话题 20 如何用英语描写科普知识与现代技术

话题20 如何用英语描写科普知识与现代技术Popular science and

modern technology

必走三步

据2007 年10 月25 日东方卫视报道，日本本田公司的机器人阿西莫在东京亮相，它展示了许多新的功能：跑步，上楼，端茶倒水等。请以“About Future Asimo”为题，谈自己对未来功能强大的智能机器人阿西莫的观点。应包含以下要点：

1．一部分人认为它会对人类有利，会使人类的生活更便捷，更丰富多彩；

2．一部分人认为它会给人类带来威胁，可能扰乱社会秩序，危害人类安全；

3．发表你自己对阿西莫利弊的看法。

要求：

1．可增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2．词数：100 左右。，

第一步：认真审题，提炼要点

一审体裁：本文属于议论文。

二审结构：本文可采用三段式，先介绍，然后陈述两种观点，最后发表个人的看法。

三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。

1．It was reported that...／the famous Japanese Honda Company／newly-made robot，Asimo in Tokyo

2．has more new functions／running／climbing stairs

3．bring us more advantages

4．become more convenient and colorful

5．become a threat to our mankind／disturb man's normal social order

6．in the control of Asimo

7．make good use of its advantages／try our best to avoid its disadvantages

第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句

1．It was reported that the famous Japanese Honda Company showed its newly-made robot，Asimo in Tokyo．

2．Asimo has more new functions，such as running，climbing stairs and so on．

3．Some people believe that it can bring us more advantages．

4．The whole world and our life will become more convenient and colorful．

5．Others think the future Asimo will become a threat to our mankind．

It can possibly disturb man's normal social order．

6．Human beings could be in the control of Asimo．

7．We should make good use of its advantages and try our best to avoid its disadvantages．第三步：补充修改，连句成篇

About Future Asimo

It was reported that the famous Japanese Honda Company showed its newly-made robot，Asimo in Tokyo．This time，Asimo has more new functions，such as running，climbing stairs and so on，which surprised many people．The future Asimo will be more intellectual．But what effect will Asimo have on human beings in the future?

Some people believe that it can bring us more advantages．The whole world and our life will become more convenient and colorful．However，others think the future Asimo will become a

threat to mankind because it can possibly disturb man's normal social order．What's worse，human beings could be in the control of Asimo．

In my opinion，we should make good use of its advantages．But for its disadvantages，we should try our best to avoid them，or make them controlled．In a word，the future Asimo a great assistant of human beings．

满分作文——满分说明文六

在信息时代，随着网络的发展，它在人们日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，上网人数与日俱增。其原因有以下几点：

1．是一种方便有效的交流工具；

2．由于激烈的竞争，电脑公司降价销售使得拥有电脑的人越来越多；

3．用处之多，如网上购物、网上聊天等，不胜枚举。

请根据以上内容用英语写一篇短文。

注意：

1．文章必须包括所有要点，但不得逐句翻译；

2．可以适当发挥，增补个人观点；

3．词数120 ～150

范文：

With the development of the Internet，the number of the people who go on the Internet has increased with great speed．

There are many reasons for Internet's rapid development in China．First，as a convenient source of information as well as an efficient means of communication，Internet becomes more and more useful in our study and work．Second，due to fierce competition computer companies have lowered the price of their products．The cheaper computers become，the more users there are．With computers，they can easily have access to the Internet．In addition，with the development of our society and the improvement of our living standard people in China are pursuing a more colorful life with Internet；some even often do shopping through the Internet．

Internet is also a sword with two edges．It brings about troubles for us．One common problem is computer viruses．They spread very quickly through the Internet and cause great damage to computer users．Another is crime committed through the Internet．As a result，we feel happy about the rapid development of Internet in China，but at the same time we should guard against its negative effects．

点评：

开篇总起，说明现象，统领全文。接着叙述其原因，最后还谈了网络的弊端。作者思维缜密，文章结构严谨，叙述得有条有理。语言方面，首句就用了定语从句和词组with great speed。第二段，用There are many reasons for Internet's rapid development in china．作为主题句，然后从三个方面进行了说明，用了First，Second，In addition，even 等过渡词，使说理富有逻辑性。第三段首句Internet is also a sword with two edges．起到了承上启下的作用。本文用词也符合科技文的特点，是一篇很好的文章。

必做练习

人们对于克隆持有不同的意见。请你用英语写一篇关于克隆的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的观点。