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托福考试新版 作文

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托福考试新版作文《托福考试新版》托福考试新版,就像一场全新包装的冒险。

哎呀,你知道吗?当我第一次听说托福考试有新版的时候,我那心里呀,就像揣了只小兔子,七上八下的。

我有个朋友,叫小李。

他那可是下定决心要考托福的。

旧版托福的那些事儿,他都摸得门儿清。

可这新版一来,他就像个迷失在森林里的小鹿,到处乱撞。

我陪着小李去了解新版托福的考试内容。

哇塞,那规则和题型的变化就像变魔术一样。

以前的一些题型像是换了个马甲,还有些新题型就像突然冒出来的小怪兽。

就拿阅读部分来说吧,以前的阅读就像是走在一条熟悉的小路上,虽然也有磕磕绊绊,但大致方向很明确。

可新版的阅读,感觉像是走进了一个迷宫,那些题目隐藏在文章的各个角落,你得像个侦探一样,一点点地去挖掘线索。

听力部分也有大不同。

小李和我一起试听了一些新版托福的听力材料。

那语速,有时候就像一阵狂风,呼呼地就过去了。

里面的词汇和话题也更加五花八门。

有一次,我们听到一个关于深海生物的听力材料,那些稀奇古怪的生物名字,什么“叶形海龙”“巨型乌贼”之类的,光是听着就觉得头疼。

而且,还得记住它们的习性、生存环境这些细节,感觉自己的脑袋都要不够用了。

口语部分呢,就像是一场紧张的脱口秀。

你得在短时间内组织好语言,还要说得有条有理。

小李练习的时候,那表情就像吃了苦瓜一样。

有一回,他在说一个关于城市交通问题的话题,说着说着就卡壳了。

他本来想说“交通拥堵会导致人们上班迟到”,结果说成了“交通拥堵会让人们上班变迟到”,自己说完就忍不住笑了起来。

我们俩笑得眼泪都快出来了,可笑着笑着又觉得有点心酸,这考试还真不容易呢。

写作部分也不是省油的灯。

它的要求更加细致和严格。

就像你要精心打造一件艺术品一样,每个段落、每个句子都得恰到好处。

不过呢,随着小李不断地去探索新版托福,他也逐渐找到了一些应对的方法。

他就像个勇士一样,不断地和这个新版托福的“大怪兽”战斗。

他开始制定详细的学习计划,每天早起背单词,晚上练习听力和口语。

madagascar托福小作文

madagascar托福小作文

madagascar托福小作文Republic of Madagascar, referred to as Madagascar. It is an African island country in the western Indian Ocean, facing the African continent across the mozambique channel. Madagascar is composed of volcanic rocks. As the largest island in Africa and the fourth largest in the world, Madagascar is rich in tourism resources. Since 1990s, the government has listed tourism as a key development industry, encouraging foreign investors to invest in tourism. 98% of the residents are Malagasy.Madagascar is one of the least developed countries in the world. Its national economy is dominated by agriculture, and its agricultural population accounts for more than 80% of the country's total population. Its industrial base is very weak.Madagascar, the fourth largest island in the world, is located in the southeast of Africa in the southern hemisphere and on Madagascar Island in the southwest of the Indian Ocean, and is customarily called the "Big Island". The Tropic of Cancer passes through the southern part of the island. Most of the island is locatedin the tropical area north of the Tropic of Cancer, facing the African continent across mozambique channel. At the narrowest point of mozambique channel, the country is only 400 kilometers away from Africa. Around Madagascar, there are Comoros Islands and Seychelles Islands, mauritius island and reunion island, and large and small islands belonging to their own territory, including Nosy-be in the northwest and Saint-Marie-Marie in the east.The topography of Madagascar is divided into five types: 1. The central part is the central plateau with an altitude of 1,000-2,000 meters, scattered with plains, hills, mountains and basins; 2. The eastern part is an undulating hillside terrain with a width of 25-100km; 3. The west is a plain and plateau area, and the terrain fluctuates slowly; 4. The south is mainly plain, and the terrain is relatively gentle; 5. The north is dominated by basins, with complex topography, volcanic and karst landforms. Mount Chalatana is 2876 meters above sea level, the highest peak in China.Madagascar has unique terrain, and its climate varies greatly from place to place. The eastern part is a tropical rain forest climate, which is hot and humid all year round, with an annual precipitationof 2000-3800 mm an d an average annual temperature of about 24℃. The central plateau is a tropical plateau with a mild climate, with an annual precipitation of 1000-2000 mm and an average annual temperature of about 18℃. Located on the leeward side of the west, it has a savanna climate with less precipitation. The annual precipitation is 600-1000mm, and the annual average temperature is about 26.6℃. The southern region has a semi-arid climate, with an annual precipitation of less than 600 mm and an average annual temperature of about 25.4℃. Affected by the monsoon, the dry season is from April to October, and the rainy season is from November to March. Antananarivo, the capital, is about 1,200 meters above sea level, with an average annual temperature of 18 C.。

