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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Spending money on traveling is better than saving money for future use.

Many people think that spending money on traveling is better than saving money for future use. I completely agree the statement because spending money on traveing can bring many benefits.

First of all, spending money on traveing can widen our friend’s circle. We can trave to anywhere we like and make friends with the local people. We can keep in touch with different people from different cities or different countries, through this we can get more changes to communicate with other people, maybe we can practice our speaking skills, too.

Next, if we trave to many different places, it can bring us more knowledge about different cultures. For example, I like Egypt very much, the pyramids, the Nile and so on. I hope I can have a chance to trave to there and see what I really want to see. I can gain more knowledge about the Egyptian’s life, I can know their habits, too. I can see the Nile with my own eyes and know more about how the pyramids were built.

Also, spending money on traving enables us to learning foreign language. We can trave to many different countries and talk to local people, know some characteristics about their languages. I think that talking to a native speaker for several times, you are closer to be a native speaker. It is a good way to learn more kinds of language. If we can speak many foreign languages, it can help our study and work in the future.

In summary, I feel that spending money on traveling is better than saving money for future use. Spending money on traveling will give us more

knowledge and we can gain valuable experience at the same time. It is good for your future study, showing that you had experience with many clutures and you care about find different ways to gain knowledge.