ? Whatwill your hometown be like in the future ? Can you tell me something about the public transport system in your hometown ? Is the traffic heavy in your city ?Do you live in a house or a flat ? Which is your favorite roomin your house / flat ? Do you think there is anything that should be improved in your house / flat ? What kind of house do you wish tohave ?Does your Chinese name have any special meanings ? Do you think youll change your name in the future ? Are there any important traditions about giving children their names in China ? Who give children their names in Chinese families ?What sports did you play when you were a child ? Whatre the differences between sports played by boys and sports played by girls ? Whatre your favorite sports now ? Are there any sports you want to learn to play ?Why are gardens and parks important to us ? Do you often go to gardens and parks ?What do you collect ? Why do people collect things ? What kindof things do kids like to collect ? Is it good for kids to collect things ?。
2020年慎小嶷口语范文
慎小嶷口语范文ATTENTION如果你是已经雅思7+在努力刷8分的大神,你可以关掉这篇文章了。
本帖仅适用于基础一般目标分数在6.5-7分的孩子。
虽然我觉得考7.5也只需要这样的努力加一点刚好的运气。
首先是本人的考情报告:基础:cet-4裸考560,cet-6裸考539,虽然之后二战雅思的时候顺便考了一次六级是564,但是当时开始准备雅思的时候英语就是这基础,不上不下,顺便说一下我觉得大学六级和雅托没有什么太大关系(注意是六级,四级都过不了考雅思肯定挺吃力),我身边六级没过一战雅思6.5的还挺多的。
一战:去年8月8号的考试,上xdf的6.5分的30人课上了一个月(做题方法的梳理,可上可不上),自己复习了20多天,第一次考口语,非常紧张,当时如果口语小分能提到6,总分就能上7,不过怀揣着想继续学英语的一腔热血,我放弃了申诉(人傻钱多二战:去年12月19号的考试,中间有几个月没有碰雅思,最后大概冲刺了两周口语,基本没有复习别的。
所以除了口语勉强到6,其他的就呵呵了,听力因为缺少练习直接下降了1分三战:今年7月16号的考试,中间又有几个月没有碰雅思,实习结束后零零碎碎复习了一个月,考前冲刺了大概半个月我最后的分数并不是很高,所以我觉得我的经验作为反面教材可以帮助大家少走弯路。
以下是鲜血换来的教训,现在说出口都很疼:1,考雅思的时候不要做别的事!考雅思的时候不要做别的事!考雅思的时候不要做别的事!我现在最后悔的事情就是去年大二的暑假没有抓紧剩下的时间把雅思考完,拖了一年多,可是这一年多里我两次复习的时间加起来大概只有两个多月,大三上去拍了微电影,大三下跑去实习了,做这些事情都非常分心分神,战线拉得太长人容易疲惫,另外你会发现,更好的实习实践机会来了,你的雅思却还没考完,耗在那里一块心病。
两次雅思报名间隔的时间不要太长了,你以为给自己留够了复习时间,结果还是从考前半个月一个月才去找书看。
2,所有参考书烦请物尽其用囫囵吞枣写三本题目没有认认真真写一本来得有用,如果剑桥都没做完就不要到处打听刷什么别的题,我一开始做真题都是一边吃早餐一边做听力,各种乱涂乱画,做阅读写一篇空一篇,简直是暴殄天物,题就这么多浪费一点少一点,大家做真题,第一遍最好把答案写在答题纸上,不要弄脏卷面了,因为你迟早会刷第二遍或者第三遍。
慎小嶷:十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6-9分范文全解(
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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全多多研读别人的优秀范文,在进行仿写和改进,也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法,下面小编给大家带来【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全,希望可以帮助到大家。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】文化类真题7分范文文化类真题【In some countries, traditional arts are going extinct. Some people think that we should try to keep them. To what extent you agree?】Today, many types of traditional arts and crafts are struggling on the brink of extinction. People have different attitudes toward this trend. As for me, I believe that traditional arts should still be cherished by us. Traditional arts are national treasures handed down from our ancestors; therefore, it is our responsibility as inheritors to keep them alive. A nation without abundant traditional arts, such as folk music, ethnic drawings or painting would feel rootless. Consequently, should those brilliant traditional arts die out, the nation's sense of belonging would be seriously eroded. Even worse once a form of traditional art disappears in history, it could never be truly revived. Only until then will the people realize that is a great loss, which at best would only result in nostalgia and regrets.如今,许多传统工艺正濒临灭绝。
口语慎小嶷people
DESCRIBE AN ORGANISATIONI’m most interested in the NBA,which stands for the National Basketball Assciation.It’s probably the most renowed sports organization in the entire world.As far as I know,currently the NBA is made up of 30 teams from America and Canada.The organization was founded in NY like 60yrs ago.At first,things were knid of tough,but these days,it’s one of the most influential sports organizations in the world.There are tons of basketball buffs in China and that’s why NBA has such a huge following here.Some NBA games are even played in China and tickets always sell out in like 20 minutes.I don’t know why but sometimes in China,live broadcasts of the regular season or playoffs stop being aired all of a sudden.The TV station just donot give us any explanation.and that really bothers me.Well,it’s good we still have the Internet.My favourite basketball players are Yao ming and Kobe Bryant.They are really cool.I admire them not just for their success,but also for their spirit,you know,theirsportsmanship.They have been named the MVP many times,which made them real legends in my eyes.The NBA is a legend,too.No doubt about it.Coz it’s so successful in terms of making money.And more importantly,it’s so entertaining.I hope more NBA players will come over to China and show us their amazing basketball tricks.DESCRIBE A FAMOUS PERSONFaye Wang is my idol.She was born and raised in Beijing.Her dad took her to Hong Kong when she was 18.At first,Faye went to modeling classes there coz she looked gorgeous:tall,slim and had sparkling eyes.But she soon lost interest in modeling.Faye enjoyed humming tunes because it was relaxing.A songwriter was so impressed by her voice and he encouraged her to sigh a record contract.She released her first album at the age of 19.Then,a very important album was produced.Several songs in this album became big hits and won awards for her.So far practically all her albums have been really well-liked.Unlike other singers in Hong Kong,Faye ignores the press.And that gives her some bad-girl appeal,which I find really attractive.Faye is not only a talented singer but also a great actress.A couple of years ago,she even won a best-actress award.I like her so much coz she’s multi-talented.And I adore her”rebel”image.She never treats the press well but the press has to respect her for her incredible talent…DESCRIBE AN ENTREPRENEUR/A WEALTHY PERSONLet me talk about one of the richest guys in the world,Bill Gates.Actually,I guess u know more about him than I do.But …anyway,let me give it a try.When Bill was little,sometimes then his mother asked him what he was doing,he simply replied he was thingking.An unusual answer for a little kid,huh?At age 13,he started programming computers.Bill Gates went to Harvard,only to drop out in his junior yr.He started a company called Microsoft coz he had the diea that a personal computer should be in every home.It would be a valuable tool in gathering info and in communication.His dream was to create software technology that would be inexpensive and easy for people to use.Bill Gates also wrote a famous book called The Road Ahead,which clearly explained the value of computer technology in modern life.Microsoft has become the leading business in the world,which had made Bill and his wife therichest couple