高一英语必修四unit 1描写人物作文精品PPT 课件
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人教高中英语必修4Unit1Writing(共19张PPT)
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Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
5.Which of the following subject did more women begin to study after reading “ The Feminine Mystique” Except? A. Law B. Nursing C. engineering
Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
2.What decision did Betty make after her boyfriend didn’t want her to get an advanced degree? A. She left her boyfriend. B. She married her boyfriend. C. She moved to New York City with her boyfriend.
in the world D. How to be a successful woman
Reading Exercises
4.Which of the following is NOT suitable for Emma Waston? A.She is a hard-working girl. B.She thinks that men should control
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Emma waston —the perfect Role Model
Reading Exercises
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Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
5.Which of the following subject did more women begin to study after reading “ The Feminine Mystique” Except? A. Law B. Nursing C. engineering
Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
2.What decision did Betty make after her boyfriend didn’t want her to get an advanced degree? A. She left her boyfriend. B. She married her boyfriend. C. She moved to New York City with her boyfriend.
in the world D. How to be a successful woman
Reading Exercises
4.Which of the following is NOT suitable for Emma Waston? A.She is a hard-working girl. B.She thinks that men should control
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Emma waston —the perfect Role Model
Reading Exercises
人教高中英语必修4Unit1writing上课课件(15张)
品质和个性: kind, determined, gentle, considerate, optimistic, easygoing, warm-hearted, hard working, responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous,outspoken,humorous 爱好: be good at, have a gift for, be interested in, be fond of, be crazy about
傅园慧
information about her
1.傅园慧,1996年1月7日生于浙江杭州(21岁),中国女 子游泳队运动员。现就读于天津医科大学,2017年将正 式毕业。 2.尽管她学习游泳只是为增强体质,却能一直坚持训练, 从未放弃。 3.她的母亲是一名酒店员工,父亲是一家运输公司的职员。 4.成名于2011年的世界游泳锦标赛,在此次比赛中,她夺 得100米仰泳银牌. 5.2016年8月9日,在里约奥运会女子100米仰泳决赛中, 傅园慧以58秒95的成绩夺得铜牌。决赛后接受采访时, 傅园慧以招牌式的搞怪表情和逗趣表达,给大家留下了 深刻的印象 6.她说:人,都应该为自己而活。活出自己的风格与热度。
写作要点 1. 确定文体: 记叙文。以人物描写为主,
可辅以叙述和评论。
2. 主体时态: 文章以一般过去时或一般现
在时为主。
3. 主体人称: 第三人称。
4. 内容要点:(分段) ①人物简介; ②人物事迹或成就; ③人物评价及其他。
语言积累 背景: ... was born in / into a poor / rich family in ..., when ... was young, spent one’s childhood in ... 外貌: beautiful, pretty, good-looking, ordinary looking, handsome, strong, fat, thin
英语人教版必修4课件:Unit 1Section ⅣWriting
determined有决心的
thoughtful体谅的
considerate善解人意的
optimistic乐观的
generous慷慨大度的
good-mannered有礼貌的
warm-hearted热心肠的
kind-hearted心地善良的
inspiring具有感召力的
hardworking勤奋的
cooperative有合作精神的
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Section ⅣБайду номын сангаасWriting
素材积累
常用单词:
energetic精力充沛的
honest诚实的
selfless无私的
friendly友好的
forgetful健忘的
confident自信的
enthusiastic充满热情的
easy-going随和的
naughty淘气的
out-going外向的
Li Hua is an open-minded and optimistic boy and Liu Ping is very friendly and considerate.Li Hua loves sports,especially basketball and football while Liu Ping enjoys reading and listening to music.As it’s their first trip to the UK,they both feel a little anxious.
talented有才能的
well-educated受过良好教育的
strong-willed意志坚强的
responsible负责任的
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 writing 人物介绍 (共48张PPT)
有吸引力的 attractive 有责任心的
独立的
开放的
易相处的 easy-going 健康的
高Hale Waihona Puke 的热情的有吸引力的 attractive 有责任心的 responsible 独立的
开放的
易相处的 easy-going 健康的 healthy 高贵的
热情的
有吸引力的 attractive 有责任心的 responsible 独立的 independent 开放的
Born in Jiangsu in 1898, Zhou Enlai was a great revolutionist in China.
