2020届高考英语(外研版)一轮复习选修6学案 Module 1 Small Talk

(一)课前自主学习
Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意
1．yawn v．打呵欠
2．sigh v. 叹气，叹息_
3．immigration n. 移民
4．visa n. 签证
5．reception n. 欢迎会；招待会
6．embassy n. 使馆
7．firm n. 公司
8．outspoken adj.[纵联1]直言不讳的，坦率的，不客气的9．motto n. 座右铭，格言10．coincidence n．[纵联2]巧合
11．mature adj. 成熟的
12．tease v. 戏弄，嘲弄，揶揄13．contradict v. 反驳
14．pregnant adj. 怀孕的
15．acquaintance n. 熟人
16．divorce n. 离婚，离异
17．anniversary n. 周年纪念日
18．violate v. 骚扰，妨碍，侵犯
19．define v. 解释，给……下定义20．circumstance n. 情形，情况
Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形
1．lack v. 缺乏，缺少
2．opportunity n. 机会
3．prize n. 奖品，奖金
4．tidy v. 使……整洁，整理
5．favour n. 恩惠，照顾
6．certain pron. 某些
7．reply n. 回答，答复，回信
8．shortcoming n. 缺点，短处
9．awkward adj. 尴尬的
10．typist n. 打字员
11．customer n. 顾客，客户
12．cautious adj.[纵联3]谨慎的，慎重的，小心的
13．anyhow ad v. 不管怎么说，无论如何
14．interrupt v. 打断
15．function n. 功能
16．purpose n. 目的
17．form n. 表格
Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变
1．informal adj.非正式的→(反义词)formal adj.正式的
2．serious adj.严肃的→seriously ad v.严肃地
3．confidently ad v.自信地→confident adj.自信的→confidence n．信心；自信
4．advance adj.预先的，在前的n.前进；进步v．前进；提前→advanced adj.先进的；高级的
5．application n．申请→apply v．申请；应用
6．impolite adj.不礼貌的→impolitely ad v.不礼貌地→polite adj.礼貌的[纵联4]
7．absence n．缺乏，不存在→absent adj.缺席的，不在场的；缺少的，缺乏的
8．apology n．道歉，致歉→apologise v．道歉
9．messy adj.棘手的，难办的→mess n．脏或乱的状态
10．modest adj.谦虚的，谦逊的→modesty n．谦虚，谦逊
11．successful adj.成功的→success n．成功→succeed v i.成功v t.继任，接替
12．imagine v．想象→imagination n．想象，想象力→imaginary adj.想象中的，假想的，虚构的→imaginative adj.富有想象力的
纵联1.“out＋分词”式合成形容词
①outspoken直言不讳的，坦率的，不客气的
②outspread 伸开的，展开的
③outworn 过时的，陈腐的，无用的
④outcast 被遗弃的；被逐出的
⑤outgoing 外向的，友好的
⑥outstanding 杰出的，突出的
纵联2.-ence结尾名词集锦
①coincidence巧合②absence缺乏，不存在
③confidence信心④consequence结果
⑤adolescence青春；青春期⑥competence能力；胜任⑦convenience便利⑧conscience良心，道德感⑨reference参考；查阅⑩preference喜爱；偏爱
纵联3.-ious结尾形容词荟萃
①cautious谨慎的②serious严肃的
③ambitious有雄心的④curious好奇的
⑤delicious美味的⑥obvious明显的
⑦precious珍贵的⑧religious宗教的
⑨unconscious无意识的⑩various多种多样的
纵联4.前缀im-形容词表示“不……的”
①impolite不礼貌的②impossible不可能的
③impatient不耐烦的④immoral不道德的
⑤imperfect不完美的⑥improper不合适的
单元话题——闲聊
子话题1问候、介绍
①regards n．问候，致意②respect n．敬意
③greet v t.问候④greeting n．问候，打招呼⑤introduction n．介绍，引进⑥recommend v t.推荐；建议子话题2打电话
①dial v．拨(电话号码) ②ring up打电话
③get through接通(电话) ④hang on(打电话时)不挂断⑤hang up挂断电话⑥phone up打电话
[学考对接·活学活用]
高考采撷(一)阅读中的词汇应用
1．(2014·湖南高考阅读A)Once all __❶__(apply) are in，you will be invited to an open selection event on 17 September, 4－5 pm, at the gallery of Towner. This will be an informal ❷opportunity❸to meet the Squad Leader, Squad Associate and other young people.
①用apply的正确形式填空：applications
②写出informal的反义词：formal
③写出opportunity在句中的含义：机会
2．(2011·山东高考阅读表达)A textaholic can __❶__(define) as someone who is addicted to sending and receiving messages. The main symptoms are a strong desire to text messages, which takes precedence (优先) over everything else, and bad moods, low spirits and a lack❷of self-confidence❸if messages fail to come in.
①用define的正确形式填空：be_defined
②写出lack在句中的含义：缺乏，缺少，常用短语a lack of＋n.意为：缺乏
③confidence在此处意为：信心；自信；在本单元的同根副词是：confidently
3．(2009·江西高考阅读D)When we sign a paper, for example, a business contract or a bank document, the signature is a seal of consent, an agreement to take the matter __❶__(serious). Most governments and many organisations will not process writing complaints if they do not bear the writer's signature. The __❷__(absent) of a signature, they explain, tells us that the writer cannot be too serious and therefore does not deserve a reply❸.
①用serious的正确形式填空：seriously
②用absent的正确形式填空：absence
③写出reply在句中的含义：回答，答复，回信
高考采撷(二)写作中的词汇应用
(根据汉语及提示词翻译句子)
1．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)我希望你能够抓住这个机会进一步学习中国传统文化。

