2020中考英语作文预测+作文评分标准

2020中考作文预测
书面表达评分标准
(一）评分原则
1.本题总分20分，按5个档次给分；
2.评分时，先根据文章内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后以档次的要求进行衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分；
3.短文词数80左右，若词数少于60词，从所得分中减去2分；
4.如果书写较差，以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次；
5.鼓励体现真情实感和紧扣主题的真实发挥。

对于抄写教材原文，或者抄写试卷中阅读理解、完形填空等原文情况的，若有一句或几句出自本人自己的语言，可适当给分；只要没有自己的语言，不得分。

(二）各档次评分标准
档次（分数）
评分标准
第一档
很好地完成了规定的写作任务。

中心突出，结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯，具有很好的交际(17-20分）意义。

使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇，语法和词汇错误极少，格式正确，书写规范。

第二档
较好地完成了规定的写作任务。

中心较突出，结构较为完整，语句完整，意思清楚，具有一定的交际(13-16分）意义。

语法和词汇错误极少，格式基本正确，书写基本规范。

第三档
基本上完成了规定的写作任务。

能够围绕中心意思表达，但结构欠完整，少数语句不通顺，意思基(9-12分）本清楚。

语法结构和词汇错误较多，格式基本正确，书写基本规范。

第四档
未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。

只包含少数内容要点，结构不完整，多数语句欠完整，意思不够(5-8分）清楚。

语法结构和词汇错误较多，格式基本正确，书写欠规范。

第五档
未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。

只写出个别要点，结构不完整，多数语句不完整或意思不明。

语(1-4分）法和词汇错误很多，书写欠规范。

不得分（0分）未能传递给读者任何信息；内容与主题无关。

Passage1
无奋斗，不青春！某英文网站正在开展以“越努力越幸福（The Harder I Work,the Happier I Will Be)”为主题的征文活动。

请你用英文写一篇短文投稿。

谈谈你在初中生活中的一个小目标是什么，你是如何努力去实现的，以及你从中学到了什么。

内容提示：(1)What was your goal and what did you do for it?
(2)What have you learned from your experience?
要求：(1)中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80左右。

范文：
It's well-known that there's no shortcut to success but hard work. One of my experiences helps me realise the truth again
As I entered Grade 9, I found I had difficulty in speaking English freely. Therefore, I decided to improve my oral English by taking the following steps. First, I kept on practising listening to English and reading aloud to improve my pronunciation. Second, I tried to read English books from which I could learn many native expressions. Although it was quite challengeable, I managed to develop it into a habit. Thanks to my great efforts, I have made greater progress and I can speak better English now.
The experience has made me realise the great value of hard work. I not only feel a sense of achievement but also find the pleasure in hard work. I believe the more hard-working I am, the much happier I will be.
Passage2
在我们的生活和学习中，难免会遇到这样或那样的问题，例如：与父母、同学的相处，平衡爱好和学习的关系，某个学科的问题……在这过程中，你是怎样通过解决问题而不断成长，最终变得越来越自信的呢？请以“Growing up”为题目与同学们分享你的经历。

内容提示：(1)What was your story?
(2)What have you learned from it?
ta stort svorl esinagetoo amay li . a
要求：(1)中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
(3)词数80左右。

Growing up
As I came to junior high school, the relationship between my father and I was not as easy as before. One day, when I got home after playing basketball, he shouted, "You always thinks about playing. What about your school work?"
Playing basketball was something that I was proud of and I could only play it on Friday! With a broken heart,
I told my mother everything. She told me to calm down and said, "Your father just wants you to be better. Try to have a heart to heart talk with him . " That was right . When I said to my father, " Dad , believe me . I have grown up and I know how to arrange my study. " He didn't say anything but smiled .
From this experience, I have realised that a first step to solve a problem is to understand.
Passage 3
地现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。

作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保
护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。

请以“My
Low—carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。

内容包括：
1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。

2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。

如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。

3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。

作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。

作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。

范文：
My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful. Passage 4
初中的学习生活就要结束了，迎接你的轻松的假期。

有的同学计划去旅游；有的安排走亲访友；有的想上网，看电视，听音乐；有的在娱乐休息之余打算读些书、参与一些实践活动；还有的……你想好了吗？请用英文写出你的假期计划。

词数80左右。

包括以下要点：（1）What are you going to do?
（2）How are you going to plan your activities?
（3）What do you expect your coming holiday will be like?
范文：
The summer vacation is coming. What are you going to do this vacation? I’m going to Beijing
this summer. I will visit some places of interest. For example, I want to visit the Great Wall with my parents because I want to be “a true man”. And I also want to visit the Tian’an men Square. I am looking forward to meeting the foreigners, because I want to practise speaking English with them.
Then I want to take part in the children’s pa lace. I want to learn to play the guitar. I want to be a good singer in the future. I think being a singer is very cool. My favorite singer is Micheal Jackson.
I hope I can have a happy vacation.
Passage5
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。

请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。

要点：(1)父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
(2)你对这些问题的看法；
(3)你与父母保持良好关系的做法。

范文：
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to mak e my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.
Passage 6
在即将告别母校的时刻，你想表达你对母校、老师、职员和同学的感恩之情。

请以The last moment held on to(难舍时刻)为题，用英语写出一篇短文。

The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, dear junior school. You’re a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you’ll be better and better. Thanks, dear teachers. You’re taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways. I’ll remember you forever. Thanks, our staff members. You’ve taken good care of us and helped us grow up. I hope you are happy all the time. Thanks, dear classmates. You’ve got on well with me just like sisters and brothers. Let’s always keep in touch with each o ther.
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you! Goodbye!
Passage 7
为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。

