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2018年高考英语作文预测【四篇】

2018年高考英语作文预测【四篇】

2018 年高考英语作文预测【四篇】导读:本文2018 年高考英语作文预测【四篇】,仅供参考,如果觉得很不错,欢迎点评和分享。

【第一篇:英语学习报告】假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”,请你根据下表所提示的信息,用英语写一篇发言稿,简单介绍自己英语学习的情况,并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

自己英语学习的情况1. ................................................................................................ 英语学习的目的2.英语学习的方法3•课外自学的途径............................. .对学校英语教学的建议(请考生根据自己的经历与感想,提出两至三点建议)。

【参考范文】Dear teachers and schoolmates,1t ' s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you . I'm interested in English , and hope to be an interpreter in the future . Naturally it ' s very important for me to learn English well . As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language , just like bricks in a building . I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class .I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio . Besides , I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.Now , I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school . Firstly , we should be given more opportunities to use what we ' ve learned inorderto have a better grasp of it . Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them . Finally ,1 suggest we havemore English activities ,such as English contests and festivals .Thank you for listening . 【第二篇:微笑作用】请你根据以下提示,结合生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈微笑的作用。

2018年高考英语作文押题预测汇总

2018年高考英语作文押题预测汇总

2018年高考英语作文押题预测汇总克服困难A seven­year­old girl named Anaya Ellick, who was born without hands, beat fifty competitors to win a national award for handwriting, which makes her parents proud and inspires many people.This story sets me thinking profoundly. Life can place a stumbling block in our way and definitely, it is always easier to give up than to hold on. However, like Anaya, constant effort yields sure success. If you pursue your goals with the courage of never giving up, you will succeed in whatever endeavor you take on.As high school students, we are bound to encounter the twists and turns life offers us. But when we think of those people who suffer more than us, we should have a more optimistic view on study and draw lessons from the bumps and turns along the way. Bear it in mind that we should keep going forward, even in the toughest time.小马过河:尝试A little horse, with his mother's encouragements, tried to cross the river himself and found it was neither as shallow as the cow had told himnor as deep as the squirrel had described.The story gives me a deep and lasting impression when reading it. It tells us that we should not fear the things we cannot predict. Instead, we should courageously face challenges ourselves and accumulate life experience little by little.I'd always wanted to go skating, but I doubted whether I could make it because some of my friends said it was very easy while others found it quite difficult. Fortunately, my elder brother encouraged me to give it a shot, so I did. During the practice, I found it hard to balance my body. I sought advice from experienced skaters and kept practising. It was because of the constant attempts I had made that I gradually got the skills of skating and was capable of balancing my body.From this experience, I am convinced that genuine knowledge comes from practice. Only when we experience everything on our own can we gain true knowledge for our life.网络诈骗,网络安全意识A girl from Shandong, who would soon begin her university life, was cheated out of 9,900 yuan due to personal information leakage. The heavy blow claimed her life, which aroused anger in society.The leakage of personal information is of great harm. Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls, but also people may be cheated out of money or be put in danger. Thus, the protection of personal information is of vital importance in order for common people to maintain a peaceful and safe life, as well as to protect one's own fortune.Here are the tips on how to protect one's personal information. Never click any link on phones or computers unless it can be utterly trusted. Also, avoid connecting smart phones to any untrusted WiFi in public places. Apart from the efforts of common people, the government must spare no effort to fight against criminals selling others' personal information.G20峰会:合作The Hangzhou G20 summit places much emphasis on global cooperation rather than competition. It seeks to cope with the current issues in various fields, which can't be resolved by a single country.It is apparent that cooperation is a necessity for success in such a competitive society. First and foremost, teamwork can help us achieve shared targets in a more efficient way. Furthermore, cooperation provides people with opportunities, learning to show respect for others. Those who lack such essential skills are certain to be wiped out of the team in modern society.The success our Chinese women's volleyball players achieved in the 2016 Rio Olympics is a striking example of the point. While we weren't on the winning side at first, we strived as a team to the last minute of the match. Without team spirit, we wouldn't have won the championship. It is cooperation that really counts in addressing problems we face.网络捐款A father, who posted his daughter's illness via WeChat to raise money for her treatment, was criticized by the public because he had the ability to cover the medical expenses.I'm in complete disagreement with the behaviour of the father. It's apparent that raising money on the Internet is an effective way to help those in need, which can not only assist them in getting through the hardships but also be helpful in creating a harmonious society. However, this father can afford the medical expenses but turned to others for help, which betrayed the public's trust and made them feel cheated.As far as I'm concerned, only when one is in desperate need can they seek for help from others. Meanwhile, the government and relevant authorities should make efforts to enhance the supervision of the identity of those seeking help and get to the truth of their problems.That's a touching story about an 11­year­old boy who designed and carried out the “Pay It Forward” program and tried to make a difference to change the world for the better.Trevor's idea is brilliant. It's like an invisible bond which connects everyone together and enables kindness to widespread in every corner of the world. He not only puts his genius idea into action by doing a favour for three people, but also appeals to the recipients of favour to pay the favour forward.In my view, to change the world for the better, first and foremost, we should change ourselves for the better. So I will make a checklist of the bad habits I need to get rid of and the things I want to learn, which can motivate me to do some small changes every day. I will also appeal to my classmates to follow me by posting our checklists online and push each other to be a better self.