B.外貌,性格: 巧用with做定语 译:他又高又瘦,戴着一副眼镜。
He is tall and thin with a pair of glasses.
C. 教育经历:注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼 译:从北京大学毕业后,她继续深造,并获得了博士学位。
人物介绍
聪明的
谨慎的
诚实的
坏脾气的
出色的
健忘的
精力充沛的 考虑周到的
有决心的 勤奋的 心不在焉的 有志向的
聪明的 smart 诚实的
谨慎的 cautious 坏脾气的
出色的
健忘的
精力充沛的 考虑周到的
有决心的 determined 勤奋的
心不在焉的
有志向的
聪明的 smart 诚实的 honest 出色的
24. 获得第一个学位 25. 获得博士学位 26. 受到老师表扬
24. got one’s first degree获得第一个学位 25. get/obtain a doctor’s degree 获得博士学位 26. get/win praise from one’s teacher 受到老师表扬
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 Writing(共27张PPT)
4.成就&评价(achievements & evaluation)
Group-work:
Find out the expressions related to the following Chinese.
▪ Marie Curie, who made great contributions(贡 献) to the world of science, was regarded as one of the greatest women scientists in the world.
3.教育(education)
她大学毕业后,去了国外深造。 After she graduated from university, she went abroad for further education .
__A_f_te_r__g_r_a_d_u_a_t_i_n_g__fr_o_m___u_n_i_v_e_r_s_it_y__, she went abroad for further education
Tips:介绍概况,一个句型轻松搞定
Born in+ 地点+ on/ in +时间 , sb, 同位语(job),谓语+ …
Born in+ 地点+ on/ in +时间, sb, 同位语,谓语+ …
纳尔逊·曼德拉(Nelson Mandela)1918年出生,南 非总统于2013年12月6日 去世,享年95岁.
▪ 凭借优秀的表现 _w__it_h_e_x_c_e_ll_e_n_t _p_e_rf_o_r_m_a_n_ce ▪ 被认为__b_e_c_o_n_s_i_d_e_re_d__a_s_/b_e__re_g_a_r_d_e_d_a_s_ ▪ 高度评价____th_i_n_k_h_i_g_h_ly__o_f________ ▪ 做出巨大贡献_m_a_k_e__g_re_a_t_c_o_n_t_r_ib_u_t_io_n_s__to_ ▪ 致力于,把…奉献____d_e_v_o_te__…__to________ ▪ 被授予诺贝尔…奖 _b_e_a_w__a_rd_e_d__th_e__N_o_b_le__P_rize for…
英语作文介绍一个人(课堂PPT)
planes/swimming/playing football/collecting stamps What does she like? She likes riding a bike/playing the violin What’s your hobby? What does his hobby?
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1.Talk about somebody
Talk about somebody
介绍,谈论 某个人
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Who do you want to talk about?
Father mother sister brother grandfather Uncle aunt Teacher friend classmate yourself
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How do you go there?
I go to school on foot. He goes to work by bike/subway/plane. She goes to work by bus/taxi/car.
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Talk about somebody’s hobby
What do you like? I like learning English. What does he like? He likes making
I am tall and thin. He is short and fat. She is tall and fat. He is tall and strong. She has two big eyes. She has long hair. He is cute and friendly. He has glasses.
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For example
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1.Talk about somebody
Talk about somebody
介绍,谈论 某个人
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Who do you want to talk about?
Father mother sister brother grandfather Uncle aunt Teacher friend classmate yourself
5
How do you go there?