(完整版)新托福满分作文范文(30篇).pdf

(完整版)新托福满分作文范文(30篇).pdf

托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(1)Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(2)Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and1capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone's mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group's wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders' of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others' advice instead of getting everything done on one's own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(3)After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer.After they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my parents. I take this into consideration because I am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. If I live in the same city with them, I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.Thirdly, if I live in my home city, I will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for help when I need. Of course, I could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if I were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. If I go back to my home city, everybody will be waiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.In short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. I think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(4)If you have a good neighbor, you are a lucky person. You have someone who cares about your needs and your property, who is helpful in the little day-to-day situations that come up, and who is supportive in times of crisis.A good neighbor is someone who, for instance, understands that your children may occasionally run across his lawn,- even though you tell them not to. He'll realize that children can be careless about things like that, and he won't make a big fuss about it unless it becomes a regular thing. In the same vein, he knows that you'll understand if some of the trash from his trash cans blows across into your yard. In other words, he is sensitive to the unintentional things that can happen. He doesn't make a big deal about them.A good neighbor is also respectful of your property. For example, she asks your permission before doing anything that interferes with what's yours. This means she wouldn't plant a huge tree in between your houses without asking how you felt about it. If she wanted to put up a fence, she would let you know first. She might work with you to decide where it should be placed. Maybe the two of you would even split the cost.A good neighbor would lend you some milk if you ran out. She'd give you a ride to work if your car was broken, and let your children stay at her house in the evening if you got stuck working overtime. You would do the same for her. Both of you would help make the other's life easier.When something really awful happens to you, like a death in the family, a good neighbor will volunteer to help in any way he can. This could mean something small, like making some casseroles to put in your freezer to feed visiting relatives. Or it could mean something big, like helping you get through the sadness of the funeral.I think only someone who has experienced a bad neighbor can really appreciate a good one!A good neighbor can be a good friend. He or she can make all the difference in the world to your life.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(5)Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and esamples to support your answer.Some people like to eat out at food stands and restaurants, while others like to prepare food at home. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have. Those with very busy jobs outside the house don’t always have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall, though, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.While eating in restaurants is fast, the money you spend can add up. When I have dinner at a restaurant with a friend, the bill is usually over twenty dollars. I can buy a lot of groceries with that much money. Even lunch at a fast-food stand usually costs five or six dollars for one person. That’s enough to feed the whole family at home.Eating at home is better for you, too. Meals at restaurants are often high in fat and calories, and they serve big plates of food-much more food-than you need to eat at one meal. If you cook food at home, you have more control over the ingredients. You can use margarine instead of butter on your potatoes, or not put so much cheese on top of your pizza. At home, you can control yourportion size. You can serve yourself as little as you want. In a restaurant, you may eat a full plate of food "because you paid for it."It’s true that eating out is convenient. You don’t have to shop, or cook, or clean up. But real home cooking doesn’t have to take up a lot of time. There are lots of simple meals that don’t take long to make. In fact, they’re faster than eating out, especially if you think of the time you spend driving to a restaurant, parking, waiting for a table,, waiting for service, and driving home.Both eating at restaurants and cooking at home can be satisfying. Both can taste good and be enjoyed with family and friends. I prefer cooking at home because of the money and health issues, but people will make the choice that fits their lifestyle best.托福写作辅导:托福考试满分作文欣赏(6)题目:It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.A New Movie TheaterEntertainment is an important part of everyone’s life. We all need to take time to relax insgroupsto live healthy lives and do our work efficiently. It is easier to relax when an appropriate form of entertainment is convenient and close by. Therefore, I would support a proposal to build a new movie theater in my neighborhood.Entertainment places can bring some disadvantages to a community such as increased traffic and noise, but I believe the advantages of a new movie theater would outweigh these concerns. For one thing, the people in my neighborhood would save time. When they wanted to see a movie they could simply walk to the new theater rather than spend time traveling by bus or car. In addition, it would be safer for children to visit a nearby movie theater rather than one in some other part of the city. And finally, a new theater might attract other businesses, such as restaurants and coffee shops, where the people of my neighborhood could go to relax.In short, a new movie theater in the neighborhood would increase the number of entertainment options for the residents. They could enjoy themselves more easily without spending a lot of time traveling to another part of the city. For these reasons I would support the building of a movie theater in my neighborhood.译文:一家新电影院娱乐是每个人生活中一个重要的组成部分。

托福作文批改:你是否同意政府应该更多支持艺术家-

托福作文批改:你是否同意政府应该更多支持艺术家-

托福作文批改:你是否同意政府应该更多支持艺术家?托福写作批改前:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should support artists rather than allow them to support themselves.Nowadays, some people claim that the governmentshould support artists instead of themselves. However, I think this statementcannot be beneficial to both artists and the whole society due to the pointsbelow.First of all, the assistance from theadministrators may restrict the freedom of artists. The reason is that whenartists get financial help from the government, they become the governmentemployees to some extent, which means they have to work for the government. Ifthe government needs to advocate its policies, it will try to exploit artists.Meanwhile, in order to continue getting funding from the government, artistshave to obey the instructions from the government and abandon the freedom ofcreating the works they want to create.In addition, support for artists is notfair to the society, since the artist is just a kind of occupation no otherthan the architecture, the entrepreneur or the worker in factories. If one kindof vocation can get help from the government, as far as fairness concerned, allkinds of careers should get assistance, too. However, if the truth is that theentrepreneur is striving for managing his or her enterprise but the artist caneasily get money without hard work, this phenomenon would certainly have apessimistic influence on the society and students who are determining theirfuture careers.Last but not least, permitting artists tosupport themselves can propel the competition in the art field. In order tosurvive, artists have to think hard about how to appeal audiences or theirpotential consumers so that they may struggle to show their skills and featuresto defeat other artists. In consequence, more unique works will be created andart will thrive over years.All in all, admitting artists to supportthemselves has many benefits that government support does not have and that isthe reason why I strongly believe artists should make a living on their owninstead of depending on the government.点课台写作批改后:Nowadays, some people claim that the government should support artists instead of themselves. However, I think this statement【主语不应该是statement,只是一种言论不会引起好或坏的影响】 cannot be beneficial to both artists and the whole societydue to the points below.First of all, the assistance from the administrators【government更合适】 may restrict the freedom of artists. The reason is that when artists get financial help from the government, they become the government employees to some extent, which means they have to work for the government. If the government needs to advocate its policies, it will try to exploit artists.Meanwhile, in order to continue getting funding from the government, artists have to obey the instructions from the government and abandon the freedom of creating the works they want to create【去掉。

新托福写作范文(热门4篇)

新托福写作范文(热门4篇)