in the world.But they did much more than just becoming rich.They established a foundation to help people suffering from poor health.DESCRIBE A TEACHERLet me talk about my favourite teacher—my mother.She’s a high-school teacher,u know,a really good one.Her classes are always well-liked and she’s great at sharing knowledge with her students.In terms of appearance,my mom is kind of average.she just looks like any other lady her age,with some wrinkles on her face and gray hair.But she always wears a friendly smile on her face,which makes her pretty approachable.I guess that’s partly why her students are so crazy about her lectures.And…she’s totally graceful,coz she has exquisite taste in clothing.She’s articulate,knowledgeable and most importantly,patient.I would say she’s a teacher who’s never cramped her students’style.The most impressive thing about my mom as a teacher is,of course,how much knowledge she has.she read tons of books in her college yrs and has been always on the lookout for a good book.By the way,she often told me interesting and educational bedtime stories when I was little. My mom has amazing cooking skills as well.The hot and sour soup she makes is second to none.And u know what?She often takes snacks she makes to class and shares them with her students.。
慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总
慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总今天我们要跟大家分享的雅思写作模板,是来自慎小嶷的雅思写作参考书系列。
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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】动物类真题7.5分范文动物类真题【Humans should not use animals as sources of food and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?】需要注意的单词:animal-rightblood-thirstyIn ancient times, there was no opposition to the exploitation of animals. But now many animal-right activists object to consumption of animals as sources of food and clothing. I would not go along with their viewpoint. It may be true that animal consumption poses threats to our lives. For instance, not only is the hunting of endangered species such as whaling blood-thirsty, it can also ruin the ecosystem. Since citizens are increasingly aware of the far-reaching impact of the extinction of endangered species, it is reasonable for the government to regulate the consumption of endangered species as food and clothing.在古代,没有人反对将动物作为一种资源来使用。
保护小语种的雅思作文
保护小语种的雅思作文Title: The Importance of Preserving Minority LanguagesIn the globalized world of today, where English and other major languages often dominate the linguistic landscape, the preservation of minority or small languages often takes a backseat. However, it is crucial to recognize the profound value of these lesser-known languages and the need to safeguard them.Firstly, minority languages are repositories of rich cultural and historical knowledge. Each language is a unique window into a community's way of life, its traditions, and its relationship with the world. By preserving these languages, we are preserving the stories, songs, and wisdom passed down through generations. This cultural heritage is invaluable and contributes significantly to the diversity and vibrancy of human civilization.Moreover, minority languages often offer unique perspectives and insights that are not captured by the major languages. These languages, spoken by relatively small communities, often reflect unique environmental conditions, social structures, and ways of thinking. By ignoring these languages, we are effectively ignoring valuable contributions to global knowledge and understanding.Furthermore, the preservation of minority languages is also essential for maintaining linguistic diversity. Language diversity is crucial for human cognitive development and creativity. It encourages us to think differently, to see the world through multiple lenses. A world with only a few dominant languages would be a poorer, less interesting place.However, the preservation of minority languages faces numerous challenges. Globalization, urbanization, and the dominance of major languages often lead to the marginalization and eventual extinction of smaller languages. It is, therefore, imperative that governments, educational institutions, and communities work together to support and promote the use of these languages.In conclusion, the preservation of minority languages is crucial for maintaining cultural and linguistic diversity, preserving valuable knowledge, and encouraging cognitive development. It is our responsibility to ensure that these languages are not lost to the annals of history but are passed down to future generations as part of our rich and diverse cultural heritage.。
慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析
慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。
下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析,烤鸭加油。
慎小嶷雅思写作范文题目:The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?传统思想在当代是否还有用武之地。
参考范文:It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doingone’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s c ompetitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally,I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they hada more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpfu l in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.雅思作文慎小嶷真题范文段段深度解析题目:Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?雅思大作文开头段Introduction:It is not uncommon that(1) young people suspend their courses for one-year travel or work. Personally, the advantages of it prevail over its disadvantages.开门见山表面立场——优点多于缺点(1)双重否定表示强调,在阐述某常见现象时,考生可以用it is not uncommon that替代it is common that...雅思大作文主体段Main body:Some people might argue that(1) the gap year would discourage students’ ambition on their study. After exposing(2) themselves into society or nature, senior high school graduates feel themselves no longer disciplined in their study and do not return to college. However, given a year off(3), youngsters havethe opportunity, time as well as the very ability to make future blueprints. Thus, whatever they decide is, to a large extent(4), reasonable and countable(4).段内驳论,表明“人们认为gap year会导致辍学”的缺点,其实也是经过学生再有时间、机会和能力的基础上作出的理性思考。
慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析
慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析多多研读别人的优秀范文,再进行仿写和改进,也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法,下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析,希望可以帮助到大家。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】地图题真题9分范文地图题真题【The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket ( S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.】注意地名:Garlsdon;Hindon;Cransdon.调皮的括号君:( S1)以及:no-traffic zone;out-of-town.In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town center, which would be good for local residents. Theoretically, the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon. But in reality, as the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult. Overall, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site ( S1) would probably offer more advantages.相反,备选地点S2正好位于镇中心,这就方便了当地居民。