I go to school on foot. He goes to work by bike/subway/plane. She goes to work by bus/taxi/car.
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Talk about somebody’s hobby
What do you like? I like learning English. What does he like? He likes making
I am tall and thin. He is short and fat. She is tall and fat. He is tall and strong. She has two big eyes. She has long hair. He is cute and friendly. He has glasses.
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For example
人教高中英语必修4Unit1An introduction to a person (共15张PPT
【思路点拨】
本篇文章可以从一下几方面入手:
一.注意文章的时态和人称; 二.把握文章的结构 1.第一段:简单介绍宋庆龄。 2.第二段:详细介绍宋庆龄。 3.第三段:从客观和主观两方面对宋庆 龄进行评价。
Song Qingling
____S_o_n_g_Q_i_n_g_li_n_g_w_a_s_b_o_r_n_in_t_o_a_r_ic_h_f_a_m_i_ly__in__ _Sh_a_n_g_h_a_i _in_1_8_9_3_,_s_o_s_he__g_ot_a__g_oo_d__ed_u_c_a_ti_o_n_. A__n_d _sh_e_w__en_t_t_o_s_tu_d_y_i_n__th_e_U__S_A_. _____.
Homework
1.Rewrite your composition and recite it. 2.Review Unit 2 .
(Thank you for your coming.)
time )
评价)evaluation
A. 概况 (尽量用定语从句、非谓语、同位
语结构,使文ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้简洁,通顺)
Lin Qiaozhi was born in/into a poor family in 1901.She is a specialist in women’s diseases. 1)Li_n_Q__i_a_o_zh__i _w_h_o__is__a_s_p_e_c_ia_l_is_t_i_n_w__o_m__en__’s_d__is_eases wa_s__b_o_r_n_i_n_a__p_o_o_r_f_a_m__il_y_i_n__1_9_0_1_. _(定语从句). 2)Born in/into a ______ family in _____(地点) on _____(时间), XXX is a ________________.
人教高中英语必修4Unit1Descriptive Writing (共24张PPT)
• let’s analyze the sentences in the passage.
* 语法,句法高分tips
past participle • Born in Hangzhou on Dec 1,1991, Sun Yang,
a 1.98- meter boy with a shiny smile ,
评价
evaluation
E.评价(注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语/词组)
1)他给我们作出了榜样, 大家都赞扬他 He __s_et_s_u_s_a_g_o_o_d_e_x_a_m_p_l_e_____,so all the
people ______s_p_ea_k_s_h_i_g_h_ly_o_f________him.
concentrated on long-distance freestyle
swimming. appositive
structure of with
personal information
概况 (尽量用同位语结构/定语从句,使文章简洁,
通顺)
1) Born in p__la_c__e_ on ___t_i_m__e___, ________ is a
[ Practice ]
我的同学叫小明,他是一个自信的男孩,他 2001年4月21日出生在重庆綦江. My classmate is xiaoming. He was born in Qijiang, Chongqing City on April 21,1995. He was a clever boy.
pride and hopes on the future of swimming,
steps/ aspects
人教高中英语必修4Unit1Writing (共24张PPT)
Because of his hard work, he won the first prize in the English competition last week. Besides, he is willing to help his classmates who are in trouble. So all of them get along well with him and regard him as their good friend. What a perfect man he is!
It is +adj.+to do)
9.过渡语(however/besides/in addition/besides…)
人物简介的一般骤:
1. 概况 (basic information, including age, birth-place, profession ) 2. 外貌/性格/爱好 (appearance ,hobby)
Dance Academy ),主 修芭蕾(ballet)
4. 生平:主演多部电视剧( drama ) ,在2011
年主演步步惊心而闻名。
5. 评估:中国大陆最受欢迎的女演员之一,是我
的女神。
Let’s play a game Divide the class into 4 groups, and choose a picture and tell me your answers.