新托福写作范文第1篇Task:It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?.托福写作模板范文参考:We all crave knowledge, especially in this Age of Information, but what is the best source of knowledge? Are we to believe Albert Camus, who stated” The place we are to get knowledge is in books”? Or are we better served by following Albert Einstein's counsel that “The only source of knowledge is experience”? Although books have their place in one's learning, there is no substitute for experience; indeed, it is experience that is ultimately the most important source of knowledge.First, let us consider the knowledge needed to undertake a profession-for example, that of a physician. Knowledge gained from books provides the foundation of a doctor's training: study in a medical school begins with a near-overload of reading on anatomy, physiology and maladies both rare and common. However, during this time the medical student is also learning through experience, beginning with dissecting cadavers from almost the first day of medical school. Then, the aspiring physician must complete four years of residency, consisting of actual supervised experience at a hospital in which he or she now must put into practice all of the knowledge he or she has edge of dealing with patients, prescribing medication, and the joy and sadness of saving and losing patients; in other words, it is through experience that these residents finally learn what it means to be a doctor.What about knowledge other than professional expertise-for example, knowledge about another culture? In this realm as well, both books and real-life experience enrich and edify us. For example, Paris is perhaps the most talked-about and written-about city in the world. We could read Hemingway's A Moveable Feast, in which he describes the excitement and intellectual spirit-as well as the restaurants and plentiful red wine-of Paris in the 1920's. Or, we could travel to Paris and eat at bistros, walk across the Pont Neuf and look at the river Seine, visit the Louvre museum, and have adventures of our own. Clearly, most people would have attained more lasting and vivid knowledge by visiting Paris on their own rather than reading about it secondhand.In summary, experience, rather than books, is more central to our quest for learning, especially with regard to professional expertise. With regard to learning about another culture, experience is also irreplaceable. Yet not everyone in the world will have the health or financial resources to carry out a trip to Paris. But many people have access to a local library where they can borrow A Moveable Feast and, at no cost, read Hemingway's vibrant descriptions of Paris. We cannot forget the complementary and unique knowledge afforded by books, but experience is the most precious source of knowledge.新托福写作范文第2篇Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people saythat computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文:Some universities require students to choose a variety of subjects; others only require students tospecialize in one subject. I deem the first one as the premier choice. Among countless factors,there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity that students should take classes in many subjects is that theycan make full use of the abundant resources that a university has to offer. A university has plentyof educational and research resources. It is a very good idea to make full use of these valuableassets while studying in the university. The best way to achieve this is to take a variety of subjectsas much as possible. Through learning these courses, a student can get access to knowledge andresources in different areas. On the contrary, if a student only specializes in one subject, he willnot have a chance to get access to other resources offered by the university.Another reason can be seen by every person is that by choosing many subjects students can broaden their knowledge and make a solid foundation for their future concentrated study. Whatever the student will concentrate on in his senior years in college, it is necessary that hechoose a wide range of subjects to build the knowledge foundation. Take the field of BusinessManagement for example, the student has to acquire knowledge in writing, accounting, economicsand human resource management before he can successfully start his major concentration argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because studentscan be more adaptable in their future career if they choose a variety of subjects during theiruniversity study. It is obvious that the development of modern society requires people with inter-disciplinary and comprehensive knowledge. If a student chooses a variety of subjects in hisuniversity study, and gained a breath and width of knowledge, he will be more adaptable to therequirement of the society, and be able to easily adjust to many kinds of jobs. This will benefit hisfuture career.In a word, taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that studentsshould take classes in many subjects in a university.新托福写作范文第3篇满分托福综合写作范文In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country. The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.First, the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be examined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value. If the site is of archaeological interest, the next step is for the builders, archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts, either by building around them or by excavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government.The construction company has to pay for the initial examination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan. This is a whole new source of financial support. The funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists, work that didn’t exist before. Expert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to examine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles. The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain, which is now the highest it’s ever been.新托福写作范文第4篇Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group ledby a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文:There are a lot of views whether the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Differentpeople has different viewpoint. In my opinion, a group led by a tour guide is the best way totravel. The argument for this view goes as follows:In the first place, there are many advantages when people travel in a group. First, people will notfeel boring in a long trip. People can talk, laugh and make joking like a big family. Second, thegroup will help you a lot when you have any emergency. The people in the group could help youfigure out the awkward situation that will be unimaginable when you travel alone. Third, with thegroup discount, such as the discount for airplane ticket, the hotel, and the admission ticket,travelers can save a lot of money when they use the group discount.In the second place, there are many advantages too when people travel led by a tour guide. Thetour guide will arrange all the details about the trip in advance. The traveler need not worry aboutwhere to find the hotel, where to rent the car, and how to find the direction. It will make the trip a little bit easy. Another advantage is that led by a tour guide will save much time than travelingalone. With the professional knowledge, tour guide will make the smartest schedule. I wouldnever forget that one of my friend, a city tour guide in the Shanghai, China, said that she can leadtraveler to visit the whole city by one day which people should spend two or three days to finishit.In conclusion, there are many advantages when people travels in a group led by a tour guide, suchas save money, save time, do not feel boring, and is easy to take care of. Therefore, I stronglyagree that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.。