(opportunity)
I_wish_that_you_could_grasp_this_opportunity_to_learn_traditional_Chinese_culture further.
2．(2017·浙江高考写作)而且我确实希望尽可能快地收到你的答复。

(reply)
And_I_do_look_forward_to_receiving_your_reply_as_soon_as_possible.
3．(2014·陕西高考书面表达)这个项目的目的是培养我们在英语学习上的兴趣以及听说方面的实际能力。

(purpose)
The_purpose_of_this_programme_is_to_develop_our_interest_in_English_learning_an d_practical_abilities_in_listening_and_speaking.
(二)课堂重点释疑
1．lack v．缺乏，缺少n.缺乏；短缺的东西
[记牢]
①Though lacking (lack) experience, he soon got a higher pay by working hard.
②For lack of confidence, she is lacking (lack) in skills of communicating.
③While college graduates complain of a lack of available jobs, factories are facing difficulties in hiring workers.
[用准]lack既可以作动词也可作名词。

作及物动词时后面直接接宾语，不能用于被动语态；作不及物动词时，后常与介词for连用；作名词时，后面常接介词of。

[写美]补全句子
④由于缺少空间，在大城市已经修建了越来越多的高楼。

More and more high-rise buildings have been built in big cities for_lack_of_space.
2．advance adj.预先的，在前的v.前进；促进；提前n.前进，进展，进步；增长
[辨清]写出下列句中advance的词性和含义
①The inspections were supposed to be a surprise, but keepers sometimes had advance
notice. adj.预先的，在前的
②There have been great advances in medicine in the last ten years. n.进展，进步
③This will further advance the friendly relations between the two countries. v.促进
④The date of the meeting has been advanced from Friday to Monday. v.提前
[记牢]
⑤This meeting room is a non-smoking area. I would like to warn you in advance that if you smoked here you would be fined.
⑥(2015·北京高考)Thanks to the advanced (advance) technology, we live in an age of bettered communication.
[用准]advance本身已有“向前”的意思，因此作动词时，后面不必再用forward。

类似的动词还有：enter(进入)不与into连用，return(回来)不与back连用。

[写美]补全句子
⑦(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)此外，我建议您到书店买一本历史书，提前了解一下唐朝的历史，这可能有助于您更好地理解将要学习的唐诗。

Besides, I advise you to go to the bookstore to buy a history book and learn_the_history_of_the_Tang_Dynasty_in_advance,_which can help you better understand the Tang poems to be learned.
3．absence n．缺乏，不存在
[记牢]
单句语法填空
①In the absence of proof, the police could not take action against the man.
②He was absent (absence) from the conference yesterday because of his sudden heart disease.
补全句子
③I will go on a business trip tomorrow. Mark will be in charge of the company
in/during_my_absence.
我明天要出差，我不在时由马克负责这个公司。

