高中英语新高考-作文指导与解读：创新作文这样练成——传统逻辑、创新模式、情感穿插

高中英语新高考-作文指导与解读：创新作文这样练成——传统逻辑、创新模式、情感穿插

全国英语创新大赛作文题目要求

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Laziness or lack of ambition is like dead weight on our chests. All it takes is one big push and we’re free, but that “big push”is not always easy to muster because the effort seems a lot more difficult than it actually is. The situation is similar to trying to get out of bed as soon as we awaken from a long sleep.

Write an essay with no less than 300 words, in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

拿到一篇文章，一旦确定题目，我们这样在纸上迅速写下只言片语（单词都可以），围绕：

1.内因：内在的动机、品格、知识；外因：外在的环境、条件

2.正反/好坏：分两种情况：假设主要角色为A，次要角色为B。考虑A 的好处或积极性，B的弊端；A的坏处，但是可以如何克服。

3. 物质、心理、社会。物质层面指的是金钱（也可以是说经济）、身体、空间、个人知识等；精神层面指的是情感、心理等；社会层面指的是集体、社区、道德、法律等。

4. 个人、社会(政府)、他人（集体）。这主要是围绕针对社会问题提出的建议，当然个人与他人包含了交际方向。

5. 正能量互补。正能量指的是积极方面的词汇，例如健康、幸福、目标、动力、美、乐于助人等。我们想到其中的一个，就要学会联想其它的，往往能形成逻辑链。

以上完成后，就要考虑：写出简单句，然后将它们分成三个左右的主题句。接下来就要针对主题句进行拓展了，拓展点有七个：1.因果；2.条件；

3.定义；

4.用途；

5.方法/方式；

6.比拟；

7.举例。

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传统论文思维

概述：先定义，再原因，正反观点，举例子，措施。需要积累大量句子，词块，以及依托美文句子词块表达的逻辑思维。

一、定义（What is a big push）

A big push can be a bonus materially and mentally or a warning of potential trouble one presents to himself to overcome his laziness or lack of ambition.

二、原因+结果(cause and effect)

TS: necessary

原因：

It is not easy for people to step out of comfort zone.—》used to inertia（惰性）（文章中所有生词都在我的CCtalk公益美文课里有）结果：

1. A big push can awaken us to the reality (物质层次)—》take specific measures to respond to different situations

2. goal: A big push inspires one’s enthusiasm and confidence (心理层次+正能量) --》build up one’s determination and perseverance

3. responsibility: A big push can force to take up due social responsibility and familial responsibility. (社会层次)

三、方法（How）

A big push takes effort and time definitely, but the following strategies can help you translate your push into action.

Set up small and achievable goals --》start with concrete objectives. Don’t bite off too much

Take pride in your achievements, as they are stepping stones to your goals.

Make a commitment publicly --》there is sufficient pressure to overcome laziness

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A big push can be a bonus materially and mentally or a warning of potential trouble one presents to himself to overcome his laziness or lack of ambition.

A big push is undoubtedly necessary just because it is human’s nature to stick to one's comfort zone. Inertia can deprive our enthusiasm and our best intentions come to nothing eventually. (反向论证）However, once inertia is overcome, we will reap great rewards. （举例论证）For example, we may wake up to the reality and respond to it. Besides, if a big push is our goal, it not only arouses our lost enthusiasm, like the slumbering volcano, but also builds our determination and perseverance. Some young often are reluctant to write because they find it hard to seek inspiration. Actually, inspiration comes from purposeful daily practice, which in turn strengthens one’s perseverance and determination. Last, our sense of social responsibility serves as a big push. Often, when laziness sets in, think of the consequence others will suffer because no one is a lonely island nowadays especially in the team work.

Exactly, a big push takes effort and time, but the following strategies can help you translate your push into action.

First, set small and achievable goals with concrete objectives. Don’t bite off too much. An impractical goal might well leave one at a loss where to start. Then follows laziness accompanied by various excuses. Second, take pride in our achievements, as they are stepping stones to our goals. Our lack of confidence mostly