5.So all of them get along well with him well and regard him as their good friend. 6 What a perfect man he is.
连词so. 高级句型 get along with ,regard …as
It is +adj.+to do)
9.过渡语(however/besides/in addition/besides…)
人物简介的一般骤:
1. 概况 (basic information, including age, birth-place, profession ) 2. 外貌/性格/爱好 (appearance ,hobby)
Dance Academy ),主 修芭蕾(ballet)
4. 生平:主演多部电视剧( drama ) ,在2011
年主演步步惊心而闻名。
5. 评估:中国大陆最受欢迎的女演员之一,是我
的女神。
Let’s play a game Divide the class into 4 groups, and choose a picture and tell me your answers.
5.So all of them get along well with him well and regard him as their good friend. 6 What a perfect man he is.
连词so. 高级句型 get along with ,regard …as
人教高中英语必修4Unit1Writing (共19张PPT)
妈妈叫Nancy. 她是一个漂亮的女人. 她长发、大眼睛. 妈妈喜欢 运动和购物. 她是喜爱踢足球、练瑜伽. 她最喜欢的食物是冰淇 淋. 她也很喜欢狗和猫. My mother’s name is Nancy. She has long hair and two big eyes. My mother likes sports and shopping. Her favorite sports are football and yoga. And her favorite food is ice cream. She also likes dogs and cats.
2. 主题鲜明,重点突出。在人物描写 (characterization)中,具体生动的描 写能够“再现”人物的性格特点和思想 感情,使得读者印象深刻,甚至如见其 人。这就要求学生写作时精挑细选、合 理编排,围绕主线选取人物的典型事迹 和代表性话语等等,在有限的篇幅内进 行重点描写,实现效果的最大化。
评价: ( evaluation ) one of the best, most important, set a good example to, ... is the pride of ..., make great contributions to, be regarded as
1)她于1990年11月7日出生于广东湛江。 She was born in Zhanjiang, Guangdong Province on Nov.7,1990.
语言描写、动作描写、心理描写或神态 描写等等。
注意事项 此类短文虽属于描述性写作范畴,但
写作内容涉及描写、叙述和议论等多个方 面,对于中学生来说,在写此类英语短文 时应注意以下两点: 1. 介绍人物基本信息。正如本题题目所要
2. 主题鲜明,重点突出。在人物描写 (characterization)中,具体生动的描 写能够“再现”人物的性格特点和思想 感情,使得读者印象深刻,甚至如见其 人。这就要求学生写作时精挑细选、合 理编排,围绕主线选取人物的典型事迹 和代表性话语等等,在有限的篇幅内进 行重点描写,实现效果的最大化。
评价: ( evaluation ) one of the best, most important, set a good example to, ... is the pride of ..., make great contributions to, be regarded as
1)她于1990年11月7日出生于广东湛江。 She was born in Zhanjiang, Guangdong Province on Nov.7,1990.
语言描写、动作描写、心理描写或神态 描写等等。
注意事项 此类短文虽属于描述性写作范畴,但
写作内容涉及描写、叙述和议论等多个方 面,对于中学生来说,在写此类英语短文 时应注意以下两点: 1. 介绍人物基本信息。正如本题题目所要
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 Writing(共18张PPT)
decide to do 下决心做…… 11.try one’s best/ do one’s best/ with all one’s
energy 尽某人最大的努力
12.be good at /be skilled in / do well in/ have a good knowledge of/ be expert in 精通,熟练,擅长
The woman I admire most
Check list
structure Does it have a good opening, body and
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conclusion?
content Does the writer introduce the person clearly? 5
Does the writer explain why he/she admires 5
her?
language Are there any mistakes?
3
Does the writer use proper adjectives?
3
Does the writer use advanced expressions or 3
sentence patterns?
others Beautiful handwriting?