【慎小嶷】7月雅思写作预测
【慎小嶷】7月雅思写作预测1 Some people think that governments should try to preserve languages that are in danger of extinction. Others, however, believe that would be a waste of public money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.2 Governments should pay for people’s education and health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree?3 Today, fewer elderly people live with their children than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?4 Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’future career success. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5 Some people think that teachers have a greater influence on children than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6 Distance education delivered over the Internet or television has more advantages than classroom-based education. Do you agree or disagree?7 Fast food should not be advertised in a way that attracts children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?8 Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?9 Detailed descriptions of crimes in the news media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?10 Some people think that increasing the number of police officers on the street is the only effective way to reduce crime. Do you agree or disagree?11 Some people think that women should have the same right as men to choose their profession. Others, however, believe that women are less able than men to do certain jobs. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.12 Some people think that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Others, however, believe that job security is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.13 Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.14 Some people think that museums and art galleries should be enjoyable places to entertain people. Others, however, believe that the purpose of museums and art galleries is to educate. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.15 Some people believe that old buildings should be protected by law. Others, however, think that they should be replaced by new buildings. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.16 More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.17 Charities cannot help everyone in the world. They should only provide aid to people in need in their own countries. Do you agree or disagree?18 Some people believe that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?19 The time and money spent on the protection of wild animals should be spent on improving human lives instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?20 Some people think that governments should impose heavy taxes on drivers and airlines to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?。
慎小嶷雅思预测10月
1 Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2 We are facing many problems that affect the whole planet. Some people think that good relationships between different countries are more important than ever before. Do you agree or disagree?3 Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Some jobs are more suitable for men while other jobs are more suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?4 Team activities can teach children more life skills than activities that are done alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5 Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that universities should make higher education more accessible to these students. Do you agree or disagree?6 Many children today prefer to watch TV rather than do creative things. What are the causes of this and how can this be solved?7 Some people think that children should obey rules, while others argue that children who are controlled too much will not be well prepared for their adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.8 Schools should onl y offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future careers. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?9 The consumption of natural resources on Earth has been increasing at an alarming rate and has reached a dangerous level. What are the causes of this? What should be done to address this problem?10 Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. Others, however, think that zoos are useful for the protection of rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.11 Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.12 Cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world today. To whatextent do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?13 The production and transport of food has been heavily influenced by modern technology. To what extent do you think this is a positive development?14 In some countries, charities have set up some special days, such as National Children’s Day and National Anti-Smoking Day. What are the purposes of these special days? Are they effective?15 As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on the road systems. Some people think that the government should be responsible for the costs. Others, however, think that car users should pay for the costs. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.16 Some people think that the housing shortage in large cities can only be solved by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?17 In some countries, there is not enough respect for elderly people. Why is this the case? Suggest some solutions.18 Some people believe that only the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can succeed in sports. Others, however, think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.19 In modern cities, urban planners tend to place shops, schools, offices, and homes in certain areas. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?20 Exposure to international media has significant influences on local cultures. To what extent do you think the influences are positive?。
雅思慎小嶷Ielts writing
Money/fun/employment Right/money
Байду номын сангаас
Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
效率 安全 责任 健康 财务 乐趣
A hundred years ago, many people thought that the human race was improving in every area of life. Nowadays people are less certain about this. In what areas has the human race made important progress? In what areas do we still need to make progress?
