【英语】人教版英语中考英语书面表达经典

【英语】人教版英语中考英语书面表达经典

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．书面表达

在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。

注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（3）词数：80-100；

（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

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【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.

Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.

A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.

I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave

school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。

要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?

2. 变化是如何发生的?

3. 变化后有什么感受?

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【答案】The bigg est personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.

When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.

Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。