改革后托福写作新题型(academic discussion)的例题与答题模版

改革后托福写作新题型(academic discussion)的例题与答题模版

改革后的托福写作新题型Academic Discussion 模拟线上课堂讨论,要求考生针对指定话题阐述观点并提供论据。

以下是一个例题及答题模板:例题:Professor: In the past 200 years, besides computers and mobile phones, what else has significantly changed the way we live and work?Student A: I think the Internet has had the most significant impact. It has changed the way we communicate and access information.Student B: While the Internet is important, I would argue that transportation has had a greater impact. It has made travel faster and more accessible, which has changed the way we do business and explore the world.Discussion Prompt:Based on the conversation you have just heard, write an essay in which you discuss the arguments presented by Student A and Student B, and then state your own opinion.答题模板:Introduction:In recent years, the way we live and work has been significantly influenced by various technological advancements. In a conversation about this topic, Student A and Student B presented different arguments, with Student A emphasizing the impact of the Internet and Student B highlighting the importance of transportation. In my opinion, while both arguments have their merits, I agree more with Student A's perspective.Body Paragraph 1:Student A's argument about the Internet's influence is compelling. The advent of the Internet has indeed revolutionized the way we communicate and access information. Social media platforms, online messaging apps, and email have replaced traditional forms of communication, making it faster and more efficient to connect with others across the globe. Additionally, the Internet has provided us with a vast amount of information at our fingertips, enabling us to learn and acquire knowledge on a wide range of topics.Body Paragraph 2:However, Student B's argument about the impact of transportation cannot be overlooked. The development of faster and more convenient transportation methods, such as airplanes and high-speed trains, has significantly transformed the way we travel and conduct business. These advancements have made it possible to reach distant destinations within a matter of hours, facilitating global trade and cultural exchange. Furthermore, transportation improvements have made travel more accessible to a wider population, allowing people from different backgrounds to explore the world and gain new experiences.Conclusion:While both the Internet and transportation have played crucial roles in shaping our lives and work, I believe that the Internet's influence is more profound. Its ability to connect people and provide access to a vast amount of information has had a transformative effect on society. Nonetheless, it is important to acknowledge the significance of transportation in facilitating global connectivity and accessibility. Both factors have contributed to the rapidly changing landscape of our modern world.。

托福Integrated Writing范文5篇(中英双语)

托福Integrated Writing范文5篇(中英双语)

托福Integrated Writing范文5篇(中英双语)第一篇:以下是一篇关于太阳能能源的托福Integrated Writing范文,包括阅读材料、听力材料以及中英双语翻译:题目(Topic):阅读材料介绍了太阳能能源的优点,而听力材料提出了一些关于太阳能发电的担忧。

总结阅读材料和听力材料的观点,然后解释担忧如何影响阅读中的观点。

阅读材料(Reading Passage):英文:Solar energy is considered a renewable source of energy with several advantages. Firstly, it is environmentally friendly, reducing greenhouse gas emissions and contributing to climate change mitigation. Secondly, the cost of solar panels has been continuously decreasing, making solar energy more economically viable. Additionally, solar power systems have long-term maintenance benefits as they require fewer mechanical components.中文翻译:太阳能被认为是一种可再生能源,具有多个优点。

首先,它对环境友好,减少温室气体排放,有助于减缓气候变化。

其次,太阳能电池板的成本持续降低,使太阳能更具经济可行性。

此外,太阳能电力系统具有长期的维护优势,因为其需要较少的机械部件。

听力材料(Listening Passage):英文:However, some concerns have been raised regarding solar power generation systems. It is argued that the manufacturing of solar panels may result in the emission of harmful chemicals, potentially causing adverse environmental effects. Moreover, solar panels have a limited lifespan and typically need replacement within a few decades. The recycling and disposal of these panels also raise concerns due to their hazardous components.中文翻译:然而,关于太阳能发电系统,一些担忧也被提出。

托福写作改革后范文

托福写作改革后范文

托福写作改革后范文(最新版3篇)目录(篇1)1.引言2.改革后的托福写作要求及评分标准3.改革后的托福写作范文分析4.结论正文(篇1)一、引言随着全球教育交流的日益频繁,托福考试已成为衡量英语水平的重要标准之一。

近年来,托福写作部分进行了改革,旨在提高考生在学术写作、沟通和分析方面的能力。

本文将探讨改革后的托福写作要求及评分标准。

二、改革后的托福写作要求及评分标准改革后的托福写作部分要求考生在30分钟内完成两篇文章。

其中,综合写作要求考生在阅读一段文字后,用简洁的语言概括出主旨,并在听力部分结束后,用一段文字表达对听力材料的理解。

独立写作要求考生针对一个主题自由发挥,提出自己的观点并进行论述。

此外,改革后的托福写作部分在评分标准上更加细化。

考生的语言表达、逻辑结构、论据充分性以及文章连贯性都会被仔细评估。

这要求考生在备考过程中注重提高自己的写作技巧和语言表达能力。

三、改革后的托福写作范文分析为了更好地理解改革后的托福写作要求,本文将分析一篇优秀的范文。

该范文在综合写作部分准确地概括了阅读和听力材料的主旨,并在写作过程中运用了恰当的连词和过渡句,使得文章逻辑结构清晰。

在独立写作部分,该考生提出了一个有深度的观点,并运用了丰富的例子和论述来支持该观点。

通过分析该范文,我们可以看到改革后的托福写作更加注重考生的独立思考能力和批判性思维。

考生需要在有限的时间内有效地组织思路、运用语言,并呈现出一篇结构严谨、表达清晰的文章。

四、结论综上所述,改革后的托福写作部分在要求和评分标准上都有了明显的提升。

考生需要具备扎实的语言基础和较高的独立思考能力,才能在考试中取得好成绩。

通过分析一篇优秀的范文,我们可以看到改革后的托福写作更加注重考查考生的实际应用能力和批判性思维。

因此,考生在备考过程中应注重提高自己的写作技巧和语言表达能力,培养独立思考的习惯,以便在考试中发挥出最佳水平。

目录(篇2)一、介绍1.背景介绍2.目的和意义二、新改革方案介绍1.托福写作的新改革方案2.新改革方案的特点和优势三、范文示例1.范文的结构和内容2.范文的语言表达和论证方式四、个人观点和展望1.对于新改革的看法2.对于托福写作未来的展望正文(篇2)托福写作改革后范文一、介绍托福是世界广泛认可的英语水平测试,其中写作部分是评估学生英语表达和逻辑思维能力的重要指标。

