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美国留学essay最重要的八个内容

美国留学essay最重要的八个内容

美国留学essay最重要的八个内容如果你想写出一篇真正出色的自荐信,你必须放松,再放松,然后表达一个真实的自己。

但是怎样表达一个真实的自己呢?真正做到这一点要比你想象的要简单。

和小编一起来看看美国留学essay最重要的八个内容。

一、美国大学essay写作要点:要点明确不论你回答的具体是哪个问题,总有一些基本的处理方法适用于你的写作。

录取委员会不会特意去寻找这些内容点,但是出色的申请材料中,要点必须一目了然。

为了确保你达到了这项基本要求,你可以在递交整套材料前依照下列标准作一番核对:1. 你是否明确回答了所有问题?2. 你是否清晰表达了你的主旨?3. 你的写作是否自然、和谐,并且没有语法或拼写错误?当你完成针对一所学校的整套申请文书的写作时,你应该回头把这些文章作为一个整体再读一遍,确保你在写作中已经做到:1. 明确表达了你的动机;2. 完全针对对方学校;3. 描写了自己不同于他人的至少两三种品质和特点;4. 提出至少一项有力论据说服录取委员会接受你。

二、美国大学essay写作要点:良好的写作和交流能力申请文书的另一项作用是展示你出色的语言能力和写作技巧。

诚然,你并不需要通过申请文书来证明你成为作家或学者的潜力;你需要证明的只是你具有足够的潜能成为一名未来的企业管理者。

清晰而有技巧的阐明一个观点的能力对成功的管理者来说是必不可少的,而出色的写作正显示了出色的沟通能力当然,出色的写作能力并不是全部。

一篇漂亮的文章不能保证你被录取,但是一篇糟糕的文章一定不能使你被录取三、美国大学essay写作要点:人物的真实性录取委员会希望从申请文书中看到的不仅仅是特殊的背景、人格特点或技能,他们要看到一个完整的人。

商学院的录取官有一个近乎固执的信念,坚持认为他们能够穿过数字和文字了解背后的那个人。

我们希望找到一些数字无法说明的东西,比如一些无形的品质。

我们希望通过申请文章看到这些东西。

所以在申请信中你应该尽可能的告诉我们你是谁。

美国本科留学申请文书写作要求

美国本科留学申请文书写作要求

【导语】在⼤学申请中,⽂书往往能够决定申请者是否能从万千竞争者中脱颖⽽出,所以它的重要性不⾔⽽喻。

下⾯是⽆忧考分享的美国本科留学申请⽂书写作要求。

欢迎阅读参考!1.美国本科留学申请⽂书写作要求 1、去美国读本科⽂书写作要求之表格部分 问题会根据学⽣的具体信息有选择性地出现,⽽不是所有问题都全部显⽰出来; 只能在线提交,将不再接受纸质版本; 新版本的创建次数将不再局限于10次,但是essay的改动不能超过3次。

2、美国本科⽂书写作要求之写作部分 Main essay题⽬和字数变动; Short answer将不再出现在主表⾥,⽽是每所学校⾃⼰选择是否要放在⾃⼰的supplement⾥⾯; 所有写作内容将不再采取upload的形式,⽽是在线填到空格⾥,必须遵守严格的字数限制。

⽂字可以进⾏简单的编辑,⽐如粗体,斜体,下划线等。

学⽣的简历,研究报告或平时习作等等可以根据具体学校的要求在supplement⾥进⾏upload。

3、去美国读本科⽂书写作要求之付费部分 “邮寄⽀票”这个选项取消,所有申请费都通过在线⽀付; 付费,提交主表和supplement将不再分开提交,⽽是⼀键操作;supplement⾥⾯的写作部分除外。

4、美国本科⽂书写作要求之Schoolforms部分 School report会要求提供schooldemographic。

由⾼中counselor填写,只能填写⼀次,不得修改; School report⾥不再要求写current-yearcourses;如果counselor提供的学⽣成绩单模版中没有这部分内容,则需另外附纸写明⾼三课程; School report,midyear 和finalreports都要要求counselor注明成绩单中包含了学⽣哪些年级的成绩。

International supplement和homeschool supplement取消,如果是国际⽣或homeschool,counselor或监护⼈需要在school report的相关位置回答额外的问题。

新美国申请大学文书范文推荐5篇

新美国申请大学文书范文推荐5篇

美国申请大学文书范文推荐5篇5美国申请大学文书范文第一篇大学申请书中的申论题应该选择什么主题?以及事前该做什么准备?下列是几个我们认为非常重要、有用,并且能帮助您做决定的注意事项。

1. 英文书写能力对大部分亚洲学生而言,每天说的、写的语言显然不会是英文。

想当然尔,准备申请书最困难的部分也就是用英文写这些申论题。

所以,您必须事先做好万全准备,才能从容面对这个挑战。

在动笔写申论题前,您必须先有二、三个月的时间做准备。

这段时间内英文书报读得越多越好。

特别注意这些文章的组织与架构,以及句子的结构。

您一旦看到可以用来描述自己的单字,务必记得抄在另外准备的笔记本上,并且将其组句方式记下来。

在读过大量不同的英文文章以后,练习写一些描写自己的句子。

一开始,先写二、三个简单描述自己的句子。

这些句子的结构不必很复杂,只要用您习惯的结构就可以。

再来,列出您的专长才能、兴趣,还有您喜欢的电影。

简单写几个段落来描述一些对您有影响的人、事、物。

在整个写作练习过程中,请专注在「什么人、什么事、什么东西」上,而不要太过注意细节。

做这个练习的目的是让您以自己为主题,先熟悉写一些简单的英文句子,然后再慢慢进步到能用这些句子组成完整的段落。

几个月后,您可以累积很多描述自己的单字与句子了。

万事起头难,但慢慢的,您就会发现自己进步很多。

而所收集这些关于自己的英文信息,在正式写申论题的时候,就可以派上用场了。

请记住评审委员要求您这些申论题的用意。

他们想藉由这些申论题来认识您本人。

当然,他们绝对有能力检阅您的考试成绩和解读里头的数字。

但是他们更希望能从申论题中了解您是什么样的人。

所以藉由这些写作前的练习,您会逐渐熟悉要如何以英文来描述自己。

2. 选定主题每篇送到评审委员的申论题都必须要有一个主题。

有些学校会要求学生针对特定的问题作答;但有的学校可以让您任选主题。

不管怎样,申论题的第一段必须要能清楚点出您的主题,而且整篇文章都必须根据这个主题发挥。

申请美国研究生留学Essay准备详细介绍

申请美国研究生留学Essay准备详细介绍

申请美国研究生留学Essay准备详细介绍美国是当前留学申请的大热门国家,留学准备文书也是很重要的,对于想要申请到美国读研的学生来说,申请美国研究生留学Essay要怎么准备呢?就让小编来为大家详细介绍下!1.Essay 应该是通俗易懂的经常会看到一些 Essays 读起来很晦涩,懂行的人看起来都很吃力,不懂行的人更是一头雾水。

其实,在写Essay 的时候,内容本身的高深没有错,可是文字的高深就不对了,你要尽可能让你的Essay 读起来通俗易懂,因为你并不确定是谁在阅读你的 Essay ,这些人到底有多懂你的行业。

