大学英语四级作文范例教学文案

Physical Training

1.保持健康非常重要；

2.据调查显示，大学生身体素质逐年在降低；

3.谈谈在大学校园里进行体育锻炼的重要性。

【范文】

Physical Training

As the saying goes, happiness lies first of all in health. It is certain that health is more valuable than wealth and wisdom. Only with good health a person can achieve and realize his goals.

Recently, surveys showed that physical quality of college students declines year by year. In order to better serve for socialist construction, college studens should realize the importance of physical training.

Firstly, physical training helps to improve and maintain health as movement is the source of life. Facing with heavy burden of study, the students without strong physique could not gain success. Secondly, it enables college students to form good habits. What’s more, it can strengthen psychological quality. All in all, physical training will not only guarantee college students to live longer, but also let them enjoy the years they do live.

【点评】

文章由谚语开头，指出健康的重要性。第二段结合调查结果，说明大学生身体素质不断降低。第三段从大学生的角度列出进行体育锻炼的重要性：体育锻炼帮助改善健康状况；能使大学生养成良好的生活习惯；巩固心理素质。

第一段中“Only…can…”涉及倒装句型，Only放在句首，句子部分倒装；第二段中socialist construction意为“社会主义建设”；第三段中movement is the source of life意为“运动是生命之源”；strong physique意为“强健的体魄”；form good habits意为“养成良好的生活习惯”；psychological quality意为“心理素质”；All in all意为“总而言之”。

Free Passage on Highway

1.目前，高速公路节假日免费通行；

2.有人叫好，认为减少了出行费用；有人反对，认为会导致节假日高速路拥堵；

3.谈谈你的看法。

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Free Passage on Highway

It is said that highway can be toll-free on the important holidays. Minibuses and motor vehicles with up to 7 seats can enjoy this privilege from 00:00 on the first day to 24:00 on the last during days in the Spring Festival, Tomb-sweeping Day, International Labor Day and National Day.

Some favor this rule because it will reduce traveling expenses by about 40 percent or even more. Meanwhile, some oppose it as it may cause traffic jams and other side effects.

As far as I am concerned, I think it is a piece of good news for private car owners. Not only does it undoubtedly make travelling easier during holidays,but also helps to stimulate economic growth. But it still needs improving. Local governments need to make out more detailed plans while taking everything into consideration. With improvements, the policy can be more sustainable.

【点评】

文章第一段详细说明了高速公路免费规则；第二段列举了人们对此的不同意见；第三段结合自己的观念阐述了对此规定的看法并提出建议。

第一段中toll-free 意为“免费的”，the Spring Festival指“春节”，Tomb-sweeping Day 指“清明节”，International Labor Day指“国际劳动节”，National Day指“国庆节”；第二段中Meanwhile表示连接，意为“与此同时”，traffic jams意为“交通阻塞”；第三段中As far as I am concerned意为“就我而言”，Not only…but also…意为“不仅……而且……”；taking everything into consideration意为“全盘考虑”。