高一短文改错练习及答案

高一短文改错练习及答案
下面各短文中有10 处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

每句最多两处错误。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）戈胖。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

1. 短文改错
Dear sir,
I'm glad to recommend （推荐） my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming was born in July 15, 1974 in Beijing. He
graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics
and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered Beijing University study
physics. After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his
excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in last year. He is now in good health but would like to make
contributions to our country ．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation ．
Looking forward to receive your early reply!
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
2. 短文改错It seems that there are a larger number of
beggar in the streets than there used to be. I don't know how we should help them or not. Once I gave some
money to a beggar who looks poor. However, minutes late, I saw him bought some cigarettes. It really shocked at
me. In my opinion, anyone who work hard can make a living. I ' m afraid that givimngontheeymisn 'betst way to
help them. Maybe the government can take some action to helping them. Anyway, if they want to live a better life,
they should learn to depend on ourselves.
3. 短文改错My father go fishing alone every Sunday. This morning when we were got up , it was fine. Father
decided to go fishing, so mother stopped him,said that it was going to rain according to the weather forecast. She
asked him to put off his raincoat, but he did not take her advices. When he got to the river, it was cloud. Soon the
rain began to fall heavily and he was caught in it. After she got home , he was wet through. “ Did you catch
asked m some fish?
mother. “ No, but I caught bad cold, ” he answered.
4. 短文改错While studying in Britain, I stayed with a British family. I got to learn about the life
of common people here. I took lots of courses, included English literature, and the history of
Britain. During my stay, I had visited many libraries and museums and I traveled to several
British cities as well. With this way, I experienced part of British culture. This was really
enjoyable and unforgettable experience, that helped me in many ways. Firstly, I learned to
make some decision by myself. Secondly, I got to know many about the differences between
Britain and China. Final, I made many friends there and had my English improve.
5. 短文改错Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy. She was upsetting about the news herself. In the spring, Maria
mother had said Maria might be allowed bring a friend along on the family two-week vacati on
at the beach. Since the n, Maria and Freddy had bee n doing nothing and planning all the
thing they would do together. By the time August had arrived, Maria ' s mother had total
forgotte n her promise. Whe n Maria rem in ded her, she said that she was sorry but that it would n ' t be eno ugh room for Freddy because Maria cousin, Theresa, would be going to the shore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria ' s house.
6. 短文改错Once upon a time there was a boy who fond of reading. However, he was very poor to buy any books. That was the reas on that he had to borrow books from a rich man who had a lot of books. The boy knew clearly that he has to finish read ing the books he had borrowed and retur n it to the owner as soon as possible. A rich man, who was ready to lend any of his book to the boy, read few of his own books. With time going on, the boy read a lot but fin ally became a famous writer in his time. Though the rich man had such many books, he remained a man with little kno wledge because of he seldom read his books.
7. 短文改错
Yang Li, a five-year-old girl livi ng n ext door to me, very clever. Because she is n ot old eno ugh to go to the school, she ofte n asks me to teach herself to read, write and draw. She studies hardly and soon she lear ns a lot. One eve ning last month I was doing my En glish homeworks whe n she came to my house. She asked me how I lear ned En glish. d fin “ Yogliwoal bridge for so
much kno wledge, ” I said. She the n wan ted to lear n En glish, either. She has lear ned many En glish words so far but her pare nts are very grateful to me.
8. 短文改错
When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two American . I became their guide. First, we went to the Shouxi River . They wan ted to look around the river by theboat . After buy the tickets, we got into a boat . We went around seeing the beautiful sight . After that, we went shopping. The sellers couldn ' t spoke Erpisbgh it was very harder, I tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought some little things with their help . Next, we went to a small zoo but took somepictures . When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch . After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history .
9. 短文改错（满分10 分）One night, Mrs Riley, an elderly woman, was walking along a dark, London street. She was carry ing her han dbag in one hand and a plastic shopp ing bag in other. There was somebody else in the street except two youths. They were sta nding in a dark shop doorway. One of them was very tall in golde n hair. And the other was short and fat. The youths waited for a few moments, and then run quickly and quietly towards Mrs Riley. The tall youth held him from behind until the other youth tried to grasp her handbag. Suddenly, Mrs Riley
threw the tall youth over her shoulder. He crashed into the other youth and they all la nded on the gro und. Without speak ing, Mrs Riley struck them on the head with her han dbag, and walked calm away. The two surprising youths were still on the ground when Mrs Riley walked across the street towards a door with a lighted sig n above it. Mrs Riley paused, tur ned, smiled and en tered into the South London Judo Club.
10. 单句改错In recent years, dust storms take place more and more often in the north of Chinese. Here are some good way to have a good talk with your parents. During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life.
I was really exciting when I was offered the opportunity to go to Guangzhou for my work. The experience has shown that traveling by air is actually the safest way of make journeys. I wish to know anything more about the Chinese way of living.
The boy thought of a wonderfully idea. Please give me some advices.
I wonder at if you can tell me about it in your letter . Life in the twenty-first century will be very different with life today.
11. 短文改错There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train. They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows them enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return not only is cheaper but also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.
12. 短文改错（10 分）Dear Mr. Green,
I ' m Li Hua, a student whom you once teach spoken English. Now our school asks me invite you to be a spoken English teacher on the English Summer Camp during the summer holiday. Here is anything about the activity. The camp lasts from July, 20 and August 10, 2011. In the morning, you ' ll give three spoken English classes so you are expecting to prepare different topic to communicate with students. In the afternoon, there
'mreain outside activities such as having some picnics and visit parks and museums, etc. I hope you will accept the invitation even if you have free time.
13. 单句改错
1. She got quite angry, think that she had to do this job every day.
2. At the end of the third period, the Australians were winning to eight points.
3. There are a lot of factors that makes innovation possible.
4. We ' re practising even much more regularly and we ' re training harder than ever.
5. The biggest secret about inventing is anybody can do it!
14.短文改错My classmate, Hanks, have been sick in hospital for a week. Yesterday our class decided send him some flowers and asked me to buy the flowers. I have had a hard time get them since then. I went to town immediate after class yesterday afternoon only to found the flower shop there already closed. So I returned with nothing. I called it many times at this morning. But the line was always busy. While I finally got through at noon, a lady said she was a new hand and could not tell me the prices. Luckily, I have classes this afternoon, but I am about to go to town again. I must get the flowers for Hanks today.
15.短文改错Last year my school planned to set up the football team. I was exiciting about the news though I was a football fan. I entered for it, only to be told that I was too fat. However, they said there will be a test three mon ths later. If I could lose weight successful, I would be admitted. So I decided get up early every morning to do exercise. It was difficulty for me to get up early, especially in win ter. I made a great effort to get up on the first few day, but I did not get up the follow days. At last I failed in. How I regret no w! If I had con ti nued with my exercise, I would have achieved my goal and become a member of our school team now.
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for me to get up early, especially in win ter.
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