因此在完成一篇Essay 初稿后,找你的外行朋友看下她是不是明白你在讲什么,确定这篇 Essay 通俗易懂后,再去润色修改。

2.Essay 中一定不要简单的叙述事件本身,一定要注意升华文章高度同学们在抓耳挠腮想尽各种办法纠结并ouble check 你的Essay 中语法是不是有问题,个别单词是不是用的到位的时候,不妨多思考内容的深度和广度吧。

因为学校花费在每篇Essay 上的时间不会很长,他们没有时间去核实你的语法是不是有一个小错误,你的这个用词是不是够地道,他们想看到的是你做了哪些事情,通过这些事情你的思想到达了什么样的高度。

因此,通过看这件事你是否清楚的表达出来了,他们完全可以看出来你的表达能力和逻辑思维能力如何。

切记,一个头脑清楚的行动者一定不要丢了西瓜,捡芝麻。

3. 避免记叙怎么样自我判断一个文章是真正的好文章?建议同学们在写完后,把文章中所有的形容词和修饰语去掉,单纯的看文章的内容,如果这个时候,你仍然觉得这篇Essay 完美的阐述了你做的事以及你的想法,那这就是很不错的 Essay 。

另外,想要提醒的一点是:慎用形容词!因为,所有的形容词都很模糊。

比如说,She is very intelligent ,倒不如She complete the task in one thir the time it took people with twice her experience 来的痛快。

大学申请essay范文

大学申请essay范文

大学申请essay范文美国大学申请essay开头怎么写如果你想书写一篇引人入胜的ESSAY的话,你就要掌握以下几种技巧。

诚实作为中国人,不得不承认,我们都希望把自己表现得好一些,所以会尽量在申请材料上,夸张自己的优点,而忽略自己的缺点。

实际上,这种心态任何人都有,包括美国人。

但是,在此奉劝申请美国高校的同学们一句,千万不要哗众取宠,这是一种冒险的行为。

如果一旦你那些不实际的经历或者是虚假的经历被审阅者发现的话,那么你可能会被永久打入黑名单。

事实是,你经历过的,你感受过的,就算是再小的一件事情,可是你却有你自己的真实感受在里面,这就会引起人的共鸣。

还有,就算你只是在班级里当了一个小组长,可是你却在这个职位上做得兢兢业业,并获得了大家一致的认可和赞同。

退一万步说,就算你当的小组长没有做好,可是你却从中得到了经验,你却从中得到了收获和感受,那么就把这种在失败中获得的感受真实地表达出来,让那些审阅者了解到,你其实是一个有思想有头脑的人。

要明白,任何一个人都会有缺点,我们不可能十全十美,我们也不可能每个方面都是拔尖的,所以,请放心,审阅者最想看到的,其实是最真实的你。

简捷好吧,我们会觉得,天呢,我要在一篇ESSAY里把我所有的优点都要表达出来,我要向审阅者展示一个完美的我,展示一个全面的我,所以我要有大量的材料,大量的文字去描述。