6.be intended to serve 旨在为……服务 7.what’s more 此外,而且 8.as far as I am concerned 就我而言 9.learn from 向……学习 10.make up one’s mind to do/ be determined to do/
What is the content oSf tthreubcotduyr?e
energy 尽某人最大的努力
12.be good at /be skilled in / do well in/ have a good knowledge of/ be expert in 精通,熟练,擅长
The woman I admire most
Check list
structure Does it have a good opening, body and
4
conclusion?
content Does the writer introduce the person clearly? 5
Does the writer explain why he/she admires 5
her?
language Are there any mistakes?
3
Does the writer use proper adjectives?
3
Does the writer use advanced expressions or 3
sentence patterns?
others Beautiful handwriting?
6.be intended to serve 旨在为……服务 7.what’s more 此外,而且 8.as far as I am concerned 就我而言 9.learn from 向……学习 10.make up one’s mind to do/ be determined to do/
What is the content oSf tthreubcotduyr?e
人教高中英语必修4Unit1writing(共15张PPT)
your show ost important, set a good example to, ... is the pride of ..., make great contributions to, be regarded as
related phrases: 1.仰泳运动员 backstroke swimmer 2. 里约奥运会the Rio Games. 3.赢得...奖牌win/ harvest a bronze/silver/gold medal 4.在100米仰泳比赛中in the 100-meter backstroke 5.增强体质build up one's body, 6.世届游泳锦标赛 world swimming championships 7.运输公司transport company 8.医科大学medical university 9.决赛finals 10. 以58秒95 with 58 seconds 95 11.招牌式的搞怪表情和逗趣表达trademark wacky
傅园慧
information about her
1.傅园慧,1996年1月7日生于浙江杭州(21岁),中国女 子游泳队运动员。现就读于天津医科大学,2017年将正 式毕业。 2.尽管她学习游泳只是为增强体质,却能一直坚持训练, 从未放弃。 3.她的母亲是一名酒店员工,父亲是一家运输公司的职员。 4.成名于2011年的世界游泳锦标赛,在此次比赛中,她夺 得100米仰泳银牌. 5.2016年8月9日,在里约奥运会女子100米仰泳决赛中, 傅园慧以58秒95的成绩夺得铜牌。决赛后接受采访时, 傅园慧以招牌式的搞怪表情和逗趣表达,给大家留下了 深刻的印象 6.她说:人,都应该为自己而活。活出自己的风格与热度。
人物介绍英语作文课件PPT全文
INTRODUCTION TO A PERSON
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人物介绍
• 出生 • 家庭背景 • 教育 • 生平经历 • 成就和评价
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写作步骤 概-貌-育-平-评
• 1、概况:age , sex , birth-place, background • 2、外貌:appearance ,character , hobby • 3、教育:education • 4、生平:big events in one’s life • 5、评价:evaluation
different experiment during his childhood.
• 非谓语(状语) • Born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933, Gaokun show great interest (was interested) in doing
different experiment during his childhood.
thing … 4) 比较: like, unlike, on the contrary, in contrast to, on the one hand…on the other hand, than, not
so…as…, as…as…, while, similarly, the former, the latter, some…others, one…the other, compared with…
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• 8)he is the pride of China.
• 他是中国的骄傲
• 9)His heroic story spread all over the city
• 他的英雄事迹传遍整个城市
• 10)make great contributions to…
1
人物介绍
• 出生 • 家庭背景 • 教育 • 生平经历 • 成就和评价
2
写作步骤 概-貌-育-平-评
• 1、概况:age , sex , birth-place, background • 2、外貌:appearance ,character , hobby • 3、教育:education • 4、生平:big events in one’s life • 5、评价:evaluation
different experiment during his childhood.
• 非谓语(状语) • Born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933, Gaokun show great interest (was interested) in doing
different experiment during his childhood.
thing … 4) 比较: like, unlike, on the contrary, in contrast to, on the one hand…on the other hand, than, not
so…as…, as…as…, while, similarly, the former, the latter, some…others, one…the other, compared with…
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• 8)he is the pride of China.