托福写作改革后范文

托福写作改革后范文

托福写作改革后范文【原创实用版1篇】目录(篇1)1.托福写作改革的背景和内容2.改革后的托福写作新题型:学术讨论写作3.学术讨论写作的评分标准和写作要求4.如何准备学术讨论写作5.改革后的托福写作范文及案例正文(篇1)托福写作改革后范文1.托福写作改革的背景和内容托福考试是全球范围内最受欢迎的英语语言能力测试之一。

近年来,为了更好地适应全球范围内英语教育的发展趋势和需求,托福考试进行了多次改革。

其中,最重要的改革之一就是托福写作部分的改革。

这次改革将从 2023 年 7 月 26 日开始实施。

这次托福写作改革的主要内容是取消了原来的独立写作题型,新增了学术讨论写作题型。

这种新型的写作题型更符合美国学生教育风格,要求考生在指定话题上发表个人见解,并进行批判性思维。

2.改革后的托福写作新题型:学术讨论写作学术讨论写作是一种新型的托福写作题型,要求考生在 10 分钟内完成一篇 100 字的短文。

这种题型主要考察考生的批判性思维能力和对学术话题的理解。

在写作过程中,考生需要对题目材料中的内容进行回应,并提出自己的观点和论据。

3.学术讨论写作的评分标准和写作要求学术讨论写作的评分标准主要包括以下几个方面:(1)内容的完整性和准确性:考生需要对题目材料中的内容进行回应,并提出自己的观点和论据。

文章的内容需要完整,不能遗漏任何要点。

(2)批判性思维能力:考生需要在文章中展示出较强的批判性思维能力,对题目材料中的观点进行分析和评价。

(3)语言的准确性和表达的流畅性:考生需要使用准确的语言表达自己的观点和论据,同时保证文章的表达流畅。

4.如何准备学术讨论写作要准备学术讨论写作,考生需要从以下几个方面入手:(1)积累社会热点话题知识:考生需要关注社会热点话题,了解各种观点和论据,以便在写作时能够灵活运用。

(2)提高批判性思维能力:考生需要培养自己的批判性思维能力,学会对各种观点进行分析和评价。

(3)练习写作:考生需要进行大量的写作练习,提高自己的写作速度和质量。

托福英语作文范文带标题

托福英语作文范文带标题

托福英语作文范文带标题My Experience with Language Learning.I remember when I first started learning English. It was tough! The words sounded strange and the grammar rules were a total mystery. But I was determined to master it.Practicing with native speakers was a game-changer. I joined an English conversation group and met people fromall over the world. We talked about everything from food to culture, and I could see my language skills improving day by day.One thing that really helped me was watching English movies and TV shows. I would pause the show every time I heard a new word or phrase and look it up. This way, I was able to learn vocabulary in a fun and engaging way.Traveling to English-speaking countries was another amazing experience. I remember my first trip to the UK; Iwas surrounded by the language all the time. Even though I made mistakes, people were so friendly and patient with me.Learning a new language is definitely a challenge, but it's also incredibly rewarding. It opens up a whole new world of opportunities and allows you to connect with people from different cultures. I'm so glad I took on this journey!。

