托福独立写作开头段的写法

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Brainstorming:
attend sth -- attendance in sth
be more enjoyable -- have/bring/produce more joy/delight/pleasure Paraphase:
独立写作开头段的写 法
September
Requirement
OG: Score 5
An essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following: Effectively address the topic and task. Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details. Displays unity, progression, and coherence.
Brainstorming:
should do -- be required to do, be supposed to do
the same amount of money -- the equivalent money
Paraphawk.baidu.come:
Unversities are supposed to render the equivalent money to their students' sports activities as they do to the university libraries.
Paraphrase:
Nowadays, people seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preferance between living in a big city and a small town. 133. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Attendance in a live performance brings more pleasure than watching the same one on televison.
意义的对应
9. Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
2. 在只有意义对应的改述中，格式较为自由、开放，可以 展示更多的语法可能性与表达的多样性。
Examples
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
One's childhood years are the most significant years in his lifetime.
词与词的替换（synonym）
9.
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Brainstorming: prefer to do sth -- would rather do sth live -- reside, dwell small -- little big city -- metroplis Paraphase:
Nowadays, people often consider/regard/hold that...
Nowadays, people tend to/ would like to...
In most cases, people argue/contend that... In modern society, there is a tendency/phenomenon/ controversy that... Nowadays, some people..., while others...
Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some people prefer to reside in a small town. Others would rather live in a metroplis.
词类替换
b) word--phrase
11. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
b. Show your personal opinion
要求：观点鲜明，简明扼要。 Sentence II 常用句型： 前半句：
As far as I am concerned/ In my point of view/ As for me/ For my part/ In terms of me/ Personally speaking, ......
Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomatically, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors.
A paraphrase of something written or spoken is the same thing expressed in a different way.——《柯林斯英汉双解大辞典》
e.g
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Practice: 175. Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Brainstorming:
a person's -- one's, someone's
important -- significant, momentous of a person's life -- in one's lifetime Paraphrase:
Paraphrase:
When looking back upon his lifetime, one may regard his childhood as the most significant period in his lifetime.
Sentence I
1. 在形式与内容对应的改述中，一般格式较为固定：
2. 意义的对应
形式与内容的对应
a) 词与词的替换（synonym）
133. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person's life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Sentence I：
Nowadays, people often consider that only the ones who earn a large amount of money are successful. Nowadays, people would like to hold the view that only those who earn much material wealth can be viewed as the successful ones. Nowadays, many people believe that a large income equals success.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
How to paraphrase the topic?
1. 形式与内容的严格对应 a) 词与词的替换；（synonym） b) 词类替换；（word--phrase） c) 词性替换 （noun--verb, adjective--noun）
Paragraph I
I. Paraphrase the argument 改述原题(背景)
II. Counterargument 反方观点 III. Main Idea 发表自己的观点
a. What the topic is
Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice. 1. topic 一般就在题目中； 2. 为体现句法的多样性和用词的准确性，不能照抄原题； 3. 需要对原题进行恰当而准确地改述，即paraphrase. 4. What is paraphrase？
A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person's life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
词性替换
c) noun--verb, adjective--noun
35. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.