父母把孩子照片放上网:网络安全Possible version 1:While it is common for a parent to post children's photos nowadays, people take different attitudes toward it. Some think it's beneficial while others are anxious about it.In my opinion, posting children's photos online is beneficial for people and makes a child better known. As a result, he is likely to have more chances to be successful in the future. It will also be easier for parents to communicate with other friends, for they have more to share with each other. Besides, it's a way to strengthen an online social circle and connect with people we don't know before.Although there may be some disadvantages that come with posting children's photos, it's not necessary to be too cautious about it. We should have confidence in our society because we won't throw away the apple because of the core.Possible version 2:While it's common for a parent to post children's photos nowadays, people take different attitudes toward it. Some think it's beneficial while others are anxious about it.In my opinion, it is not always the smartest or safest thing to do so.What parents view as delightful photos may be interpreted differently by others and give a false image of what the child is really like. Besides, there is a growing crime called “digital kidnapping” in which individuals or companies steal children's images and use them in advertisements or other commercial activities. Apart from the obvious dangers of identity theft, it can result in them being re­shared and altered by other online users without permission, which may end up damaging their school status or future career prospects.In short, although sharing children's photos online does have advantages, parents should be cautious about it.二胎政策China has issued the two­child policy aiming to solve the social problems of an aging population and labour shortages due to the current low birth rate. People's responses vary, anyway.Personally, I'm in favour of the policy. In the long term, an increase in the number of children can have a positive impact on the consumption of products and services catering for child rearing, thus leading to growth and employment demand in industries. Moreover, having siblings protectadolescents against negative feelings such as loneliness, fear and self­consciousness.Provided that a child has siblings, he can learn to share.As the only child in my family, I often feel lonely. With nobody to communicate with I become introverted and dare not speak in public. However, with siblings, children can be independent and selfless. Furthermore, children are less likely to be spoiled.In conclusion, the two­child policy will benefit us a lot.飞行员:敬业Zhang Chao, an excellent J­15fighter pilot, died from a sudden malfunction when he was landing. His love of his work in spite of its risks will inspire us forever.Zhang Chao has set us a good example. The great danger and a lot of risks of flying a jet plane did not prevent him from performing his duties. So, there is no reason for us not to work hard. “He really loved his job” demonstrates not only his devotion to his duties and his courage to overcome all kinds of difficulties, but his loyalty to our country as well.Zhang Chao's heroic deeds impresses us deeply. As a student, we should do as he did. That is to say, we must dedicate ourselves to our studies, and do our best to acquire necessary knowledge and skills. Only by doing so, will we be able to serve our country well in the future.英语学习方法Dear_Wei_Fang,In_your_letter,_you talked about your difficulty in English vocabulary learning and asked me for help. You also described your learning methods and how your teacher helped you, both in class andafter class.You are not stupid at all. The problem lies in your method. Memorization, which you adopt, is not the sole solution. For a word to really become a part of your vocabulary, you'd better see more about how it is used in more reading and listening. Besides, don't forget to use it in your speaking and writing whenever you have chances. The more frequently you see it and use it, the better it can be remembered.As to how your teacher helps you, I think she also should make a change. For example, introduce and consolidate the target words in a rich context and allow you more time for practice in class, instead of endless explanation and dictation.Hope_my_opinion_will_be_of_some_help_to_you.Yours_sincerely长远打算计划As is clearly shown in the charts above, 24% of the subjects with a short­term and clear life planning, and 9% with long­term and clear one, end up as successful people and elites respectively 25 years later while the rest with ambiguous one, ordinary people.There is no denying that the importance of life planning can't be emphasized too much. Firstly, the life planning can drive us to continue moving forward when we are in difficulty and arouse our passions for learning more. Moreover, without it, we might be in the dark about what to do, thus achieving nothing in the end.As a senior three student, my current primary task is to put all my heart into study to ensure excellent academic performance, and taking a gap year to do voluntary work is also on my agenda. After that, I'll go to college to major in what I'm interested in.成功As is vividly illustrated above, success is like an iceberg floating in the sea. Only a small part of it can be seen while most of it is invisible under the water.When talking about success, people often fix their mind on success itself, ignoring some hidden factors. I hold the belief that although dedication, hard work and discipline are key elements of success, failure and sacrifice are also significant. Those who are unwilling to be persistent will end in failure. On the whole, hard work is the leading factor.“Success Iceberg” teaches me how to view success properly. Take my story for example. When in Grade 7, I didn't do well in maths. After much hard work, I got the highest score in the final examination. My classmates thought I succeeded only because I had a higher IQ. Actually, they failed to see the fact that my success resulted from many other factors, which played a more important role than IQ.爱As the letter points out, it is of critical significance to cherish people around and seize every opportunity to express your love to them because tomorrow is unpredicatable.Love is a ray of sunshine is winter. However, in contemporary society, with the quickening pace of modern life and increasing professional competition, some people can hardly spare time to express love. Moreover, educated to be reserved from an early age, some tend to conceal their genuine emotions, feeling awkward when expressing love in words.Confronted with constant stressful exams, we seniors are suffering from extreme tiredness and severe anxiety, especially when we fail to fulfill parents' expectations. It is classmates' inspiration and affection that will help us go through this period of time. Every day, I will pay my friends sincere compliments, which hopeful will motivate them to strive for their dreams. When misunderstanding arises, I will have a thorough communication with them to ease the problem. We are born in and live by love, so let's spread it.父母为婴儿在飞机上哭闹道歉(Approval)To apologize for their babies' possible annoying noises, some mothers hand out goodie bags and notes in the name of babies topassengers around. This soon becomes a buzz topic.Such an initiative and behaviour, from my perspective, should be encouraged. To begin with, it's polite to make an apology to those suffering from noise babies make even though sometimes we can't avoid it. In addition, this nice gesture may ease tensions crying babies create and get understanding from people around. Most importantly, it's an absolute adorable way to remind people to be patient with babies in a very sweet way. After all, in public places, everyone is responsible for the maintenance of a peaceful environment so as to leave people around in a better state of mind.All in all, such a thoughtful and simple act of kindness can convey genuine feeling and I'll give the mother a thumb­up.