2020届高考英语短文改错题应试策略

role, including parents, health care providers, teachers, and those 68 work with and care about
She was a terrible great friend and I know our lives will never be same without her. I could
Dear Bill,
起来
You must know how deeply saddened I was over your loss. Your sister and I were the dearest
friend and recalling the past, I dare saying she was like a sister to me. I will miss him very much.
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overwhelming as the score was quite c_l_o_s_e_ly between China
and its opponent.
close
To our delight, China won in the end. We couldn't help f_e_e_l proud as Chinese! The volleyball players had trained sfeoehlianrgd
(4) 少了一个词，要求添加的词有冠词、 介词、连词、不定式符号to、人称代词、 物主代词等。
(5) 多了一个词，要求删除的词有冠词、 介词、连词、不定式符号to、助动词、 副词等。
(6) 标点符号、单词拼写、大小写和词序 等不设错。
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解题步骤
第一步：通读全文，了解大意。通过浏览全文， 从宏观上把握文章的主旨、时态、人称，为下一 步的纠错做好准备。 第二步：逐句推敲，纠正错误。仔细阅读每个句 子，同时找出并纠正错误。 第三步：重读全文，检查答案。再次仔细阅读全 文，检查已修改的部分是否正确且符合逻辑，并 尽可能发现漏掉的错误。
for him. It is really happy for me to be h_e_l_p to other
people.
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高考英语短文改错应试策略
考点突破
考点一 考查名词
1. (NMET2015) The _a_ir_s we breathe in is getting
(carry) health risks.
I could always count at her whenever I needed help, whether with a big project and a small task
知识点类似雷同，考查方式逆向 It is important to prevent harm to youth and young adults from e-cigarettes. Everyone has 67
that she was always so willing to help me with. I came to trust her judgment and wise as well and her advice were always so well thought out and helpful.
air
dirtier and dirtier.
2. (NMET2014) Since then — for all these y__e_a_r —
years
victory won't come to you unless_I_go to it.
you
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语法填空与改错 的关联
第二节 （共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分） 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1 个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。 In August, cases of a mysterious severe lung disease rocked the health society, 61
Betty Smith
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On August 21, I was working on my homework, a
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词法：介词、冠词、连词的多用或少用；词性误 用、现在分词与过去分词的混用等。
句法：主谓一致、平行(并列)一致、时态一致、 指代一致、名词的单复数一致(5个一致)。定从、名 从、状从句。
行文逻辑：因果关系、转折关系、递进关系，意 义的肯定与否定等。
考点考法顺口溜
八种情况，可能增删(6增6减)
连、冠、介， (不定式)符号to， 可能增加和删除；
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增加人称(代词)和物主(代词) 和be动词， 可能删除副和助动词。
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“短文改错”考点分布
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2019卷II 1 1 2 3 1 1 1 10
E-cigarette use poses a significant and avoidable health risk to young people in the United States. Besides
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
解题方法? young people. A visit to a health care professional is a great chance 69 (educate) your child on
the potential risks of e-cigarette use. Ask your provider to discuss these health risks, including nicotine
hero/heroine.
who
Attracted by the cheers from the living room, I opened the
door only to find my parents were watching the volleyball
m_a_t_c_h_e_s of women's final. Then I anmdajtocihned in them. The sense of
before and f_ig_h_t till the last minute. Without doubt, they
were not ofniglyhtmedy heroines, a_n_d_ the heroines of China! I
started to write my composibtiuotn.
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东三校2020年第二次联考
I will never forget my first day at high school. That
day, one of my new c_la_s_s_m__ate was late. He stood outside the classroomclass_is_lme_n_attebsefore our teacher let h_e__r in. He cried on his dsielesnkt.lyI asked him what ∧ hhaimppened. He hesitated for a while, b_u_t_ then thoaldd me that his father had died several daysa_na_dg_o_. After a moment, he added that his mother _is_ bneofworebadly ill. H__e_a_r_d his word, I felt sorry for his swuafsferings. So I Hdeecaridinegd not to organize an activity to raise money
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Error Correction 短文改错
授课教师：王海锋
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Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass,∧it is about learning to dance in thearnadi/nbu.t
never find a better and more caring friend. She has been left us with so many wonderful memories. I will cherish them forever.
In Deep Sorrow,
addiction and the impact of nicotine on the 70 (develop) brain, etc.
2018卷II 1 2 2 1 1 2 1 10
2017卷II 1 1 3 2 0 1 2 10
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注意事项： (1) 错误类型：错1个词、多1个词、少1 个词的比例是8:1:1。
(2) 每句话中最多设2处错。即有的句子 无错，有的句子有1处错，有的有2处错。
(3) 需要变形的词通常是名词、动词、形 容词、副词。
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考查学生对语言的评价与校正的能力以及对 词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力。 1、短文改错的考点可分为三类：
词法错误、句法错误和行文逻辑错误 2、错误的形式分别为缺词、多词和错词（一增
一减八修改），改错词是最主要的形式。 3、在改错过程中，批卷人只看到第十个改错处，
第10处以后的改错即使改对也不会得分。
doctors
第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语
言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
looking for the cause of the illness. They found the link between vaping and lung disease. Now, there are 805 lung injury cases reported across 46 states in the United States. There had been twelve 62 (death) reported, and all cases reported a history of e-cigarette use.
10个拦路虎藏 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
increasing the 63 (possible) of addiction and long-term harm to brain development and respiratory health, e-cigarette use 64 (associate) with the use of other tobacco products that can do even 65 (great) damage to the body. Even breathing in e-cigarette smoke that someone else has breathed out 66