[写美]一句多译
很长时间没有上学后，我的老师和同学们都帮助我补习功课。

④My teachers and classmates helped me with the lessons after my_long_absence_from _school. (absence)
⑤My teachers and classmates helped me with the lessons after I_had_been_absent from_school_for_a_long_time. (absent)
4．apology n．道歉，致歉
[记牢]
单句语法填空
①I owe you an apology for what I said this morning. Anyhow I meant no offence.
②She apologised (apology) for the mistake and gave us a spare VIP room on the top floor.
句型转换
③If you are really wrong, you should apologise to your roommate.
→If you are really wrong, you should make_an_apology_to your roommate. (apology) [写美]翻译句子
④我衷心希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我。

I_sincerely_hope_that_you_can_accept_my_apology_and_understand_me.
5．imagine v．想象
[记牢]
单句语法填空
①Can you imagine the man living (live) on a lonely island for three years?
②I never knew my grandmother, but I always imagine her as a kind and gentle person.
补全句子
③The scenery of nature there is so beautiful; in other words, it's beyond_imagination.
那儿的自然风光真的是太美了，换句话说，美得让人难以想象。

[用准]imagine的宾语可以是名词、代词、从句、动名词以及动名词的复合结构，但不能为动词不定式。

[写美]翻译句子
④我经常想象未来我的生活会是什么样子。

I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future._
[词汇过关综合训练]
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1．The more learned a man is, the more modest (谦虚的) he usually is.
2．He has determined to overcome his shortcoming (缺点) of not being punctual.
3．I'd like to take this opportunity (机会) to thank everyone for their hard work on the project.
4．The young girl expressed confidently (自信地) that she was fit for that task.
5．It's a coincidence (巧合) that they were born in the same month and on the same day.
6．I'm very cautious (谨慎的) about expressing my opinions in public.
7．They were interrupted (打断) by a knock at the door.
8．She went to Germany for the purpose (目的) of research.
9．They voted in favour (支持) of the prohibition of smoking in public areas.
10．He promised me that he would provide me with a satisfactory reply (答复)．
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1．It's generally agreed that small talk is a kind of informal(formal) talk about unimportant things.
2．We have been very successful (success) in attracting young graduates to the company.
3．Hard work and lack of sleep have worn out her beauty and youth in recent years.
4．John's modesty (modest) makes him popular with his colleagues.
5．It's difficult to imagine him accepting (accept) the decision without any hesitation.
6．I'm writing to explain the reason why I was absent (absence) from your lecture last time.
7．He stepped on my foot on purpose, not by chance, which made me very angry.
8．It's impolite (polite) to ask others'income, marriage and age in most western countries.
9．Hearing the news, I was excited and filled in the application (apply) form immediately.
10．When she opened the door, she was greeted with a(n) messy (mess) scene, which made her very angry.
Ⅲ.单句改错
1．As is known to all, China will be an advance and powerful country in the near future. advance→advanced
2．That he didn't reply my WeChat made me very angry. reply后加to
3．He began to take political science serious only when he left school.serious→seriously 4．Though lacked money, his parents managed to send him to university. lacked→lacking
5．You shouldn't have shouted to Mary, which you should apologise to her, I think. which前加for
Ⅳ.根据提示补全句子
1．为了赶上早班飞机，我们提前订了出租车，而且起床很早。

(advance)
To catch the early flight, we ordered_a_taxi_in_advance and got up very early.
2．对我们来说很难想象在古代社会奴隶的生活是什么样的。

(imagine)
It is difficult for us to imagine_what_life_was_like for slaves in the ancient society.
3．健康问题和不良的饮食习惯以及缺少锻炼密切相关。

(lack)
Health problems are closely connected with bad eating habits and a_lack_of_exercise.
4．对此事给您带来的不便，请接受我们的歉意。

(apology)
Please accept_our_apology_for the inconvenience this matter has given you.
5．然而，在缺乏母语环境的情况下学习作为外语的英语相当困难。