(Against)To apologize for their babies' possible annoying noises, some mothers hand out goodie bags and notes in the name of baby to passengers around. This soon becomes a buzz topic.I don't think it necessary. In the first place, as young parents, you should not be scared of other people's ill looks because of your kids making noises, for kids will be kids. What's more, I am grown up enoughnot to be pacified with a goodie bag. Probably the best goodie bag for parents would be a kind word of encouragement. Last but not least, these goodie bags send the message that you should feel bad for having babies who act like babies, which has rubbed many parents the wrong way from the start.To sum up, you don't need to bend over backwards to please others and you don't owe strangers candy for sitting next to your babies.家庭教育Possible version 1:With the availability of educational resources, homeschooling is an option that is becoming more and more attractive to parents nowadays. However, some people support it while others do not.I am strongly against this practice. Homeschooling is not allowed in our country because it is compulsory for parents to send their kids to schools for an all­round education. In addition, the biggest drawback of homeschooling is a lack of interaction with others. The social experiences at school are very essential to enable a child to fit into the competitive society. Homeschooled children may lose many chances to compete withtheir peers. What's worse, learning outside a school environment can consume a lot of mom's or dad's time, which can be a big challenge for families to balance their budget.In short, it is necessary that children should be sent to public or private schools for formal schooling.Possible version 2:With the availability of educational resources, homeschooling is an option that is becoming more and more attractive to parents nowadays. However, some people support it while others do not.I support homeschooling. In some cases, a few children have no access to education due to location or physical disability, and homeschooling can fulfill their dream of receiving education. With home schooling, parents and their children can work out a schedule that suit them best. Thus, they enjoy more freedom and autonomy in their learning. Last but not least, while homeschooling, parents can focus on the improvement of their children's various ability which are badly needed in the competitive society. At the same time, they can help children learn and complete the basic requirements needed to pass tests.In short, with proper guidance and discipline, homeschooling will provide an ideal education designed just for the children themselves.共享单车Possible version one:The passage conveys to us the bike­sharing boom across the country, with more companies springing up in the market. The service not only brings great convenience to people, but causes some problems as well.From my standpoint, bike­sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted. Firstly, with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around, the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically, which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams. Furthermore, this service also benefits individuals in various ways. For example, it provides locals and tourists with a convenient, cheap and healthy means of transport. Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don't need to be concerned about such problems as theft, storage and maintenance.In a word, bike­sharing is an innovative service, which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits. And more shared­bikes should be launched into the market.Possible version two:The passage conveys to us the bike­sharing boom across the country, with more companies springing up in the market. The service not onlybrings great convenience to people, but causes some problems as well.In my opinion, bike­sharing should not be promoted at present for the following reasons. In order to attract more subscribers, the bike­sharing companies are flooding walkways and other public spaces with hundreds of bikes in the hope of promoting their services, which brings great inconvenience to pedestrians. Furthermore, for lack of relevant regulations, some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared­bikes, for example, by throwing them into rivers or piling them up randomly. A fairly high deposit fee has also been criticized in a country familiar with accessing inexpensive public services.In conclusion, bike­sharing system shouldn't be promoted before regulations and policies are put in place. The government, companies and users should all play their role in making bike­sharing sustainable and enjoyable.习惯:禁锢This story is about the elephants and the rope. These elephants made no attempt to break free from a small rope simply because they failed to make it when young.The message conveyed in this story is crystal clear: don't let the fear of failure hold you back from pursuing your dream. It's easy to give up, but you will remain stuck where you were. It's difficult to persist, but you will always have something in return in the end.Therefore, faced with failures or frustrations in our lives, we shouldn't act like these elephants, limiting ourselves to a confined world simply because we failed before. Actually, “failures” can be regarded as stepping stones along our path. If we respond in positive ways and focus on what we choose to achieve, success is around the corner. In a word, our attempt may fail, but never fail to make another attempt.机会给有准备的人Opportunities favour the prepared mind The two pictures reveal two men take completely different attitudes to building a bright future. In Picture 1, a man is dreaming of opportunities for a bright future, but without any action, while Picture 2 shows another man devotes himself to his studies to get fully prepared.The message conveyed here is clear, “Opportunities favour the prepared mind”. The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats opportunities. Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities. Unsuccessful people, on the other hand, work little and just wait, seeing them pass by.To further stress the importance of our attitude towards opportunities, let's take Liu Xiang for example. In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics, he trained hard every day and eventually made it. Therefore, we should spare no efforts to fulfill our dreams. It's universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts.网络礼貌用语Ben John's grandma is found to ask Google Search in an extremely polite way, whose behaviour is beyond the expectation of her grandson but fully appreciated by Google and many netizens.It goes without saying that social manners are of great significance in the virtual world. On the one hand, removing barriers in communication, the observation of digital etiquette helps create a harmonious and civilized network environment. On the other hand, how a person behaves when nobody knows who he is online, to a large extent, can reflect his genuine personality.There is no simple solution to the promotion of digital etiquette. As for individuals, we cannot be too thoughtful about the contents we post online. Moreover, the authority concerned should enhance the supervision of the misbehaviours on the Internet. All in all, wherever we are, the principle that we should treat people the way we want to be treated should never be neglected.。