Employment/money Skill/efficiency/technology/safety/environment/health/ culture
Technology/health/fun
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
慎小嶷雅思写作范文
慎小嶷雅思写作范文一、关于教育类话题。
题目:Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.范文:Well, let's have a look at the first view. The idea that university students should study whatever they like is kind of like giving them the freedom to explore their own interests. You know, when a student is really into art or literature or history, forcing them to study something like science just because it's considered "useful" in the future can be a real bummer. It's like asking a fish to climb a tree.For example, there are some students who are born with a passion for music. They might be able to create amazing symphonies or write beautiful lyrics. If they are forced to study something they don't care about, like advanced calculus for no good reason related to their musical dreams, they might lose their motivation and creativity. Studying what they like can make them more engaged in their learning process. They'll be more likely to dig deep into their chosen field, do in depth research, and who knows, they might become the next big thing in that area.Now, onto the second view. People who think students should only study useful subjects like science and technology have a point too. In this modern world, we are surrounded by technology. There are so many job opportunities in fields related to science and technology. If students focus on these areas, they are more likely to land a well paying job aftergraduation. For instance, look at the booming IT industry. Programmers are in high demand all over the world. If students study computer science, they can jump right into this lucrative field.However, I think a balanced approach is the best. Universities should encourage students to have a basic understanding of useful subjects like science and technology, but also give them the freedom to pursue their interests. It's like having a main course of useful knowledge and some side dishes of personal passion. A student majoring in English literature could also take some basic coding courses, and a science student could exploreart history in their free time. This way, students are not only preparedfor the job market but also get to develop their personalities andinterests fully.二、环境类话题。
雅思大作文模板(慎小疑)
辩论类模板1There has been much public debate about whether … In this essay, I will discuss two opinions regarding the issue.Some people think that… They argue that… As a result, … Also,… Plenty of evidence has shown that …, which in turn proves that… Another significant factor that should be taken into account is… …- that is to say…By contrast, it is argued by some other people that … They claim that… For example, …However, … For this reason,…Having considered the arguments on both sides of the debate, I believe that…, and I would suggest that …辩论类模板2There has been much discussion in my country about whether… This essay will examine two different views on this issue. Some people think t hat… This view seems reasonable because … As…, …. Moreover, … For instance,… In addition… Obviously,… In other words, …Some others, however, argue that… The main reason for their view is that… …; therefore,… However, this is not convincing enough because … It is likely that…, which means that…For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that… It seems … would be well advised to…辩论模板3In recent years, there has been a heated debate on whether or not…There are several reasons why some people argue that… First of all, it seems that… There is ample evidence suggesting that…, which means… Secondly,… For example, … In addition, … By that I mean…On the other hand, some others argue that … They feel that… A good example is… Nevertheless, … Similarly,…Therefore, my own opinion is that… I also believe that… should…辩论模板 4People have different views about whether… (填入本文要讨论的话题)Personally, I agree(如果你的态度是主要反对题目中所的看法就改为disagree) with the view that…(这里转述题目中所提供的那种看法)I believe that… It is very likely that… As a result,… Furthermore, … For example, … Most importantly, … If…, …Those who feel that…(填入与上一段里对立的态度) may argue that… It seems that…; therefore,… However, … Consequently,…Thus, … in my opinion, … should …辩论模板5Overall, I tend to agree with the view that…The f irst argument that can be made in favour of this view is that… For example, … As a result,… Moreover, … Specifically,… A third reasons for me to support this view is that… … because … By contrast,…Admittedly,… As …, ...It seems … In spite of this, … For e xample,...In conclusion, I would argue that… I also believe that…辩论模板6I believe that this trend has more benefits than drawbacks.The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that… Apparently, Consequently,… For example,…Furthermore, it seems to me that… It is widely recognized that… Obviously,…; therefore,…It may be true that…, for which plenty of evidence can be found. For example, …, which may… Nevertheless, … Specifically,…In conclusion, I would argue that the… of … outweigh the…辩论模板7… (介绍现象) I personally believe that its disadvantages outweigh the advantages.A notable fact about this trend is that… Obviously, … As a result, …, which can be confirmed by the example of…Moreover, it seems that… In general, …; thus,…, which means that … Specifically,…It should be recognized that… For example, … However,… Clearly,…In conclusion, it seems to me that the … of … outweigh the…。
慎小嶷雅思精品白班写作
Last updated on January 12, 2006 Global IELTS School (BJ) All rights reserved. Always shoot for the sky, because if you fail, you will be among the stars.第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点(Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test)难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习)1. Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写)2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. (英式美式拼法不能混用)3. We must do our best(utmost) to protect (preserve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩)4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopard) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas.6. In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet.7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式,语法)8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构)9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard to fight crime! (不应该带感情色彩)10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, "Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated." (文化背景,圣经不可用)难点二: No specific topic pool. 题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:雅思话题不会超出十大类别:文明类:TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and familiesLanguage and cultureTechnology and the MediaDevelopment and globalization野蛮类:CrimeAnimalsEnvironmental problem难点三:中国大陆考生对很多话题不熟悉,考场上思考素材花费时间太长对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法a 分类法Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to study in universities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice to their studies.Some people think old building should be destroyed and replaced to make room for new2constructions. To what extent do you agree or disagreeB 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagreeSome people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the road. To what extent do you agree or disagreeSome people think animal experimentation should be banned because they are cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagreeC 综合法Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate the teachers' job performance. Others think this will lead to loss of discipline and respect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the government should pay for education and health care. Others think this is not the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.D 裸奔法(无想法时的救命稻草)People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a wholeUnlike many other countries, police officers in the UK do not carry guns. Some people think this is a wise policy. To what extent do you agree or disagree往以下这些方面考虑论点取第一个字母缩写:TM STREEC $Technology & Efficiency Environment & HealthMind & Soul Employment & CompetitionSociety & Crime Culture & PopulationTime & Space Money & FunRights & ResponsibilitiesTM STREEC $Tech & Ef Envi & HealMind & soul Empl & CompSoci & Crim Cul &PlpTimes & Spa Mo & FunRi & Resp难点四: 中国考生掌握语法的深度和广度让人惊叹,但是使用时准确度不够对策: 雅思写作"语法的七宗罪"改错练习1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee. (n.