(absence)
However, learning English as a foreign language is very difficult in_the_absence_of a
native language environment.
(一)课前自主学习
1．(be)_nervous_about对……神经紧张/害怕/胆怯/焦虑不安2．think_of 想起，回忆起
3．look_away_from 把目光从……移开
4．in_addition 除此之外，另外
5．find_out 了解(到)；找出(信息)
6．as_a_consequence [串记1]因此，结果
7．cheer_sb._up 使某人高兴/振作起来
8．leave_out 省去，删去
9．(be)_aware_of 知道
10．show_off [串记2]炫耀
[同根短语串记]
串记1.“原因、结果”短语串记
①as a consequence 因此，结果
②as a result (of) 作为……的结果
③result in/from 导致/起因于
④on account of 由于
⑤because of 因为
⑥bring about 带来，引起
⑦lead to 导致
⑧contribute to 导致
串记2.“v.＋off”短语集释
①show off 炫耀
②back off 放弃，后退
③break off 中止，中断
④call off 取消；停止进行
⑤cool off 冷却，(使)冷静下来
⑥clear off 消除；溜掉
⑦cut off 切断
⑧die off 先后死去，相继死去
⑨pay off 偿清
⑩ring off 挂断电话
1．make friends交朋友，建立友谊
2．prepare sb. for ... 使某人为……做好准备
3．conversation openers 开场白
4．a certain colour 某种颜色
5．put one's foot in one's mouth 犯使人难堪的错误，说错话
6．be cautious about 对……小心/谨慎
7．go through 经受，经历(苦难，困境等)
8．take the lead 带头，领先
9．at_this point 在这一点上；到这时
10．have sth. in common 有共同之处
1．Talk_to_a_man_about_himself,_and he will speak to you for hours!
和一个人谈论他自己，他会和你说上几个小时。

2．Her motto was “Every_time I open my mouth, I put my foot in it.”
她的“座右铭”是“每当我张口，就会讲错话”。

3．It_is_estimated_that 80% of all conversation in English is small talk.
据估计80%的英语会话是闲聊。

[学考对接·活学活用]
高考采撷(一)完形中的短语和句式(补全句子)
1．(2016·浙江高考完形填空)I made up my mind I would find_out (找到，找出) what was good in my present situation; I would look for the stars.
2．(2014·重庆高考完形填空)Cultural differences occur wherever you go. When visiting another country, you should be_aware_of (意识到，知道) those differences and respect them.
3．(2010·山东高考完形填空)Finally, after weeks of preparation, I would show_off (炫耀) all my hard work in a dance performance.
4．(2013·山东高考完形填空)Every_time_I_came_into_her_room (每次我进入她的房间), she was so happy because she thought I was her daughter.
高考采撷(二)写作中的短语和句式(补全句子/词汇升级)
1．(2014·重庆高考写作)每当我看到它，就禁不住想起我的朋友。

Whenever I look at it, I couldn't_help_thinking_of_my_friend.
2．(2014·江西高考书面表达)Besides, we should learn how to get along well with others. (用本单元短语替换加黑部分)In_addition
3．(2013·福建高考书面表达)As a result, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.(用本单元短语替换加黑部分) As_a_consequence
4．(2017·北京高考书面表达)众所周知，长江是亚洲最长的河流，有许多著名的游览景点。

(It＋be＋过去分词＋that从句)
It's_widely_known_that the Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and has so many well-known sightseeing spots.
(二)课堂重点释疑
[短语集释]
1．in addition除此之外，另外
[记牢]
单句语法填空
①(2016·四川高考)In addition, I can see different kinds of beautiful birds.
②(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)Working out in the morning provides additional (addition) benefits beyond being physically fit.
句型转换
③Apart from the school, the village has a clinic, which was also built with government support.
→In_addition_to_the_school,_the village has a clinic, which was also built with government support.
单句改错
④In addition to read for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.read→reading
[写美]翻译句子
⑤(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)此外，许多作品将会在这个剪纸展上展出。

In_addition,_many_works_will_be_displayed_in_the_paper-cutting_exhibition.
2．leave out省去，删去；遗漏；忽视，冷落；忽略
[辨清]写出下列句中leave out的含义
①All the others seemed to know each other and I began to feel left out.忽视，冷落
②You can leave out the parts of the story that are not interesting.省去，删去
③He didn't say anything that was false, but he left out important information on purpose.遗漏
④We left out the possibility of his coming to the party.忽略
[记牢]
⑤When you go camping, please do not leave behind any trash.
⑥She wants to think things out quietly, so we had better leave her alone.
[写美]补全句子
⑦(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)如果你能帮我看一下英语作文并检查一下我是否遗漏了一些信息，我将不胜感激。