2018年高考英语作文预测

2018年高考英语作文预测

2018年高考英语书面表达预测(经典)2018年高考英语作文可能这样考!附16类话题预测奇速教育05-25 15:16教育部考试中心主任姜钢在《中国高等教育杂志》刊登的文章《坚持以立德树人为核心深化高考考试内容改革》透露,在命题工作中更加注重四个加强”:加强社会主义核心价值观的考查;加强依法治国理念的考查;加强中国优秀传统文化的考查;加强创新能力的考查。

业内人士认为,无论是发言者的身份,还是探讨的话题,堪称权威重磅。

反观近年全国卷真题,2013年I卷的中国画”、2013年II卷的中国结”和2015 年II卷的重阳节”均考查了中国优秀传统文化”这个话题;其中2015年II卷的重阳节去敬老院”还考查社会主义核心价值观(孝敬老人)”这个话题。

1•稳。

即文体基本局限于应用文中的书信体(含电子邮件)。

2•变。

即可能会回避近年(特别是两三年内)考过的邀请信、求助信(请求信)、建议信、申请信、咨询信、约稿信。

有可能倾向于近年未考过的祝贺信、感谢信、求职信等书信体;另外属于应用文的留言条也是生活中常用文体,也可能是考查方向(2009年I卷考查过留言条)。

1•很可能会突出中国优秀传统文化”这个方向。

例如中国的四大艺术琴棋书画”、文房四宝、四大发明、四大名著、国粹京剧、唐诗宋词、古代建筑艺术、文化遗址、中国武术、中医中药等等,与这些相关的话题均可能是命题的重要素材。

2. 可能是体现社会主义核心价值观”,如爱国”诚实”守信”等。

实际上,这些也是中华优良的传统美德。

3•也可能是升学、留学、求职、招聘等方面相关的话题。

1. (祝贺信)假如你是李华,你的美国网友Peter 参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。

请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。

1)祝贺他获奖;2)肯定他付出的努力;3)询问何时方便,在网上切磋棋艺。

注意:1)词数100左右;2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3)开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Peter,I am writ ing to offer my sin cerecon gratulati onsCon gratulati ons aga in.Yo urs, Li Hu a 范文:Dear Peter,I am writ ing to offer my sin cere con gratulati ons to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challe nge. As your frie nd, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.Everything comes to him who waits:For these years, you've shown great interest in Chin ese chess an (kept on practic ing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chin ese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chin ses chess con test. Fi nally, you succeeded in wi ning the on li ne competiti on!So I'm so happy that you become champi on of this n etwork challe nge. Atlast, I hope to play Chin ese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me whe n you have time.Con gratulati ons aga in.Yo urs, Li Hua2. (介绍古筝)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter对中国传统乐器很感兴趣,写信请你向他介绍一款中国传统乐器,请给Peter写一封回信,内容要点如下:1)古筝是最古老的中国传统乐器之一,有2500多年历史;2)古筝是拨弦乐器,早期有5根弦,发展至今有21-25根弦;3)古筝音色圆润清亮,音域宽广,有东方钢琴”的美称;4.随信附寄一张古筝乐曲光盘。

2018英语高考作文范文

2018英语高考作文范文

2018英语高考作文范文Chapter 1: IntroductionThe year 2018 marked a significant milestone for the students across the whole nation as they prepared and took the English National College Entrance Examination, commonly known as the English Gaokao. As one of the most important exams in China, the English Gaokao examines the students' English language skills, critical thinking abilities, and overall knowledge of the English language. This essay aims to examine the challenges faced by the students during the English Gaokao, the impact it has on their future, and the potential solutions to overcome these challenges.Chapter 2: Challenges faced by StudentsOne of the major challenges faced by students during the English Gaokao is the pressure to perform well. The results of this examination often determine their chances of entering reputable universities and pursuing higher education. The fear of failure, coupled with the high-stakes nature of the exam, can be overwhelming for many students. The pressure can sometimes lead to anxiety and impact their performance negatively.Another challenge is the vast amount of knowledge students need to absorb and memorize in a relatively short period. English Gaokao covers a wide range of topics, including grammar, vocabulary, reading comprehension, and essay writing. Students are required to memorize numerous vocabulary words, grammar rules, and practice applying them effectively.Chapter 3: Impact on Students' FutureThe English Gaokao has a significant impact on students' future prospects. The grades obtained in this exam are used by universities to evaluate and select their incoming students. Higher scores in the Gaokao can open doors to prestigious universities, increase scholarship opportunities and enhance future job prospects. Consequently, the pressure to excel in this exam often leads to highly competitive environments among students, where only a limited number can succeed.Moreover, the English Gaokao plays a crucial role in determining the quality of English education in China. As this examination tests various aspects of the English language, it acts as a benchmark to evaluate the efficacy of the English language curriculum across the nation. The results provide feedback on the effectiveness of teaching methods, highlight areas for improvement, and inform the development of future educational policies.Chapter 4: Potential SolutionsTo address the challenges faced by students during the English Gaokao, it is crucial to emphasize the importance of a well-balanced approach to education. Students should be encouraged to take care of their mental and physical well-being, as excessive pressure and stress can hinder their performance. Schools can provide counseling services, stress management workshops, and encourage extracurricular activities to create a more holistic learning environment.Additionally, the educational system should promote a more student-centered approach, focusing on enhancing critical thinking and problem-solving abilities rather than rote memorization. Incorporating interactive and practical teaching methods can help create a dynamic and engaging classroom environment. Teachers might consider utilizing multimedia tools, group discussions, and project-based assignments to foster the students' love for the subject and encourage active participation.In conclusion, the English Gaokao presents several challenges for students, impacts their future prospects, and influences the quality of English education in China. By recognizing the pressures involved, implementing a balanced approach, and promoting a student-centered learning environment, the educational system can support students in preparing for this high-stakes examination while ensuring their overall growth and development. This will help to mitigate the challenges faced by students and provide them with a brighter future.Chapter 5: The Importance of Language ProficiencyOne of the key aspects that the English Gaokao assesses is the students' language proficiency. English has become a global language, and proficiency in this language has become increasingly important in various fields such as business, academia, and technology. A high level of English proficiency can open doors to international opportunities and enhance global communication skills.Therefore, it is essential for students to develop strong language skills that go beyond simply passing a test. The English Gaokaoshould not be seen as just a means to an end, but rather as an opportunity to improve one's language skills for future success. Students should understand the real-life application of the language and strive to become proficient English speakers and writers.Chapter 6: Adapting to the Changing LandscapeIn recent years, there have been discussions about reforming the English Gaokao to better align with practical language skills and critical thinking abilities. The focus is shifting from pure memorization of vocabulary and grammar rules to more practical applications of the language. This change not only benefits the students but also creates a more accurate evaluation of their language proficiency.Furthermore, with the advancements in technology, there is a growing emphasis on incorporating digital tools and resources into language learning. Online platforms, mobile applications, and artificial intelligence-based programs can enhance students' language learning experiences and make them more interactive and engaging. These tools can provide personalized feedback, practice exercises, and real-time assessment, allowing students to track their progress and improve their language skills effectively. Chapter 7: Collaboration between StakeholdersTo overcome the challenges faced by students during the English Gaokao, collaboration between various stakeholders is crucial. This includes educators, policymakers, parents, and students themselves. Educators should strive to develop innovative teachingstrategies that promote effective language learning and critical thinking. Policymakers should consider the recommendations of educators and students when devising educational policies and conducting Gaokao reforms.Parents play a vital role in supporting students' learning journey. They should understand the challenges faced by their children and provide guidance and encouragement. Parents can also play an active role in advocating for a more holistic and student-centered approach to education.Chapter 8: ConclusionThe English Gaokao is an important examination that has a significant impact on the students' future prospects and the quality of English education in China. However, it is essential to recognize the challenges students face and provide support to help them excel in this examination while maintaining their overall well-being.Implementing a balanced approach that values mental and physical health, promoting a student-centered learning environment, and adapting the examination format to assess practical language skills will contribute to a more comprehensive and effective English Gaokao experience. Collaboration between stakeholders is essential to bring about these changes and ensure that students are well-prepared for their future endeavors.By addressing the challenges, nurturing language proficiency, adapting to changes, and fostering collaboration, the English Gaokao can become a more accurate measure of students' languageskills and a stepping stone towards a brighter future. With these improvements, students will be better equipped to face the globalized world and pursue their academic and career aspirations successfully.。