可数不可数)2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. (v.原型不可做主语)2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problemsmore effectively in their adult years. (被动语态)2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. (主谓一致)2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. (时态)3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 副词4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 介词4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed. 逗号7. These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be toafford them pleasure and enjoyment.补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系(Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence)Cause and effect 因果关系标志词1)表示原因的because, as, since, due to, owing to (画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2)表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment.生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染. Exemplification 举例关系标志词…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As anil lustration…(作为例证…)e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films.亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影.Comparison and contrast 对比关系标志词While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contraste.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could often perform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务. e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.Concession 让步关系标志词Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的.2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械.3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, privatecompanies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.Definition 下定义关系标志词A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察.Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals. Supposition 假设论证, 标志词provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that…e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentationshould be continued.e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside. Modification 修饰关系标志词that, which, whoIn this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly like the buildings our ancestors built.Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.补充资料IELTS 写作考试的常用模板和句型说明A 内容分为三部分:开头段通用模板,主体段为加分句型,结尾段为模板;B 为了方便同学使用,又分为进步类,倒退类,中间类和解决类模板;C 这里职包括作者Patrick 在IELTS写作大作文里实际写作种经过检验确实实用的模板,不常用的或者小作文的模板没有包括. 开头段通用模板进步类1) In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas. 在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展.2) Today we have embarked upon the …era. 今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked upon the information era.3) Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent ofthe information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate.倒退类4) But A is attended/accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction ofmany lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡.5) Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound social changes have comsome sufferings; and …is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个.6) With the incidence(发生率) of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbedand alarmed. …的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.例句:With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbedand alarmed.57) In this day and age, it is standard practice for … to do something. 今天,某些人做某事是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush aroundall day busying themselves with their work.8) Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注.9) The issue of … has been thrown into sharp relief/focus. …引起了人们的强烈关注.例句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into sharp relief.10) However, there is no consensus on …yet. 或者people hold divergent/contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法.11) Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate.12) Whether…has triggered/sparke d/aroused/given rise to spirited debate.是否应该…引起了激烈的辩论,同样的意思还可以用以下三个常用句型表达…Whether…is a highly debatable issue. 或者Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者Whether…isa controversial issue. 例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers' performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题.13) Some (people) assert/contend/argue/hold/maintain/claim/think/believe that… 有一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法.14) …is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lower costs.IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型前进类1 profit fromPeople the world over can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.2 A is an integral /indispensable part of BAdvertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.3 something p lays a pivotal /key role in …It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.4enable /allow somebody to do somethingCultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new society successfully.5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt toNew immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.6Someone can get access to something 或者can access something 或者can utilizesomethingIn this day and age, many individuals can access the Internet via computer or mobile phone.倒退类61…is attended by /…is accompanied byThe staggering advancement of technology is attended by server pollution of the ecosystem.2The more…the more…The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur.3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from AThe proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.4be afflicted with/be plagued withIn present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.5deprive someone of somethingModern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.6something prompt/impels somebody to do…Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology. 其中We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保…我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶.The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远.8A recent study conducted by the (Chinese academy of Social Science) reveal that…如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and GreenpeaceA recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today.9 be addicted to /preoccupied with somethingIn present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various formsof gambling.10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of …The population explosion is the chief culprit in/ the root cause of water scarity.11be confronted with somethingIn contemporary society, we are confronted with a plethora of violent and pornographic TV shows.12 present/pose a threat to…In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a gravethreat to humanity.13 be awash with/be inundated with somethingThe media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage.14 if…something will ensueIf parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue.15With the incidence of … hoverin g at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.7With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.16something is unwarranted /unjustifiableExperimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/ unjustifiable.