好,不过值得提醒的是,请把这些东西都统统放在你的准备材料之前吧,千万不要出现在你的ESSAY里。

准备的时候,你可以大量准备材料,然后从中选择一个最最有意义,而能引起区鸣的事件来写。

要知道,提交ESSAY的学生并不是只有你一个人,而审阅的老师不能一一逐字逐句地往下念。

所以,在规定的最少字数以上,保持700字是最好的。

这样,也不会给审阅者带来阅读上的压力,也会让你的文章变得简捷而方便阅读。

注意,准确地表达你自己,要运用最精确的字眼。

尤其是事件带来的感受部分或者是领悟部分,一定要写得能深入人心。

准备去美国留学,向学校申请写信的英语作文

准备去美国留学,向学校申请写信的英语作文

准备去美国留学,向学校申请写信的英语作文全文共10篇示例,供读者参考篇1Dear Principal,Hi, I hope you're doing well! My name is Timmy and I'm in Grade 6. I am writing this letter because I want to go study in the United States. I have always been interested in learning about different cultures and I think studying abroad will be a great experience for me.I have been studying English for a few years now and I feel confident in my language skills. I want to improve my English even more by immersing myself in an English-speaking environment. I also want to learn about the American education system and make new friends from different countries.I have good grades and I am a responsible student. I promise to follow the rules and regulations of your school and work hard to excel in my studies. I believe that studying in the United States will help me become a better student and person.I hope you will consider my application and give me a chance to study at your school. I am excited about the opportunity to learn in a new environment and I promise to make the most of it.Thank you for your time and consideration.Sincerely,Timmy篇2Dear School,Hi there! My name is Jason and I am a student from China. I am writing this letter to apply for studying in the United States at your school. I am super excited about the opportunity to learn and grow in a new environment!I have always been interested in experiencing different cultures and meeting new friends from all over the world. I believe that studying abroad will help me to broaden my horizons and become more independent. I am also looking forward to improving my English skills and exploring new academic opportunities.I have been preparing for this exciting journey for a long time. I have been studying English diligently and getting good grades in school. I have also been involved in extracurricular activities such as sports and music to develop my talents and skills.I promise to be a good student and a responsible member of your school community. I will respect the rules and regulations, participate in school events, and contribute positively to the school environment.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and starting this amazing adventure together. Thank you for considering my application.Best regards,Jason篇3Dear School,Hi! My name is Amy and I am a student from China. I am so excited because I am writing to apply to study in your school in America. I have heard so many great things about your school and I really want to be a part of it.I love learning new things and meeting new friends. I think studying in America will give me a chance to experience a different culture and improve my English. I am good at math and science, and I like to read books and play sports. I think your school will be a great place for me to learn and grow.My parents are very supportive of me going to study in America. They believe it will be a good opportunity for me to learn independence and responsibility. They have also helped me prepare for this big adventure by teaching me how to take care of myself and manage my time well.I promise to work hard and be a good student if I am accepted to your school. I will follow the rules and respect my teachers and classmates. I hope you will consider my application and give me a chance to study in America.Thank you for reading my letter. I can't wait to hear from you!Sincerely,Amy篇4Dear School,Hi! My name is Lily and I am in grade 5. I am super excited because I am going to study in America! I want to learn more about the culture and meet new friends. I want to improve my English and learn new things.I have been studying English for a few years now and I think I am ready to study in an English-speaking country. My parents are very supportive and they think it will be a great experience for me.I am a hardworking student and I always try my best in school. I love to read books, especially English books. I also like to play sports and I am a member of the school basketball team.I hope to study at your school and experience a new way of learning. I promise to be a good student and follow all the rules. I also promise to make new friends and learn as much as I can.Thank you for considering my application. I can't wait to start my new adventure in America!Sincerely,Lily篇5Hiya!My name is Amy and I'm in grade 6. I'm super excited because I'm planning to go study in the United States! I've heard that American schools are really cool and I can't wait to experience it myself!I'm writing this letter to apply to your school. I've heard great things about your school and I think it would be the perfect place for me to learn and grow. I'm a hard worker and I always try my best in everything I do. I love reading and writing, and I'm also really good at math.I know that studying in a different country might be a bit scary at first, but I'm not worried at all. I'm really good at making friends and I'm sure I'll fit right in at your school. I'm also excited to learn about American culture and make new memories.I promise to work really hard and make the most of this opportunity. I can't wait to explore all the new things your school has to offer. Thank you for considering my application.Looking forward to hearing from you soon!Best wishes,Amy篇6Dear school,Hi there! My name is Lily and I am super excited to write to you about my plans to study in the United States. I have always dreamed of attending school in America and I really hope I can come to your school!I have been learning English for many years now and I think studying in America will help me improve even more. I love reading books and watching American movies, so I already know a lot about your country. I can't wait to experience the culture, meet new friends, and learn all about your school.I promise to work hard and do my best in all of my classes. I am a good student and I always try my hardest. I will also be very respectful to all of my teachers and classmates. I hope to make lots of new friends and have a great time while I am studying in America.I also want to thank you for considering my application. I know there are a lot of students who want to come to your school, so I feel very lucky to have this opportunity. I promise that if you accept me, I will be a great student and I will make you proud.Thank you so much for reading my letter. I can't wait to hear back from you!Sincerely,Lily篇7Dear School,Hey there! My name is Lily and I am in grade 5. I am writing to tell you that I am super excited because I am planning to go to the United States to study. I have always dreamed of studying in America and now my dream is coming true!I have been preparing for this for a long time. I have been studying English really hard and I even joined an English club at school to practice speaking English with my friends. I know that studying in America will be a big challenge for me, but I am ready to work hard and learn new things.I want to learn about American culture and make new friends from all over the world. I also want to improve my English and become fluent in it. I think studying in America will help me become a better student and a better person.I promise to follow all the rules and study hard at your school. I know that coming to a new country can be scary, but I am really excited to start this new adventure. Thank you for considering my application.I can't wait to meet you all!Love,Lily篇8Hi there,My name is Amy and I am in grade 6. I am writing to tell you that I am really excited to apply to study in the United States. I have always dreamed of living and studying in America, and I believe this opportunity will help me grow and learn in so many ways.I am a hardworking student and always strive to do my best in school. I love to learn new things and I am always eager to explore different cultures and ways of life. I believe studying in America will not only help me improve my English, but also broaden my horizons and give me a chance to meet new friends from around the world.I promise to be a good student and represent my school and country well. I am willing to work hard and follow all the rules and regulations of the school. I am also excited to take part in extracurricular activities and make the most of my time in the United States.Thank you for considering my application. I am really looking forward to this amazing opportunity and I hope to hear back from you soon.Sincerely,Amy篇9Dear School,Hi, my name is Lily and I am really excited to write to you about my dream of studying in the United States. I want to tell you why I would be a great student at your school.First of all, I love learning new things and I am always eager to try new challenges. I think studying in the U.S. will be a great opportunity for me to learn about different cultures and meet new friends. I also believe that studying in an English-speaking country will help me improve my language skills.Secondly, I am a hardworking and responsible student. I always do my homework on time and work hard to get good grades. I believe that with the right support and guidance, I can achieve my goals and succeed in my studies.Lastly, I am a kind and friendly person who gets along well with others. I think that having good relationships with my teachers and classmates is important for my learning experience.I hope you will consider my application to study at your school. I am looking forward to the opportunity to learn and grow in a new environment.Thank you for reading my letter.Sincerely,Lily.篇10Dear School,Hi! My name is Jenny and I am really excited about applying to study at your school in America! I am writing this letter to tell you a little bit about myself and why I want to come and study with you.I am a fifth grader in China and I love learning new things. I have always dreamed of studying in America because I want to improve my English and experience a different culture. I have heard so many great things about your school and I know that I will learn a lot from the teachers and make new friends with students from all around the world.I am a good student and I work hard in all my subjects, especially English and Math. I also enjoy playing sports and I am looking forward to joining your school's soccer team. My parents are very supportive of my decision to study abroad and they will help me with my studies and make sure I have everything I need to succeed.I hope you will consider my application and give me the opportunity to study at your school. I promise to work hard, be a good student, and represent your school with pride.Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I cannot wait to hear back from you!Sincerely,Jenny。

美国大学文书题目整理及写作指导申请季巨献Word版

美国大学文书题目整理及写作指导申请季巨献Word版

Why Essay在大学申请文书中一个常见的supplement就是所谓的why essay,大致上问学生“你为什么想来我们这所学校?”“我们这里哪里吸引你?”等等。

在这种问题面前就很容易区分学生是否真的对这所学校有passion 或fit。

要回答好这类问题申请者必须表现出对学校的了解,学校文化/氛围的认可,和对自己未来展望的认知。

你要让学校觉得,冥冥之中居然遇到了你,真是缘分呐 !第一步:了解学校通过各种渠道去了解这个学校的特色,找出这个学校吸引你目光的地方,不论大小。

1) 大学官网2) US News3) Princeton review4) 校友5) 学校的巡展活动6) Collegeconfidential第二步: 了解自己一般情况下当申请者写到whyessay 的时候应该已经到了申请中期,也就是说已经通过头脑风暴或自我反思已经在一定程度上了解了自己。

如果没有的话,花几分钟时间过一下自己的过往活动,起码得知自己性格和学术上的长处和短处在哪里。

第三步: 将学校吸引眼球的点缩减成特质并联系自己当申请者挖掘出那么一,两个吸引点后,要学会透过表面看事情本质。

因为学校的特色和申请者不可能有直接关系,但是这个特色代表的意义可能和申请者自己的追求不谋而合,就会形成一个fit。

e.g.威斯康辛麦迪逊分校(University of Wisconsin–Madison)的工程学院标出他们已经连续6年每年都出产超过100个专利。

申请者当然不能说这100个专利和自己有什么关系,大部分的申请者不可能有自己的专利,而且就算有也和威斯康辛的100个专利无关。

但是透过威斯康辛骄傲地标出自己100个专利出产可以总结出什么这个学校特别专注实验和实践。

相信那实验和实践这两个特色是很容易和学生自己产生共鸣的吧。

同时,当申请者已经把本质挖掘到这个地步,一般情况下写出来的答案也不会特别空泛。

所以,在很久前就知道自己的兴趣所在,有目的地开展课外活动,写Essay的时候就倍感轻松呢 !第四步;融合和证明证明不能只靠说的。

美国留学生essay写作指南

美国留学生essay写作指南

美国留学生essay写作指南导读:本文美国留学生essay写作指南,仅供参考,如果能帮助到您,欢迎点评和分享。

书写美国留学essay有哪些步骤,怎样书写更出彩呢?想必这些是同学们很想知道的事,今天带来了美国留学生essay写作指南。

01资料查询在你拿到一个论题时,首先要查询相关资料,图书馆、相关论文、再不济偷点懒google下,或者知乎上溜溜,也能让你的观点不那么肤浅和二。

02参考和借鉴当你查询了很多资料以后(这个真心是前提,说到这儿主页菌真的是狠狠的咽下去了很多吐槽,问任何问题至少先搜下啊,费不了多少电!!),你已经有良好的知识储备,接着就开始分析你阅读过的Essay。