I'd appreciate it if you could help me look through the English composition to check whether I have left_out_some_information.
3．show off炫耀；卖弄
[记牢]
单句语法填空
①All the collections will be on show from June 16th to 18th in the City Museum.
②Mike was trying to show off his talent by decorating the kitchen wall with his colour pencils.
词汇升级
③When they appeared for their Sunday game, they were completely different.
→When they showed_up for their Sunday game, they were completely different.
[写美]翻译句子
④下午，我校的学生将带你参观海河。

In_the_afternoon,_the_students_in_our_school_will_show_you_around_the_Haihe_River.
[句式集释]
1．every time引导时间状语从句
[教材原句]Her motto was “Every_time I open my mouth, I put my f oot in it.”
[悟拓展例句]
(1)(2016·浙江高考)Every_time he arrived home at the end of the day, we'd greet him at the door.
每一天他到家时，我们都会在门口迎接他。

(2)The_first_time he came to the city, he decided to settle there.
他第一次来到那个城市，他就决定在那里安家。

(3)You are welcome to come back any_time you want to.
你什么时候想回来，我们都欢迎。

(4)On arriving (arrive) home, he set out to do his housework.
[析用法规则]
[背写作佳句]
(1)(2017·天津高考书面表达)I do hope that you can pay a visit to Tianjin every time you come to China.(要点句)
(2)(2016·10月浙江高考写作)Tom dashed out the instant the helicopter landed and hugged Jane tightly.(要点句)
2．It is＋过去分词＋that从句
[教材原句]It_is_estimated_that 80% of all conversation in English is small talk.
[悟拓展例句]
(1)(2015·安徽高考)It_is_reported_that a space station will be built on the moon in years to come.
据报道，一座空间站将在未来的几年内在月球上被建成。

(2)It's_known_to_all_that “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
众所周知，“有志者，事竟成。

”
(3)It_is_suggested_that all the people who will join in picking apples should wear a hat and a pair of gloves.
人们建议参加这次采摘苹果的所有人都要戴着帽子和手套。

[析用法规则]
背写作佳句
(1)It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry, which is very different from that of your country.(开头句)
(2)As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport.(开头句)
(3)Tiring as it might be, the military training is believed to be the best opportunity to make lifelong friends.(要点句)
[词块、句式过关综合训练]
Ⅰ.选词填空
We must find_out when Karl is coming so that we can book a room for him.
2．Looking at her large empty apartment, I became aware_of how lonely my mother must have been in Brazil herself.
3．Whenever we hear about “the homeless”，most of us think_of the Developing World.
4．The most important word has been left_out,_so it doesn't make any sense.
5．He was always diligent in his study and as_a_consequence received high marks.
6．I am nervous_about my first day. You never know what's in store for you when you start a new job.
7．You'd better stay in bed for a few days. In_addition,_you should drink more water.
8．He failed in the driving test and looked sad. Let's cheer him up.
9．Mike has only driven to the pub to show_off his new car — he usually walks!
10．If you look_away_from a person or yawn, he may think you are not interested in him.
Ⅱ.根据提示翻译/补全句子
1．建议你花更多的时间学习英语。

(It is＋过去分词＋that从句)
It_is_suggested_that_you_should_spend_more_time_studying_English.
2．多锻炼，你就会更强壮、更健康。

(祈使句＋and＋陈述句)
Take_more_exercise,_and you'll become stronger and healthier.
3．每次他想要放弃的时候，他都提醒自己他要养活一家人。

(every time)
Every_time_he_felt_like_giving_up,_he reminded himself that he had a family to support.
Ⅲ.分步写作
假定你是李华，近日你收到英国朋友Alice的邮件，以下是邮件内容：
Dear Li Hua，
How are you doing these days? I'm having some problems and would like to get your advice.
My parents want me to spend my summer with them this year but I would prefer to go somewhere with my friends. I love my parents but sometimes they are overprotective. I feel that I am old enough and responsible enough to go away without their supervision (监管)．Any suggestions you could give me about this issue would be greatly appreciated.
Yours，
Alice
1．回应她的请求；
2．说明你的观点；
3．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

第一步：准确审题，理行文脉络，拟写作要点
本文属于应用文中的电子邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一和第二人称。

文章可分为三个层次：开头应表达收到对方邮件的心情。

主体部分应根据题目所给的邮件和三个要点进行构思，在写作要点时不可脱离邮件，天马行空，如回应她的请求，首先了解邮件中
的请求“go away without their supervision”，即不想受到父母的监管，写作时就可以给予回应她父母这样做的原因(担心安全)；说明个人观点时要依据Alice邮件中提到的“I would prefer to go somewhere with my friends”，据此，你的观点明了，“对于青少年来说和朋友一起去某地是个好主意”，Alice这时就应先和父母谈一谈；同时，在说明你的理由时就可以依据父母同不同意她这样做来写。