托福英文作文范文10篇

托福英文作文范文10篇

托福英文作文范文1. 教育话题题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics?I strongly agree with the statement that studying history and literature is more important for students than studying science and mathematics. While science and mathematics are undoubtedly valuable subjects, history and literature provide students with a well-rounded education that fosters critical thinking, cultural understanding, and communication skills.History allows students to learn from the past, understand the evolution of societies, and gain insights into the consequences of human actions. Literature, on the other hand, exposes students to diverse perspectives, fosters empathy, and enhances language skills.While science and mathematics are essential for technological advancements, history and literature provide the ethical and cultural context necessary for responsible innovation. Therefore, a balanced curriculum that includes history and literature is vital for developing informed and well-rounded individuals.2. 科技与社会题目:Some people believe that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Do you agree or disagree?I disagree with the notion that technology has made children less creative. While technology has introduced new forms of entertainment and learning, it has also provided opportunities for creativity and innovation.Technology enables children to engage in various creative activities. They can create digital art, compose music using software, and even design video games.Additionally, access to information and diverse perspectives through the internet can inspire creativity and expand their horizons.Moreover, technology often requires problem-solving and critical thinking skills, which are fundamental to creativity. Children who use technology to solve puzzles, code, or explore scientific concepts are actively engaging their creative minds.In conclusion, technology can serve as a powerful tool to foster creativity in children when used thoughtfully and in moderation. It opens up new avenues for expression and problem-solving, making it a valuable asset rather than a hindrance to creativity.3. 环境问题题目:Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, and that only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?I disagree with the notion that individuals cannot make a difference in solving environmental problems. While government and large companies play significant roles, individual actions collectively have a substantial impact on the environment.Individuals can reduce their carbon footprint by conserving energy, using public transportation, and adopting sustainable practices in their daily lives. By making environmentally conscious choices, such as reducing plastic waste or conserving water, individuals contribute to positive environmental change.Furthermore, individual actions can influence governments and corporations. Grassroots movements and consumer demand for eco-friendly products have led to policy changes and increased corporate responsibility. For instance, the push for renewable energy sources and stricter environmental regulations has been driven, in part, by public awareness and advocacy.In conclusion, individuals have the power to make a difference in addressing environmental problems through their choices, actions, and influence on largerentities. While governments and corporations have a crucial role to play, individual efforts are integral to creating a sustainable future.4. 社会问题题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is important for governments to spend money on art such as music, painting, and dance?I strongly agree with the statement that it is important for governments to spend money on art. Art plays a vital role in society, fostering cultural enrichment, creativity, and social cohesion.Government investment in art supports cultural preservation and heritage. Museums, galleries, and cultural institutions receive funding to protect and showcase valuable artworks, preserving the cultural identity and history of a nation.Art also enhances creativity and innovation, benefiting society as a whole. Exposure to various forms of art, such as music, painting, and dance, stimulates creative thinking, problem-solving, and individual expression. This creativity can have positive impacts in fields beyond art, including science, technology, and business.Additionally, art contributes to social cohesion by providing a platform for shared experiences and expressions of diverse perspectives. Cultural events and artistic performances bring communities together, fostering a sense of unity and belonging.In conclusion, government investment in art is a wise allocation of resources that promotes cultural preservation, creativity, and social cohesion. It enriches society in ways that extend beyond the artistic realm.5. 移民与多元文化题目:Some people believe that immigrants should adopt the culture of their new country, while others think they should maintain their own cultural traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The question of whether immigrants should adopt the culture of their new country or maintain their own cultural traditions is a complex one, with valid arguments on both sides.Advocates for cultural assimilation argue that adopting the culture of the host country is essential for social cohesion and integration. They contend that shared values, language, and customs facilitate better communication and understanding among diverse communities. Cultural assimilation, they argue, helps immigrants become active and productive members of their new society.On the other hand, supporters of cultural preservation argue that maintaining one's cultural traditions is vital for preserving identity and diversity. They believe that a multicultural society is enriched by the contributions of various cultures and that immigrants should not be forced to abandon their heritage. Cultural preservation, they argue, can lead to a more vibrant and inclusive society.In my opinion, the ideal approach lies in a balance between assimilation and cultural preservation. Immigrants should have the freedom to choose which aspects of their cultural heritage they wish to maintain, while also respecting and adapting to the cultural norms and values of their new country. This balance allows for the coexistence of diverse cultures while fostering integration and understanding within the broader society.6. 健康与生活方式题目:Some people believe that the government should promote a vegetarian diet to improve public health, while others think it should be a personal choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The promotion of a vegetarian diet by the government to improve public health is a topic of debate. Some argue that it should be a personal choice, while others believe in government intervention.Proponents of government promotion of a vegetarian diet argue that it can lead to better public health outcomes by reducing the consumption of meat, which is associated with various health risks. They contend that government campaigns can educate the public about the benefits of a vegetarian diet and provide incentives for healthier eating.On the other hand, advocates for personal choice argue that individuals should have the freedom to make their dietary decisions based on their preferences and beliefs. They believe that government should not interfere in matters of personal choice, including what people choose to eat.In my view, the government should play a role in promoting healthy dietary choices, but it should not mandate a vegetarian diet. Education and awareness campaigns can provide information about the health benefits of reducing meat consumption, but the ultimate decision should rest with individuals. Encouraging a balanced and informed approach to diet is key to improving public health.7. 社会问题题目:Some people argue that the death penalty should be abolished because it is inhumane, while others believe it serves as an effective deterrent for serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The debate over the death penalty is a contentious one, with arguments on both sides regarding its humanity and effectiveness as a deterrent for serious crimes.Opponents of the death penalty argue that it is inhumane and violates the right to life. They contend that there is a risk of executing innocent individuals, and that the death penalty does not serve as an effective deterrent, as there is no conclusive evidence that it reduces serious crimes.On the other hand, proponents of the death penalty believe that it serves as a powerful deterrent for heinous crimes such as murder. They argue that it provides closure to victims' families and ensures that dangerous criminals do not have the opportunity to commit further crimes.In my opinion, the death penalty should be abolished. The potential for irreversible errors in judgment and the ethical concerns surrounding taking a human life outweigh any potential deterrent effect. Alternative forms of punishment, such as life imprisonment, can ensure public safety without resorting to state-sanctioned killing.8. 教育话题题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school.I strongly agree with the statement that all students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Art and music education offer numerous benefits that contribute to a well-rounded education and personal development.Firstly, art and music stimulate creativity and self-expression. They provide students with an outlet for their emotions and thoughts, fostering imagination and critical thinking. These skills are valuable in various aspects of life and can enhance problem-solving abilities.Secondly, art and music education promote cultural appreciation and awareness. They expose students to different artistic styles, historical periods, and culturaltraditions, fostering empathy and an understanding of diverse perspectives. This cultural awareness is essential in an increasingly globalized world.Furthermore, art and music can have a positive impact on emotional well-being. They provide avenues for stress relief and self-reflection, contributing to mental and emotional health.In conclusion, requiring students to study art and music in secondary school is essential for their holistic development. These subjects nurture creativity, cultural understanding, and emotional well-being, making them integral components of a comprehensive education.9. 科技与社会题目:Some people believe that advancements in technology, such as the internet and smartphones, have made people more isolated and less sociable. Do you agree or disagree?The impact of advancements in technology, including the internet and smartphones, on social interactions is a matter of debate. Some argue that these technologies have made people more isolated and less sociable, while others disagree.I agree with the view that advancements in technology have had a mixed impact on social interactions. While they have created new forms of communication and connection, they have also brought challenges related to isolation and reducedface-to-face interaction.Technology, such as social media and instant messaging, enables people to stay in touch with friends and family, even across great distances. It can also facilitate the formation of online communities and support networks. However, the overuse of technology can lead to reduced physical interactions, as people spend more time on screens and less time engaging with others in person.Moreover, technology has changed the nature of social interactions. It can lead to shallow, online-only relationships, making it essential for individuals to strike a balance between virtual and real-world connections.In conclusion, while technology has the potential to enhance social interactions and connections, it also carries the risk of isolation when used excessively. It is crucial for individuals to use technology mindfully and prioritize in-person interactions to maintain healthy social relationships.10. 环境问题题目:Some people believe that individual actions, such as recycling and conserving energy, are not sufficient to address environmental problems. They argue that governments and large corporations must take the lead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?I believe that individual actions, such as recycling and conserving energy, are important but not sufficient on their own to address environmental problems. Governments and large corporations must also take a proactive role in environmental conservation.Individual actions, such as reducing waste and adopting sustainable practices, play a crucial role in raising environmental awareness and setting an example for others. However, the scale of environmental issues, such as climate change and habitat destruction, requires coordinated efforts at a larger scale.Governments have the power to implement policies and regulations that can significantly impact environmental conservation. They can establish emissions standards, invest in renewable energy sources, and protect natural habitats. Government actions can create a conducive environment for sustainable practices.Large corporations are major contributors to environmental issues, but they also have the resources and influence to make substantial changes. When corporationsadopt sustainable practices, reduce emissions, and prioritize eco-friendly products, they can have a significant positive impact on the environment.In conclusion, addressing environmental problems requires a multi-pronged approach. While individual actions are important, governments and large corporations must also take responsibility and lead the way in implementing sustainable practices and policies.。

