作文：环保生活(图片作文)

作文 （6 ） （满分25分）

新一届世界气候大会于2009

年12月7日在哥本哈根开幕。此

次大会被命名为“拯救人类的最后 一次机会”。作为中学生，我们能

做些什么？请你结合漫画内容， 给21世纪报写一篇文章。内容

应包括：

描述漫画内容；

倡议低碳生活，从我做起：

①多步行、骑自行车或尽量选用公共交通工具；

②自备购物袋；

③你的其他做法和思考。

注意：词数: 120—150，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）；[来源:学|科|网Z|X|X|K]

参考词汇: 低碳生活 (low carbon living), 北极熊(polar bear)

A Call for Action

Climate change has threatened our lives, and animals are no exception.

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气候变暖啦，我们来到中国，装成大熊猫，哈哈……

作文评讲：（6 ）

I.改正下面句子中的错误：

1.Due to climate is changing , the polar bear will lose their habitates.

2.As can be seen in the chart that two polar bears will go to china to find a suitable place to live in .

3.There are variety of things that can be done .

4.All in all , we should try our best and get down to protect our home from being destroyed .

5.we have to think about the problem and the approach to solve it .

6.I appeal everyone to live a low carbon living .

7.Climate is changing ,whick make influence to people and animals .

8.Some advise are as follows .

9.We had better go on feet or by bike .

10.As the car put out a lot of waste gas ,we can walk on foot.

范文： A Call for Action

Climate change has threatened our lives, and animals are no exception. As we can see from the picture, polar bears are forced to leave their habitats for China(被迫离开栖息地中国) due to（由于）global warming. In order to survive, they have to pretend to be pandas.

After seeing the picture , we, the youth, should not sit back and watch.(不能坐视不管) We demand that something should be done（使用了虚拟语气）. Low carbon living is of great significance. We can walk, ride a bike or take public transport and take a shopping bag while shopping. Meanwhile, planting trees should be put on list.

As long as（只要）there is the possibility of saving our planet, we should spare no effort（不遗余力）. If we make contributions to protect our environment ,our effort will pay off （我们的努力会得到回报）.

II．.佳句欣赏：

1.It results in global warming .

2.Students as/though we are , we can make contributions to it .

3.The picture aims to draw people`s attention to the climate change.

4.It i s a shock to me /There are some tips as follows

5.Therefore , it is a must for humans to spare no effort to build up a harmonious society .

6.To our delight,a meeting aiming to discuss the climate change was held On December 7th,2009./A more haromonious society that we`re looking forward to is bound to come soon .