新东方托福作文内容整理

新东方内容整理

7．11：

Writing:

A.托福写作主要是注重daily affairs,而不是political issues.

注重的是examples,而不是critical thinking and reasoning.

是低级写作，而不是高级写作。

注重vocabulary和sentence structure.

B. score5：

a．Effectively address the topic and task.

b. well organized:

Structure: Introduction

Body1

Body2

Body3

Conclusion

C. unity(切题)，progression(层次)，coherence(连贯，承接词)

Firstly, . Theoretically speaking,

. For instance,

. Moreover, .

Briefly, .

d．Word choice, syntactic variety

词汇的转换：

E.g. 好：good better best nice(低级)

Excellent, perfect, （中级）

Outstanding, brilliant, fantastic, awesome, remarkable,

impressive, extraordinary, fabulous （高级）词组的转换：由低级结构向高级结构转化。

陈强调了由adj.+n.向n.+of+n.的转化。

E.g. A man of wisdom

An individual of intelligence

A man of respect

A book of deep philosophy

A magazine of good sales

A flower of beauty

Patriotism is the tree of liberty refreshed from time to time with the blood of tyrants and patriots. Thomas Jefferson

It was the best of time, it was the worst of time; it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness; it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity; it was the season of light, it was the season of darkness; it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. We have everything before us, we have nothing before us; we are all going direct to the heaven, we are all going direct to the other way.

句子结构的转换：

Sentence: 今天天不好

On this cloudy day rises my gloomy mind. 倒装

It is the cloudy day that breeds my gloomy mind.强调

The cloudy day does contribute to my mind of gloom.强调

The cloudy day is the reason to my gloomy mind.主系表

There is the gloomy mind of mine from this cloudy.

There be

To be honest, the cloudy day actually stimulates my nostalgia, cultivates my gloom over those unfortunate, and cultivates my pity for the suffering of mankind. 主谓宾+ 平行结构

下面着重讲了强调句的使用条件和方法：

使用条件：出现介词短语时，介词短语提前。

E.g. In the temple lives a monk;

In the monk’s heart hides a girl of beauty;

From the eyes of the girl rises a true meaning of romance.

Go, come, lie, sit, stand, jump, rise, fly, appear, emerge, float

E.g.In the classroom sit 101 students.

From the eyes of the students rises the hope of life.

In this society appears a public admiration to the celebrities.

C(B.点好长啊，都绕不过来了。)

背景综述式的开头：

With the growth of social education jumps out a topic of interest, which concentrates on the effectiveness of university education to the students. To be honest, the scale of my judgment will definitely incline toward the benefits of such education. In other words, such a system will stimulate their PI, enlarge their HR and create the priceless basis for their FD. The following examples and reasons will be in favor of my side.

同时陈强调了连接词的重要性。Effectively就是这样体现的。

the scale of my judgment will definitely incline toward the benefits of the latter.（个人认为这句虽然是模板，但很摆，还是放上来。替代第二板块的。）

又show名人名言了：

For our children, for our family, for our homeland, we march! For duty sake, for honor sake, for glory, we march!

D.下午主要讲的就是logical thinking。还有就是很流氓地把一个话题往很多个题目上去扯。a．按人性分类：

Humor, smart, honest, independent, strong mind, confident, brave, diligent, experience, responsibility, morality, cooperation, communicative, logical, creativity, kind, generous, optimistic

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