李辉高分英语作文36计

高分作文五大关键点卷面内容分段过渡词遣词造句1、卷面：clean & clear 辉体字2、内容：全+简单3、分段：（1）段落结构“T-D结构”（总-分结构）；（2）每个拓展句前用过渡词引导；（3）一个“大要点”写成一个自然段；TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.Firstly, DDDDDDDDDDD. Secondly,DDDDDDDDDDDDD. Thirdly, DDDDDDDDDDD.4、过渡词(1)分两点拓展：TTTTTTTT.For one thing,… For another,….TTTTTTTT.On the one hand,…On the other hand,…(2)分三点拓展：First and foremost,….首先的也是最重要的一件事儿是,…Additionally,…./ In addition,…更进一步而言，….Last but (certainly) not least,…最后的但当然不是最不重要的是,….(4)分四点拓展：To begin with, … Besides, … What’s more,… Finally,…(5)另起一段、改变主题时：By the way,….【注意】只要翻得通，最好每句话都带上过渡词！Here are some useful,practical and effective suggestions on English study. To begin with,you can read more English magazines. Beside, you may listen to some English songs and watch some English movies. What’s more, you should learn as many English words as possible. Finally,you’d better make an American friend5、遣词造句（1）遣词升级方法：i. 换词法should → sb had better do sth建议sb ought to do sthsb be supposed to do sthWhy not do sth?It is wise of you to do sth.It is high time that you did sth.真的到了你该做某事的时间了。

If I were you, I would do sth.如果我是你的话，我就会做某事。

like → sb + be fond of + sth/doing sthsb + be crazy about + sth/doing sthsb + have fall en in love with + sth/doing sthwant → sb + would like + to do sth. 想要做某事sb + desire to do sth 渴望做某事sb+ have a great desire to do sth 非常渴望learn →pick up偶然学到、顺便学到master掌握important →essential必要的significant至关重要的vital 至关重要difficult →challenging有挑战性的very →extremely极端地surprisingly令人惊讶地good → excellent 优秀的+ 人/书/电视节目outstanding 出色的+ 人/书/电视节目meaningful 有意义的+ 一件事educational 有教育意义的+ 一件事unforge tt able 难忘的+ 一件事/人bad → terrible + 人/事/物tiring 令人疲惫的annoying 令人烦恼的boring 无聊的difficult → of great difficulty有难度different → of great difference有区别beautiful → of great beauty有美感useful → of great use有用处a lot of →a number of 很多also→as well,not only…,but also…幽默humorous、热心warm-hearted、随和easygoing、勤奋hard-wording、有主见independent、乐观optimisticii.添词法{1}名词前面添加一个或多个形容词I have a kind, patient and considerate mom.English is a useful, essential and entertaining subject.I read a meaningful, educational and entertaining book yesterday.{2}名词后面写一个同位语。

We middle school students ….teenagers….English learners….eg. We should learn English.We teenagers are supposed to master English, a useful, essential and meaningful language.{3}能并列时需并列。

You should understand your mom. →You should understand, respect and appreciate your mom. 理解尊重感激（2）造句升级方法：i. 黄金圣衣句型（加强语气、凑字神器）{1}It is clear that…很明显“清”{2}It is obvious that…. 很明显“明”{3}There is no doubt that…毫无疑问“疑”{4}No one can deny…不容否认“否”{5}Needless to say,…不用说“不用”{6}It goes without saying that…不用说“走”【例子：我们要多读书】There is no doubt that we are supposed to read more books. As for the reason, first and foremost, it is obvious that books are useful,which can cultivate our interests,broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life. Addistionally,it goes without saying that books are not only meaningful but also entertaining. Last but not least, no one can deny we need to passs a lot of exams;as a result, we need the knowledge learned from booksii.白银裤衩句型(“…”表示“完整的句子”){1}因为…..., for…. …, considering that……, in that…{2} 所以……; consequently,……; therefore,……; as a result,…{3} 以防……,in case… …,for fear that…{4}为了去做某事…to do sth. …in order to do sth.{5}如果：…,i f …{6}以便…… so that…...in order that…{7}只要… as long as……{8}这件事儿……,which…{9}关于/至于As for …{10} 不但…而且… Not only … but also…{11} 比如such as{12} 越…越.. the more ..,the more ,the more…,the better…;the harder…,the more..【例句：】我们要学好英语，因为英语很重要。