分析别人Essay里的论点、论据、论证,并写下来,找出其中缺乏逻辑和很有逻辑的地方。

一定要学会写Essay前,先要分析别人的Essay。

03思考思考还是思考!!你的Essay要具备独特的见解,那么首先就是你写东西起来不能太惨,文笔不好可以理解,至少你要语句通顺。

搞清楚状况的比较好的办法,就是先给自己提几十个问题,然后一一解答。

把这些问题与答案都记录下来,这是我觉得加深思考的办法,我觉得这就是自己和自己头脑风暴!!!你们也试试。

你要一直思考,直到你知道要写什么。

04论点=核心选一个最佳的观点,这样全文都可以围绕这个点来写。

论点是你的主要观点,用一句话描述出来,这样读你Essay的人就知道你在写什么、为什么要这样写。

这个论点也可以理解为自己的优点闪光点,就是自己比较独特的东西,安身立命的根本,只能这样拼了。

你要搞清楚状况,看你essay的人估计不会给你多长时间,你要让他有印象,就要与众不同,泡面哥能拿罗村offer这里面虽然有调侃意味,但也是那老师记住他了。

没有论点,你就很有可能写成流水账,文章拖沓,哪能写出好东西。

05动手前的大纲!大!!纲!!!无论做任何事情,都要知道你是要干嘛,你想表达什么,你的目的是什么!!!在写之前,用思维导图什么的画个框架(这个纯属装哔用,就是为了显得专业),脑中要清晰勾勒出文章的框架。

美国留学申请个人陈述英文写作范文

美国留学申请个人陈述英文写作范文

美国留学申请个人陈述英文写作范文无论是身处学校还是步入社会,大家都写过作文吧,作文根据写作时限的不同可以分为限时作文和非限时作文。

一篇什么样的作文才能称之为优秀作文呢?以下是整理的美国留学申请个人陈述英文写作,希望对大家有所帮助。

Currently,a student of chemistry at the Beijing Normal University, I am scheduled to graduate in June 1998 with a B. S. degree. The university has offered, on the basis of my outstanding academic record, to exempt me from the usually mandatory examinations for graduate studies, should I decide to join its M. S. program. After weighing all the pros and cons, I now prefer to pursue my graduate studies with your university, as I think it will put me on better footing for my career.Education at the Beijing Normal University emphasizes the importance of hands-on experience. In the summer of 1995, I joined Professor Tian's team to work o the synthesis of inorganic materials. In 1996, professor Guo made me a member of his research team, which gave me good exposure to unsymmetrical synthesis. I am now carrying out (sophisticated) experiment under the direction of Dr. Wang. Through these arrangements, I have gained good experiences in laboratory research and greatly improved my skills for scientific experimentation. Starting from the beginning of next semester, I will be writing my graduationpaper under the seasoned guidance of professor (zhong kexue), a research fellow from the Chinese Academy of Sciences.As the Beijing Normal University specializes in training teachers, I have also taken quite a number of general education courses, such as phycology, pedagogy and teaching methods. And earlier this year, I was awarded the Excellent Teaching Assistantship for my outstanding performance during theinternship at a high school.I would greatly appreciate it if you could give favorable consideration to my application for acceptance and financial aid.Upon graduation in 1990,I first took up the job of an assistant engineer in a biochemistry pharmaceutical manufacturer, where I was in charge of the development and analysis of several lines of products. I was given the responsibility for VD Calcium Tablet in the first two weeks, as I demonstrated that I was able to do independent research, particularly in terms ofquantitative analysis and microbiology inspection, from five raw materials to semi-made and finished products. As my talents showed up, I took charge of the production and inspection ofmore and more products. Towards the end of 1991, I was awardedthe honor of Excellent Employee in the factory of almost two thousand people in recognition of my contribution to its business.In these six years of working experience, I greatly improved myself in terms of technological expertise. I made chemical and microbiological examinations of different drugs skillfully and independently, successfully developed several new types of cosmetics, some of which merited the designation of Provincial Scientific Achievements. But more importantly, I learned to ask more sophisticated questions and then answer them.The years of being an engineer has taught me how to be a person. I learned to be both a team leader and a team player. Working in conjunction with others, I have always held onto the principle of being honest, modest and helpful to others, whether I was just a technician, an engineer or even the assistant tothe general manager. I enjoy working with other people. I have been well liked by my colleagues. At the farewell parties for me, some of my friends were so reluctant to say goodbye to me that they would burst into tears.While working for the Chinese factory, I was once "borrowed" by a college to teach there as an adjunct instructor for half a year. During those months, I often worked late to checkstudents' work and prepare for the next day's classes. I believe that this teaching experience will serve me well should you be able to offer me the position of a teaching assistant.Nevertheless, I am acutely aware that, in the researchfields I am interested in, there are still so many difficultsubjects and challenges awaiting for solution. In physical chemistry, China is relatively backward in the fields ofcatalyst development, catalyst inactivation, reaction dynamics, reaction mechanism, geochemical reaction mechanism,environmental-chemical reaction mechanism. In analytical chemistry, China lags relatively behind its Western counterparts in areas such as instrumental analysis and theoreticalanalytical chemistry. Basically, China relies on import forlarge-scale analytical instruments. By contrast, the United States has many world-leading academic specialists and encourages interdisciplinary programs. It will accord me a stimulating and liberal academic environment, apart from the sophisticated research facilities. Rice University is my top priority in applying for a Ph.D. program and I choose to specialize in physical chemistry or in analytical chemistry.At Rice University, I plan to learn broader-basedfoundational theories in my chosen fields. With my solid interdisciplinary knowledge and my ability for the quick assimilation of new knowledge, I intend to secure for myself aRA status to directly start my laboratory research under the guidance of my future advisor. I can also work as TA so that I can study while teaching and conducting my internship. I can apply, test and consolidate the theoretical knowledge that I acquire in the process of internship and degree program. Finally, through theoretical study and scientific research, I wouldendeavor to produce a well-written dissertation in which I hope to achieve some breakthroughs on both the theoretical and the research level.。

美国博士留学文书写作须知

美国博士留学文书写作须知

美国博士留学文书写作须知
很多学生会选择去美国读博,那美国博士留学文书该怎么写呢?下面和一起来看看吧!欢迎阅读。

美国博士留学文书
一、美国博士留学申请文书-个人陈述(Personal Statement)
个人陈述是影响录取的重要文件,对是否获得奖学金尤其重要。

你可以通过文字向你申请的学校全面反映你的能力。

内容为你为何选择这个专业,你过去在这方面有什么成就,现在有什么想法,如果你得到了申请的这个学位后有什么未来的打算等等。

最重要的是将自己描述成最合适的学生,而不是一味将自己夸成各方面都优秀的人才。

美国大学更关心的是你能给这所学校的这个专业带来什么,所以,在申请的时候多强调自己对这个专业的兴趣、已经取得的专业成就和心得体会会比较能打动美国教授,在GPA中突出自己的专业课成绩等。

二、美国博士留学申请文书-推荐信
推荐信要说明被推荐人的基本情况介绍推荐人的成绩,包括学术论文、科研成果、获得奖励、所具备的能力等。

最好有系主任、专业导师写的推荐信。

推荐人最好要具备高级学术职称。

一般三封,一封综合表现,两封专业水平。

三、美国博士留学申请文书-简历
无论学校是否要求,都最好有一个resume,其长度最好在1-2页内。

能够体现申请人的研究能力,对获取奖学金有利。

美国杜克大学留学Essay范文.doc

美国杜克大学留学Essay范文.doc

美国杜克大学留学Essay范文【学校名称:美国杜克大学(德汉姆)DukeUniversity(Durham)所在位置:美国,2138CampusDriveDurham,NC27708(919)684-8111创建时间:1838年QS排名:21USNEWS排名:9学费:41958录取率:0.134学校中文网址:https://meiguo./school/3255/想要到美国名校去留学,能力和成绩一样的重要,那么大家知道美国留学的文书应该怎么写吗,下面和小编一起来看看美国杜克大学留学Essay范文。