结尾表达自己的希望和祝愿。

开头语：很高兴收到你征求我建议的邮件。

(It's my pleasure to do ...)
It's_my_pleasure_to_receive_your_e-mail_asking_for_my_advice.
要点1：我猜想他们不同意你的原因是担心你的安全。

(the reason why ... is that ...) I_guess_the_reason_why_they_don't_agree_with_you_is_that_they_are_concerned_ab out_your_safety.
要点2：对于青少年来说和朋友一起去某地是个好主意。

(it's a good idea for sb. to do sth.) It's_a_good_idea_for_teenagers_to_go_somewhere_with_friends.
要点3－①：你应该和父母谈一谈。

You_should_have_a_talk_with_your_parents.
要点3－②：如果他们同意，你最好事先为你的旅行做一个详细的计划。

If_they_agree,_you'd_better_make_a_detailed_plan_for_your_travel_in_advance.
要点3－③：如果他们不同意，你最好尊重他们。

(if省略句)
If_not,_you'd_better_show_respect_for_them.
结尾语：祝你暑假愉快。

I_wish_you_a_pleasant_summer_vacation.
第二步：添加细节，文意更丰满，表达更亮眼
为了使内容更充实，并且符合题目的要求，我们需要对要点进行适度拓展。

例如要点2可以用状语从句来说明和朋友去某地的好处；要点3－①可就她和她父母谈话的内容进行拓展，根据Alice的邮件可知，Alice认为她长大了(I feel that I am old enough and responsible enough)，故拓展内容“你应该试着说服你的父母你已经长大了，可以适当地处理事情了”；要点3－②可以拓展为把旅行计划做得更具体，“包括你的目的地和交通工具”，从而会让父母放心。

拓展要点2：对于青少年来说和朋友一起去某个地方是个好主意，因为旅行不仅有利于放松心情而且可以结交新朋友并体验新的文化。

(用for引导的原因状语从句，not only ...but
also ...)
It's_a_good_idea_for_teenagers_to_go_somewhere_with_friends,_for_traveling_helps_ us_not_only_ease_our_mind_but_also_make_new_friends_and_experience_new_culture.
拓展要点3－①：你应该和父母谈一谈，试着说服他们你已经长大了，可以适当地处理事情了。

(用现在分词短语作状语)
You_should_have_a_talk_with_your_parents,_trying_to_persuade_them_you_are_old_ enough_to_manage_things_properly.
拓展要点3－②：如果他们同意，你最好事先为你的旅行做一个详细的计划，其中包括你的目的地和交通工具。

(including介词短语)
If_they_agree,_you'd_better_make_a_detailed_plan_for_your_travel_in_advance,_incl uding_your_destination_and_your_means_of_transportation.
第三步：连句成文，排语句顺序，重衔接过渡
本文写作有三个层次，可采用三段式行文，注意要点2和要点3是一个整体，而开头语和要点1可作为第一段。

在提出个人的建议时需要一个总起句来统领，可加上一句“Here are my tips for you.”引出自己的建议；在连句成文时可增加连接词in my view，first，second 和anyway等，以使文章过渡自然，衔接紧凑。

Dear_Alice，
It's_my_pleasure_to_receive_your_e-mail_asking_for_my_advice._I_guess_the_reason _why_they_don't_agree_with_you_is_that_they_are_concerned_about_your_safety.
In_my_view,_it's_a_good_idea_for_teenagers_to_go_somewhere_with_friends,_for_tra veling_helps_us_not_only_ease_our_mind_but_also_make_new_friends_and_experience_ne w_culture._Here_are_my_tips_for_you._First,_you_should_have_a_talk_with_your_parents ,_trying_to_persuade_them_you_are_old_enough_to_manage_things_properly._Second,_if_t hey_agree,_you'd_better_make_a_detailed_plan_for_your_travel_in_advance_including_yo ur_destination_and_your_means_of_transportation._If_not,_you'd_better_show_respect_fo r_them.
Anyway,_I_wish_you_a_pleasant_summer_vacation.
Yours，
Li_Hua。