2018年高考英语作文预测及优秀范文精选40篇

2018年高考英语作文预测及优秀范文精选40篇

2018年高考英语作文预测及优秀范文精选40篇201*年已接近尾声,还记得年初你为自己定下的小目标吗?不知你是否实现了你的小目标?发一个微信朋友圈来回顾一下吧(文中请不要出现真实的校名人名)。

你的朋友圈文字内容需包括:1. 你的201*年度小目标;2. 你为实现年度小目标所作的努力;3. 你实现(或没有实现)年度小目标的经验总结。

范文:My new year’s resolution for 201* was that I should be able to communicate with foreign people in English. To achieve this goal, I had asked my English teacher for help. According to her suggestions, I made up a plan.Firstly, I started with simply reading English articles and found many pronunciation errors in my reading after listening to the video tape of its recording. Then, I tried to learn phonetics and practice one syllable after another again and again.I started with a single word, then a phrase, a sentence, a paragraph and finally the whole passage. After 3-month practice, I was able to read an article fluently without making any mistakes in pronunciation. I felt happy. Next, I practiced my listening. By listening to a passage four times, I required myself to take it down without spelling errors or any information blank. Last but not least, I installed an app called Shanbei Oral English on my phone to practice both my listening and speaking. It’s like having conversations with a robot. I had to understand what it said to me and answer its questions accordingly. After practicing for almost 8 months, I had my first talking session with an American teacher in our school. I was proud of myself.What I have learnt from this experience is something as a saying goes: no pain no gain. Though the process of learning could be dull and tiring, it’s worth all the efforts after I achieved my goal. Even if I didn’t, it’s still a valuable part of my life.阅卷作文8+8+4=20The wonderful year of 201* is drawing to an end. I remember that I set an annual goal to keep fit at the beginning of 201*, since staying healthy is crucial to ensuring my study, thus better prepare myself for Gaokao.To achieve my goal of keeping fit, here are some efforts I’ve taken throughout the year. On the very first day of 201*, I downloaded a fitness app called Keep. Following the fitness instructions the app offered, I exercised every other night before I go to bed. Also, I did some research into the daily nutrition I need in order to stay healthy both physically and mentally, after which I devised a moderate dieting plan. Apart from the above, I’ve invited family members and friends to join me so that we can encourage each other and exchange fitness experience.So far, the record shown on my fitness app shows that I’ve done well this year, reaching a record high of 200 training times in total. Although at times I felt like giving up because of too much study pressure and limited time, I’m glad I have stuck to my plan. It seems to me that anything is possible if I throw in all of my energy and passion, and most of all, perseverance. Some rules apply to study. So I hope I will keep such passion and strength to do my best in the coming 2018. (23* words)点评:1.文本结构段落清晰,符合作文题目要求。

2018年高考英语作文预测及范文精选

2018年高考英语作文预测及范文精选

2018年高考英语作文预测及范文精选生活中我们都需要朋友,我们该结交怎样的朋友,不同的人有不同的看法。

请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。

A true friend is a source of strength and hope.—Jonathan, Lockwood Huie内容要求:1.你对该引语的理解;2.你的相关经历;3.恰当的结尾。

注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;3.词数100左右。

This quotation from Jonathan Lockwood Huie tells usthat_______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ ______One Possible Version:This_quotation_from_Jonathan_Lockwood_Huie_tells_us_that real friends can give us strength and hope when we are in trouble and real friends can benefit from each other. We need such friends who can point out our mistakes directly and who have the same life goals as us.Once I failed again and again in my math and lost interest in it, it was my best friend who encouraged me not to give up and offered help in time. With his kind and selfless help, I gradually caught up with others.So I say we need friends but what we most need is a friend that can enrich our life.2最近,某英语交流学习论坛提出一个话题“Should square dancing be forbidden?”并邀请网友参与讨论。