College:DukeUniversityQuestion:WhydoyouconsiderDukeagoodforyou?“Tenting with Internet Access.”This concept epitomizes the balance between academics,athletics and enthusiasmIhave been seekinginmy college experience and which has worked wellforme duringschool.WhiletheDukestudentbodyisspiritedenoughtoparticipatein Krzyzewskiville,theyarealsototheir academics. Itisnotsinksand showers they need,but outdoor internet hookups totomeettheiracademic challenges.Duke’sstudent population—intellectual,involved,andethnicallydiverse—isoneofthemajorwhythe universityisagoodmatchforme.My consideration for choosing Duke includesnotonlythequalityofmyfour undergraduate yearsand classmates,butalsomy postgraduate goals.Dukewillequipmeto become aleaderinmyfieldby expanding mysetofskills and enablingtobecome involvedin pharmaceutical research.With Research TriangleParkcloseby,Iwill definitely pursueinternship orajobatwhat Fortune Magazine described as“thetop placeintheU.S.do business.”Duke offersalarge number of exciting classes inthefieldof biology. Imost intrigued bythe classesin genetics and cellular biology.With allthat Duke offersitsstudents,Iwouldbevery committed togiving backtothe community. Having hadsuch learning andservice opportunities astheHughO’Brian Youth Leadership Program andthe Economic Leadership Summer Programat NorthwesternUniversity,IfeelthatIcanmakeapositive impact withintheDuke community. Iwould hopeto continuemy commitment to disabled children through Pegasusorasimilar organization.。

美国留学申请esaay写作技巧

美国留学申请esaay写作技巧

美国留学申请esaay写作技巧留学essay的写作在美国大学申请文书中占有重要的地位。

如果你在写作过程中感到困扰,那希望美国大学申请文书esaay写作技巧能够让你写出一份满意稍的essay文书,和小编一起来看看美国留学申请esaay写作技巧。

一、仔细审题在开始留学essay的写作之前,仔细看看和想想留学essay的话题,为什么这么问,学校的用意是什么?想了解我的那一个方面?经历?目标?还是一些性格方面的特点?essay表面上空泛的题目其实还是要了解你的三个方面:你为什么选择这个学校;你觉得你为什么适合这个学校,具体在人生和经历上的那个方面;你觉得在这里求学能对你有什么好处,促进以及对学校这个大家庭的贡献。

简而言之留学essay就是要你从阐述:为什么要申请,为什么能申请,申请中了又能做什么。

二、挖掘留学essay的题材在开始构思留学essay时一定要了解自己想要写什么,写成什么样子,所以不妨根据自己对话题的分析结果,选好素材。

同时要注意选取的材料或经历要有相关性,要结合学校的特点和要求来写。

所提到过往经历等材料,一定要和主题相关而且有新意。

例如有的学生在留学essay中提到自己很喜欢拆解拼装家里的各种东西,这就比较老套了。

换一下思路,如果写中学一次让他印象深刻的工程活动,比如目睹了大桥的合拢或机械的轰鸣,也许更好一些。

说实话,有时候直白简洁的开头,喜欢什么就说什么,毫不做作反倒能取得不错的效果。

同时素材中最好把你选校甚至选专业的理由夹杂在里面来写。

竟为什么想到康奈尔,为什么是卡耐基梅隆?为什么不是里海大学和莱斯大学?总而言之你的留学essay要表达一个意思:你们坚持的理念我认同,你们做的事情我做过或想做,我做过事情的你们也很感兴趣,我想学的你们也能提供课程舞台,我就是你们学校要找的人。

三、整理好提纲在动笔写留学essay之前,先列个大纲组织好自己的材料,随时把闪光点记录下来,之后整理一个思路,结合自己的思考把留学essay 的写作提纲弄出来。

美国本科留学申请文书范文

美国本科留学申请文书范文

美国本科留学申请文书范文2017美国本科留学申请文书怎么写?美国本科留学申请文书范文。

留学文书主要以个人陈述、推荐信、个人简历及Essay短文材料构成。

留学文书书写的好坏对学生是否被录取有很大的影响,下面来为大家展示一篇美国本科留学申请文书范文示例,一起来看看吧。

I still remember when the monitor first lit up and the grey box roared to my life. She had me at hello, or in this case, with the first welcome screen, circa 1999. Initially no one knew how to operate her. Out of curiosity, I worked days in front of her foreign face, eventually coming closer to her intricate soul. Trying out new DOS commands and seeing results became my greatest happiness. The complex visual calculations and efficiency on the computer brought me immediate satisfaction. While some kids defined the high points of their adolescent lives as learning to ride a bike or hitting a home run, my moment of change was switching from Windows 98 to XP. It was during this childhood that I established a passion for Computer Science.Unfortunately, at the age of 13, I indulged in the online game, the Mysterious Land. The game played perfectly into my teenage whims: when I sought a sense of accomplishment, it rewarded me. Where I sought friends, it gave me an entire network of people relying on me. With just a little bit of focus, I reached the highest level, the peak of gaming perfection! In the first two years of middle school, I burnt the midnight oil and slept less than three hours in the weekend for the first time; with great guilt, I played truant for the first time; I even starved in order to use my lunch money to buy rechargeable cards. It sounds crazy now, but that addiction scratched my soul and demanded more. Undoubtedly, my grades fell so much that I went from the top tobottom.After my astonishment when I first met with the crazily low scores, I be came apathetic. After a ‘lovely’ summer vacation fulfilled with dazzling equipments and illusory friendships in Mysterious Land, I got in Grade Eight. I still played the whole night, sleeping in one class after another. Deeply addicted, I sometimes couldn’t find the differences between the real and the virtual world. So many times I acted like a bossy team leader while doing sports at school, thus many people had an unfavorable impression of me. However, the obstacles I met in real life only furthered my addiction: the less love and friends I got, the more I became convinced that I should devote myself to the game.Nevertheless, the nightmares all came to an end when my class adviser looked deeply in my eye on getting my final results in the 8th grade. When I got home, I yelled out in the game but people deemed me insane instead of consoling me. A somber sadness embraced me, restricting my breath. I was caught and could not escape. That reality brought me back to life. Feeling fresh air around me instead of the vacuum of virtual happiness, I was freed.Since then I began my struggle to abstain from Mysterious Land. I limited my game time from six hours to one hour step by step; I regulated my schedule and slept from 10p.m to 6a.m every day; I asked my parents to keep my pocket money, and I cleared all my debts in the game. When I finally felt myself far enough away from Mysterious Land, I believed everything was set. I opened the Program Files, clicked on the familiar folder, and pressed the delete button. At last, I clicked on YES with my shaking hand. “Goodbye.” I said in my heart, deeply lost inmind. On finishing this, I sat on my bed and watched screen-saver changing irregularly all night long. As soon as the sun rose at 5:50a.m and shone me with its first beam, I saw a new world opening its door to me.Soon I rediscovered another aspect of my computer –programming. As I rode the tides of addiction, I also gained knowledge from the swelling sea of the internet, through which I met new programmer friends, exchanged ideas or even worked together for the common goal of understanding the cultural impact of technology. Devoting most my spare time to this aspect set off my passion, which burnt more fiercely than that of the game! Sharing my simple-functioned programs with friends, satisfaction enveloped me tighter than the Mysterious Land ever did. I kept learning the BASIC and other programming languages improving my logical thought process for academics and acting as a catalyst for the study of Mathematics and Science. With a new sense of determination, I managed to rediscover my past hobbies in engineering and rekindle my passion for art. With this acceleration, I returned to be one of the top students in my class.I shall never forget the power I got when I pressed the YES button on the uninstall menu. The strength I got that time, I believe, has never gone away.。

