英语中考英语书面表达100及答案(word)1

英语中考英语书面表达100及答案（word）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。

大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。

请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。

注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数：80-100；（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This wee k we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion._______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。

而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leaveschool at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．书面表达社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。

对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。

但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。

请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。

你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。

注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实的人名及校名。

Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her?【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and ve ry strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞的事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我要点赞的人，接下来介绍他的情况，最后指出我从他身上学到的东西。

此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面表达“小手拉大手,同做文明人。

”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。

作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。

请根据以下所给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

1.种植花草树木；2.遵守交通规则；3.公共场合不大声喧哗；4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。

而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。