高中英语概要写作市级公开课课件
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a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高中英语公开课课件高三概要写作课(共11张PPT)
But too much sugar can cause health Para2 problems like obesity and tooth disease.
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高中英语《概要写作专练》公开课PPT课件
People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change
Para 1
• People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change.
• People hold different views on change • People differ in their attitudes towards change • Different people hold different attitudes
towards change.
3.Locate the topic sentence
Para 2
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Para 1
• People’s opinions are divided on the issue of change.
• People hold different views on change • People differ in their attitudes towards change • Different people hold different attitudes
towards change.
3.Locate the topic sentence
Para 2
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高中英语优质课概要写作精品展示课件
The topic-what
The reason-why
The methodhow The solution/conclusion
Four eTlehme etonptsic
The rTehaesomnethod
The result
Paragraph Para. 1 Para. 2 Para. 3
Tip3: Simplify description by using general words简化描述
Tip4: Use words of similar meaning 近义词组替换
Point 3:
概要 He asked for the beachcombers’ help in collecting
Para. 4
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高中英语概要写作过程指导公开课PPT课件
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① Psychologists and therapists
for influencing mood and state of
Supporting details
mind & various types of treatments
② Companies
③ Clothes
Read for the supporting details
Read for the supporting details
How did the psychologists and
therapists use the color?
General words
It is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists
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Specific example
Tip 1: Use general words instet the colors we choose affect
Read for the style
高中英语概要写作PPT幻灯片课件
solutions(解决办法), the conclusion(结论)
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概要怎么写？
二、明话题，定顺序，找中心句、高频词、连词，列提纲 根据文章写作顺序(时间、地点、原因…), 对文章进行分段，找
出各段的中心句和高频词以确定要点，再根据连词确定要点的主要 和次要关系。最后根据抄写原文列出提纲。
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概要怎么写？
概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic(充满活力的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
14
概要怎么写？
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
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概要怎么写？
二、明话题，定顺序，找中心句、高频词、连词，列提纲 根据文章写作顺序(时间、地点、原因…), 对文章进行分段，找
出各段的中心句和高频词以确定要点，再根据连词确定要点的主要 和次要关系。最后根据抄写原文列出提纲。
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16
概要怎么写？
概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic(充满活力的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
14
概要怎么写？
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高考英语-概要写作--公开课课件
Concise !!! 60-70 words
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
高中英语概要写作Summary writing公开课PPT课件
03 opinion + supporting details (evidences) +conclusion
1.Humankind has tried to improve its standard of living since the very beginning of civilization. Back then, as well as today, providing food and security was the basic task for a person. However, nowadays the range of required goods has expanded significantly. People feel the need for not only some primary things, such as a piece of bread and a roof over their heads, but also for various facilities and luxuries. Providing humanity with these things is connected to the use of natural resources, which requires energy. In turn, the common sources of energy we use today cause pollution, so economic growth is almost inevitably associated with environmental damage.
02 5w&1h (who+what+when+where+why+how) +moral
高中英语-概要写作课summary公开课-课件
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
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Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
14
Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
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……出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
……多个句子抄自原文
档次
描述
第五档 理解准确，涵盖全部要点 (21-25) 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要 结构紧凑 完全使用自己的语言
第四档 理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
(16-20) 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影 响意义表达
brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. They are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families.
shy. consequence + solution
For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. But scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And don’t forget---if you are shy, you are not the only one.
Paragraph 2
①Is it possible to be born shy?
②Many scientists say yes. ③They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. ④These babies are a little quieter and more watchful
reason 2
Family size might cause people to be
time, children with no brothers and
shy as well.
sisters may be shy as well. ⑥Growing
up alone, they often play by themselves.
You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they
reason 3 found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three people said so.
reason 1 Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. These
babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic.