美国大学申请指南 申请文书写作全攻略

美国大学申请指南 申请文书写作全攻略

美国大学申请指南申请文书写作全攻略美国留学申请文书一直都是留美学生比较关注的话题,关于文书的书写和注意事项也有各种各样不同的指导,今天小编就跟大家说一说有关于美国大学申请的文书问题,一起去看看吧。

文书并不是指单独的一篇文章,而是在申请过程中所有文字性资料的统称。

在介绍文书之前,我们首先需要了解一下美国大学的申请系统。

美国的大学基本上都是采用网上申请的形式,申请系统包括common系统,UC(加州)系统和独立网申系统。

各系统文书有些差异,概括来讲,可以分为活动及奖项列表、推荐信和申请Essays三个部分。

就申请时间而言,分为早期申请、常规申请和滚动申请。

加州系统的申请则比较特殊,集中在11月份。

早期申请:EA or ED (10.15; 11.1; 11.15)常规申请:RD (1.1)滚动申请:Rolling ( 越早申请越好)UC 申请:Independent (11.1‐11.30)活动&奖项列表对美国大学申请系统有所了解的同学们应该不难发现,网申系统中有专门的activity 一栏,要求申请人提供9‐12年级的课外活动课外活动和奖项(其中common系统不超过10个,加州系统往年可以最多提供25个,独立网申系统则根据学校而定),并且每项活动用固定的characters(注意不是words)进行描述。

一般而言这些活动需具有持续性、层次性、相关性和多样性,以体现申请人的综合能力、个性特点和兴趣爱好。

同时,提供学术类奖项,如数学竞赛、知识创新大赛等。

奖项的级别越高越好。

课外活动的准备是一个长期的过程,一般有申请意向的同学在进入高中后,甚至在初三阶段就要有意识的从事几项感兴趣的课外活动,并且一直坚持下去。

课外活动的类型则包括学术类(兴趣小组、科研小组等)、领导力类(学生会等)、志愿服务类、艺术体育社团类、跨文化交流类、实习或工作类、校刊等期刊杂志类等等。

现在时间已经进入到了5月份,所以建议打算申请的同学们可以着手整理自己的活动列表了。

美国研究生申请Essay五大常见题目.doc

美国研究生申请Essay五大常见题目.doc

美国研究生申请Essay五大常见题目现在正是留学申请的关键时期,也是需要准备好申请文书,那Essay 该如何书写?我也为各位整理了美国研究生申请Essay五大常见题目,一起来看看吧!好的短文首先要求结构严谨,逻辑清晰,其次,语言地道流畅,过渡自然也是必不可少的。

申请Essay的内容逻辑结构要严谨,每一个论点都要有来自作者个人学习生活或工作中的实例支持,同时也要展示自己的独特之处,这也是学校判断申请者是否能给其带来有价值的贡献的重要标准。

美国研究生申请Essay在留学所有文书中可以说是最重要的,是招生委员会最看重的材料,能直接反应出申请者对职业发展的规划,也能看出申请者的性格、潜力和资质是否与该选校的文化氛围契合。

某种程度上讲,短文(Essay)比起其他文书更能起到决定性的作用。

第一类是有关优缺点和成败类。

这类问题要求申请者论述自己过去的成就和失败事例,分析自己的优缺点。

You have been selected as a member of the Admission of Committee, pleaseprovide a brief evaluation assessment of yourfile.(你被选为招生委员会的成员,请你自己扼要地评价一下自己的申请材料)这个题目看起来有点不知从何下手,怎样评价自己才算合适呢?其实很简单,这是在问你自己有哪些优势,是如何体现在申请材料中的,又有哪些短处。

第二类是学习动机和目标。

这类题目是学校最常问的问题,也是最重要的问题。

目的是为了了解申请者为什么选择这个学校,这个决定和自己过去的学习、工作经历以及自己将来的职业目标有什么联系;申请者的长期和短期目标分别是什么;对自己过去的背景、目前的情况以及和自己目标之间的差距分析。

Briefly assess your career progress to date. Elaborate on your futurecareer plans and your motivation for pursuing a graduate degree at the Kelloggschool. (简单地评价你迄今为止的职业进展。

美国留学文书(15篇)

美国留学文书(15篇)

美国留学文书(15篇)美国留学文书1在本科新生高端申请中,很多申请者会选择Common Application中Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence 这个Essay 来回答。

而最常见的对自己影响深刻的人就是父母。

比如写父母是如何的伟大,白手起家才挣得今天的家业,或者父母曾经带自己去哪些国家旅行,或者父母为了培养自己的某项特长做了很大牺牲等等。

不得不承认,在培养孩子方面,几乎每对父母都是花了很多的心思。

他们在介绍自己孩子成长往事时自豪的神情,曾经无数次打动过我。

而孩子们的回答也多次加强了我对父母无私辛苦付出的敬佩。

但是从留学专家的角度来看,这样的故事几乎会出现在每一个申请者的回答中,让人不免觉得乏味和雷同。

想来美国名校的AO们也一定会有同感吧?而且更不理想的是,这样的选材其实没有正确的回答问题,更没有给AO们想要了解的信息。

所以,在动笔之前,请再仔细看一下这个题目:Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence不难看出,题目其实是分两部分的,一是讲一下谁是对你影响最大的人,二是讲讲有什么影响。

如果你只是一直写这个对你影响的人都做了什么,那末这个回答是不完整的而且也不符合AO们想了解的内容。

因为申请美国学校的人是你,希望被录取的人是你,AO们想要了解的也是你。

所以任何关于这个题目的回答都应当突出这个人改变了你什么,之后你又做了什么。

W同学的素材相对新颖一些:讲的是长笛老师如何鼓励他克服重重困难坚持练好长笛,最终他成为了乐队首席长笛并获得了很多奖项的故事。

不难看出,W给自己设计的形象是传统的战胜自我,超越自我的路线。

这个故事貌似是很符合题目的要求,有写到影响我的人--老师,也有写到我后来的表现与成绩。

美国宾夕法尼亚大学申请文书Essay

美国宾夕法尼亚大学申请文书Essay

美国宾夕法尼亚大学申请文书Essay美国宾夕法尼亚大学本科Essay范文及解析,宾夕法尼亚大学(University of Pennsylvania),位于宾夕法尼亚州的费城,是美国一所著名的私立研究型大学,八所常春藤盟校之一。