• 他是中国的骄傲
• 9)His heroic story spread all over the city
• 他的英雄事迹传遍整个城市
• 10)make great contributions to…
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7.我深受感动,禁不住热泪盈眶。(so ... that...)
I_was_moved_so_deeply_that_I_couldn't_help_bursting_into_t ears.
8.这就是我的父亲,一位简朴、诚实、勤劳的人。(such is ...倒装句式)
Such_is_my_father,_a_simple,_honest_and_hardworking_pers on.
literature. ③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people
surprising endings. ④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using
computers. ⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try
6.concentrate_on/focus_attention_on/devote_oneself_to/be_a bsorbed_in 集中精力
7.move/touch/affect 感动 8.burst_into_tears/be_filled_with_tears/cry_one's_eyes_out 热泪盈眶
句式 1.我的父亲五十多岁了,住在农村。(who引导定语从句) My_father,_who_is_already_in_his_fifties,_lives_in_the_count ryside. 2.尽管他受教育仅仅一年的时间,但他深刻意识到知识对 年轻人的重要性。(although引导让步状语从句,that引导宾语从 句) Although_his_schooling_adds_up_to_no_more_than_one_year, _he_is_quite_aware_that_knowledge_is_of_great_importance__to_ young_people.
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题目要求 假定下周日是父亲节,某英语刊物正在进行“我的父亲” 的征文活动。请按照下面所提供的主要内容,以“我的父亲” 为题,写一篇短文。 1.你父亲是个农村人,50多岁,没有文化,但他很关心你 的学习情况; 2.探望父亲的一次经历; 3.归纳总结父亲的品行。 注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作探究 能力提升区
[文体感知]
人物描写是记叙文的一种。是对人物外貌、个性以及主要 事迹和贡献进行描述。写作时其结构为:
首先,对此人进行简要的介绍,比如生平、事件、职业 等。
其次,挑选出此人一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写,要尽 可能的详细,因为这影响到人们对他的整体评价。
最后,对此人进行客观的评价,包括其人格、贡献以及闪 光点的评价。
[增分佳句]
1.介绍人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征: ①He had fair hair and blue eyes. ②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. ③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. ④Sue was a young woman who was studying art. ⑤He is a good-looking, kind-hearted man.
第四步 妙笔成篇
My Father My father, who is already in his fifties, lives in the countryside. Although his schooling adds up to no more than one year, he is quite aware that knowledge is of great significance to young people, as a result of which he attaches great importance to my study and always encourages me to study hard. To ensure that I can concentrate on my study, my father does whatever he can for me. Once he was badly ill and the doctor asked him to stay in bed for several days. When I got home to see him, I found him working in the fields. So deeply moved was I that I couldn't help bursting into tears. Such is my father, a simple, honest and hardworking person.
5.有一次他病重,大夫让他在床上休息几天。(主谓结构)
Once_he_was_badly_ill_and_the_doctor_asked_him_to_stay_i n_bed_for_several_days.
6.我回家看望他时,我看到他在地里干活。(when引导时 间状语从句)
When_I_got_home_to_see_him,_I_found_him_working_in_th e_fields.
contribution.
2.用to ensure+that宾语从句改写句4
To_ensure_that_I_can_concentrate_on_my_study,_my_father_ does_whatever_he_can_for_me.
3.用so+adj./adv.置于句首引起倒装改写句7 So_deeply_moved_was_I_that_I_couldn't_help_bursting_into_ tears.
第三步 句式升级 1.用as a result of which引导非限制性定语从句把句2和句3 合为一句
Although_his_schooling_adds_up_to_no_more_than_one_year, _he_is_quite_aware_that_knowledge_is_of_great_importance_to_y oung_people,_as_a_result_of_which_he_attaches_great_importance _to_my_study_and_always_encourages_me_to_study_hard.