We should learn English well, in that English is important.我们要学好英语，以防我们将来找不到工作。

...................,in case we can't find a job in the future.我们要学好英语，所以我们天天背单词。

..................., as a result, we learn English words everyday.我们要学好英语，为了我们将来能出国。

...................,in order that we can go abroad in the future.我们要学好英语，如果我们想成功。

..................., if we want to succeed.我们要学好英语，只要我们想成功。

..................., as long as we want to succeed.我们要学好英语，这件事很重要。

..................., which is very important.As long as we want to enjoy a better life, we should learn English well, in order that we can find a good job in the future, in that English will be useful then ,Which we all know.No one can deny that(圣衣) english is important,which(裤衩) is know to all. First, it is obvios that(圣衣) we need English to talk with foreigners,in that(裤衩)English is considered to be the most widely used language,so that(裤衩) our horizons can be broaden.As for her appearance, she is a tall girl with blone hair and bule eyes. She is not only clever but also warm-hearted. She is hard-working and good at English and writing as well. She has a number ofhobbies,such as playing computer games,swimming and reading . She alwaysspedns an hour practicing dancing in the evening【九大万能利】1.挣钱We can earn some pocket money to buy our favorite books.2.利用好时间We can make good use of our spare time to do some valuable things3.提供能力Not only our English but also our interpersonal skills can be improved4.交朋友We can make some close friends with common intersts to share with each other our lifeexperience5.有益身心It is benefical for our physical and mental health6.既有意义又有趣It is not only meaningful but also enteraining7.既有挑战又有收益It is not only challenging but also rewarding8.培养兴趣，开阔视野，丰富课余生活It can cultivate our interests,broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life9.面对困难，克服挑战，达成目标，实现梦想It can enable us to face difficulties,overcome challenges,achieve our goals and realize our dream 【九大万能弊】1．浪费时间，浪费精力Not only our preious time but also our energy will be wasted2．浪费金钱It costs so much money that many ordinary familyes cannot even afford it3．影响身心It never fails to do a lot of harm to our physical and mental health4．影响学习Our study may also be negatively affected5．影响人际It is also bad for our interpersonal relationship6．让人上瘾It may gradually/eventually get you addicted to it7．污染环境It may cause serious air pollution to this world,which is already far from perfect8．不可预测麻烦It may end up with some unexpected troubles and problems9．让我们忘记XXX的意义We may forget the true meaning of XXX【重要性功能段落】（1）重要性Needless to say ,XXX is of great significane/importance for our life/society. As for the reasons,first and foremost,… Additionally,… Last but not least（2）我的观点A s far as I am soncerned,… The reson is simple: just as an old Cuba saying goes,…（3）解释原因T here are three main reasons why sb do sth . First and formost, … Additionally,… Last but not least…（4）建议措施Here are some suggestions. 1 2 3Practical and effective measures must be put into practive immediately to improve the current situation. 1 2 3（5）万能结尾我希望Hopefully, sb would do sb我相信I have the confidence that sb will do sth感谢你Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer请回信I am looking forward to your earliest reply只有才Only in this way/by doing so can you have the chance of achieving your dreams/living a better life难避免With these suggestions carried out ,a much bright future will be not noly possible bualse inevitable.【小结】高分作文遣词造句36计5组过渡词10组换词法3个添词法6个黄金圣衣12个白银裤衩You should understand your mother.There is no doubt that you, a 17-year-old teenager who cannot live all by yourself, are supposed to understand, respect and appreciate your kind, patient and considerate mother, who gave birth to you, has brought you up and loves you the most in the world, so that your family would certainly be filled with endless harmony and happiness, in that a good family relationship will contribute to your happy and healthy growth, which will be beneficial for your future development.第一段：为什么要学英语。