如果对海外留学有疑问,可以在线咨询小马过河留学专家,也可拨打全国免费咨询电话:4008-123-267!宾夕法尼亚大学创建于1740年,是美国第四古老的高等教育机构,以及美国第一所现代意义上的大学。

University of Pennsylvania宾夕法尼亚大学If an undergraduate's time is spent eating, working, socializing, and sleeping, I expect that I'll spend large chunks of my time in the cafeteria, the libraries, and the dorms. My days will most definitely be hectic. As I run across the quad to my history class, I'll already be thinking of where I'll be heading after that.Sometimes I'll be running to a big round table in the Food Court. This table seems to be a magnet for my eclectic friends. One of the guys, a saxophonist with whom I play the oboe in an ensemble, is trying to get his own avant-garde band some places to play. Another student writes an editorial column for the Daily Pennsylvanian; he always seems to be searching for a hot topic with which he can stir up a ruckus. A French major who sits next to me in French class uses French verbs in conversation, causing some confusion for the rest of us. We tend to talk about everything from the Beastie Boys to the controversy over political correctness. We sit for hours sharing our mashed potatoes and discussing activities to collectively embark on for the weekend.I suggest some rock climbing in the Shawangunks of New York State or an art show in Philadelphia.After my extended repast, I'll be heading for a good place to study. When I have detailed notes to take on the reading for my Social History of China course, I know that the Quad will be way too busy and social for me to get any sizable amounts of work done. I'll have to slip away to the Furness Library. It is so quiet in there that you can hear the students breathing. In the other libraries there is too much commotion caused by people hustling around as they search for references. If I worked in the Van Pelt Library, I know I would speak to everyone who passed by my carrel. Given my extroverted nature, I am safer in a library like Furness.At the end of my day, I'll be heading for my dorm, where the door to my room is hardly ever closed. The people who live in my dorm are definitely an energetic group. Just like molecules being heated in a beaker, they can't sit still. They bounce all over the dorm's halls, in and out of my room, telling me random ridiculous things as they procrastinate about their work. My roommate and I seem to be from different planets. She grew up in Poland, Maine, the small town where my camp was, and I grew up in the big city of Manhattan. At first I'll think that all we have in common is our passion for chocolate. But after living with her for a few weeks, I'll know that we were destined to be together. She'll know when she comes back from a day that just didn't go right at all that I will be there for her to complain to, and I'll understand. She'll do likewise for me. We'll make each other chicken noodle soup and coffee to keep us going on long nights of work. I'll help her decide whether she has a thesis for her paper on Macbeth and then proofread it for her. She'll explain to me again why humans can 't digest cellulose--and then try to convince methat it's better to get up early and work rather than stay up late. We'll order some takeout from her favorite Cantonese restaurant. At 2 a.m., on full stomachs, we'll get some sleep before our 9:00 classes, when once again I'll be rushing across Locust Walk to get to my history class, thinking about where I'll be heading after that.Comments:点评The writer deals inventively with the difficult question "Why are you and this school a good match?" Instead of telling the admissions committee what they already know about the college's curriculum, athletic program, or academic reputation, she tells them what they do not know about: herself. She answers the question by imagining herself in a college routine. She then makes that routine specific to Penn through references to the school newspaper, campus buildings and walks, and a particular history course.What she reveals about herself along the way from cafeteria to library to dorm gives this well-structured essay its zest. The reader learns that she plays the oboe, is a rock climber, goes to art shows, studies history, is extroverted, loves chocolate, treasures her roommate, does not fully understand why humans cannot digest cellulose, and happily digests Chinese takeout at 2 A.M. She is confident enough to write in her own voice, using informal language in an informal essay ("chunks of time," "way too busy and social," "random ridiculous things"). Her lively sense of language comes through in sentences such as, "It is so quiet in [the Furness Library] that you can hear the students breathing," and in her comparison of her dorm neighbors to ''molecules being heated in a beaker."She is as specific about other details in the essay as she is about herself. The net effect of these well-chosen details--for instance, about her friends' varied interests or how she and her roommate cooperate in their work--suggests that the writer has long been attending the school to which she is applying. Such a commitment to a particular school will impress admissions officers.。

美国留学英文信范文(1)

美国留学英文信范文(1)

美国留学英文信范文Model English letter for studying in the United States美国留学英文信范文前言:个人简历是求职者给招聘单位发的一份简要介绍,包括个人的基本信息、过往实习工作经验以及求职目标对应聘工作的简要理解,在编写简历时,要强调工作目标和重点,语言精简,避免可能会使你被淘汰的不相关信息。