请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。

1.慎重交友
2.遇险报警
3.安全饮食
4. 其他(1-2点)
注意：(1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥
(2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
(3)词数80左右。

文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

范文：
How to keep safe?
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.
In short, safety must come first!
Passage 8
最近，学校健康调查小组做了一个调查，发现许多初中生的课业压力越来越大，导致睡眠时间也越来越少，请你从健康生活的角度谈谈你对这个问题的看法。

内容提示：(1)What do you think of the problem?
(2）What's your advice?
范文:
As we all know，because of the pressure of heavy schoolwork，many of us don’t get as much as we should do. And some of us even have difficulty in sleeping. This can make us nervous and slower at school.
In my opinion, we should take schoolwork in a relaxing way. If you are worried about it, you'd better ask your teachers, your friends or your parents for help. You may try to make a proper bedtime or get a book to read before sleep. Besides, doing some sports can also do good to you.
Get a good sleep tonight, and you will be at your best tomorrow.
Passage 9
你喜欢阅读吗？请你以“Reading---A good Habit”为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。

内容包括：
1. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。

2. 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。

3. 号召大家都读书。

Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now! Passage 10
为了丰富学生的课余生活，提高学生的身体素质，践行“阳光体育”的理念，学校决定开展丰富多彩的校园体育活动，现在需要了解一下学生们在运动方面的爱好。

请你以“My favourite sport”为题，写一篇短文介绍一下你最喜欢的运动。

内容提示：（1）What sports do you like best？
（2）How often do you do it？
（3）Why do you like it？
My favourite sport
I like sports very much, because sports are good for my health and keep my body stronger. My favourite sport is football.
I like playing it with my friends after school on the playground. We also play it at the weekend. We almost play football for about half a day every week. When I play football, I can not only make many friends, but also learn to work in teams. And it is so exciting that it makes me enjoy a lot. That’s why it has become m y favourite sport.
I have been very lucky, because playing football has brought me pleasure and health. Passage 11
随着互联网的发展，智能手机(smartphone)已被广泛使用。

我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。

请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇短文。

要求：
1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.词数：80个词左右（题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

范文：
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smartphones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.
While eating with family members or getting together with friends, some people are always using their smartphones. It can have bad effects on their relationships. Even worse, when some people cross the street, they still concentrate on their phones, which can be dangerous. And others stay up late at night playing games on their phones. I think it is really harmful to their health, studies or work.
In my opinion, we should make good use of smartphones and not depend on them too much. And I do believe that face-to-face conversation is more enjoyable than chatting online. Let's put down our smartphones and refuse to be phubbers from now on!
Passage 12
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。

在我们的日常生活中，会遇到各种困难，因此我们都需要他人的帮助；但是同时我们也要学会帮助他人。

其实帮助他人就是在帮助自己。

请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。

提示：1 举例说明你帮助别人或者别人帮助你的一件事；
2 谈谈你对这件事的感受
要求：1 开头已经给出，不计入总词数
2 文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
3 词数为80左右
范文1
As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. Therefore if someone helps us at the most difficult time, we will remember him or her with great thankfulness for a long time. Sam is such a boy.
When I was in Grade Two, I was quite weak in maths. Though I tried my best, I failed many times. I was so disappointed that I decided to drop it. At that time my classmate Sam offered to help me. He came over to my house and helped me go over the maths lessons. He kept teaching me until I understood every problem. Whenever I felt sad, he always encouraged me. With his help, I made a lot of progress in maths and began to get high marks in the exams.
范文2
As the saying goes, rose given，fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates，was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time，I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.
Passage 13
地球上所有动物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。

请你根据下表提示，以“Protect earth and love animals”为题写一篇英文演讲稿，在学校举办的“第一届英语节”活动中作专题
Protect earth and love animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech.
Humans share the same home with other animals. However, people cut down too many trees so that the area of the wetlands becomes smaller and smaller. And people are making more space for farms and buildings. As a result, animals don’t have enough places to live. Moreover, people kill animals in order to make money.
So the government should make laws to protect them. We students can tell people the importance of protecting animals. If we do nothing, soon animals will be in great danger.
Let’s do somethin g for them right now! Thank you very much.
Passage 14
没有什么比健康和生命更重要，这已成为所有人的共识。

学校英语园地打算围绕这一话题举办征文活动，希望了解同学们在疫情发生的时候是怎样保护自身安全的，并谈谈自身的体会。

内容提示：(1)What did you do to protect yourself?
(2) How do you feel now?
As we all know, nothing is more important than life and health. So it's important to protect ourselves in special situations.
Like everyone in our country, we suffered a lot from COVID-19. We couldn't go out to do what we used to do. What we could do was to stay at home. During the period, I chose mainly to stay at home. At the same time,
I made a plan to take exercise every day so that I could become stronger and have the energy to fight against the virus. Also, I tried every chance to find out ways to help people around me. Seeing they were healthy, I was satisfied as well. When I had to go out, masks and gloves were always needed. I never went to places that were crowded.
Although I couldn't go out most of the time , I had great fun reading as well as communicating with my friends online. So far, I've already known a lot about the proverb-Every coin has two sides. No matter what happens,we should stay calm and do what we can to improve.
Passage 15
抗击新冠肺炎期间涌现出了许多英雄，如钟南山院士、李兰娟院士、张继先医生等。

他们冲在抗击新冠肺炎第一线默默地保护着我们，他们是我们的英雄和榜样。

请以“The
一对一中考英语系列习题册——作文
Hero in My Heart ”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述疫情期间你心中的英雄以及他／她的故事。

要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。

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