中间类1…on the grounds that…Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on somethingIn this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live, play and learn.3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance BThe advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages.4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B.Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas.5 A is a key determinant of BIn an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that…It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries.解决类1 give priority to somethingThe government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.2 dedicated A to BThe government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable toWithout proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵)Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned rather than condoned.5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ es sential that… 或者something is of paramount/overriding importance.To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately.6 abide by/ comply withIt is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law.7 something requires/ necessitates /call for…The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nationson the globe.88 distinguish between A and BMany youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.9 must ensure thatParents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring.结尾段常用模板1) based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基于以上的讨论,我确信…2) In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾段) 作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看…3) The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something, prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊(如果弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了)IELTS 作文常用同义词人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强)影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about积极的,好的beneficial, advantageous消极的,坏的baneful, detrimental好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit无处不在的prevalent, pervasive大量的a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数)增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call forPatrick 考试经验分享(test-taking tips)有人提出先写task2再写task1.这种说法听起来好像很新颖,其实是在回避考试的不确定性,与先写task1再写task2的做法没有本质的优劣之分,那么到底应该如何决定写作顺序呢根据我参加雅思考试的经验以及学生的反馈,在拿到考卷以后,不管一个人心理素质多好,绝对没有人只会看一道题就开始写作.任何考生都一定会本能的现把两道题都很快的看一遍再开始写其中的一道题.同学们很快地看完两道题目以后,如果确实觉得task2地题目自己准备地很充分,有信心在40分钟左右写出一篇自己满意地议论文,那么就应该先写task2,因为task2占总分地60%.但是如果看完两道题之后,你觉得task2地题目自己准备得不充分或者一时想不出足够得内容,那么我强烈建议大家先写task1.这是因为task1的结尾段往往需要从图表中总结出深层的关系,这个task1结尾段深层关系对评分是很重要的.而task2的结尾段,与一些老师所持的观点相反,除了"discuss both views and give your own9opinion"这一类题型之外,其他题型的结尾段只起概括上下文作用,在实际评分中并不是那么重要.因为考官在评阅大家的task2结尾段时,一般都清楚多数同学写这一段的时候时间已经时第58分钟甚至59分50秒了,所以考官知道task2的结尾段时无法准确反映一个考生的写作水平的,评分的时候互放松对结尾段的要求,而重点打击开头段和主体段.第二讲十大全真版本范文,词汇与模板Education 类Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' jobperformance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss andgive your own opinion.开头段(不少于4句)In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill outperformance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work. Butwhen it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students,people hold divergent views. Some argue that students should be allowed to do so.Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate theirteachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit.主体段1(不少于5句)Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers'work. First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthlessor even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluationresponsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some studentscriticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job.Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling.主体段2(不少于7句)However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. Inthe first place, it is an effective means of motivating the teachers to improve their lectures. Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of thestudent. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balancedideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher tohave accurate assessment of their own teaching. In the third place, a measure ofstudents' autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life. The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking.结尾段(不少于3句)In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers' performance might have some potential drawback. However, by averaging out student's appraisal and encourage them to evaluate responsibly can eliminate the downside of this practice. On balance, I am convinced that allowing students to evaluate their teachers is inthe best interests of students, teachers, school administrators, and the society as a whole.教育类8分范文Children who grow up in families without large amounts of money are better prepared todeal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.10Do you agree or disagree题目点评:这道题目是IELTS writing task2当中比较少见的"看着容易写好太难"的题目(很多IELTS作文题目看起来很难,写好却不一定特别难).首先要注意到区别"families without large amounts of money" 和"poor families" 这两个概念的差异,前者不仅仅指"low-income families" 还包括"middle-income families", 所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的"穷人的孩子早当家不同";另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国的文化比较贴近,很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是忽略了推理,论证缺乏深度.从论点上看,考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情,肯定是totally agree 更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿出生的(不过美国的富豪的孩子当中牛人还是出了不少,四十三位总统里面也有大量的富家子弟,从整体上看西方有钱的家长更舍得让自己的孩子经历风雨).既然观点写一边倒,那么结果当然就是五段式――开头段转述题目+主旨句,主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力,主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性,主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格,几位段总结上三层意思.Thesis statement 和topic sentences (范文里用横线标明)关键词:income gaps 指收入差距income inequality 指收入不均intergenerational 两代人之间的turn the table 是个idiom, 有点像中文说的"打翻身仗" offspring 孩子counterpart 相对应的人(或事务) meritocratic society 说白了就是"凭本事吃饭的社会"self-restraint 自制能力infancy 婴儿期frugality 勤俭financial strains 说白了就是缺钱, 名词well-off/affluent (adj)/ well-to-do/ well heeled/ wealthy 自己管理自己,名词initiative 主动性well-acquainted 对某事很熟悉,mitigate缓解,要说解决问题,雅思里面词汇也特多tackle/ address/ solve resolve grapple with /combat 再加题目里面的deal with,大家挑着用啦It is widely accepted that we have been living in a "the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer" age in terms of income gaps within a generation. However, to this day, there hasbeen no consensus yet over the extent to which income inequality is intergenerational.Some contend that the offspring of low-income and middle-income parents can largelygrow up manifest better problem-solving abilities during adulthood than their high-income family counterparts thereby turning the table socially and financially. Personally, I believe this is generally the case in any meritocratic society. (Thesis statement)First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint. These individuals learn from their infancy onward that not everything they