(完整word版)2018年高考英语作文预测

(完整word版)2018年高考英语作文预测

2018年高考英语作文预测一.你们学校要去博物馆参观。

请根据以下要点用英语写一份广播通知。

1.10 月1 日,早上7 点出发,校门口集合;2.了解城市的过去和现在;3. 参观城市发展图片; 4.参观后讨论,每人写一篇作文。

Attention please, everyone.I have an announcement to make. We will pay a visit to the museum on October 1st. I think we will be interested in it. In the course of the visit, the guide will give us an account of the past and the development of the city. We will see many pictures there. I ' msure that we can learn a lot. After the visit, we' llhave a discussion in groups and each of us must write a composition. We are to start out as early as 7:00 am. We must gather on time at the school gate.That ' s all.hTanks. 二.假如你是李华,请按照如下提示给酷爱中国书法的外教Mr. Black 写一封信,邀请对方参加你校举办的书法展( calligraphy exhibition )1.展出时间:下周一到下周五; 2.展出地点:学生活动中心5 楼; 3.展出作品;( 300多幅师生作品) Dear Mr. Black,How are things going with you?I know that you ' re crazy about Chinese calligraphy, which has a long haisntodry plays an important role in Chinese culture. You always enjoy practicing Chinese calligraphy in your spare time. It so happens that our school will hold a calligraphy exhibition. I am honored to inform you that the exhibition is to be held from Monday to Friday next week.The calligraphy works collected from both students and teachers amount to more than 300. All the works will be exhibited on the fifth floor of the Student Activity Center. We want to invite you to have a taste of Chinese culture if you are available. I ' mconvinced that it will leave you a deep impression and make your visit worthwhile.Your presence is requested!Yours ,Li Hua 三:假如你是高中学生李华,你的网友Bill 发来电子邮件询问你上周末的活动情况。

2018年高考英语作文预测

2018年高考英语作文预测

2018年高考英语作文预测假如你叫李华,某国外网站邀请你发帖分享你的学习方式。

要点如下:1.广泛阅读;2.多听讲座;3.其听力方式(自拟)。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear friends,I’d like to share my unique learning style with you,________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li HuaDear friends,I’d like to share my unique learning style with you,which I hope can be beneficial.First of all, read extensively. While reading, I take detailed notes, which benefits me a lot. Secondly, to broaden my horizons I spare no effort to attend as many lectures as possible, which greatly enrich my experience. What’s more, I always combine what I have learned from books with that learned in lectures. Last but not least, I prefer studying independently, thus practicing my ability to analyze tough problems.Of course, not everyone learns in the same way. Remember that developing your own learning style really counts.Yours,Li Hua。

2018年高考英语作文热点预测及优秀范文精选5篇

2018年高考英语作文热点预测及优秀范文精选5篇

2018年高考英语作文热点预测及优秀范文精选5篇With the release of the two-child policy。

there has been a huge change in China's family planning policy。

which has been in place for decades。

This has also attracted great n from all walks of society。

Some people believe that having a second child has advantages。

___ it ___ children in the family。

In my view。

the n of the two-child policy is necessary.The one-child policy has been in effect for many years。

and it has brought about many benefits。

such as cing the pressure on resources and improving the quality of life for ___。

it also has some drawbacks。

such as the aging of the n and the ___ of the two-child policy can help to ___.Of course。

the n of the two-child policy also requires ___ us factors。

such as the economic ___。

with the improvement of people's living standards and the development of society。

2018年英语高考作文预测:WealthHealth_作文750字_高考作文预测_

2018年英语高考作文预测:WealthHealth_作文750字_高考作文预测_

2018年英语高考作文预测:Wealth Health最近,你班同学展开了一场讨论,主题是:wealth & health。

请你根据下表提供的信息,写一篇100词左右的文章,介绍一下你们讨论的情况。

一些人认为财富更重要,一些人认为健康更重要1.没有钱万万不行2. 想办法多挣钱1. 健康是本钱2. 要爱惜身体个人看法:更看重健康。

身体不好,钱再多也无济于事。

wealth & healthwhich is more important, wealth or health? different people have different opinions.some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing. in order to accumulate more money they can do anything. however, other people regard health as more important. once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.as far as i am concerned, i love wealth, but i value health more. everybody wants to live a happy life. so they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? without health money becomes meaningless.in my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy. so, just do our best to keep healthy.。

最新2018高考英语作文全国卷预测范文6篇

最新2018高考英语作文全国卷预测范文6篇

最新2018高考英语作文全国卷预测范文6篇2018高考英语作文篇1Haze is air pollution in which is mixed up with dust, smoke and other dry particles ,and it obscure the clarity of the sky and interacts with the natural environment.This kind of air pollutant come from a variety of natural and manmade sources. Natural sources can include windblown dust, and soot from wildfires. Manmade sources can include motor vehicles, and industrial fuel burning, and manufacturing operations. The one of the main cause that touches off haze is manufacturing operations. Many factories were over measure produced the smog that had over the standard and the smog seriously influence the air become air pollution.The components that make up haze may have negativeeffect on people's health especially that of the children and the elderly. Also not excluded are those who have certain diseases such as asthma, allergy, and pneumonia and lung disease. Workers working in the open air have a high risk in their health.One of effective solutions to help eliminate haze is to make some chemistry changes during the manufacturing process,so it could reduce harmful emissions which are produced by manufacturing operations2018高考英语作文篇2以"My Weekend Housework"为题写一篇短文,谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活,并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活。

高考英文作文范文2018

高考英文作文范文2018

高考英文作文范文20181. Well, let me tell you about my favorite hobby, which is cooking. I just love getting in the kitchen and experimenting with different ingredients to createdelicious dishes.2. Speaking of food, I have a serious sweet tooth. I can never resist a slice of cake or a scoop of ice cream. Desserts are my weakness, and I have no shame in admitting it.3. When it comes to music, I'm all about hip-hop. The beats, the lyrics, the attitude – it just speaks to me in a way that no other genre does. I could listen to hip-hop all day, every day.4. Traveling is another passion of mine. There's nothing like exploring new places, immersing myself in different cultures, and trying new foods. I believe that travel is the best way to broaden your horizons and openyour mind.5. As for sports, I'm a huge fan of basketball. I love watching games, analyzing plays, and cheering on myfavorite teams. Basketball is fast-paced, exciting, and never fails to keep me on the edge of my seat.6. In my free time, I enjoy reading. There's something magical about getting lost in a good book and escaping to another world. Whether it's fiction, non-fiction, or poetry, I always find solace in the pages of a book.。

