大学英语四级提纲式作文写作资料
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• … has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
Praise, An Important Gift Some people think that critism can change one’s view of life. However, many people argue that praise is more important. In my opinion, praise is more profitable than critism. Praise is like fresh air, without it, our life will become uninteresting and inhappy. Giving praise does not cost the giver a lot, but, the receiver can learn much. There are many people who succeed at last with a praise, Take myself for example. Though it happened a long time ago, I remember it clearly. It was a sports meeting and I attend it. At first, I was very confident and thought I was the best of them, so I had no training. The truth was, during the race, many students left me behind. Then I want to give up and was frustrated. Fortunately, my PE teacher came and patted on my back:” As long as you stick to continue, success will belong to you. I believe you, come on!” He said with a smile. You know, I improved dramatically and won the prize. So, praise is an important gift.
promote the economic. It can lead the
development of many industries. It’s good for our
country’s developing.
作文评分原则及标准
14分– 漂漂亮亮：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连 贯，连贯性好，基本上语言无误。
wherever they want to . A family can have a
travel togethter. It’s comfortable. In a word, they
can improve the quality of their life with a car.
Especially the increasing of private car can
Should People own Cars or
•
not? Now having a car is more and more popular,
so many familys want to buy a car. They think it’s
useful. Some youngs think it’s cool, and many
people think it’s convenent when they havwenku.baidu.com a
private car. They don’t need to wait the crowded
bus/so they can go to work on time. It’s save the
time. And they also can drive the car go
试评分！！！
写作对策
• 内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点 • 作文结构层次是否清晰 • 语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻
辑错误 • 是否能恰当的使用过渡性词语 • 作文字数是否达到要求 • 卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮
写作体裁
• 议论文 • 说明文 • 记叙文
议论文开头常用句式
• Recently, the problem of …has aroused people’s concern.
提纲式命题作文
• Directions: In this section, you are asked to write a composition entitled Should people own cars or not? Your composition should be based on the outline given below. Your composition should be at least 120 words. Outline: 1、有人赞成个人买车。 2、也有人持相反观点。 3、你的看法。 Should People Own Cars or Not?
11分—清清楚楚：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连 贯，但有少量语言错误。
8分—马马虎虎：基本切题，有些地方表达思想 不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多， 其中一些是严重错误。
5分—糊里糊涂：基本切题，表达思想不清楚， 连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误。
2分—一塌糊涂：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支 离破碎，或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严 重错误。
Praise, An Important Gift Some people think that critism can change one’s view of life. However, many people argue that praise is more important. In my opinion, praise is more profitable than critism. Praise is like fresh air, without it, our life will become uninteresting and inhappy. Giving praise does not cost the giver a lot, but, the receiver can learn much. There are many people who succeed at last with a praise, Take myself for example. Though it happened a long time ago, I remember it clearly. It was a sports meeting and I attend it. At first, I was very confident and thought I was the best of them, so I had no training. The truth was, during the race, many students left me behind. Then I want to give up and was frustrated. Fortunately, my PE teacher came and patted on my back:” As long as you stick to continue, success will belong to you. I believe you, come on!” He said with a smile. You know, I improved dramatically and won the prize. So, praise is an important gift.
promote the economic. It can lead the
development of many industries. It’s good for our
country’s developing.
作文评分原则及标准
14分– 漂漂亮亮：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连 贯，连贯性好，基本上语言无误。
wherever they want to . A family can have a
travel togethter. It’s comfortable. In a word, they
can improve the quality of their life with a car.
Especially the increasing of private car can
Should People own Cars or
•
not? Now having a car is more and more popular,
so many familys want to buy a car. They think it’s
useful. Some youngs think it’s cool, and many
people think it’s convenent when they havwenku.baidu.com a
private car. They don’t need to wait the crowded
bus/so they can go to work on time. It’s save the
time. And they also can drive the car go
试评分！！！
写作对策
• 内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点 • 作文结构层次是否清晰 • 语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻
辑错误 • 是否能恰当的使用过渡性词语 • 作文字数是否达到要求 • 卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮
写作体裁
• 议论文 • 说明文 • 记叙文
议论文开头常用句式
• Recently, the problem of …has aroused people’s concern.
提纲式命题作文
• Directions: In this section, you are asked to write a composition entitled Should people own cars or not? Your composition should be based on the outline given below. Your composition should be at least 120 words. Outline: 1、有人赞成个人买车。 2、也有人持相反观点。 3、你的看法。 Should People Own Cars or Not?
11分—清清楚楚：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连 贯，但有少量语言错误。
8分—马马虎虎：基本切题，有些地方表达思想 不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多， 其中一些是严重错误。
5分—糊里糊涂：基本切题，表达思想不清楚， 连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误。
2分—一塌糊涂：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支 离破碎，或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严 重错误。