crave will become theirs instantaneously. Every so often their wishes go beyond their parents' means and they have to come to terms with the resulting sense of frustration or rejection. Throughout the childhood and early adulthood years they are tempered by the repeated experiencesof parents' denial of their requests and frugality is inculcated into their minds as a virtue. Consequently these children, for the most part, are apt to interpret scrimping and saving, emotional uneasiness, not infrequent financial strains and menial first jobs as an integral part of life rather than a devastating ordeal. Hence they end up being better able to manage stress in their adult years and less likely to panic or get daunted when problems occur.11Further, children brought up by parents of low or middle economic status often grow up to be physically, mentally and professionally more independent than children brought up by affluent parents. It goes without saying that children whose parents are not particularly well-off are more likely than children of affluent households to know how to get the most out of a modest allowance, if they ever get such a thing at all. To the former group of children most desirable things in life have to be "earned"—that is, more often than not they must put forth great effort before their desire is fulfilled. On the other hand, busy, low or medium salaried parents translate into more autonomy and initiative on the children's part. This originally disadvantaged group becomes spontaneous and handy through crafting toy on their own, resourceful by cooking their own meals, tactful with coaxing their parents into buying them gifts, intelligent thanks to the absence of private tutors, savvy in doing summer jobs, and above all, unrelenting in pursuing their dreams.Lastly, non-wealthy parents typically have higher and more definite aspiration for their children than well-to-do parents. Well-acquainted with all the disadvantages a meager or fair-to-middling bank account generates, many non-wealthy parents pin their hopes on their children to get theirfamilies upwardly mobile. These adults mostly have high behavioral, educational and (subsequently) occupational expectations for their children. As a result, they cannot afford to be permissive parents. Spoiling their offspring rotten is the last thing they care to do and they are always ready to discipline their children when they misbehave. They keep tabson their children's grades at school and do not spare the rod when their offspring do not measure up academically. The odds of children raised in such rigorous environments having good problem-solving skills are apparently better than children raised otherwise. To conclude, the chief determinant of individuals' problem-solving skills is not the amount of money their parents can amass when they are little. Rather, hands-on experience incomprehending, analyzing, resolving, mitigating or circumventing problems is more essential to the cultivation of problem-solving abilities. Hence, I am convinced that families without great wealth are more advantageous to the development of individual capacity to tackle problems.Education 类词汇Education:1) 培养(某种素质)cultivate/ foster/ nurture(vts)促进学生身心发展promote the student's physical, mental (或者用intellectual) and emotional development 心理健康psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare(nouns) 学习能力(先天就有的)aptitude/ talent 学习能力(后天学习到的)ability/ skill 学生接受的学校教育(名词)schooling(noun) 儿童接受的家庭教育(名词)upbringing(noun) 给学生以动力give the students motivation to do something 或者motivate (vt) the student to do something青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths2) 传授知识impart(vt)/inculcate(vt) knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观念instill(vt) high moral values (注以values 复数比试价值观) 给学生以灵感stimulate the students; thought 或者give the students inspiration 家长教育子女的方式(名词)parenting/12upbringing 教学法teaching methodology/ pedagogical methodology 适应(动词)adapt to do something/adjust oneself to do something/ become accustomed to do something 适应能力adaptability 学生对老师所教授的知识的掌握students' grasp/ command(nouns) of what has been taught 就业技能employable/ marketable skill3) 限制创造力的发展extinguish(vt)/ stifle(vt)/ constrain(vt) creativity(noun) 打击学生的积极性dampen/sap(vts) the students' enthusiasm 或者frustrate the students 产生不不要的压力beget/ create undue pressure 塑造某人的性格mould(BrE,vt) one's character 责任感a sense of obligation 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器student should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas. 死记硬背learn thing by rote.4) 记忆方程式,公式,定理,定律memorize equations, formulas, theorems andlaws(nouns) 应用apply (vt) 盲从follow something blindly/ indiscriminately(adv) 用填鸭式教学教育学生force-feed(vt) the students 为了记忆而记忆memorize for memorization' s own sake5) 把学生分开教育(比如根据智力或者课堂上的表现) segregate(vt) students 来自于其他同学的压力peer pressure 逆境adverse circumstances /adversity 团队精神team spirit(noun) 独立思考: think independently(adv)6) 在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 鼓励学生用辨证的眼光看问题encourage students to think critically(adv) 学生的反馈students' feedback 或者students' input 学生评价老师的教学students appraise / evaluate their teachers' performance7) 学生学习的各门功课加在一起curriculum(noun) 具体的一门课的内容syllabus 课外活动extra-curricular activity 学校是社会的缩影A school is society in miniature 不遵守纪律(名词)indiscipline/ misbehavior/ mischief (nouns) 不遵守纪律的(形容词)学。
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慎小嶷范文部分总结1、Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree of disagree?Modern technology has revolutionized life in three main fields: work, transport and communication. Although modern technology is often blamed for stress and alienation, I doubt that many people would want to turn back the clock to the pre-technological age.Despite the fact that life was simpler in former times, I would prefer not to return to that lifestyle, because that simplicity was due to a lack of choice. Before large jet airliners came in in the 1960s, for example, air travel was beyond the reach of most people. Before electronic cash registers, people had to spend a lot of time on math calculations to carry out transactions. Furthermore, our knowledge of the world around us, especially foreign countries, was sketchy before television brought us the vivid images of documentaries. Modern technology has brought liberation from the exhausting and boring labor and has set us free to enjoy more interesting work and leisure.It is nor even always true that modern technology is more complex to use than it was to perform household chores. Caring for a horse was a far more complicated and time-consuming matter than starting up a car and taking it to the petrol station for its 5,000-mile household chores. Caring for a horse was a far more complicated and time-consuming matter than starting up a car and taking it to the petrol station for its 5,000-mile service. One has to read the novel from past times to realize the anxiety and frustration that result from transport systems limited to the speed of the horses.The example I have given are just a few of that can illustrate the case that modern technology makes life more convenient. Probably what can may the people yearn for the good old past simple ways I forces us to speed up our pace of life. But sometimes this change can be resisted, when we set ourselves simple priorities and stick to them.2、Some people think intelligent students should be educated together with other students. Do you agree or disagree?It is not uncommon for talented students to get admitted to gift programs today.Letting talented students take special courses make sense to some extent. They