2018年高考英语作文预测押题

2018年高考英语作文预测押题

2018年高考英语作文预测押题英语作文是英语考试中最重要的一个题目,高考是人生一场很重要的考试,你想知道今年有哪些预测高考英语作文吗?下面是店铺给大家精心挑选的高考英语作文,希望大家喜欢!供你参考和阅读!2018年高考英语作文篇1以约120个字对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论1. 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法2. 你的父母和亲人是如何鼓励孩子的3. 你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习范文:From where I stand , I am not in favor of encouraging kids with cash just because they have got good marks .My parents used to encourage me like this. Whenever I made progress in studies , they bought me my favorite books ,which not only motivated me to learn ,but also helped me get along well with my studies.To get kids motivated to learn , I think we should not treat every child in the same way. To some students , oral praise is essential . Don’t save the praise for only the top sco re. If possible, involved other adults in praising them . However, this method may not work well with other kids. Maybe what is more important to them is to water a movie or go on a trip together with their parents . It just depends.2018年高考英语作文篇2假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”,请根据下表所提示的情况,写一篇发言稿:自己学习英语的情况1.英语学习的目的2.英语学习的方法3.课外自学的途径对教学的建议提出2至3条建议Dear teachers and classmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I’m interested in English , and hope to be an interpreter in the future . Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language ,just like bricks in a building .I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class , I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio . Besides, I’ve a lot from the internet and other sources.Now , I ‘d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting and magazines and give us more free time to read them . Finally, I suggest we have more English activities ,such as English contest and festivals.Thank you for your listening.2018年高考英语作文篇3Who will Support our Old?Supporting the old has long been both a duty and a virtue for young people in China. However, some dissatisfactory facts have been observed in recent years. In a family with as many as five grown-up children, the aged mother was kicked around like a football among them, each of whom tried to escape as much responsibility as possible. In another family where there're two old couples, each having only one child, the young couplecomplained a lot about having to feed seven mouths with their two salaries only. It is obvious that the traditional family-based supporting system no longer fits modern people's greatly diversified ideology and living style.There's one solution that has been both advocated and practised by sociologists, namely the society-based supporting system. In this system, every working person must pay a small amount of his income to the government, and when he retires, more money will be paid back to him each month in term of pension. Meanwhile, children are exempted from the obligation to provide for the aged. Such method can ensure every old man with reliable economic income, whether he is childless or not and regardless of his children's morality.Are things totally settled? Not so easily. Money isn't almighty and cannot assure happiness. Old people have psychological needs like care, love and communication that can hardly be met through the society-based system. Young people should still spend more time with their parents, supporting them both economically and mentally.。

高考英语作文全国卷预测2018年高考英语作文全国卷2

高考英语作文全国卷预测2018年高考英语作文全国卷2

高考英语作文全国卷预测2018年高考英语作文全国卷2高考英语作文全国卷预测高考英语作文全国卷预测高考英语作文篇1 打篮球I like to play basketball very much, so when I went to middle school, I joined the basketball team. 我很喜欢打篮球,因此当我上初中的时候,我加入了篮球队。

Last week, our team had a match, we were against another school, all of us were so excited , because this was the first time for us to play. 上周,我们队有一场比赛,是对阵另一个学校,我们都感到很兴奋,因为这是我们第一次大比赛。

When half match time went, we lagged behind, our team leader called us together and told uswe must get united, so that we could have the chance to win. 当比赛半场过去了,我们处于落后,队长把我们叫在了一起,告诉我们必须要团结,这样才有机会赢。

Then we played hard and cooperated so well, we won the game at last, it was so amazing, unionis strength. 我们打得很拼命,配合得很好,最后终于赢得了比赛,真是美妙极了,团结就是力量。

高考英语作文篇2 愿望The year of 2016 has gone, the new year has come, I make many wishes in this year. 2016年已经过去了,新的一年已经到来,我在今年许了很多愿望。

2018年高考英语作文热点话题预测及优秀范文精选汇总

2018年高考英语作文热点话题预测及优秀范文精选汇总

2018年高考英语作文热点话题预测及优秀范文精选汇总话题一:写人篇★范文1. My best friend My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. H e is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him.★范文2. The Teacher I Like BestOf all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.he had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.★范文3. My Chinese TeacherOf all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher,Ms Sun is thirty-six years old and she is neithertall nor short. 折works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we're getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.话题二:毕业,回忆,感恩,幸福 ,助人为乐,烦恼,压力1.回顾初中三年成长过程,你一定有很多感受,从学习,生活,爱好等方面作出自我评价( 毕业回顾评价)★范文I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk toothers. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese. But my math and physics are a little weak. I think I will try my best to learn them well. I hope I can studyin No.1 High School.2.初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。

2018高考英语书面表达预测及范文

2018高考英语书面表达预测及范文

2018高考英语书面表达预测及范文2018高考英语书面表达预测及范文(一)考点预测预测一话题与考生的生活实际、社会热点内容密切相关。

书面表达提供的写作情景比较真实,写作的话题与考生的校园生活、成长经历、社会热点及科技动态等内容密切相关,关注考生的情感、态度和价值观,能够充分考查考生的独立思考能力和创新精神。

预测二书面表达的词数仍将保持100词左右。

虽然部分地区的高考试卷要求考生写一篇120词左右的英语作文,考生要在文章的结构、段落的衔接和过渡等方面花费更多的心思和笔墨。

预测三写作的开放度可能加大。

高考英语书面表达写作要求也呈现了开放的趋势,这使考生的写作内容受到的限制减少,并为考生提供了一个更加自由和开放的写作空间。

(二)考点定位+答题技巧高考英语书面表达命题目的就是要测试学生运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能来表达思想和进行交流的能力。