Harvard University studied shy children. ③They found that 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. ④As a result, they became shy. ⑤At the same
Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found
reason 2 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. As a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no
描述
理解准确，涵盖全部要点 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 完全使用自己的语言
理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文
理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
reason 1
Some shyness is genetic.
than other babies. ⑤Interestingly,
these shy babies usually have shy
parents. ⑥As a result, scientists
think that some shyness is genetic.
shyness
phenomenon + topic
text type: 事理说明文
reason1
reason2
reason3
topic: reasons for shyness
consequence + solution
structure: 总分总
Step2: 精读原文提取内容要点
✓ 找出每个段落的主题句，并思考主题句的涵盖面 ✓ 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息)
Paragraph 1
①Are you shy? ②If you are, phenomenon + topic
you are not alone. ③In fact, close Shyness is
to 50 percent of people are shy. ④becoming more and
第一档 ……多个句子抄自原文 (1-5)
概要写作解题步骤
Step1: 速读文章 确定主题结构
text type(体裁) / topic (主旨/主题句)/ structure (篇章结构)
Step2: 精读原文 提取内容要点
找出每个段落的主题句 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息)
⑦They are not able to learn the same
social skills as children from big families.
Tip 3: 关注衔接词
Paragraph 4
①You may also be shy because of where you
were born. ②When scientists studied shyness in
feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
shyness. ⑦They have some about why people
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比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的 概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文
第三档 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 (11-15) 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影
响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容 连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第二档 ……出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。 (6-10)
Tip 2: Pay attention to the topic sentence of each paragraph. 善 于利用段落结构抓住主题句，同时关注衔接词
Paragraph 3
①Family size might cause people
to be shy as well. ②Scientists at
What explains the difference? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on outside reasons, such as family, teachers, friends, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less
……多个句子抄自原文
档次
描述
第五档 理解准确，涵盖全部要点 (21-25) 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要 结构紧凑 完全使用自己的语言
第四档 理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
(16-20) 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影 响意义表达
brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. They are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families.
shy. consequence + solution
For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. But scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And don’t forget---if you are shy, you are not the only one.
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①Is it possible to be born shy?
②Many scientists say yes. ③They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. ④These babies are a little quieter and more watchful
reason 2
Family size might cause people to be
time, children with no brothers and
shy as well.
sisters may be shy as well. ⑥Growing
up alone, they often play by themselves.
You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they
reason 3 found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three people said so.
reason 1 Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. These
babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic.
Harvard University studied shy children. ③They found that 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. ④As a result, they became shy. ⑤At the same
Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found
reason 2 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. As a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no
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理解准确，涵盖全部要点 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 完全使用自己的语言
理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文
理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
reason 1
Some shyness is genetic.
than other babies. ⑤Interestingly,
these shy babies usually have shy
parents. ⑥As a result, scientists
think that some shyness is genetic.
shyness
phenomenon + topic
text type: 事理说明文
reason1
reason2
reason3
topic: reasons for shyness
consequence + solution
structure: 总分总
Step2: 精读原文提取内容要点
✓ 找出每个段落的主题句，并思考主题句的涵盖面 ✓ 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息)
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①Are you shy? ②If you are, phenomenon + topic
you are not alone. ③In fact, close Shyness is
to 50 percent of people are shy. ④becoming more and
第一档 ……多个句子抄自原文 (1-5)
概要写作解题步骤
Step1: 速读文章 确定主题结构
text type(体裁) / topic (主旨/主题句)/ structure (篇章结构)
Step2: 精读原文 提取内容要点
找出每个段落的主题句 把握句际逻辑、厘清信息层次(主要点、次要点、冗余信息)
⑦They are not able to learn the same
social skills as children from big families.
Tip 3: 关注衔接词
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①You may also be shy because of where you
were born. ②When scientists studied shyness in
feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
shyness. ⑦They have some about why people
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比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的 概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文
第三档 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 (11-15) 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误，但不影
响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分，使上下文内容 连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第二档 ……出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。 (6-10)
Tip 2: Pay attention to the topic sentence of each paragraph. 善 于利用段落结构抓住主题句，同时关注衔接词
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①Family size might cause people
to be shy as well. ②Scientists at
What explains the difference? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on outside reasons, such as family, teachers, friends, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less