高中英语概要写作市级公开课课件

《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》 概要写作： 提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
词数少于40的和多余80的， 从总分中减去2分
档次
第五档 (21-25)
第四档 (16-20)
第三档 (11-15)
第二档 (6-10) 第一档
Tip 2: Pay attention to the topic sentence of each paragraph. 善 于利用段落结构抓住主题句，同时关注衔接词
Paragraph 3
①Family size might cause people
to be shy as well. ②Scientists at
⑦They are not able to learn the same
social skills as children from big families.
Tip 3: 关注衔接词
Paragraph 4
①You may also be shy because of where you
were born. ②When scientists studied shyness in
reason 2
Family size might cause people to be
time, children with no brothers and
shy as well.
sisters may be shy as well. ⑥Growing
up alone, they often play by themselves.
……出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
……多个句子抄自原文
档次
描述
第五档 理解准确，涵盖全部要点 (21-25) 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要 结构紧凑 完全使用自己的语言
第四档 理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
(16-20) 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，Baidu Nhomakorabea完全不影 响意义表达
shy. consequence + solution
For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. But scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And don’t forget---if you are shy, you are not the only one.
brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. They are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families.
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more and more common. ⑥Now, have some
scientists are trying to understandinteresting ideas
reason 1
Some shyness is genetic.
than other babies. ⑤Interestingly,
these shy babies usually have shy
parents. ⑥As a result, scientists
think that some shyness is genetic.
比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的 概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文
第三档 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 (11-15) 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影
响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容 连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第二档 ……出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。 (6-10)
描述
理解准确，涵盖全部要点 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 完全使用自己的语言
理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文
理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they
reason 3 found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three people said so.
reason 3
different countries, they found surprising differences. ③In Japan, most people said they were shy. ④But in Israel, only one of three people
reason 1 Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. These
babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic.
Paragraph 2
①Is it possible to be born shy?
②Many scientists say yes. ③They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. ④These babies are a little quieter and more watchful
shyness. ⑦They have some about why people
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Introductory Lesson of Summary Writing
概要写作
Learning Aims
1. Know what the summary writing is 2. Learn the criteria(标准) of a good summary 3. Master how to write a good summary
Step3: 精准释义 重组原文语言
语言转化+压缩表达
Step4: 运用衔接手段 连贯成文
巧用衔接，完美过度
Step5: 批判重读修改 完美成稿
Step1: 速读文章确定主题结构
text type(体裁) topic (主旨/主题句) structure (篇章结构)
Shyness
phenomenon + topic Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people
Harvard University studied shy children. ③They found that 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. ④As a result, they became shy. ⑤At the same
feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
第一档 ……多个句子抄自原文 (1-5)
概要写作解题步骤
Step1: 速读文章 确定主题结构
text type(体裁) / topic (主旨/主题句)/ structure (篇章结构)
Step2: 精读原文 提取内容要点
找出每个段落的主题句 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息)
Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found
reason 2 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. As a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no
Paragraph 1
①Are you shy? ②If you are, phenomenon + topic
you are not alone. ③In fact, close Shyness is
to 50 percent of people are shy. ④becoming more and
shyness
phenomenon + topic
text type: 事理说明文
reason1
reason2
reason3
topic: reasons for shyness
consequence + solution
structure: 总分总
Step2: 精读原文提取内容要点
✓ 找出每个段落的主题句，并思考主题句的涵盖面 ✓ 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息)
What explains the difference? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on outside reasons, such as family, teachers, friends, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less