可以说这种题型最能检验出学生综合运用英语语言能力的高低。

考点1 提纲作文☞命题特点1.命题常以短文提示、要点提示和表格提示三种形式呈现。

2.写作内容被以提纲的形式分割成独立的信息块,所给的提纲既体现了文章的层次,又规定了各段的大体内容,为考生提供了写作思路。

3.考查形式以电子邮件、报道、通知、日记等为主,内容贴近学生的生活实际。

☞写作策略一、写作步骤和技巧1.写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,认清题目和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、内容以及文体。

2.每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次,段落的展开围绕提纲的中心和内容,不能偏离,也不能任意增减。

3.提纲只是对文章的提示和概括,不是主题句。

还需要根据提纲的性质,写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子,使之成为主题句,然后围绕主题句进行扩展。

4.收集材料支持主题句。

材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。

应当注意的是,所选材料要与文章的主题相符,即要“扣题”,也要具有典型性,能充分说明问题。

在有多个例证的段落中,还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。

(完整word版)2018高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总,推荐文档

(完整word版)2018高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总,推荐文档

2018高考英语作文真题及满分范文全汇总【2018·全国Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。

请你回复邮件,内容包括:1. 到达时间;2. 合适的礼物;3. 餐桌礼仪。

注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】Dear Terry,How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【2018·全国Ⅱ卷】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:1. 短片内容:学校的发展;2. 放映时间、地点;3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

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2018年高考英语作文预测及优秀范文精选40篇201*年已接近尾声,还记得年初你为自己定下的小目标吗?不知你是否实现了你的小目标?发一个微信朋友圈来回顾一下吧(文中请不要出现真实的校名人名)。

你的朋友圈文字内容需包括:1. 你的201*年度小目标;2. 你为实现年度小目标所作的努力;3. 你实现(或没有实现)年度小目标的经验总结。

范文:resolution for 201* was that I should be able to communicate My new year’swith foreign people in English. To achieve this goal, I had asked my English teacherfor help. According to her suggestions, I made up a plan.Firstly, I started with simply reading English articles and found many pronunciation errors in my reading after listening to the video tape of its recording.Then, I tried to learn phonetics and practice one syllable after another again and again.I started with a single word, then a phrase, a sentence, a paragraph and finally thewhole passage. After 3-month practice, I was able to read an article fluently withoutmaking any mistakes in pronunciation. I felt happy. Next, I practiced my listening.By listening to a passage four times, I required myself to take it down withoutspelling errors or any information blank. Last but not least, I installed an app calledShanbei Oral English on my phone to practice both my listening and speaking. Itlike having conversations with a robot. I had to understand w hat it said to me andanswer its questions accordingly. After practicing for almost 8 months, I had my firsttalking session with an American teacher in our school. I was proud of myself.What I have learnt from this experience is something as a saying goes: no painno gain. Though the process of learning could be dull and tiring, it’sworth all theefforts after I achieved my goal. Even if I didn’t, it’s still a valuable p阅卷作文8+8+4=20The wonderful year of 201* is drawing to an end. I remember that I set an annualgoal to keep fit at the beginning of 201*, since staying healthy is crucial to ensuringmy study, thus better prepare myself for Gaokao.To achieve my goal of keeping fit, here are some efforts I’ve taken th year. On the very first day of 201*, I downloaded a fitness app called Keep. Following the fitness instructions the app offered, I exercised every other night beforeI go to bed. Also, I did some research into the daily nutrition I need in order to stayhealthy both physically and mentally, after which I devised a moderate dieting plan.Apart from the above, I’ve invited family members and friends to join me so that we can encourage each other and exchange fitness experience.So far, the record shown on my fitness app shows that I’ve done well th reaching a record high of 200 training times in total. Although at times I felt likegiving up because of too much study pressure and limited time, I’m glad to my plan. It seems to me that anything is possible if I throw in all of my energy and passion, and most of all, perseverance. Some rules apply to study. So I hope I willkeep such passion and strength to do my best in the coming 2018.(23* words)点评:1.文本结构段落清晰,符合作文题目要求。

1)第一段明确告知自己的年度小目标是什么;2)第二段有总起句,段落中有清晰的标记词 (如also, apart from) 告知读者自己所做的努力,且努力的行为都非常具体。

3)第三段对经验的总结可以再和第二段的三个努力匹配些, a. 借助科技的力量(app);b. 借助科学的力量(did research into the daily nutrition);c. 组团抗击惰性。

2.在语言表达能力比较强的基础上,可以考虑文字的进一步精炼。

是否有“废话”?字数建议不超过200(此学生语言能力强,中等学生160左右即可)。

精练而准确的表达也是思维和表达功力的体现。

*+8+4=19Greeting from the end of 201*! It’snow the time to conclude our yearly goalsagain. On the new year’s eve, I set up two goals for the year: to getter better grades and to lose weight and I’m proud to announce that I’ve accomplished the f To realize the goals, much effort has been put in throughout the year. First of all, I changed my attitudes towards various subjects. I’ve spent more time on them might already know, and try to find my own strength and weaknesses and strivedhard to overcome my weak points. In addition, I’ve found my own pace of stu which I regard as the most precious reward of this year’s effort. Secondly, take a more active part in sports this year. I took every opportunity I have to exercise,and take sports lessons at a gym near my apartment. Though I haven’t lose much weight, I feel myself much healthier than ever before.To conclude how I’ve made these progress, here comes my years motto: no pains, no gains. No matter how hard it might be, stick to the goal and never quit, and neverdream of shortcuts to success. So if you want to achieve something, just try hard, nomatter what the result might be, you’re surely going to benefit from the process.Good luck everyone, and I wish you a happy, successful new year in 2018! (241words)点评:1,有读者意识,明确知晓是在朋友圈发的年度总结,所以开头结尾很应景。

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