托福作文模板vince

托福作文模板vince

托福作文模板vinceVince。

Introduction。

The topic of Vince is one that has been widely discussed in recent years. With the increasing awareness of environmental issues and the need for sustainable development, Vince has become an important consideration in many industries. In this essay, we will explore the concept of Vince, its importance, and its impact on various aspects of our lives.Definition of Vince。

Vince, which stands for "Value, Inclusion, Nature, Community, and Environment," is a concept that encompasses the values of sustainability and social responsibility. It emphasizes the need to create value for all stakeholders, including the environment, local communities, and future generations. It also promotes the inclusion of diverse perspectives and voices in decision-making processes, and recognizes the interconnectedness of human society and the natural world.Importance of Vince。

托福综合写作能力:归纳及改写

托福综合写作能力:归纳及改写

托福综合写作能力:归纳及改写托福综合写作必备能力:归纳及改写托福考试中,托福写作是最考核考生英语水平及能力的部分。

在托福写作部分拿下高分已然不易,写一篇托福满分作文着实不易。

以下是yjbys网店铺整理的关于托福综合写作必备能力:归纳及改写,供大家备考。

托福综合写作“归纳”,就是考生能够把握托福综合写作阅读材料和听力材料中论证的重点,也即观点和论点。

对于阅读材料,如何归纳呢?以TPO29托福综合写作阅读其中一段材料为例:First, the edmontosaur's diet supports the migration hypothesis. Edmontosaurs fed exclusively on plants. Since there would have been no plants growing during the cold and dark North Slope winter, it appears that the edmontosaur must have left for at least part of the year and migrated to more temperate zones to find food.概括内容为:Edmontosaurs fed exclusively on plants----- have to leave the cold and dark North Slope winter to more temperate zones to find food .对应的托福听力材料:First, the edmontosaur did not have to migrate to find food. One hundred million years ago the summer temperatures in the North Slope area were warmer than they are today. And remember in arctic regions like the North Slope the sun shines 24 hours a day at the peak of the summer, the warm temperatures and the extensive daylight created incredibly good growing conditions for plants, so much vegetation was produced during the summer that when the vegetation died as the winter came, there was a lot of nutritious dead vegetation around in the winter. The edmontosaur could have easily lived on the dead plant matter during in the winter.概括为:Edmontosaurs did not have to migrate to find food---the summer temperatures in the North Slope area were warmer than they are today,there was a lot of nutritious dead vegetation around in the winter.这里需要注意的是:由于听力材料只听一遍,在发挥托福综合写作概括能力之前,考生需要根据阅读材料的内容预测听力内容的重点并带着预测来听。

2024托福独立写作真题及范文

2024托福独立写作真题及范文
2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.
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• Students aged 13-18 are taught different subjects by different teachers while younger students are taught by only one teacher all day long. Some people suggest it would benefit young students to be taught by different teachers. Do you agree with this view? Why or why not?
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Some young people are free in the evenings or have days off at school, which way can bring them the most benefit? 1、to accumulate work experience by a part-time job or volunteering in a community 2、learning to play a sport 3、learning to play a musical instrument
2024.7.2 A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age14-18)improve their teaching. It is considering two plans: 1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.

修改英语作文万能模板

修改英语作文万能模板

修改英语作文万能模板英文回答:Universal Essay Template。

Introduction。

Begin with a strong hook that captures the reader's attention.State the thesis statement clearly and concisely.Provide a brief overview of the essay's structure.Body Paragraphs。

Topic Sentence: Introduce the main idea of the paragraph.Evidence: Provide specific examples, data, or expertopinions to support the topic sentence.Explanation: Explain how the evidence supports the topic sentence and advances the thesis statement.Transition: Connect the paragraph to the next section.Conclusion。

Restate the thesis statement and summarize the main points.Provide a concluding statement that leaves the reader with a lasting impression.Example Essay。

Prompt: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.Introduction。

Social media has become an integral part of our lives, offering numerous benefits but also posing certain challenges. This essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages of social media to provide a comprehensive understanding of its impact on society.Body Paragraph 1: Advantages。

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托福综合写作范文(满分)

托福综合写作范文(满分).docthe united kingdom (sometimes referred to as britain)has a long and rich history of human settlement. traces of buildings,tools,and art can be found from periods going back many thousands of years: from the stone age,through the bronze age,the iron agethe time of the roman colonization, the middle ages, up to the beginnings of the industrial age yet from most of the twentieth century, the science ofarchaeology-dedicated to uncovering and studying old cultural artifacts -was faced with serious problems and limitations in britain.first, many valuable artifacts were lost to construction projects.the growth of britain's population,especially from the 1950s onspurred a lot of new construction in british cities, towns,and villages. while digging foundations for new buildings,the builders often uncovered archaeologically valuable ually, however,they proceeded with the construction and did not preserve the artifacts.many archaeologically precious artifacts were therefore destroyed. second,many archaeologists felt that the financial support for archaeological research are inadequate. for most of the twentieth century,archaeology was funded mostly throughgovernment funds and grants which allowed archaeologists to investigate a handful of the most important sites but which left hundreds of other interesting projects without support. furthermore, changing government priorities brought about periodic reductions in funding.third, it was difficult to have a career in archaeology.archaeology jobs were to be found at universities or with a few government agencies, but there were never many positions available. many people who wanted to become archaeologists ended up pursuing other careers and contributing to archaeological research only as unpaid amateurs.。