3.他非常重视我的学习,鼓舞我努力学习。(主谓结构) He_attaches_great_importance_to_my_study_and_always_enc ourages_me_to_study_hard. 4.父亲为我竭尽所能以确保我全身心学习。(whatever引导 宾语从句,in order that引导目的状语从句) My_father_does_whatever_he_can_for_me_in_order_that_I_ca n_concentrate_on_my_study.
our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
3.介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价: ①He became famous for his newly theory. ②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. ③We regard him as our model. ④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
[写作训练]
假设你校英语刊物开设的专栏Women of great achievements 向同学们约稿。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文来介绍世界著名 的天主教慈善工作者、1979年诺贝尔和平奖获得者特蕾莎修女 (Mother Teresa of Calcutta):
1.出生于1910年8月27日;一生致力于在各地帮助穷人、 病人,特别是印度的;
第一步 审题谋篇 一、审题 1.确定体裁:本文为人物描写; 2.确定人称:本文人称应用第一人称; 3.确定时态:本文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
二、构思 第一部分:简要介绍父亲的情况:年龄、所受教育、重视 知识等。 第二部分:探望父亲的一次经历。 第三部分:我眼中的父亲:简朴、诚实、勤劳。
第二步 遣词造句 词汇 1.in_one's_fifties 五十多岁 2.add_up_to 总共,加起来等于 3.aware 有意识的 4.attach_importance_to/pay_attention_to/take_into_account_ 重视 5.ensure/insure/guarantee/make_certain 确保
2.介绍人物的成就或取得的成绩: ①During her career life, she obtained 132 championships,
including 4 Olympic championships. ②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest i受医学 培训并致力于帮助穷人;
3.在她的指导下,一些慈善机构和收容所被建立;因其一 生致力于解除贫困,她于1979年得到诺贝尔和平奖;1997年9月 5日因病逝世。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:
Mother Teresa was born on August 27,1910.She devoted her life to helping the poor,the sick and the dying around the world, particularly those in India.In her twenties,she worked in a school,teaching geography.From the year 1948 on,she received
I_was_moved_so_deeply_that_I_couldn't_help_bursting_into_t ears.
8.这就是我的父亲,一位简朴、诚实、勤劳的人。(such is ...倒装句式)
Such_is_my_father,_a_simple,_honest_and_hardworking_pers on.
literature. ③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people
surprising endings. ④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using
computers. ⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try
6.concentrate_on/focus_attention_on/devote_oneself_to/be_a bsorbed_in 集中精力
7.move/touch/affect 感动 8.burst_into_tears/be_filled_with_tears/cry_one's_eyes_out 热泪盈眶
句式 1.我的父亲五十多岁了,住在农村。(who引导定语从句) My_father,_who_is_already_in_his_fifties,_lives_in_the_count ryside. 2.尽管他受教育仅仅一年的时间,但他深刻意识到知识对 年轻人的重要性。(although引导让步状语从句,that引导宾语从 句) Although_his_schooling_adds_up_to_no_more_than_one_year, _he_is_quite_aware_that_knowledge_is_of_great_importance__to_ young_people.
[写作规范]
题目要求 假定下周日是父亲节,某英语刊物正在进行“我的父亲” 的征文活动。请按照下面所提供的主要内容,以“我的父亲” 为题,写一篇短文。 1.你父亲是个农村人,50多岁,没有文化,但他很关心你 的学习情况; 2.探望父亲的一次经历; 3.归纳总结父亲的品行。 注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作探究 能力提升区
[文体感知]
人物描写是记叙文的一种。是对人物外貌、个性以及主要 事迹和贡献进行描述。写作时其结构为:
首先,对此人进行简要的介绍,比如生平、事件、职业 等。
其次,挑选出此人一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写,要尽 可能的详细,因为这影响到人们对他的整体评价。
最后,对此人进行客观的评价,包括其人格、贡献以及闪 光点的评价。
[增分佳句]
1.介绍人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征: ①He had fair hair and blue eyes. ②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. ③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. ④Sue was a young woman who was studying art. ⑤He is a good-looking, kind-hearted man.
