2017年12月17日托福写作真题解析
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综合写作：
阅读：持肯定观点 1. Drake 的日记中记载过自己遭遇过极端天气，而这种天气不太可能出现在加州；
2. Drake 在后来的报道中写到的 wooden pole 可能是当地人的一种叫 Totem 的东西； 3. 只有英Hale Waihona Puke Baidu政府知道 Drake 的航行，因为当时英国在和西班牙争夺领土，所以没有公布。 听力：不认同 1. 有证据表明加州可能也有过那样的天气，因为科学家研究了树的 growth ring，发现更加 narrow，从而证明当时的天气不好；
2. 通常 Totem pole 都是 beautiful carved，上面记载着 story, animals，legends 等， 但 Drake 的报道并没有提到这些； 3. 如果英国政府为了保密随后去占领，那么他们一定很快会派 settlers 去，但事实上两 百多年英国都没有派人去过。
独立写作：
中公留学无忧，让留学更简单
2017 年 12 月 17 日托福考试写作回顾
综合写作：
讨论 explorer Drake 是否航行到 English Columbia。
独立写作：
If your friend want to reduce living expenses, which would you suggest? 1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses. 2. Buy the new technology products less frequently. 3. Shop for less expensive food and cooking at home.
留学无忧是中公教育旗下专业留学品牌，包括留学无忧、雅思无忧、托福无忧、GRE 无忧、SAT 无忧、ACT 无忧等多个留学服务品牌
留学无忧是中公教育旗下专业留学品牌，包括留学无忧、雅思无忧、托福无忧、GRE 无忧、SAT 无忧、ACT 无忧等多个留学服务品牌
中公留学无忧，让留学更简单 本题是三选一的新题型，并且三个选项之间无法紧密比较，以下是笔者给出的一个参考答案：
Position: I have the preference that finding a roommate that can share the living expenses is a better idea. Reason 1: First of all, it is obvious that living expenses represents the majority of all expenses, which could be an enormous burden for young people. (租房成本占据了大部分的 支出成本，对年轻人来说是一种巨大的负担。) In addition, the money, which is saved from renting a house with a roommate, could be better used as tuition for advanced degree, expenses for outbound tourism，or something more useful and beneficial.（通过和室友分担 节省下的钱能用在更有用的方面，譬如作为学费或者出国旅游的开销等。） Reason 2: Second, the benefits brought by a roommate would go far beyond sharing the living expenses. Virtually, a roommate, with a wild range of knowledge and experience, could play a vital role in helping and guiding you in various kinds of fields, which is a precious treasure. (室友带给我们的益处不仅仅是分担房租，更可能会在生活中的各个方面都能给 我们带来帮助。) Reason 3: Buying the new technology products less frequently cannot get to the root of the problem, since the expense for buying new techanology products cannot compete with that for renting a house. What's more, it is not always realistic for young people to shop for less expensive food and cooking at home.（减少购买新科技产品并不能解决问题，因为这一项 支出并没有租房成本那么大，而且对于年轻人来说在家做饭也不一定总是那么现实。）
考试预测
本题是近年来较火热的三选一题型，希望同学们在备考过程中予以重视。 1. Which one is the most important for teacher of high school?
1. The ability to help students plan for their future; 2. The ability to find the students who need help most and help them; 3. Teach students how to learn outside the classroom. 2. Which way do you think is the best for a student to make friends? Join a sports team, participate in community activities or travel.
综合写作：
阅读：持肯定观点 1. Drake 的日记中记载过自己遭遇过极端天气，而这种天气不太可能出现在加州；
2. Drake 在后来的报道中写到的 wooden pole 可能是当地人的一种叫 Totem 的东西； 3. 只有英Hale Waihona Puke Baidu政府知道 Drake 的航行，因为当时英国在和西班牙争夺领土，所以没有公布。 听力：不认同 1. 有证据表明加州可能也有过那样的天气，因为科学家研究了树的 growth ring，发现更加 narrow，从而证明当时的天气不好；
2. 通常 Totem pole 都是 beautiful carved，上面记载着 story, animals，legends 等， 但 Drake 的报道并没有提到这些； 3. 如果英国政府为了保密随后去占领，那么他们一定很快会派 settlers 去，但事实上两 百多年英国都没有派人去过。
独立写作：
中公留学无忧，让留学更简单
2017 年 12 月 17 日托福考试写作回顾
综合写作：
讨论 explorer Drake 是否航行到 English Columbia。
独立写作：
If your friend want to reduce living expenses, which would you suggest? 1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses. 2. Buy the new technology products less frequently. 3. Shop for less expensive food and cooking at home.
留学无忧是中公教育旗下专业留学品牌，包括留学无忧、雅思无忧、托福无忧、GRE 无忧、SAT 无忧、ACT 无忧等多个留学服务品牌
留学无忧是中公教育旗下专业留学品牌，包括留学无忧、雅思无忧、托福无忧、GRE 无忧、SAT 无忧、ACT 无忧等多个留学服务品牌
中公留学无忧，让留学更简单 本题是三选一的新题型，并且三个选项之间无法紧密比较，以下是笔者给出的一个参考答案：
Position: I have the preference that finding a roommate that can share the living expenses is a better idea. Reason 1: First of all, it is obvious that living expenses represents the majority of all expenses, which could be an enormous burden for young people. (租房成本占据了大部分的 支出成本，对年轻人来说是一种巨大的负担。) In addition, the money, which is saved from renting a house with a roommate, could be better used as tuition for advanced degree, expenses for outbound tourism，or something more useful and beneficial.（通过和室友分担 节省下的钱能用在更有用的方面，譬如作为学费或者出国旅游的开销等。） Reason 2: Second, the benefits brought by a roommate would go far beyond sharing the living expenses. Virtually, a roommate, with a wild range of knowledge and experience, could play a vital role in helping and guiding you in various kinds of fields, which is a precious treasure. (室友带给我们的益处不仅仅是分担房租，更可能会在生活中的各个方面都能给 我们带来帮助。) Reason 3: Buying the new technology products less frequently cannot get to the root of the problem, since the expense for buying new techanology products cannot compete with that for renting a house. What's more, it is not always realistic for young people to shop for less expensive food and cooking at home.（减少购买新科技产品并不能解决问题，因为这一项 支出并没有租房成本那么大，而且对于年轻人来说在家做饭也不一定总是那么现实。）
考试预测
本题是近年来较火热的三选一题型，希望同学们在备考过程中予以重视。 1. Which one is the most important for teacher of high school?
1. The ability to help students plan for their future; 2. The ability to find the students who need help most and help them; 3. Teach students how to learn outside the classroom. 2. Which way do you think is the best for a student to make friends? Join a sports team, participate in community activities or travel.