托福范文(共15篇)

托福范文(共15篇)

一、举实例思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型:To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example二、做比较方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。

下面是一些短语:相似的比较:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner相反的比较:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …托福范文第2篇托福tpo真题写作53作文范文,托福tpo53独立写作independentwriting范文+题目解析是托福考试官方指南(officialguide),tpo21-54 独立写作范文+独立写作批改服务,真题解析,解析,模版解析,文笔分析,写作技巧等,是托福考试官方给出的考试指南。

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小托福 英语作文范文

小托福英语作文范文篇 1Oh my goodness! Let me take you on a wonderful journey to describe a remarkable campus activity. At the very beginning, I have to say that the sports meeting held last month was truly unforgettable.In the middle part, let me tell you all the exciting details. The students gathered on the playground, their faces filled with enthusiasm and anticipation. The races were the most thrilling! The runners dashed forward as if they had wings, and the cheers of the audience never stopped. Every moment was filled with tension and excitement. The teamwork in the relay races was so amazing! Everyone did their best to pass the baton smoothly and strive for victory.At the end, this activity was not just about winning or losing. It was about unity, friendship, and the spirit of never giving up. We all gained a deeper understanding of the meaning of cooperation and the joy of participation. How wonderful and meaningful this campus activity was!篇 2I have read numerous books, but there is one that holds a special place in my heart -"To Kill a Mockingbird" by Harper Lee. This book is not just a collection of words; it's a profound journey that has had a tremendous impact on my life.The story is set in a small southern town, where racial prejudice and injustice are prevalent. The main characters, Atticus Finch and his children, Scout and Jem, face various challenges. The way the author describes the characters' emotions and the complex social issues is truly remarkable.The book has taught me about the importance of empathy and standing up forwhat is right. It has made me question societal norms and strive to be a better person. How could such a powerful story not touch one's soul? I believe that this book is not only a literary masterpiece but also a guide to a more understanding and compassionate world. Isn't it amazing how a simple book can have such a profound effect?篇 3Oh dear friends! Let's think about the significance of environmental protection. It's not just a topic, but a matter that closely relates to our future and the well-being of our descendants!Why is environmental protection so crucial? Just imagine a world filled with polluted air, dirty water, and vanishing forests. How terrifying would that be? We must act now! We can start by reducing waste, using public transportation, and conserving energy. For instance, we can carry reusable bags when shopping instead of using plastic ones. We should also encourage more people to join in the environmental protection efforts.Let's make a commitment to protect our environment! Isn't it our responsibility to leave a beautiful and healthy world for future generations? Let's take action without delay!篇 4I have always been fascinated by the people around me, especially my favorite teacher, Mrs. Smith. She is not just a teacher but a guiding light in my life! Her patience is like an endless ocean, never running dry no matter how many questions we throw at her. Her enthusiasm for teaching is contagious! Every time she steps into the classroom, it feels like a new adventure is about to begin. She has this unique way of explaining complex concepts in such a simple and understandable manner.How does she do it? It's like magic! Her kind smile and encouraging words make us believe that we can conquer any challenge. Isn't she amazing? I truly admire her for her dedication and love for her students. This is just one example of the wonderful people we encounter in our lives, and such character descriptions are common topics in the Toefl Junior essays. Life experiences, like this one, shape our understanding of the world and ourselves. Don't you think so?篇 5Last summer, I had an unforgettable journey to a beautiful seaside town. It was a trip that filled my heart with joy and amazement! I set off in the early morning, and the sun was shining brightly.During my stay there, I visited many wonderful places. I walked along the sandy beach, feeling the soft sand beneath my feet. The waves were crashing against the shore, which was such a breathtaking sight! I swam in the clear blue sea and enjoyed the cool water. I also went fishing with local fishermen. How exciting it was to wait for the fish to bite the hook!I stayed in a cozy hotel. The staff were so friendly and helpful. They made me feel at home.This trip was not only a great adventure but also a valuable experience that I will always remember. Wasn't it amazing?。

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Spending money on traveling is better than saving money for future use.
Many people think that spending money on traveling is better than saving money for future use. I completely agree the statement because spending money on traveing can bring many benefits.
First of all, spending money on traveing can widen our friend’s circle. We can trave to anywhere we like and make friends with the local people. We can keep in touch with different people from different cities or different countries, through this we can get more changes to communicate with other people, maybe we can practice our speaking skills, too.
Next, if we trave to many different places, it can bring us more knowledge about different cultures. For example, I like Egypt very much, the pyramids, the Nile and so on. I hope I can have a chance to trave to there and see what I really want to see. I can gain more knowledge about the Egyptian’s life, I can know their habits, too. I can see the Nile with my own eyes and know more about how the pyramids were built.
Also, spending money on traving enables us to learning foreign language. We can trave to many different countries and talk to local people, know some characteristics about their languages. I think that talking to a native speaker for several times, you are closer to be a native speaker. It is a good way to learn more kinds of language. If we can speak many foreign languages, it can help our study and work in the future.
In summary, I feel that spending money on traveling is better than saving money for future use. Spending money on traveling will give us more
knowledge and we can gain valuable experience at the same time. It is good for your future study, showing that you had experience with many clutures and you care about find different ways to gain knowledge.。

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