第四步 妙笔成篇
My Father My father, who is already in his fifties, lives in the countryside. Although his schooling adds up to no more than one year, he is quite aware that knowledge is of great significance to young people, as a result of which he attaches great importance to my study and always encourages me to study hard. To ensure that I can concentrate on my study, my father does whatever he can for me. Once he was badly ill and the doctor asked him to stay in bed for several days. When I got home to see him, I found him working in the fields. So deeply moved was I that I couldn't help bursting into tears. Such is my father, a simple, honest and hardworking person.
5.有一次他病重,大夫让他在床上休息几天。(主谓结构)
Once_he_was_badly_ill_and_the_doctor_asked_him_to_stay_i n_bed_for_several_days.
6.我回家看望他时,我看到他在地里干活。(when引导时 间状语从句)
When_I_got_home_to_see_him,_I_found_him_working_in_th e_fields.
contribution.
2.用to ensure+that宾语从句改写句4
To_ensure_that_I_can_concentrate_on_my_study,_my_father_ does_whatever_he_can_for_me.
3.用so+adj./adv.置于句首引起倒装改写句7 So_deeply_moved_was_I_that_I_couldn't_help_bursting_into_ tears.
第三步 句式升级 1.用as a result of which引导非限制性定语从句把句2和句3 合为一句
Although_his_schooling_adds_up_to_no_more_than_one_year, _he_is_quite_aware_that_knowledge_is_of_great_importance_to_y oung_people,_as_a_result_of_which_he_attaches_great_importance _to_my_study_and_always_encourages_me_to_study_hard.
3.他非常重视我的学习,鼓舞我努力学习。(主谓结构) He_attaches_great_importance_to_my_study_and_always_enc ourages_me_to_study_hard. 4.父亲为我竭尽所能以确保我全身心学习。(whatever引导 宾语从句,in order that引导目的状语从句) My_father_does_whatever_he_can_for_me_in_order_that_I_ca n_concentrate_on_my_study.
our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
3.介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价: ①He became famous for his newly theory. ②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. ③We regard him as our model. ④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
[写作训练]
假设你校英语刊物开设的专栏Women of great achievements 向同学们约稿。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文来介绍世界著名 的天主教慈善工作者、1979年诺贝尔和平奖获得者特蕾莎修女 (Mother Teresa of Calcutta):
1.出生于1910年8月27日;一生致力于在各地帮助穷人、 病人,特别是印度的;
第一步 审题谋篇 一、审题 1.确定体裁:本文为人物描写; 2.确定人称:本文人称应用第一人称; 3.确定时态:本文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
二、构思 第一部分:简要介绍父亲的情况:年龄、所受教育、重视 知识等。 第二部分:探望父亲的一次经历。 第三部分:我眼中的父亲:简朴、诚实、勤劳。
第二步 遣词造句 词汇 1.in_one's_fifties 五十多岁 2.add_up_to 总共,加起来等于 3.aware 有意识的 4.attach_importance_to/pay_attention_to/take_into_account_ 重视 5.ensure/insure/guarantee/make_certain 确保
2.介绍人物的成就或取得的成绩: ①During her career life, she obtained 132 championships,
including 4 Olympic championships. ②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest i受医学 培训并致力于帮助穷人;
3.在她的指导下,一些慈善机构和收容所被建立;因其一 生致力于解除贫困,她于1979年得到诺贝尔和平奖;1997年9月 5日因病逝世。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案:
Mother Teresa was born on August 27,1910.She devoted her life to helping the poor,the sick and the dying around the world, particularly those in India.In her twenties,she worked in a school,teaching geography.From the year 1948 on,she received