写出一份出色的个人简历不光是对找工作很有用处,更是让陌生人对本人第一步了解和拉进关系的线。

本文档根据个人简历内容要求和特点展开说明,具有实践指导意义,便于学习和使用,本文下载后内容可随意调整修改及打印。

推荐信用英文该怎么写呢?下面是小泰收集整理的美国留学英文推荐信范文,供大家参考和借鉴。

美国留学英文推荐信范文(1)To whom it may concern,At Miss *** request for a reference, I present my highest recommendation of her candidacy for admission to your esteemed graduate program.Serving as Miss*** tutor since 2019, I have had a first-hand opportunity to observe Miss ***campus life. She stepped into my sight as a girl who was highly motivated and innovative. She talked with me her planfor studying abroad when she was only a freshman. I often find her submerging herself in the library, reading the latest international journals to keep abreast of the cutting-edged developments in the field of accounting and finance. She also displays a strong ability in critical thinking. For example, she made a profound and comprehensive analysis on China’s booming stock market in 2019 after saying “Good bye” to the former “Dragging Bear”. Due to her great enthusiasm and consistent efforts, she enjoyed an increasing GPA trend and obtained scholarships for four consecutive years. In my course international investment, she got an excellent mark of 96, rankingin the top 5%.As well as being extremely gifted academically, Miss Zhang Yi demonstrates a high degree of leadership capacity and organizational skills. As a secretary of our school’s student union, she arranged variouscity-wide activities. I remembered that she organized our school team to take part in the debatingcompetition among capital schools. She consulted experts, collected information, and helped training the competitors. All these efforts contributed to our school team’s winning the second place in the competition.According to my contacts with her, I think Miss Zhang Yi is a very promising young girl who is worthy your consideration. Should you want further information about her, feel free to contact me directly. Thank you!Sincerely,***Professor in University of International Business aand EconomicsTrustee of the WTO Research ConferenceTel:E-mail:Address:×××美国留学英文推荐信范文(2)To whom it may concern,I deem it a great pleasure to write this letterof reference on behalf of Miss xxx to support her application to study in your university.I am the dean of Finance School in Shanghai University of Finance and Economics, and Miss xxx is one of my students majoring in International Finance.I have known her very well in terms of personality and academic performance. The intelligent nature and sense of logical analysis make her powerful in mastering complicated theories. In her active participation in the campus activities, she has demonstrated her intellectual independence as well as impressive ability. Additionally, she expresses her ideas clearly and has good analytical skills, which give me deep impression. For example, Zhao once participated in thedebate competition and worked as the fourth debater. She took charge of free debate and summary remarksthat were very important in the competition. To my surprise, Miss xxx finished the task very excellently thanks to her agile mind and quick analysis ability. Miss xxx clearly analyzed the opposite side’s weaknesses, simultaneously; she also conquered many committee members. Because of their good performance and cooperation, they finally obtained outstanding result. Miss xxx was awarded the honor of “The Best Debater”.Apart from her intelligence, Miss xxx was an independent and energetic girl who took part in many large-scale activities enthusiastically. I found that xxx took part in most of the activities and did a nice job. In 2019 she took part in the badminton competition and got the champion of women's doubles. Besides, Miss xxx had good teamwork spirit and cooperated with the schoolmates tacitly.Based on my appreciation of such an ambitious student who receives the challenge bravely, I strongly su pport She’s decision of higher academic pursuit without reservation. And I sincerely hope my recommendation will receive your favorable consideration.Yours Honestly,xxx美国留学英文推荐信范文(3)Dear Professor:Miss xxx requested a letter of reference from me to support her application for graduate studies at your university. As her tutor when she prepared her project design for graduation, I am pleased to comply with her request.I became acquainted with Miss xxx when I met her beautiful writing on her mathematic assignments and I remembered her name at once. When I taught her, she always sat on the leftplace behind the classroom, then I asked her why, she answered me that she likes to see all corners of classroom with smiles on her face. But I was astonished by her learning ability; she listened to my lesson with her thought, especially when I taught them some emphases and difficulties of the course, she always listened to me earnestly and recorded these difficulties on her note carefully, after class, she came to me and talked about these questions which included some principle of mathematics, I was impressed by her unique views about mathematics which reflected her thought and logic better than other students.It was worthy to mention her learning ability on mathematics, for example, I didn’t finish my predication logic lesson because of limit time andjust simply mentioned the concept, when I checked students’ assignments and found only she gave me prefect answer with deductive ways and her thought was very clear. Meanwhile I was gratified by herapperception ability and self-taught ability, she was a girl with nimbus and big potential. Besides herapply ability was also very strong. In her junior year, she took part in my teaching reform project which analyzed the result of improving mathematic teaching quality. She was so familiar with the model of mathematics that she suggested that we may choose AHP m odel instead of normal faintness judge way to carry on quantitative analysis, and I accepted hersuggestion and finished together the paper of “arrangement analytical method applies on the classroom int eraction teaching effective comment” which will be published in the future.Miss xxx told me that she will apply for finance engineering which is a new field for her. I am glad to recommend this excellent girl who already possessed good quality and strong ability. I therefore lend her my enthusiastic support and would appreciate you favorable consideration of her application.Sincerely yoursxxx美国留学英文推荐信范文(4)Dear Sir:It is my pleasure to recommend Mr. Fuping Wangfor his application to graduate studies in your school. Mr. Wang has been my research assistant of theNational Science Council's project- "The United States and the United Nations' Financial Crisis: The Role of U.S. Congress" since September 1997.His major responsibilities include information collecting, analyzing and translating. He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with extremely high potentiality. Mr. Wang is not only quick at learning and good at solving difficult problems, but also with a logical mind that enables him toeffectively analyze difficulties. All the work handed to him was completed satisfactorily. Actually, he isso reliable that I assign him with heavy responsibilities.With his help, I have been able to spend moretime in writing the research paper. I really consider myself very fortunate to have such a capable assistant.I am certain his diligence, coupled with a good competence and pleasant personality, will assure himof academic achievements in his future academic pursuits. I strongly recommend his admission without any reservation.Sincerely yours,Chung Weikuo Research Fellow and Professor The Institute of European and American Studies第二部分、对该推荐信的分析您觉得这封推荐信怎样呢?如果这是一封为秘书介绍新工作的推荐信,那还可以接受;不过对于申请研究生院来讲,就似乎不太够力度了。

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美国留学申请essay写作指南
最近,经常有同学问到我,美国留学申请essay怎么写,一般的书写流程是怎样的呢?针对这些问题,下面我给大家详细的介绍一下。

首先来看看常见的题目。

1、Evaluate a significant experience, achievement , risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you 对你的重大经历、成就、风险,或对你有重大影响的道德困境以及它对你的影响进行描述。

2、Discuss some issue of personal , local, national , or international concern and its importance to you.在美国大学本科申请essay中讨论一下对你有重大影响的个人的或当地的或国家的甚至是国际性的问题。

3、Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you , and describe that influence.在申请essay中描述一位对你有重大影响的人物,如何影响你!
4、Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure,
or a creative work (as in art, music, science, ect) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.描述对你有重大影响的一名虚构人物、历史人物或一件创作型作品(可以是艺术、音乐、科学等作品)以及描述它对你造成的影响。

5、A range of academic interests, personal perspectives,and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background , describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community , or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you. 在你的个人教育背景之下,描述你的一个个人经历,
这个经历能展现你个人与众不同的特质,可以是你的学习兴趣、个人观点、人生经历等。

接着来看看写作的步骤。

1.prewrite
这一步手写或者电脑打印都可以,写的没有调理也不要紧,只能罗列词句,不能形成段落也可以,但是,速度一定要快,内容一定要广,重要的是为接下来时间内要有充足的材料去挑选,找出与众不同之处,加以剖析。

2.drafts
每个学校的essay都有不同的topic和字数限制,不要企图用万金油去对付所有的学校,各个学校的东西有共性,但是差异化的东西更多,所以,个人认为,申请6—8所学校的同学,应该要有2篇不同方面的main essay,并且在投稿时需要一定的修改。

而draft就是要从prewrite中筛选你不同的但是优秀的性格方面,有侧重学术的,有侧重社会活动的,有的可能仅仅是一个小故事,然后,形成一篇文章。

3.revise and format
检查字数,一定要复合要求,接近规定字数,不要超过。

检查语法,拼写,用词不当的地方,要小心不要使用自己翻译的词,比如性价比这个词我们耳熟能详,但美国人表达这个意思一般用cost effective。

格式上,美国大学写作一般用 8.5x11 inch的信纸,用time new roman字体,12号字,双倍行间距,首行缩进,作对齐,题目中置等一系列的小
规则,提交纸质版的同学要注意啊。

最后给大家带来的是范文鉴赏。

It's like the wonderland of mine, I am not Alice, and the wonderland is not the underground world. However, life is always the fantastic adventures which filled with surprises and chances, and I am sure that Brandeis University would be the
wonderland of mine which could help me to experience more and improve myself to be a better person.
I want to be a person who can help other people and contribute to the society, then I should have enough capabilities first and Brandeis attracts me. I'd like to study psychology and Brandeis offers students best education,researches opportunities and full support.
In Brandeis, psychology majors study varied aspects of both basic and applied areas of the field and focus on basic
scientific research for undergraduate involvement. Brandeis offers a wide range of opportunities to participate in research, and I am looking forward to join in the researches with excellent professors there to write papers for publication in professional journals and books. What's more, there are undergraduate departmental representatives (UDR) there who can help every student individually to students' problems and suggestions to the faculty.
There would be thousands of words to describe my passion for the Brandeis students' life, organizations, clubs,
athletics, community involvements, etc. However, there is also another reason why I eager to live in Brandeis besides of those outstanding academic advantages and campus diversities, I have a friend who joined in the college fair and shared with me her impressions for the school officer, harmonious,
friendship, charming and attractive, I also wish to meet the wonderful friends there.。

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