need a more challenging curriculum as they are fast learners and their learning process requires little repetition of the information that has been taught by the teacher. If they find the too easy form them to handle, these intelligent children will end up learning little or nothing ar all. As a matter of fact, many students who are inattentive in class are intelligent ones. Regular courses simply fail to attract their attention.Then form a purely psychological point of view, intelligent students also feel more comfortable if there are separate classes for them. They would feel isolated and become oversensitive if they spent all their class time with their ordinary peers. This is often true because smart children not only have different learning pattern, their communication patterns tend to be different from those of the ordinary students as well.Still, it should be pointed out that segregating intelligent student from their peers is nor without its own downside. Some educators believe such classes will be drained of student leaders and role models. Segregation on the basis of IQ may even send a message to those who take regular courses that their work is not as valued as the intelligent students’, which will lower the average students’ self-esteem.Overall, I would suggest that gifted students spend their class time with their peers. But in addition to that, they should be encouraged to take electives that challenge them mentally.3、Some people think citizens should be totally responsible for their own health costs. Others think it is better to have a health care system which provides free health services for all. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.A much debated issue these days is whether citizens should take out private health insurance of not. In this essay, I will argue that people who can afford it should be privately insured, but free medical care must be made available for those too poor to do so.The most important reason for encouraging people to take out private health insurance is the cost to thegovernment. Free health coverage for people who are able to pay for it is a waste of public money. Of course, people will only pay health insurance premiums if they know that they are getting good value for their money. If they get sick, they will pay little or nothing at all. In addition, the privately insured are entitled to special benefits such as having the choice of their own doctors, and being able to avoid long waiting lists for hospital beds.On the other hand, those who realty cannot afford to pat private insurance premiums, which are often very high, should still be entitled as citizens to the best medical are available. They cannot be expected to pay their own medical bills. However, if they are working, they should still pay a percentage of their wages (for example 1% to 2%) as a tax which pays towards the cost of providing free medical services.In conclusion, I think most people should privately insure their health. But it is unreasonable to suppose that all citizens can afford it. Therefore, a safety net in the form of a basic free health care system must exist for the very poor and the unemployed.4、Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent do you think television has positively or negatively affected culture development?It has been around forty years since television was first introduced into British households and people today still have mixed views on whether it has a positive or a negative influence on society.Many people believe that television damages culture. It promotes the stronger culture of countries such as Britain and the us and weakens the cultures of countries such Britain and the US and weakens the cultures of less wealthy countries, This is because the stronger countries are able to assert their own culture by producing more programmes that are shown widely around the world. These programmes then influence people, particularly young people, in the countries where they are shown.Also, because television networks need to attract large audience to secure their financial survival, they must produce progtammes that are interesting to a broad range of people. In Britain this range is very broad because we are a multicultural society and people of all backgrounds like to watch television. To interest all these different people, most television programmes are short, full of action and excitement and pursue themes common to all cultures, such as crime and romance. Television programmes that concentrate on or develop themes related to one particular culture are not so successful because they only interest a smaller audience. Nevertheless we must recognize that television does have some positive effects on cultures within a society. People who do not live within their own culture can access it through multicultural stations on TV.In conclusion, I take the view that television promotes and strengthens those cultures that are wealthy and influential while it weakens cultures that are already in a weak position.5、Many people ignore basic science today. What are the causes and what are your solutions?While technological developments are constantly covered by the mass media, basic science is hardly getting any attention form the public.I tend to believe the public ignorance of basic science research is largely due to its unpredictable value. Compared with applied technology that can produce almost immediate benefits, basic science, scientists have to devote a great deal of time and energy to their research, while being very uncertain if this devotion will lead to the intended outcomes. Many scientists become dissatisfied with their working conditions and earning and in the end, they choose to leave their laboratories for other jobs, which can help to explain why basic science is often ignored by the public.Since basic science is the foundation of most technological developments, some steps must be taken to reverse this trend. On the national level, the government should fulfill its responsibility in raising public awareness of the significance of basic science get the funding and the public support that is urgently needed. Also, companies and institutes should financially support scientists who commit themselves to basic science, not just for the sake of profit, but for the development of science as well. Additionally, the public should be made aware that there would be very few technological advancements if basic science were largely ignored.Basic science deserves more public attention. Certainly none of us want it to become a completely stagnantfield due to our ignorance.6、As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element for individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?Nowadays, many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feeling about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important to the well-being of that person.Employees get jobs satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback form superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when some feels they are improving of developing their skills through training opportunities, for examples, then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker, the sense of belonging to a team of a working community also contribute to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.Of course not everyone enjoys his work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labor relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented, then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction.。